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FF: Khabi Khabi..Update (Chapter23) Page56 - Ended

Sp666 Senior Member
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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 11:27am | IP Logged

Hi guys, my name's Sara and im deciding to start a new FF! Its my first one and i hope it goes well! Please do give some feedback in order to which i should carry on or not! :-)
PS: ADD ME AS A BUDDY IF YOU WANT PM'INGSmile


Page 1   - Chapter 1
Page 2   - Chapter 2
Page 4   - Chapter 3
Page 6   - Chapter 4
Page 9   - Chapter 5
Page 11  - Chapter 6
Page 14  - Chapter 7
Page 16  - Chapter 8
Page 21  - Chapter 9
Page 24 - Chapter 10
Page 26 - Chapter 11
Page 28 - Chapter 12
Page 30 - Chapter 13
Page 33 - Chapter 14
Page 36 - Chapter 15
Page 38 - Chapter 16
Page 40 - Chapter 17
Page 42 - Chapter 18
Page 44 - Chapter 19
Page 48 - Chapter 20
Page 51 - Chapter 21
Page 54 - Chapter 22
Page 56 - Chapter 23 (The happy ending)
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It was a early morning, the sun was beautifully risen in the city of Shimla. 
"Arohi! Wake-up! You have to help me choose what to wear tonight, and you have to choose what you going to wear too!" yelled Shefali.
Arohi Aluwahlia was a happy, hyper young girl who lived with her only sister Shefali. Their parents had passed away due to a car accident and Arohi took the responsibility of looking after her younger sister.
"Let me sle-ee-p" arohi moaned. 
Shefali had no other choice than to get a cup full of cold-ice water and throw it on Arohi.
SPLASH
"WHAT THE HELL! YOU STUPID IDIOT!" Arohi cried with anger!
Shefali giggled quietly to herself. She loved making Arohi angry! 
"Now please! Wake-up! We have to choose what to wear for Romit's party! I really need to look my best, seeing as i am his girlfriend" Shefali smiled.
"Yes im waking up, i guess i will have to take my idiotic sister shopping..." Arohi said sarcastically.
Shefali rolled her eyes and left the bedroom while Arohi quickly popped into the bathroom. Arohi was ready to take her sister on a day out for shopping. 
Arohi told Shefali to get in the car while she would quickly go and get herself a drink of water. 
Arohi walked towards her silver Toyota Corolla and saw her sister waiting and listening to the radio. She jumped into the car and left home to go to Outlet Mall.


This is all i have done so far! Its short, but i just want some feedback...! please press 'LIKE' is you liked it thanks :-)

Sara.x






Edited by Sp666 - 31 July 2011 at 6:32am

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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 11:48am | IP Logged
Its does well dear. Do continue, we are hear to encourage you. Keep writing..but quick updates Wink as we are impatient.

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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 11:50am | IP Logged
nice plz give us detailed update...plz add me to ur pm list

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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 12:44pm | IP Logged
Well start,u shud cntinue. N gv a detail update soon n do pm me. We all r here 2 encourage ur work. Go ahead.

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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 12:48pm | IP Logged
its very nice do continue...n add me to ur pm list..

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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 12:57pm | IP Logged
Good start. Pls do continue and do long updates. Also plz add me to ur pm list.

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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 1:04pm | IP Logged
WOW! great start!!
 
congratz on ya ff honey
 
pls add me 2 ur pm list
 
Nd do cont soon.x

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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 1:20pm | IP Logged
yes that was pretty good, now you can continue with your post... it was very well done for a first time! <3

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