A Walk On The Beach...#4|Link to Thread#5: Page 1 - Page 106

Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by Castle-Beckett



Hey! You quoted some of the most thought upon lines in the part, and for that I'm grateful! ðŸ˜³

Lots of humor where Armaan is concerned in this one, and I hoped someone would comment on that, which I'm glad you did! ðŸ˜ƒ

Thank you! ðŸ¤—

And don't be scared about the whole job issue. Its Armaan we're talking about here! ðŸ˜‰

But, you never know, I might just make his head explode! Sigh, with me, there's really not much one can do but guess! ðŸ˜†

I have this thing for writing long comments for people who's work I love.. be it in siggie creations or writings! :D And you come in the list of those gine chune bohot thode se log [did that make sense? o.O] and really, it is my pleasure writing a comment for you :D

Haan wahi to na, you are so unpredictable :P :P that "there's really not much one can do but guess! "  LOL! :P ðŸ˜† Toh I am scared ki kahi Armaan ke dimaag ki siti nahi baj jaae and then bam.. everything is pretty much .. err.. screwed up? ya.. that's the word i want to use :P [i think :S ]

Annyyywaaysss.. ignore my extremely retarded behaviour because at the moment i am feeling extremenly high LOL! :P [as u can see ðŸ˜†]
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by cutiepreet


res..:) 
will edit after getting back from work...:(

Originally posted by Dr.BasketGupta


RES 


Originally posted by armaania13


RES


Guys, as much as I want to stop myself from telling you'll to comment, I would still love it if you edit your reserved spaces! So many of them still persisting from the previous part and the same people have reserved spaces for the latest update as well! Please at least fill in that space, if I have any say in the comments aspect at all! 
Edited by Castle-Beckett - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by Castle-Beckett




I'm so glad you responded to the whole 'Stop killing my girlfriend' line! I laughed a lot when I write it too, but sadly only a few of you noticed! 

And maybe I'll update BTHE tonight, not sure! ðŸ˜‰
 ðŸ˜² You're updating BTHE tonight?!?! Omgoshh, HOORAY!!!! 

Nevermind you already did!! ðŸ˜† Weee, Imma go read now! Btw, I lalalalove you for updating <3
Edited by Simmy003 - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
hey..couldn't read and comment because of job and schools stuff...

but just finished reading and i absolutely loved how you are

describing their relationship so far...

waiting for the reason why armaan is so distinct all of a sudden..


by the way..the legal age for drinking and gambling in Vegas is 21 but some of the Indian small casinos let you drink and gamble at the age of 18..

i went to Vegas once a year ago with my friends and it was absolutely thrilling ...its a place for those who love to gamble and drink eheh

and the real fun is in the night ...with so much lights and music...
i would recommend u to go if you get a chance...

last but not the least ..waiting for ridhima to tell armaan about her job and to see armaan reactions to it...im sure he will be pissed lolzzz..

update soon and don't be disheartened if you get less comment..because there are still some people (like me) who love both of your stories ðŸ˜ƒ




Edited by nksweetgirl - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago

hey

i read last to updates today..

and to tell yu that they both were awsome...

i am kind of getting the reason of tiff b/w AR

i think ridz acceptance to that job without even telling armaan...

taking him for granted...

anyways cont. soon

and finally i'vee added your new account to my buddy list..

so pls do pm me...

love

aditi

Posted: 12 years ago
Comment edited on page 136
Posted: 12 years ago
Comment EDITED finally..:)
http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1685042&PID=45036609&#45036609
sorry Shru for being late but was extremely caught in things..:(

Posted: 12 years ago
luvd d prt.. it took me a couple of second to realise dat it d flashbak n dey r stil in vegas
i guess nikki and ridz conversation was needed.. ridz as always ran away frm talks.. n glad dat nikki cld put sum sense ridz shld speak 2 ammy abt d job.. whts d use of hiding for al u knw he mite hav already known jus waitng 4 ridz 2 tel..
..bt even d vice versa.. neva thot nikki-abhi cld land up havng troubles.. is it 4 real.. i mean abhi was always happy wid nikki taggng along so nw al of a sudden wer did dis givng space pop up.. nikki shld def speak 2 abhi..
wonderng wht happnd btwn ammy n ridz  dat dey hardly gt tym after vegas...
Posted: 12 years ago
RESSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I don't know when I'll edit it but i will!!! *HUGSS*
 
MISSS YOUUU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by armaania13


EDITED:

extremely sorry about the late comment.. Had read the update on my phone since i was away, then came back to pile-loads of work and literally forgot that I had not commented.

Anyways, needless to say, Chapter 32 (a)  was simply too good.
Is Armaan for real??!!!!I just wish he was!!! There would be a mad clamour for someone like him!!  Loved how he put so much thought into making this first trip together so special -- getting money out of his savings for his camera, surprising her with so much, just makes him so much more .. lovable I guess... for want of a better term!!! (As if he isnt already!!!)) But he's just t sooo perfect!!!
Riddhima --- was being just .. Riddhima!!!
her outbursts, her anger tho justified, was a cute read.. But my favorite part was the discussion about the BED!!!!

I loved it!" I said, caressing his cheek. "Thank you!" I smiled at him, and saw him smile back, widely.  "And about the double bed, I think you're forgetting that it was me who used to sneak into your bed at night!" I said cheekily, and saw his dimples deepen. Poking them, I continued, "I trust you with my life." I whispered and saw his eyes twinkle at the use of his words.

 "Really now? And how do you know what my intentions are?" He murmured huskily, and for a moment, I swayed at  intensity of passion in his eyes.

 "For a person who put pillows between himself and his girlfriend the first time she slept in his arms, I think I'll be okay!" I averted my gaze from his, and shot back. Hiding myself in his arms again, I sighed, content with life once again.



Coming to Chapter 32 b :
Before I say anything else, I just have to say this --- I hope ARmaan Riddhima dont go all the way in terms of their physical relationship.. I know its pretty expected, since they are living together, but For me, that would just kill what I believe is the essence of this FF --- its cuteness, the freshness and innocence in progression of their relationship ..
And I just feel its tooo soon!! Again, thats just my opinion!!! I have read FFs where I didnt mind when  the leads AR went all the way before marriage, but for some reason, I somehow cant find that acceptable in this FF!!!


Anways, loved the NIKKI Riddhima conversation.. Honestly, even I think I understand  Riddhima a little better now😆.. It brought forward, like Nikki said, the depth of her love for Armaan, knowing the flaws that she has, in not wanting to bind him if he wanted to move on,( which I dont think will ever happen!!!)

some of the dialogues and scenes were simply Hilariously Outrageous!!! I literally was in splits reading these::::
Oi!" I felt Armaan arms pulling me back. "Stop killing my girlfriend!" He murmured as he pulled me out.

Although it was only Nikki, and although she was married to someone, I still couldn't take the idea of any girl being in Armaan's arms. That's my place.

Nikki finally let go of Armaan, and I stood in front of him, almost protecting him from more unwanted hugs.

 "I give up on your breed!" He muttered while I giggled.


"Am I allowed to be here now, because honestly Nikki, you're married, and the last time I checked Riddhima was straight, and I'm not getting a very good feeling about leaving you both alone for so long and-" Armaan rambled on, while Nikki and I sighed and walked past him. Obviously that wasn't enough to shut him up.

The AR convo  was refreshing - from Riddhima's perspective.. She considers him like her husband already, and yet has issues with wearing her ring!!! Hopefully that convo and the one she had with Nikki will put some of her fears to rest!!!!


As always, waiting for more!!!!

And sorry again!!!
My workload is killing me, but I will do my best to comment, in a timely manner!!!!


Aww its okay! I just get impatient when it comes to your comment actually, since you always comment in detail! ðŸ˜†

And about the physical relation thing - be rest assured, that the essence you're talking about is never going to be lost. Yes, they will reach different levels, of course, since they're living together, but they won't ever go all the way. Yes, this FF has a tendency to stick to the cute side, and although I would love to change that, I'm not being able to. I guess your personality shows in your work, because in spite of having tried so many times, I'm still people's cutest friend. Sigh. 

But anyway, coming to the point, I ain't planning to make them go all the way there, maybe Riddhima has a tendency to be impulsive and go over board, but Armaan, as you can see, is very protective of her, and he knows her inside out. He understands her impulsiveness and  also knows she has a tendency to regret things at times. So he won't let her go over board. Now I'm going to shut up, because there are things planned on these lines in the coming updates. 

Hope you're put to rest! ðŸ˜³

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