Okay first off, you're crazy! There are no flaws in your story! Otherwise I'd have told you already ;)So, CHILL!!! :D
Ans 1: Happy? I'm ecstatic! Dude, they confessed like 5 chapters ago! And even then there were so many issues...her going back to India and stuff! Then they had this whole thing about whether she was ready for the "fiance" tag or not. So in short, they've had a lot of stress off late...they need time off that too without the supervision of anyone else! So yes I'm happy with the pace :)
Ans 2 [Gosh, this feels like I'm writing an exam or something 😆] : Haha you know the answer to this one! We had a very detailed not to mention highly crazy discussion about this one, you me and Sanaa 🤣 I wouldn't mind it at all ;) And I'm not too comfortable with writing them either...not that I'm a prude but I just don't see myself writing something like that! Thankfully, I have long way to go before I reach that stage in LI ;)
Ans 3: I love the way you write!!! They've improved, I'd say! Last week or something I was reading random chapters and there are quite a few improvements! And your writing is loads better now...so I don't think there's room for improvement or if there is then I don't see it :)
Ans 4: Yes it is!!! And if by spice it up you mean involving Will Fern in things that are none of his business then I forbid you to spice it up 😆 No, seriously, I think it's just fine <3
Ans 5: Nothing that I can think of as of now! Armaan-Rhea sounds nice though :) Will let you know if I can think of anything! :)
*Phew* finally done! I feel like I just gave a biiig exam 😆 Hope this pacifies you <3
Pssht. When I saw that "posted an installment" thingy in your PM, I was like- "Oh my God! Another one? Wow!" and then I hurried up to read it only to find that it was the same one...Haayyee meri phooti kismat 🤣
Take care <3 Ciao :)
xoxo
Aanya