my firstff pt 12 pg 27 Conflicts and Complications - Page 8

Originally posted by: swasthi

Good going ... the tension increases.

Complications  - it looks to be coming from Gopi's end.

 

Cannot what for the next update.

 

Originally posted by: Bloem123

Thanks for The Update  😃

Originally posted by: Poojiebbz

this is yet again a wonderful part !! 

lovely writing, and loving the way the story is gradually unfolding! 

i wanted to thank you for updating regularly, at least this is keeping me hooked in than the actually SNS! haha

You're doing a great job, keep at it.

-Pooja

Originally posted by: winter30

Hey no problem, glad your enjoying it, there is some wonderful ff on this forum. I think the cv;s should take note at the talent that is shown on this forum.

Originally posted by: soni4eva

1ns agen awesome update

wats da suspenence cnt w8 2 find out

plzzz update soon

Originally posted by: sbp1971

This was a very good part, now I am really interested to know Gopi's story and how Ahem is going to find out. Keep up the good work.