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Posted: 23 July 2011 at 11:51am | IP Logged
Rejerved ROFL

Shall edit tomorrow <3 :)

xoxo
Aanya

*EDITED*

So...my "tomorrow" is a little late... LOL

Thank you Hug I honestly wasn't expecting the gift so soon! :D


Coming to the update, it was AMAZING! Like, SO awesome! I loved it completely :)

Awwh Nikki's so cute hugging her like that :D Ahh, extreme excitement does that to you I guess ;) I'm like that when I've seen someone after ages LOL
Oh but the best thing was his response - "Oi!" I felt Armaan arms pulling me back. "Stop killing my girlfriend!" He murmured as he pulled me out.

LMAO He's just SO cute :D I loved this bit :)

Nikki finally let go of Armaan, and I stood in front of him, almost protecting him from more unwanted hugs. I probably would have to do this for the rest of my life, I thought wearily.

This made me, ROFL.

"I give up on your breed!" He muttered while I giggled.

Haha just today my friend said the SAME thing :P My best friend and I were talking in half sentences, not purposely but you know, ho jaata hai! Anyway so he kept looking at both of us trying to figure it out and stuff. Oh well, basically we had a "Girls gossip too much" argument today ROFL

Haha Guys and their "lucky" stuff. Honestly, lucky chhe that I can understand pan gandu hoy evu necessary chhe? Geez. It gets downright DISGUSTING at times. :P

 "Obviously it flies right out of the window when he's that close to me. But, yeah, nothing more than making out, and I'm kind of trying to keep it that way." I mumbled, biting my lower lip.

Awwwh <3 I hope Armaan hears this someday...bahot kaam ki cheez hai LOL JK I love them aise hi <3 especially how Armaan put pillows between them :) *looks here and there* Where is MY Armaan? LMFAO ROFL

And now I come to the crux of the part! OMG when I read it I was like - THAT is her reason?! Not that it's lame, infact it made me wanna go over to her and give her a BIIIG hug and tell her she's stupid to think like that! It's PEANUTS we're talking about! 

FINALLY we get an insight into her mind! Somewhere I'd thought that the I-wanna-be-your-girlfriend-a-little-longer reason was not the whole thing! But then I'd brushed it off, thinking that maybe I was reading too much into it or maybe Riddhima did it because of her being the slightly crazy person she is LOL

I loved the way you orchestrated the whole talk between Nikki and Riddhima! Perfect setting :)
Somehow I think Riddhima matured [it's not the exact word I wanna use but something like that :P] in this update! she's beginning to understand the nuances of a relationship and I have a feeling she'll be ready to be his fiance soon :D I do wish she tells Armaan the things she told Nikki! No one like him to pacify her fears :) <3

I agree with Riddhima on the Abhi-Nikki thing! Maybe he's just stressed about not being a good enough husband? Or whatever! But they need to talk :)

And OMG I'm quite scared of Armaan's reaction about the job! Jo eni khaski chhe toh Riddhima toh gayi! she has to tell him NOW! I can't see AR fighting :| And I'm still curious about what actually happened in Vegas LOL

"Am I allowed to be here now, because honestly Nikki, you're married, and the last time I checked Riddhima was straight, and I'm not getting a very good feeling about leaving you both alone for so long and-" Armaan rambled on, while Nikki and I sighed and walked past him. Obviously that wasn't enough to shut him up.

I literally laughed at this! Like, a lot! ROFLROFLROFL

All in all, an amazing birthday gift ;)

Continue soon! <3

I hope you're doing good with your coursework and stuff!

xoxo
Aanya

P.S - 100 days for November LOL


Edited by Aanya_taanu4evr - 25 July 2011 at 8:06am

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Posted: 23 July 2011 at 11:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Aanya_taanu4evr

Rejerved ROFL

Shall edit tomorrow <3 :)

xoxo
Aanya


Saali. Tane part dedicate kairu anne havve sui jaye chhe? Sharam nathi aauti chokri? LOL

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Posted: 23 July 2011 at 12:00pm | IP Logged
nice part!!! and unexpected too!
truly interesting...
i like the way you lead into riddhima's thoughts...its really interesting and i can kind of relate to them...
continue soon!!!

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Posted: 23 July 2011 at 12:10pm | IP Logged
That was really good. Please continue soon. I can't wait to know wat happens next. :)

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Posted: 23 July 2011 at 12:37pm | IP Logged
It's really amazing. Complete it soon
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Posted: 23 July 2011 at 12:44pm | IP Logged
I liked it..nice one!
retorting Armaan was good...sooner or later he'll make ridz realise importance of a relationship!!!
Straight forward Ans- Didn't like Abhi nikki part...didn't really connect!
I am sorry for hurting you..but i simply can't comment on something which i seriously don't like...
regards
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And i am not rude. srry again!

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hey loved it
it was awesome part

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