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Posted: 11 October 2011 at 10:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Lekshmic7

Hai Joseph & S3; firstly am extremely sorry 4 d delay. Update is as usual MIND BLOWING!!! Nw i hv no more words in my hand to describe ur update. My dictionary is empty nw. U guys r OUT STANDING!! Coming to d part; i loved each & every scene,espcly sam along with gunjan & her family.i really enjoyed & smiled all d way while reading it. Sam- tinku cold war ws hilarious.tinku is so caring & possessive towards gunjan. He is more mature dan his real age.his thoughts & expressions wr amazing. Bt samrattt... Oh man!!!nw d ball is in his court; He is so determined nw..am really curious to know his next move. Waiting eagerly 4 d dinner scene. Bt i hv a feeling dat tinku is also upto something. Poor gunjan., she is confused nd screwed bw her brother nd her DEEWANA!!.LOL! I really loved d way she saved sam.its so cute .sam s convo with gunjis parents ws also nice. Arnav scene ws interesting, nw d mystery is killing me.hope u guys will reveal it soon. Sams parents convo ws nice. Sams dad is nw only considering his familys status nd pride. He is not aware of his sons inner feelings.bt sams mom is nw realising her sons hesitation towards ds marriage, she is worried abt her childs happiness nd future..really eager to see wt will b her next move.am glad der is no Yamini scenes in ds update. Overall BRILLIANt update. Thanks a lot 4 d pm. Once again sorry 4 d late comment .luv u guys, take care - lekshmi


Thank you so much Lekshmi for your precious reply.Embarrassed. N don't say sorry for delayed Reply... because,your all sweet words compensate all thingsSmile We are really feeling GR8 that,you liked this part.

Samrat along with Bhushan family scene is very important part of this story...because,you know naa First impression is the Last impression so,That was very important part for Samrat's POV.
Tinku is very caring n loving bro. Yes,He is little bit mature then his real age beacause,he knows about the cruel 'Reality'. He is really possessive for her 'Di'...

Samrat will be 'SAMRAT'Embarrassed... He is very sure for Gunjan as his life partner. He is doing all thing according to his 'Perfect' plan...so,let's see what will his next move... Dinner Scene is staring Part of Next part... we are updating very soonWink.

We are trying to revealed Arnav's family problem so soon... Please,little wait. Samrat's father is not bad person...he is right on his place..He wants Samrat's happiness too but,he is not understanding his son view. After reading the readers response... we are going to short the Yamini's character... Now , her character is playing a important cameo.


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Posted: 12 October 2011 at 10:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by gnaneswari

first of all, i'm very sorry for the late comment. the update was fabulous. i loved it a lot. loved each and every scene. but the high-lights of the update were sam-tinku scenes and sam with bhushan family. superb. loved them a lot. so, arnav is trying to reach gunjan. this was expected. but it was proved that he really loves her a lot. and wants her in his life truely. desperately waiting for the mystry to unfold. samrat's parents convo, is awesome. it was very real, just like the way, happens in our own house. they both were correct at their own place. they both want same thing... samrat's happiness. but their pov's r different. and u have described it very wisely with out letting any one to appear negatively.  waiting eagerly for the next update. please do cont soon. thanks for pm.



Don't say sorry for this Late Reply Lakshmi...EmbarrassedI know and understand your problem Buddy ! Thanx for liking this UpdateSmile.

We got many positive review for Samrat-Tinku scenesSmile...Its really very encouraging thing. Samrat with 'Bhushan Family' sequence was very important sequense...because,Samrat wants to impress him. Arnav is really sweet guy... Very loyal person too. Thanx for your precious words for SD-SM convo scene. Samrat's Dad is right on his place... He wants Samrat's happiness... but,unfortunately  he don't understand his son's wish. We'll be update very soon.
 
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Posted: 12 October 2011 at 11:04am | IP Logged
Amazing Update!!

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Posted: 12 October 2011 at 8:01pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Zeenat-

Amazing Update!!


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Posted: 14 October 2011 at 10:33am | IP Logged
HI Joseph ,Soham,Swati,Sonia ...Hug...When is the next update Yaar? ...I am very excited and curious 2 know what will happen next ...Embarrassed...Do try 2 update soon plsss...

Love GunjanSmile...


Edited by 1gunjan7 - 14 October 2011 at 10:35am

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Posted: 14 October 2011 at 2:57pm | IP Logged
Updatee Soonishhh Embarrassed

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Posted: 14 October 2011 at 7:55pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by 1gunjan7

PART--9

Hi Joseph,Soham,Sonia,Swati ...Hug...

OMG! Wow!What a Fantastic update...Clap...It was totally rocking and Fully OUT-Standing...Thumbs Up...Bahut bahut bahut bahut mazza aaya read karkey...Thumbs Up...I loved and enjoyed reading this update a lot...It was so so so good that I am speechless ...Mindblowing and Fantabulous update...Thumbs Up...though I love your all updates very much and Tinku-Samrat part is my favorite But this update Tinku-Samrat part was so rocking so awesome,amazing and fabulous that I loved it the most...Samrat stole the show today...Very well written and Presentation was fantastic...each part each scene and Every dialogue was amazing and Excellent...Gr8 update...Thumbs Up...You all Joseph, Soham,Sonia,Swati are great and out-standing n excellent writers..Thumbs Up...Maaza aa jata hai your FF APHG and MBYPH read karkey...they are Rocking FF's.....Thumbs Up...

In this update also you have written everything so well and each situation, each scene and each characters emotions feelings have been described so properly and so awesomely that imagining each characters expressions and visualizing each scene and each part was easy...I felt as if I was watching a show ON TV ...I really could imagine in my mind every part ...and how this character must be acting and expressing his emotions in this particular situation ...the update was just AMAZING and FULL ON ROCKING and FANTABULOUS...ClapClapClap...EXCELLENT WORK Joseph,Soham,Sonia,Swati..Clap...Loved the whole update a lottt...You know the update was not long at all infact it was a short update...I was enjoying reading it so much that when it ended I was like Oh! man It has ended ..I wanted 2 read more n more...Infact I will say THIS JOSEPH SOHAM SONIA SWATI PLEASE Plsss update SOONNN...I am desperate 2 read Whats Gonna Happen next In Both your FF's APHG and MBYPH......Plss jaldi update karna ...Once again MAZZA AA GAYA READ KARKEY...Fabulous Work Clap...

Samrat-Tinku-gunjan-GM_GD part was just Rocking Guys...I enjoyed it so much that I couldnt stop laughing....Just imagining and Visualizing the scene  and characters expressions Especially Samrat-tinku part made me Roffle hard..Infact I am still laughing after LOL..I have never laughed so so much ...WHAT a fantastically written part Clap...TINKU My God he is so naughty LOL...He was enjoying samrat in trouble infact he was making sure Samrat fell more in troubleROFL...Bicharey samrat ko bolney hi nahi diya when  GD (AMIT) was speaking 2 samrat and asking him questions...1st Samrat was in trouble and Tinku was enjoying and calling him funny namesLOL.Then Tinku in trouble and Samrat was smirkingLOL...Tinku toh Phir bhi kid hai But samrat he is also too much he also becomes a Kid when Tinku is around...LOL...Tinku is so naughty...loved the whole part ...from GD asking samrat who is he and tinku enjoying you know though Tinku didnt make face at samrat when his dad was there but I could just imagine Ki Agar tinku laughing faces banata seeing samrat in a situation toh kasey banataLOL...to Gunjan saving samrat that was very sweet  but we know why she did it ...LOL...then tinku getting scolded samrat enjoying and samrat saving Tinku from getting scolded just 4 gunjan was very sweet and it showed Samrat really like gunjanSmile.....I COULD visualze this scene when TINKU said SORRY 2 samrat Bicharey tinku  ko kitana effort karna pada hogaLOL...U know when AMIT GD said 2 samrat stay 4 DInner this scene and GUNJAN-TINKU WHAT dialogueLOL...When I imagined this scene I started laughingLOL...And Samrat so naughty full FAYEDA uthayaWink LOL...and TELLING NISHA-GM that mein SIKA dunga CUSTOMS...LOL.LOL...Man Gunjan and tinku kitana angry huey hongey I could visualize itLOL...U know when in real life also parents Praise other children we children think the same in our minds GHAR ki MURGI Dal BARABARWinkLOL...MAN what a PART Fully AWESOME...Clap ...MAN Poor samratLOL  yeh Naughty and sweet and over intelligent Tinku Samrat ko kitaney Name dege...MOGAMBO-LOLGABBAR SINGH-LOLCHINDI CHORROFL-GANG ko belong karta hei yeh and Call POLICE when Tinku said this I cracked up with laughter LOL-----CHOR-----ROOM SERVICE MANROFL-------BANDHAR------LOLLOLMonkeyLOLLOLLOL-----SPIDER MANLOLLOLLOL------------BHUKKHAD--------LOL--------ROFL----U KNOW when Tinku said meri sari mango custard na kha ley...LOL..I remembered When My sis and me were kids very small kids and Mom made our favorite sweet dish for us only and that day only always guests used 2 visit and BEING small kids we used 2 think like this only KAHIN humrai FAVORITE DISH na finish ho jaye...WinkLOLLOLLOL...WHOLE PART WAS AWESOME ...ENJOYED it a LOTTTThumbs Up...Clap...

ARNAV part was also good it showed arnav love 4 gunjan and that arnav is a good person and his talk with his friend raj was interesting also the bonding close between both were excellent and showed they were loyal n good friends...Friendly Taunts and teasing happen like this only between friends...Smile...ARNAV worry is genuine I also want 2 know What happened after arnav left and though arnav said he said yes 2 marry  Gunjan bec he fell in love with her but he also Said he did it 4 another reason ...I really want 2 know what that reason was ConfusedConfused...and WHY was ANKIT as shown in last part was SO Rude when talking about Gunjan and what was he hiding and it looked like His wife had left him ...ConfusedConfused...Kya Hua tha 2yrs back ...Confused...
Do tell soon Joseph,Soham,Sonia,Swati...Plss...whats the MysteryConfused and Why does gunjan take injections ??Confused...accident ka tetinus injection toh doc neh lagaya hoga then when Tinku said in last part injection liya di ?what injection??Confused...

SD and SM talk was also interesting ..U excellently showed the Generation gap which happens between parents and children due 2 lack of communication....Same has happened with SD ..though Sd loves Samrat in his own way and wants best 4 him but he is also Stubborn and just thinking about Society thinking and his friendship with yamini dad and he gave his word BUT why did he gave word without even asking Samrat once whether he now loves yamini...just bec they found his pictures with her and they studied in same college and work same office OK Misunderstandings like this happen when parents find PICTURES of their SON/Daughter with another girl/boy but atleast ONCE only SD n Sm should have asked samrat DO you Like yamini  ?  I agree with SM she understands samrat more then SD and respects her sons feelings also And The way U showed Her taking Samrat side and trying 2 make her husbands understand that Samrat View who he wants 2 MARRY should be asked Once his view is important...The motherly love and trust U showed 4 her son was excellently written Joseph ,Soham,Sonia,Swati..I agree Ultimately Samrat view who he wants 2 marry is Important as he has 2 stay whole life with the girl whom he marries and girl should be of his choice...ACCORDING 2 Sd he is doing right I know Sd is right in his own way what society thinks is also important BUT ONLY upto an extent as SOCIETY TO KUCH BHI BOLTI HAI and everytime if we do what society thinks and wants then What about what WE want????? As in bad times society doesnt come 2 help only our close and loved ones help us...and INSTEAD of saying what society thinks SHOULDNT SD think what his SON WANTS...SHOULDNT SD trust his SON and instead of believing a Rumor ...I FEEL their is communication gap between father n son as Mother has understood her sons feelings But father has not and SD doesnt even realize and know what TYPE Of WIFE his son wants...he is Judging his SON DESIRES and what Samrat may like in his wife by just seeing Samrat outer image But inside what he thinks SD doesnt know...I WONDER WHAT SD will say if he knows Samrat wants a Sweet ,SIMPLE and TRADITIONAL girl as His WIFE ...??I think he will be shocked...BUT will He agree 2 GUNJAN-Samrat Marriage?Confused As RICH Class status is important 4 SD...BUT  1 qs is will Sajan marriage happen ??Confused...ONCE AGAIN TOTALLY Gr8 , RAPCHICK, MIND Blowing Update ...Loved each part a lottt...Excellent work Joseph,Soham,Sonia,SwatiClap...

THANKS 4 Pm friendsHug..really want 2 know what will happen next ...SO PLSS PLSS...DO Update soon JOSEPH,SOHAM,SONIA,SWATI ...and Do pm me whenever you update Plss...

Love your good friend
GunjanSmileSmile...


Thank you so much Gunjan for this detailed Review.SmileIt is so precious for us.Embarrassed.Thanks for appreciating our Team effort.Embarrassed . We really work hard on each n every part...this is the 1 of the reason for our late updates.Embarrassed.

Samrat-Tinku part is our favorite too.We love to write their parts..We are glad that readers also like it. Thanks for liking our writing style... Now,We are working on next part of APHG (Will B post very soon) and I think MBYPH's new Update is readyEmbarrassed...But,I don't know woh kab post hogaConfused

Tinku is really a trouble maker of Samrat.LOL Actually, It is totally 'Ser-Sawa Ser' type condition... They hate each other so muchLOL.and their dislliking to each-other presence creates some funny atmosphereEmbarrassed. Tinku is Mature then his age but over all he is kid...so some time He behave or thought just like his same age group kids. We really want to write or show some very common things of our house... Possessive about his 'Mango-Custard' ... Parent praising to others childeren is very common things...n irritating tooAngryEmbarrassed.

Arnav is really nice guy. He didn't know anything about his Family or Gunjan's family problem.We reveal  it very soon... Here Tinku is asking for
'Tetanus Injection' Gunjan ne woh injection nahin liya hai..Ouch.

I am speechless after reading your depth view about SD-SM scene... You understand their feelings very well.So,what can I say...you know everything n I really agree with you... Its the main problem of our society. Parents knows his decision is best for their children... some time,woh decision Right proove hote hain some time nahin...Ouch.


                                         is will SaJan marriage happen ??Confused

Bro favorite answer... Wait n Watch..!! LOL  Embarrassed


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Posted: 15 October 2011 at 3:57am | IP Logged
Ye Aaplogo ke 'WAIT & WATCH' ke Chakkar me Logo ki Zindagiyaa Barbaad ho Jaani h, By God..!! Stern Smile ROFL 
 
& BTW 'ZINDAGI NAA MILEGI DOBARA' ROFL  isiliye stop dis 'WAIT & WATCH'...Wacko ROFL

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