Posted: 18 May 2011 at 7:33pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by gnaneswari
Awesome update. Loved it a lot. Firstly, i was prepared for a shock, as i know u. And i was very much eager to read it. Thats why i haven't waited for ur pm and visited here to check if u have posted it. Coming to update, what can i say u wrote it amazingly like always. Gd&Gm's convo is very realistic like it happens in every one's house. GD is very concerned about gunjan and why not he is her father after all. And Gm's thoughts r also very nice. U wrote it very nicely. Every mother thinks like that only when it comes to their daughter's marraige. They want them to understand the priority of marraige and to change their mindset to adjust and organise themselves in a new house. Mothers really worry about these things. Samrat and gunjan's entry was superb. The way gunjan saying 'hamare delhi' shows that how much she misses delhi. And brij seems to be a very sensible guy. The way he is telling about marraige says that he is a responsible and sensible guy. And u have depicted samrat's charector very nicely and brilliantly. Samrat is a nice guy. The way he said that 'marraige is a life long commitment' shows that he is serious about marraige. He respects it and wants to maintain it in any situation. By this scene, i can say that he is not taking marraige as a small thing. He knows its value. And he said that he will respect their parents decision and they take only right decision for him. How sweet! He respects their parents a lot. But, his relation with nidha is little shocking for me. Frankly speaking, i hadn't expected that samrat will take a physical relationship very lightely. May be because, i don't a boy's way of thinking in relations and their life style. Thats why its shocking for me. And coming to accident part it was hilarious. I loved it. I thought that sajan will meet. But they hadn't. Hope they'll meet in next update. U have done a great job. I know arrange marraige is cute but little complicated concept to write and our age is not quite enough to write it in a 'mature' way. I can understand. But, i have faith in u, that u can justify it. As u said that u r preparing to write this from 2 months, this shows ur dedication and hard work towards this ff. Thats why i tell u, that u can do it. Sorry for my longer comment. Do cont soon. And give me a long update next time. And yeah, don't think that i will come and read without pm everytime. Do pm me from next time.
Thanks Lakshmi for your all precious words for this Update.and,Frankly speaking...I was really felt so nervous before,posting it. GD-GM convo part is very important for sketch GUNJAN's character and her bonding with her parents.thanks...if,you felt ,this is near to 'realistic feeling'.
I think,SAMRAT-GUNJAN entry is very simple...actually,I really wanted this. Yes...BRIJ is very sensible person...SAMRAT too...but,SAMRAT living style is different...He is ok with 'Physical Relations' before marriage...I know,this is not right thing...but,this is very common in Metro Cities.
The writing of SAMRAT's character is not easy for me...because my personal view is very different
from him...But,same time I understand his view also.I told you naa...I am little scared about SAMRAT's character... Actually,He is very sensible person...He knows NIDHI or his other GF was not perfect match for him...so,he is waiting for right person...His view about Marriage is very clear... MARRIAGE is life-time commitment for him.
And that Accident part...thanks a lot for liking this part... My previous1 scene is little similar to IPKKND promo scene...so,usse change karna must tha... Definitely yaar...Marriage is really complicated subject...jab plan kiya tha...toh itna difficult nahin laga...but,after some time i realized...no dude its not easy...because,my story is not 'VIVAAH' type...here,I am dealing 2 different nature of people...and their different living style.
And,Don't feel sorry for long Update...Its really great feedback... and, about PM...Last night my NET was creating some problems...so,I didn't sent any PM to any1...Morning mein sabhi ko send kiya hai Yaar...