Shru, stop worrying over things, I LOVE THIS FF and I seriously LOVE everything about it, the characters, the plot, the writing..just EVERYTHING :) But For you, I'll still answer youre questions😛
First, Im extremely HAPPY with the pace. I agree, youve explored the relationship and bond between AR from the very beginning and as the story has progressed, their relationship has grown and that will continue to happen for sure. Also, NO i dont think its slow AT ALL! The pace that you have moved on with the story is normal and makes it all the more realistic for us to accept it as readers :) So awesomeee!!
Second, Hmm...intimate scenes..romance? Well yes I agree when a story involves the characters like AR...romance and eye locks are a must haha ;) I think ive adapted to that as Ive read more and more FF's..i mean the show, it was more innocent but yes Id like to see more i guess but for some reason, I think intimacy also deals with the amount of comfort between the two and comfort level is just wayy too good for AR...i mean best friends and then, lovers. The comfort no doubt is there and i guess that will give it more a flow with the story. I know i also had something else to say at this point but i cant remember or i just cant put it in words lol Ill tell you if i remember ;) Oh also, I dont want no preggo Riddhima issues😆 This story has so far been very realistic and acceptable for me to picture it in real life and Id like that to continue..like simple and normal...though life is complicated but i dont want no "ekta" twists and stuff loool! But im sure knowing you I know you wont add anything like that, since thats just not you :) So continue on with the pace of their romance as well...i guess some closeness would give me goosebumps and im sure you'll be great at writing such peices as well!
Third, IMPROVEDDD IMPROVEDDD! Ohh Emm Gee, girl dont ask such stupid questions! Ive read your ff twice or 3 times already and yes yes yes youve improved!!! So quit those mood swings and yess youre learning and just getting WAYYY TOO GOOD! One of the best writers on this block here :)
Fourth, Yepp Im liking the track! Spice it up? Hmmm HOW? I dont want a big twist or anything, I mean AR have dealt with ALOT in the last 5 updates...the confession and then, engagement issue and now moving in..Krish thing..and then, now Riddhimas job and this Will DUDE! Give them a break already ;) I like them relaxed and just reading the typical girlfriend boyfriend scenes...but again, the story needs to move on so yess think of new plots to add and what will make their bond stronger than what it is now :)
Lastly, YOURE PERFECT AND THIS FF IS PERFECTO! No confusion and no questions at all :) Everything is JUST GGREAT right now. Keep writing awayy and I'll keep reading awayy haha!
Arrite that is all :)
Hope i helped and just didnt blab LOL
and now...UPDATEEE THE INSTALLMENT 😃
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