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                     ...Aur PYAAR Ho Gaya !   

PART  9 :    (1/3)

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[A]

BHUSHAN HOUSE
 
SAMRAT stood facing Mr.AMIT BHUSHAN [GUNJAN's Dad]... his right palm over his left, his eyes lowered...  AMIT walked over to him and looking at him from head to feet, he asked... his voice a bit high...  "Dekhne mein toh kisi achhe ghar ke maloom hote ho...Aise kaam karte, sharm nahin aati...??
 
Slowly SAMRAT moved his gaze up... looking at Mr.BHUSHAN... his eyes emitting innocence... and the quickly lowered his gaze. TINKU was enjoying every single minute of SAMRAT's predicament...  He was waiting for SAMRAT to justify his actions... SAMRAT stammered...
 
S - Ji...ji...woh aap galat samajh rahe hain...main toh bas...
 
T - (To his Dad) Papa...see...yeh toh aapko hi galat keh raha hai..I told you naa... Aap please abhi Police ko bulaiye... (said in pinching way)
 
S - No...No...Please...aisa nahin hai... (His hands moving frantically as he spoke... he smiled a bit flustered and in a fake normal tone, with his left hand pointing towards TINKU, he said...)Aap..aap iski baatoon par gaur mat kijiye...Yeh bas yun hi shararat kar raha hai..he knows me... (turned to TINKU side) TINKU !! har waqt mazaak thik nahin.. (As he spoke, his fake smile remained, but his teeth clenched, as he spoke...)
 
T - (said to his Dad) PAPA ! I told you naa...isne hum sab ki info collect kar li hogi...see,isse toh mera naam bhi pata hai..ab dekhna...kahega ki, 'Di' ko bhi jaanta hai...
 
GD - (strictly) Hey ! sach sach batao...Kaun ho tum...? aur itne jawaan,Hatte-Katte ho kar chori jaisa gira hua kaam kyun karte ho...?
 
SAMRAT shut his eyes as he looked away... then, opening his eyes, he took a deep breath as he moved closer to Mr.BHUSHAN and said in a  normal tone, hoping to convince Mr BHUSHAN... "SIR ! I think yahaan thodi si misunderstanding ho rahi hai...Main Chor nahin, main toh..."
 
T - (cuts immediately) Chor nahin toh kya SPIDER MAN ho...?? SPIDER MAN ho toh...Hamari window par kya kar rahe the..? Wall par chadhne ki practice...?? Kyun ab tumhaare haathon se jaal [Net] nahin nikalte...? (asked in very innocent expression)
 
SAMRAT glared at TINKU as he was cut again... but his glare quickly turned to another fake smile... his mind though  was crowded with thoughts that would definitely not bring a smile to his face...

       
 
((Yeh saala toh aaj meri jaan le kar hi maanega...Haath dho kar peeche pad gaya hai...ek bhi mauka nahin chhod raha mujh par attack karne ka...1 baar GUNJAN se shaadi ho jaane de Bachhu...phir bataoonga main tujhe...Oh God !! Kitna bolta hai yeh..?? Chup toh hota hi nahin...
 
aur yeh GUNJAN !! woh kahaan reh gayi...? Ab tak toh aa jaana chahiye tha...lekin,ab tak aayi kyun nahin...? Usne kaha tha ki,Jab tak woh naa aaye...Main kuchh na kahoon...par, yeh Tingu-Mingu mujhe kuchh bolne de tab naa...?? 1 sec., kahin yeh inn donon Bhai-Behan ki koi chaal toh nahin..? No...Main bhi yeh kya soch raha hoon...woh mere saath aisa nahin karegi...usne mujhe Promise kiya hai...and I don't know why but,uske Promise par yakeen karne ko dil karta hai...agar usne kaha hai hai toh woh aati hi hogi...
 
tab tak main yahaan situation handle karne ki koshish karta hoon...God !! Please,help me... 1st impression is last impression... agar aaj impress nahin kar paaya toh yeh log toh mere baare mein kabhi sochenge bhi nahin...chal beta SAM...shuru ho jaa... Ab tak ladkiyon ko patata tha... par aaj pehli baar ladki ki family ko patana hoga... warna Life Time ke liye uss YAMINI  naam ka Sim apni Life ke Mobile mein daalna hoga...aur yahaan toh 'Portability' ki facility bhi nahin milegi... Dude...really need your Help...yeh meri puri life ka sawaal hai...))
 
Mr.BHUSHAN's strict voice broke his chain of thoughts... and SAMRAT looked at AMIT... as AMIT asked him... "Tum chup kyun ho...? I think mujhe tumhein Police mein hi dena hoga.
 
S - No..Sir...main woh...actually...
 
T - (cuts again immediately) Papa...I told you naa...yeh toh Di ko bhi jaanta hai.inka Gang kaafi dangerous hoga...Aap abhi POLICE ko bulao naa...wohi hi isse thik karegi...
 
S - (angrily glared at him) Sir he knows me...Yeh mujhse mil chuka hai...aur isse mera naam bhi pata hai...sirf Aapko bata nahin raha,Main chor nahin...main toh...
 
T - (cuts again) What do you mean by, "I know you"..?? Sorry ! lekin,main tumhein nahin jaanta..Mujhe kya pata ki tumhaara naam kya hai...? Main tumhaari Gang mein thodi na hoon... (said in totally unaware tone)
 
GD - (to TINKU) TINKU...tum chup raho...Mujhe iss se baat karne do...
 
Hearing his Dad speak such, TINKU looked down and smirked... he nodded in a positive...his hands behind him as he waitied for his Dad to blast SAMRAT. But instead, he heard SAMRAT's voice...and he looked up.... keeping his hands on his waist... 
 
S - Thanks Sir...!! My name is SAMRAT SH..
 
T - (Inturrupt again) Naam SAMRAT aur kaam chori kaa..?? aur phir...
 
Mr.BHUSHAN looked at TINKU angrily. Seeing the look on his Dad's face, TINKU gulped and looked downwards again, his hands moving away from his waist . Mr.BHUSHAN turned to look at SAMRAT again as he said strictly... "Look tumhara naam jo bhi ho...par,Kya main yeh jaan sakta hoon ki,tum abhi raat ke (checked his wrist watch) 9 baje hamare ghar...nahin actually,hamare 1st floor ke window par kya kar rahe the...? Answered to me...warna main abhi POLICE ko bulata hoon...
 
SAMRAT looked pale as all color drained from his face hearing the word 'POLICE'. TINKU's smirk got bigger as he heard his dad speak... he sneaked a look at SAMRAT... and he grinned widely... how he hoped his dad would not notice and he could do a small dance, waving his hands in SAMRAT's face... but  he would have to be content with the priceless look on SAMRAT's face... he stifled a chuckle as he looked away... SAMRAT on the other hand was trying to get a word in... his voice giving away his anguish...
 
S -  No...Sir...Actually,Main toh bas yahaan...(( Ab kya kahoon..? GUNJAN ka naam loon...?? No kahin inhone usse galat samajh liya toh...?? Uss bechari ko toh kuchh pata bhi nahin...bewajah,usse daant pad jaayegi...Aur mera saara Plan bhi fail ho jaayega...Kya sochenge yeh mere baare mein...? Yeh saala toh pata nahin mujhe kya banaye ja raha hai... CHOR...GANG...POLICE...?? Arre ! sabse bada MAFIA toh yeh khud hai...sach Films aur TV ka kaafi bad effect pad  raha hai bachhon par... Kitne khatarnak ho gaye hain yeh...sirf naam ke hi bachhe hain...Yeh toh kisi ko bhi Paani pila sakte hain... Oh God ! aur,Yeh GUNJAN kahaan reh gayi...abhi tak aa kyun nahin rahi...? Please,come fast...aur apne iss Gunde Bhai se bachao...))
 
GD - (strictly) Ab phir chup kyun ho gaye...? tell me tum abhi hamare ghar ki window par kya kar rahe the...?
 
SAMRAT could not complete his sentence as he was thinking about what to say... he looked at Mr.BHUSHAN... hoping Mr.BHUSHAN would read his expressions when TINKU threw another 'GOOGLY' at him... waving his finger at SAMRAT as he spoke, he asked him in a put on strict tone...
 
T - Kuchh bolte kyun nahin...?? Papa tumse hi baat kar rahe hain... Tum iss tarah mere Papa ke questions ko ignore kar unki insult nahin kar sakte... so,tell the truth... (turned to his Dad side..) Papa...yeh toh aapko importance hi nahin de raha...sirf aapki insult kiye ja raha hai... Isse lag raha hoga...aap toh kuchh karoge nahin...toh darrne ki kya zaroorat hai...?? Abhi SUJiT uncle hote naa...toh batate isse...(as he spoke, his eyes closed and he jerked his head a bit... his tone  clearly indicating his intention to pinch SAMRAT.)
 
SAMRAT looked at TINKU as he glared at him...not even attempting a fake smile... He wished he could hold TINKU and shake him so hard that all the extra, over smart sentences that TINKU spoke would just drop off...  
 
        
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[B]

AASHIYANA
 
An angry PRATAP SHERGILL [SAMRAT's Dad] stormed into the room where SUDHA Jii [SAMRAT's Mom] was busy setting her cupboard. As she heard footsteps, she turned around. Seeing her husband, she realised that now there was to be an exchange of words. She turned back and continued her work, irking Mr.SHERGILL even more. He walked over to her and angrily spoke... 
 
P - Kya main jaan sakta hoon ki,aaj aapne BALRAJ ke saamne aisa kyun kaha ki,'Yeh rishta ho na ho...Friendship hamesha bani rehni chahiye...'...?? (asked in little strict tone)
 
S - Toh...?? Iss mein galat kya hai...?? Humare relations unke saath hamesha se hi achhe rahe hain.. 1 rishte ki wajah se usse kharab toh nahin...
 
P - (cuts angrily) What do you mean by.., 'Iss rishte ki wajah se...?'
 
S - Ji...mera matlab yeh hai ki...Agar SAMRAT ko iss rishte se aitraaz...
 
P - (cuts angrily n said in loud voice) Aitraaz ka koi sawaal hi paida nahin hota...aur yeh baat Aap khud bhi samajh jaayen...aur apne laadle ko bhi samjha den... SAMRAT ko yeh shaadi karni hi hogi...Maine BALRAJ se waada kar diya hai...aur phir kya buraai hai YAMINI mein..?? SAMRAT ko iss rishte se kyun aitraaz hoga...? jabki,woh ek dusre ko pasand karte hain...
 
S - Dekhiye...main woh nahin keh rahi...mera matlab toh sirf yeh tha ki, hamein SAMRAT par pressure nahin daalna chahiye...Aakhir yeh uski puri zindagi ka sawaal hai...zindagi usse hi guzaarni hai...toh usse haq hai ki woh apni pasand na-pasand ko zaahir kare...Hum uski choice ko yun ignore toh nahin kar sakte naa...
 
P - Toh kya karein...? Usse uss ki mann-maani karne den...? Keh den ki,jaao aur jo tumhaara dil kare woh karo...!! Kisi bhi ladki ko pasand karo aur uske saath rehna shuru kar do...aur Jab uss se dil bhar jaaye...kisi aur ko pasand kar lena...Shaadi karne ki koi zaroorat hi nahin... Kyun..?? ab tak yehi toh karta aa raha hai woh... Aage bhi yehi karte rahe...? aur iss nayi custom se hamare Khandaan ka naam aur roshan kare...? Yehi chahti hain aap...?? (said very angrily)
 
S - (Her tone changed as she realised she would have to tone down a bit. But she could not let SAMRAT be blamed for something he had not done. In a softer than earlier tone, she said...) Aap mujhe galat samajh rahe hain... Maine aisa kuchh bhi nahin kaha... Kyunki,main jaanti hoon aisa kuchh nahin hua hai... Ussne khud bataya mujhe...woh kisi ladki ke saath nahin reh raha tha... sirf,kuchh logon ki kahi hui baaatoon ki wajah se main apne bete par shaq nahin kar sakti... Mujhe uss par poora bharosa hai.
 
P - Ho sakta hai aap yaa SAMRAT jo keh rahe hain woh,sach ho...Ho sakta hai yeh sirf 1 Afwaah [Rumor] hi ho...Par,hum logon ko baatein karne se toh nahin rok sakte...?? Hamein unhin ke beech rehna hai... aur,Aap shayad bhool rahin par,Maine kabhi bhi SAMRAT ko kuchh karne se nahin roka...
 
Woh Family Business se alag apne talent ke basis par , kahin bahar Job karna chahta tha... Maine usse ijazzat di...woh apni pasand ki ladki se shaadi karna chahta tha...maine kuchh nahin kaha..aur usse 3 saal diye... aur,inn 3 saaloon mein usne kya kiya...? Main ab yeh nahin jaan na chahta... lekin,bas ab bahot hua...Main usse aur azaadi nahin de sakta... Usse ab Shaadi karni hogi...aur woh bhi hamari pasand ki ladki se...
 
S - (said softly) Main aapki baat samajh rahi hoon... Aapko kya lagta hai..main SAMRAT ka ghar baste hue nahin dekhna chahti...? Lekin sirf apni chahat ke liye hum SAMRAT ke view ko toh nazar andaaz nahin kar sakte...
 
Hamein jaan na hoga ki,aakhir woh kya chahta hai...? Aakhir kuchh toh aisa hoga...jiski wajah se usne ab tak kisi ko shaadi ke liye pasand nahin kiya...? Hum nahin jaante ki,woh apni life partner mein kya chahta hai...toh,bina kuchh jaane hum uski zindagi ka sabse bada faisla kaise kar sakte hain...??
 
P - Toh kya aapko lagta hai ki,main uska dushman hoon...?? Kya main uska achha-bura nahin soch sakta...?? Kya mujhe uski khushiyoon ki parwah nahin...??
 
S - Nahin..maine aisa nahin kaha..aur naa main kabhi aisa soch sakti hoon... Par,kya aapko khud bhi lagta hai ki,YAMINI mein iss ghar ki bahu banne ki qualities hain...?
 
P - Main Aapki baat samajh raha hoon SUDHA...!! Main maanta hoon, YAMINI... ISHITA jaisi nahin hai...woh modern khyaalon waali ladki hai... unka rehan-sehan hamare ghar ke rehan-sehan se bilkul alag hai... lekin aap yeh kyun bhool rahi hain ki, SAMRAT bhi BRIJ jaisa nahin hai... uski soch hamari soch se kahin zyada advance hai... Hamein uss ladki ke baare mein bhi sochna hoga,jo SAMRAT se shaadi kar uski zindagi mein aayegi... 1 simple,seedhi-saadi ladki kya SAMRAT ke badlte mood aur liking ko handle kar paayegi...? Kal agar SAMRAT ko koi aur ladki pasand aa gayi toh uska kya hoga...??
 
Maine YAMINI ko, sirf apni Dosti ko mazboot karne ke liye nahin chuna hai... I know,woh donon college aur MBA ki study mein saath-saath the... Woh ek-dusre ko jante hain...samajhte hain...aur unn Pictures ko dekh kar saaf lagta hai ki,ek-dusre ko pasand bhi karte hain...phir,Main kahaan galat hoon...?? Galat toh tab hota, agar main SAMRAT ki shaadi apni khushi ke liye kisi simple,traditional ladki se karne ko kehta...
 
S - Shayad aap apni jagah sahi hain.. Mujhe aapse koi shikayat nahin... Kyunki,main jaanti hoon...Aap SAMRAT se kitna pyar karte hain... iss liye,Aap wohi decision lenge jo uske liye better hoga... lekin,phir bhi aap se itna kehna chahoongi ki, jo bhi karna...kaafi soch-samajh kar karna...yeh hamare bete ki khushiyoon ka sawaal hai...
 
P - Aap uski fikr na karein...Maine SAMRAT ke liye jo bhi faisla kiya hai...kaafi soch samajh kar hi liya hai...Iss liye ab iss matter par aur discussion nahin hoga...Main ab iss matter par kuchh aur nahin sunn na chahta...
 
He walked out in anger. SUDHA Jii kept looking at him till he disappeared from her view. She sat on the bed and wiped the stray tear that rested on her cheek. Her fingers entwined, she kept her hands on her knees as she thought... (( Jaanti hoon ki,aap kabhi SAMRAT ka bura nahin chahenge... par,pata nahin kyun...mera dil keh raha hai ki, jo ho raha hai...woh bhi sahi nahin hai... shayad SAMRAT jo chahta hai..hum woh samajh nahin pa rahe... darrti hoon ki,kahin aapki zidd,uski khushiyaan khatm na kar den... Ab toh sirf yeh hi pray karoongi ki,Jo ho...woh achha ho... Mere bete ko woh hi mile jo uske liye behtar ho... ))
 
She shut her eyes as she said this. Sighing, she stood up and started to clear the mess in the cupboard. But her mind was not at peace. Something was distracting her... something was not right... was her husband taking a wrong decision?? Was she not able to understand something?? Unable to concentrate on the work, she simply shut the cupboard and left the room to go the terrace... for some fresh air.
 

   

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                     ...Aur PYAAR Ho Gaya !   

PART  9 : (2/3)


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[C]

BHUSHAN HOUSE
 
As SAMRAT turned back to look at Mr.AMIT BHUSHAN [GD] after he had enough of TINKU, his face clearly showed the tension as he saw the look of disapproval on AMIT's face. Waiting for SAMRAT to answer, Mr.BHUSHAN, his hands folded across his chest, continued speaking... 
 
GD - Lagta hai tumhaare paas koi jawaab nahin...?? Tumhein sharm aani chahiye..1 educated person hote hue bhi aise gire hue kaam karte ho...? Abhi bhi tumhaare paas waqt hai...sach-sach batao..window par kya kar rahe the...? (Now his tone was getting even more strict...)
 
S - Ji...I think,thodi misunderstanding ho gayi hai...main toh...woh sirf...
 
            "Dupatta dene ke liye Window par aaye the..."
 
The voice that cut SAMRAT off was the one that SAMRAT was yearning to hear. Sweet as honey and silky soft, the voice belonged to GUNJAN... and the smile that was perched on her pink lips as she spoke completed the picture only too well... her brown eyes looking at him as she spoke...mesmerized SAMRAT. He kept staring at her even as TINKU and Mr.BHUSHAN turned around to look at her. It took Mr.BHUSHAN's  voice filled with shock to get SAMRAT out of his trance.
 
SD - (strangely) What...? Dupatta dene...?
 
G -Haan..Papa woh...actually,window band karte hue hawa se mera Dupatta...roof par gir gaya tha...Yeh aa rahe the toh...maine inse request ki aur inhone hi roof se woh Dupatta nikala aur...aur mujhe dene ke liye hi window tak aaye the... (said in little scared tone)
 
T -Lekin Di...Main jab room mein tha tab toh...
 
G - (cuts quickly...) Woh...woh...tumhaare jaane ke baad maine socha...window band kar deni chahiye...itni hawa chal rahi hai...kahin baarish aa jaati toh...?
 
SAMRAT had a smile on his lips as he heard GUNJAN trying to cover up for him.

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Folding his hands, his head tilted slightly, he kept looking at her...till Mr.BHUSHAN, in a loving tone asked his pretty daughter...
 
GD - Par,bete kya tum isse jaanti ho...? Yun iss tarah kisi ajnabi se request karna...??
 
G - No...Papa...Yeh ajnabi nahin hain... Yeh PRATAP Uncle ke chhote bete hain... Aaj hi MUMBAI se aaye hain...Subah hi SUDHA Aunty ne milaya tha...
 
TINKU's jaw dropped... he looked at his sister in utter disbelief... (( Yeh Di iss GABBAR SINGH ko kyun bacha rahi hain...?? Agar Dupatta dena tha toh Door se nahin aa sakta tha kya...? Yeh 'Bandar' ki tarah window par chadhne ki kya zaroorat thi...? Kuchh toh gadbad hai...jise Di samajh nahin pa rahi... Pata toh karna padega ki,aakhir iss GABBAR ki planning kya hai...?))
 
As GUNJAN completed her sentence, Mr.BHUSHAN  realised his mistake. Turning to face SAMRAT and trying to hide his embarrassment  behind his smile, he apologized... "I am so sorry bete... maine situation ko misunderstand kar liya...aur pata nahin tumhein kya kuchh nahin keh diya... Extremely sorry for that..."
 
S - Its ok...Sir... maine really bura nahin maana...so,Please aap mujhse Sorry keh kar mujhe sharminda na karein... (said in very soft tone)
 
SD - Ok...nahin kahoonga...lekin,tum bhi mujhe Sir nahin kahoge...tum mujhe Uncle keh sakte ho...
 
S - (with smiling face) Thanks...Uncle !!
 
GD - That's Good... but,tell me 1 thing...tum itni raat ko hamare Campus mein kya kar rahe the...? I mean...Kya kuchh kaam tha...?
 
Now, GUNJAN and TINKU looked at each other, their eyebrows slightly raised... the look on their faces clearly showing their fear.
 
SAMRAT stole a glance at the two of them. Stifling a chuckle, he said..." Woh subah jab GUNJAN aayi thi toh...
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Now he openly looked at the brother-sister duo and grinned... because,the look on TINKU's face was now priceless... then he looked at GUNJAN...and read her eyes as they appealed to him not to say a thing... SAMRAT knew now it was his turn to save them ... reassuringly nodding at her, he continued.
  "..Mom ko bataya tha ki,Aunty ki tabiyat thik nahin hai...toh mujhe laga ki mujhe unse milne aana chahiye... aur phir Mom bhi kal subah hone wali puja ke liye GUNJAN ko bulana chahti thin toh maine socha ki, issi bahane Aap sab se mil bhi loonga aur GUNJAN ko kal Puja mein aane ke liye invite bhi kar loonga... Waise subah GUNJAN se toh mila hi tha aur TINKU se bhi 'Mukka-laat'... (Shutting his eyes and shaking his head, he rectified the mistake...) I mean mulaqat...'Mulaqat' ho gayi thi..." (As he saw that Mr.BHUSHAN was now looking at his children, he glared at TINKU and , his fist clenched, he faked a punch at TINKU...) bas aap aur Aunty se hi nahin mil paya tha... (the glare was a bit stronger than before and TINKU hurriedly looked away...)
 
SD - (looking only at TINKU) Oh...toh iss ka matlab tum inhein jaante the...phir bhi,Inhein pareshaan karne ke liye mujh se jhooth kaha...?? (said strictly)
 
T - (Innocently) No Papa...Actually subah jab hum inke ghar gaye the toh yeh toh wahaan bilkul hi casual se Dress mein the... mujhe laga Uncle ki Hotel ka koi staff hoga...woh hote hain naa... (glared back at  SAMRAT) Room service dene waale... aur abhi aise raat mein inhein window par itne well dress-up hokar 'Bandaroon' [Monkeys] ki tarah chadhte hue dekha toh pehchaan hi nahin paya...ki,yeh wohi hain... Aisi common shakal 1 baar dekhne ke baad kise yaad rahegi...?? (said very innocently...with Puppy face)
 
This sentence of TINKU's left SAMRAT open mouth... scrunching his eyes, he looked menacingly at TINKU... this SHORT CIRCUIT was way beyond now... he had humiliated him...SAMRAT SHERGILL...  Room Service dene wala... Bandar...Common Face... he scowled at TINKU... when, he heard Mr.BHUSHAN scold his son...
 
SD - (very angrily) TINKU...!! Behave yourself... Tumhaari sharatoon ke saath-saath tumhaari Batamizi bhi badh gayi hai... Now,say Sorry to him... and apologise for your bad language...
 
G - (inturrupting quickly) Its ok...Papa...woh bachha hai...usse sach mein pehchanne mein bhool ho gayi hogi... Itna andhera bhi toh hai... nahiin toh woh aisa nahin karta... woh toh...
 
SD - GUNJAN... don't protect him...woh tumhaari wajah se hi bach jaata hai... aur phir itni badtamizi...?? isse abhi Inse Maafi maangni hogi...
 
SAMRAT was surprised to see GUNJAN side TINKU. He glanced at her and did not like what he saw...her eyes were moving downwards and glistening in them were tears... (( WoW ! Kya strong Bonding hai... Kitni cleverly save karne ki koshish ki hai is 'Short Circuit' ko... lekin main tumhein aise sad mood mein dekhne ke liye toh nahin aaya tha... Mujhe tumse baat karni hai... Yahaan mere liye tumse zyada important aur koi nahin... Iss TINKU ko toh phir kabhi dekh loonga...par pehle tumhaara mood thik karna zaroori hai..agar tum nahin chahti ki iss 'Tingu-Mingu' ko aur zyada daant pade toh...thik hai.. tumhaari khushi ke liye ab iss Short Circuit ko bhi bacha loonga... ))
 
SAMRAT quickly walked up to where TINKU was standing and caressing his hair and then keeping his hand on TINKU's shoulder, he looked at Mr.BHUSHAN and said... " Its ok Uncle... may be he is right...shayad woh mujhe really pehchaan nahin paaya ho... I know him... He is really sweet kid... (said with fake smiling face) Kitni sweet baatein karta hai... I am sure...next time isse mujhe pehchanne mein koi galti nahin hogi...Hai naa...Little Master...? (Hoping against hope that this time TINKU might say YES... he waited for TINKU to reply...)
 
Hearing SAMRAT speak nice of her lil brother, GUNJAN looked up towards where the two were standing. Her gaze was met by TINKU's eyes which were asking her why she was siding this GABBAR?? Slowly she raised her hand and kept her index finger on her lips... indicating that she wanted TINKU to keep quite now. TINKU stared at her for some time and then, in  a fake, normal tone, he looked at his dad and said... "Yaa...Main inhein really 'Pehchaan' nahin paya Papa... Shayd maine inse thodi rudely baat ki...Sorry for that... He immediately turned to face SAMRAT and in a normal tone, which had no hint of an apology in it, he apologized "Sorry Mr.SHERGILL... Extremely Sorry for that...Please,forgive me..."
 
SD - TINKU... what's the wrong with you...?? Yeh kya badtamizi hai...? he is older then you... toh phir,tum inhein 'Bhaiyaa' bhi toh keh sakte ho...?? (said strictly)
 
Hearing this, and the smirk was back on TINKU's face. Winking at SAMRAT, he turned to face his Dad and said... as innocently as he could..."Maine inhein 'Bhaiyaa' kaha tha Papa...lekin,Inhone ne hi kaha ki main inhein 'Bhaiyaa' nahin balki, Inke name se inhein quote karoon...I swear...main jhooth nahin bol raha...'Di' bhi wahin thin...Aap 'Di' se pooch lo...?
 
SAMRAT was totally zapped now...he knew he would need GUNJAN's help again... He looked at her. She was also looking at him...everything would be out now...when, he had said so?? How had the topic cropped up then?? And then, everything about the accident would be out... TINKU and SAMRAT were just short of creating the '3rd world war' in this quaint little town...  the furor that would follow then... she had to stop this exchange of words and glares as soon as she could. So she looked at her dad and, before he could ask her anything, she said... 
 
G - Oh...Aap bhi naa Papa...kiski baatoon mein aa rahe hain... Ab chhodiye naa yeh sab... Kaafi raat ho rahi hai... Mom ne toh shayad ab tak Dinner bhi serve kar diya hoga...chaliye naa andar chalte hain... She Widening her eyes and directing her index finger first at TINKU and then towards the house...
 
She made it clear that she wanted TINKU out of there. TINKU was now very confused. Di and protecting GABBAR!!!!! She looked at her dad and continued..."Aur inhein bhi kaafi der ho gayi hogi...Mom se toh yeh subah bhi mil sakte hain... hum kahaan bhaage je rahe hain..." Her tone indicated that she wanted SAMRAT to leave... but that was not to be. SAMRAT smiled broadly at her and in a very relaxed tone, he said...  
 
S - Oh...Don't worry...aisa kuchh nahin hai...abhi kahaan itni raat hui hai...Ab jab aaya hoon...toh, Aunty se mile bina chale jaana...achha nahin lagega ... Lekin, agar aap logon ko koi aitraaz na ho toh...
 
GD - (said quickly with very loving tone) Kaisi baatein kar rahe ho bete... Tum PRATAP Jii ke bete ho..koi ajnabi nahin...toh phir aitraaz kaisa...? Yeh ab se tumhaara bhi ghar hai...Tumhara jab mann kare tum humse milne aa sakte ho... In fact, Main toh kehta hoon ki,agar tumhein koi aitrazz na ho toh..Please join us at the Dinner Table...Hamein really kaafi achha lagega...
 
TINKU who was walking towards the main door of their house, stopped and turned around looking shockingly at his sister. She too looked at him and then both turned to look at their dad as they almost yelled in unison...  "WHAT...??"
 
Startled by this sudden outburst, Mr.BHUSHAN looked at his children and asked...  "Kya hua...? Iss mein itna shocking expression dene ki kya baat hai...? Tum donon bhi toh inke ghar aate-jaate ho...phir,yeh kyun nahin aa sakte...?
 
SAMRAT kept his hand on his lips least Mr.BHUSHAN see him grin widely. His plan to get in the good books of Mr.BHUSHAN was a success. But, GUNJAN was worried. What if during some random conversation, SAMRAT spoke about the 'SCOOTY accident' or 'Towel incident' ?? She looked at TINKU who did not look very pleased... she then looked at her Dad and stuttered... 
 
G - No...Papa...woh...woh...mera matlab tha ki,iss tarah suddenly..pata nahin..inhein hamare ghar ka khana pasand aayega bhi yaa nahin...? toh, bewajah hi kyun...
 
S - (cuts immediately) Oh...Don't worry...and don't under estimate your cooking talent...Mujhe really tumhare haathon ke bane hue dishes kaafi pasand hain... Mr.BHUSHAN looked at him confusingly...SAMRAT noticed this... immediately changed his words... Woh...woh mera matlab tha ki, Aaj jab GUNJAN ne hamare ghar par Lunch mein jo dishes banai thin...woh maine test ki hain...Woh kaafi achhi thin... You are really a Great cook... (said to GUNJAN with smiling face)
 
His hands on his waist, his eyes indicating his anger... TINKU glared at SAMRAT... (( COOK...?? Isne meri Di ko COOK kaha...? How dare he...? 'Chindi Chor' kahin ka... Kitna bada 'Bhukhhad' hai... 'Di' ke haathoon ka dish khane ke liye hamare ghar tak pahunch gaya...Oh God ! Ab iss 'Bhukhhad' ke liye meri 'Di' ko kitchen mein jaa kar aur bhi 'Rotiyaan' banani padengi...Kitni takleef hoti hai Di ko 'Rotiyaan' banane mein... I wish ki isse sweet desert pasand na ho...warna mere 'Mango Custord' ...?? Yeh 'Bhukhhad' toh mere liye kuchh nahin chhodega... Mujhe toh shakal se hi janam-janam ka 'Bhookha' lag raha tha... 
 
Aur,Yeh Papa bhi naa...Kitni easily iski baatoon mein aa gaye...Yeh zaroor jaanta hoga ki,mere Papa kitne seedhe-saade hain...issi liye unhein asani se pata liya...lekin,'Di' ko bhi pata nahin kya ho gaya hai...isse bacha kyun rahi hain...?? I am sure...zaroor isne window se 'Di' ko kuchh keh kar dara diya hoga...Agar aisa sach mein hua hai toh...I swear...Main iski aisi Band bajwaoonga... ki,saari zindagi nahin bhoolega...ki,kisi TINKU The GREAT se pala pada tha...!! ))
 
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PART  9 :    (3/3)

   
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ARNAV at his Apartment  {MUMBAI}
 
Much as he tried to, ARNAV could not get over the conversation he had with his brother. He walked towards his bedroom, lost in his thoughts. He could not afford to lose GUNJAN... just her name and a small smile flickered... as he reached his room, he saw her pic that he had left on his bed when he had called up ANKIT. He picked it up and as he moved his thumb over the cold glass that separated the pic from his thumb...he kept thinking about the twist in his 'love story'... 
 
 
(( Bhai ne jo kaha...Ab uske baad koi confusion nahin... mere jaane ke baad wahaan kuchh toh aisa hua hai , jiski wajah se GUNJAN ke saath mere rishte ki baat khatm ho chuki hai... Lekin,main isse accept nahin kar sakta...Yeh meri life hai... Mujhe haq hai ki,main khud apna partner select karoon...woh meri zindagi ka itna important decision bina mujhe bataye hue, kaise le sakte hain... Main iss decision ko nahin maanoonga...
 
Mujhe wapas sab kuchh pehle jaisa karna hoga...par,isske liye sab se pehle zaroori hai ki,mujhe Main Problem ka pata ho...yeh rishta sirf Uncle ke transfer ki wajah se toh khatam nahin ho sakta... real facts kuchh aur hain jo,mujhe pata karne honge... Lekin,kaise...?? Abhi-abhi toh Office join kiya hai...'Leave' toh milegi nahin... aur,agar Resign deta hoon toh,baad mein zaroorat padi toh GUNJAN ke liye stand lene mein problem hogi... Yeh job usse Financially security dene ke liye zaroori hai... phir,kya karoon...??
 
Keeping the pic down gently, he turned around. Walking towards the window, he stopped suddenly... and walked briskly to where he had kept his cell... an idea had clicked... Agar main kisi friend ki help loon toh...?? Yes yeh thik rahega... At least,agar sirf GUNJAN ka address bhi mil jaata hai toh...main uss se milkar sab kuchh thik karne ki koshish kar sakta hoon... Aur jab tak GUNJAN ka pata nahin chal jaata...tab tak yahaan ka work complete kar loonga...
 
Lekin,iske liye mujhe kisi aise friend ki help leni hogi jis par main trust kar sakta hoon... aur aisa toh sirf 1 hi friend hai...RAJ... Yaa,he is the right person... woh,GUNJAN se mil bhi chuka hai... aur main uss par trust bhi kar sakta hoon...aur sabse badi baat hai ki woh, hamari family ke sabhi members ko jaanta bhi hai... Mujhe uss se hi help leni chahiye...))
 
Picking up his cell, he hurriedly dialed a number. The voice at the end sounded excited... RAJ was happy to hear from his friend. It was after a long time that they were chatting. A lot of formal talk later, ARNAV decided to talk about the real reason that he had called up RAJ...
 
A - RAJ !! Actually,I want need your help Dude... (said in very soft tone)
 
R - Oh...toh soch kya raha hai...? Tell me... tumhein jaisi bhi help chahiye... tum mujh se keh sakte ho...
 
A - Thanks Yaar...! Woh...Mujhe GUNJAN se related kuchh pata karna tha...
 
R - GUNJAN...?? (asked confusingly) 1 sec...kahin woh toh nahin jis se tumhaari Engagement hone waali thi...? ANKIT Bhaiyaa ke marriage mein jis se mila tha...wohi naa ?
 
A - Haan...Wohi...ussi ke baare mein kuchh pata karna hai..
 
R - Means...?? Main samjha nahin...? Tumhein uss par koi doubt hai...? Koi 'Ex-Boy Friend' yaa other koi scene...?? (asked slowly with curious tone)
 
A - What Rubbish...!! Maine aisa kuchh kaha kya...? No Dude...aisa kuchh bhi nahin hai... woh waisi ladki nahin hai... GUNJAN ke baare mein pata karne se mera matlab tha ki,woh abhi kahaan hai...? Yeh pata karna hai...
 
R - Yaar...I am so confused...tumhari baateien meri samajh mein nahin aa rahin.. 1 sec...Tum donon ki engagement hone wali thi naa...?? toh...phir..?? Aur phir pata kya karna hai...Woh apne ghar par hogi...aur kahan jaayegi...??
 
A - Nahin Yaar...Itna simple hota toh tumhari Help kyun maangta...?? Woh yaa uski Family ab DELHI mein nahin hain... Actually,uske Dad ka kahin transfer ho gaya hai...Unhone apna Flat bhi sell kar diya hai...Mujhe ab yeh pata nahin ki,Woh ab kahaan posted hain...? Mujhe sirf itna pata hai ki,woh SBI mein 'Manager' ki post par work karte hain...
 
R - Ok...Toh iss mein problem kya hai...? woh jahaan posted the...uss Branch ka naam batao.. Main kal hi wahan jakar saari info collect kar loonga...
 
A - Sorry Yaar ! But,I really don't know about that Branch name... Meri unse sirf 1-2 baar hi baat ho paayi hai...aur maine unse kabhi kuchh poocha hi nahin...
 
R - Oh..!! Phir,toh kaafi problem hai...Kyunki,yahaan DELHI mein SBI ke itne saare Branches hain ki,sab mein jakar pata karna 1 long time taking procedure hai...
 
A - Yaa...I understand...Actually,yehi toh main problem hai...lekin,woh log "PAALIKA BAZAAR" area mein rehte the toh,ho sakta hai...woh SBI ke "PALIKA BAZAR Br." mein hi posted hon...?
 
R - (smiled n said in taunt way...) Dude...woh kya hai naa ki,mera ghar bhi "TIHAD JAIL" ke paas hi hai...par iska matlab yeh nahin ki mere Family Members wahaan Jail mein 'Govt. Guest'  hain... toh,Aapke is logic mein koi dum nahin...
 
A -Sorry Yaar...! Naraaz kyun ho raha hai... Jab Brain kaam karna band kar de toh,insaan aise hi un-logical baaton mein logic dhoondhne lagta hai... Please,understand my situation Yaar...Mujhe really kuchh samajh mein hi nahin aa raha...
 
R - Oh...Its Ok...Dude...just kidding... Don't be serious...n don't worry...Main Hoon Naa.. By the way...Kya tumne apne Ghar waaloon se kuchh poocha...? Unhein kucch toh hint hoga...?
 
A - Pata nahin Yaar...Koi mujhe kuchh bata hi nahin raha...sabhi mere questions ko avoid kar rahe hain...tabhi toh tumhaari Help chahiye...
 
R - Ok...Don't worry...kuchh aur sochte hain...koi na koi raasta toh nikal hi aayega...Hey ! wait...Tumhein apni bhabhi se poochna chahiye... at least,If I am not wrong then,she is cousin of GUNJAN...?? Unhein kuchh na kuchh toh pata hoga...
 
A - Haan...pata hoga...lekin,main unse kaise poochoon...? Woh mere call receive hi nahin kar rahin...? Meri unse baat hi nahin ho paa rahi...aur waise bhi woh aaj kal apne Parents ke ghar gayi hui hain...
 
R - Oh...Its a Great info...Because, she is friend of my cousin...unka ghar paas mein hi hai...Main kal khud jaa kar unse miloonga... Aur unse GUNJAN ki saari information le kar tumhein call karta hoon... (said happily)
 
Now ARNAV was happy... a ray of hope... he would soon know where GUNJAN was??
 
 
 
Why was the talk of their marriage over?? And then, both he and GUNJAN would think of a solution to this problem... GUNJAN would be with him... in a tone reflecting his happiness, he said...  "Thanks Dude... I knew it... Tu meri Help zaroor karega... Thanks a lot..."
 
R - Oh...lekin iski koi zaroorat nahin...Kyunki,Friendship mein No Sorry ...No Thanks.. aur waise bhi abhi puri info nahin di hai...Jab doonga...tab sirf Thanks se kaam nahin chalega... 1 Big Party deni hogi.
 
A - Oh...Why Not... 1 baar GUNJAN ki Information mil toh jaaye... DELHI aate hi DHAMAAL karenge... (said in very exciting tone)
 
R - Sure...bhoolna nahin...warna... GUNJAN Bhabhi ke aage tere aise-aise secret unfold karoonga...ki,Marriage toh door... Tere saath Engagement karne se bhi mana kar dengi... (said in teasing way)
 
A - Arre...!! Tere jaise Dost hon toh Dushmanon ki kya zaroorat...?? (smiled) Don't worry Yaar...DELHI aate hi Party de doonga...Ab toh khush...chal ab Phone rakhta hoon... Baad mein baat karte hain...
 
He flung the cell on his bed and picked up the pic. again. As he flopped on the bed, holding the pic close to his heart, he knew this night was going to be a long one... sleep would not even be anywhere near him... he would stay awake all night... lost in the thoughts of GUNJAN... dreaming of a future with the most beautiful girl he had ever seen...
 
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BHUSHAN HOUSE
 
TINKU turned around and almost ran back in the house. Mr.BHUSHAN followed him. Left behind were SAMRAT and GUNJAN...SAMRAT having a grin plastered on his face and GUNJAN looking at him in surprise. Slowly SAMRAT walked towards GUNJAN and snapped his fingers in front of her, bringing her back. She looked at him and lowered her eyes... SAMRAT smiled and with his hand, signaled her to walk ahead of him. She looked at him and then she looked away and started walking towards the house. SAMRAT followed her.
 
barely had SAMRAT n GUNJAN entered than they saw NISHA [GUNJAN's Mother] walk out of the kitchen, wiping her hands to the dupatta... She smiled as she saw her husband and son and then realised they had walked in the main door. She asked them...  "Arre ! Aap log kahaan se aa rahe hain...? Mujhe toh laga tha ki,aap sab upar GUNJAN ke room mein honge...  she stopped as she saw SAMRAT walk in with GUNJAN. She was even more surprised now as she had never seen SAMRAT before. She looked at her husband and asked him... "Aur yeh...?? Yeh kaun hain...Maine inhein pehchana nahin...?"
 
SAMRAT quickly walked over to her and bent down to touch her feet. NISHA was a bit shocked and she quickly held him by his arms... not letting him touch her feet... in a loving tone, she said..."Arre..ree..re. ..yeh aap kya kar rahe ho bete...Maine aapko pehchana nahin...?"
 
TINKU was absolutely shocked to see all this. he walked towards GUNJAN and stood close to her. Standing tip toed,  he covered his mouth with his palm as he whispered in his sisters ears... "Maine bhi nahin pehchana tha 'Di'...Really yeh toh FEVICOL se bhi zyada 'Chipku' hai... jaldi chootega nahin..." GUNJAN looked at him and with her eyes shut and nodding her head in a NO... she asked him to keep quite... when, he was about to say something else, she kept her index finger on her lips after giving him a stare... He obeyed at looked at the trio standing not far away... 
 
Mr.BHUSHAN walked over to SAMRAT and keeping his hand over his shoulder, he introduced SAMRAT to his wife... " Yeh PRATAP Jii ke chhote bete hain... SAMRAT...SAMRAT SHERGILL...!! tum se hi milne aaye hain... SAMRAT folded his hands (in a Namaste) to greet NISHA... and then turned to face Mr.BHUSHAN. He was about to bend to touch his feet, when Mr.BHUSHAN  also stopped him and said in a loving tone... "Arre..re...Yeh kya...! Bete is ki koi zaroorat nahin... Hamara Aashirwaad toh hamesha bachhon ke saath hi hai..."
 
S - (said with smiling face) Thanks Uncle...Par mujhe iss ki zaroorat hai...actually,I am sorry...Mujhe bahar hi aapke pair chhone chahiye the par...unn baatoon mein bilkul bhool hi gaya...aur waise bhi agar Badon ka aashirwaad milta rahe toh saare kaam asani se ho jaate hain... (looked at GUNJAN side with smiling face) Phir,Good Blessings toh kaafi lucky persons ko hi milti hain...
 
GM - (said in very loving tone) Woh toh tum jaise Nek aur Sanskaari bachhon ke saath hamesha hi rehengi... Sach, yakeen nahin hota ki...Aaj ke daur mein bhi hamare Tradition... value... adarsh... koi itni achhi tarah se follow kar raha hai... A mother's loving touch as she caressed his hair could be felt by SAMRAT. It genuinely made him happy. He smiled at her which was returned by a warm smile. She then turned to GUNJAN and TINKU, who stood away from them and spoke to them...her tone as loving as always... "Aur tum donon wahaan akele kone[corner] mein khade kya kar rahe ho...? Arre..yeh hamare ghar mehmaan hain... inse milo...aur ho sake toh inhein dekh kar kuchh toh sikho...Main toh keh-keh kar thak gayi...pata nahin meri Gair-maujudgi mein yeh donon kisi se Aashirwaad lene ke liye jhookte bhi hain yaa..sirf Hi-Bye keh kar nikal jaate hain... (Her tone though loving also had complain in it as she completed her sentence...)
 
G - Mom...Its not fair... Main toh ab always hi...
 
S - (cuts quickly with smiling face)..GUNJAN...badon se behas nahin kiya karte...aur chup-chap apni galti maan liya karte hain...
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GUNJAN was left open mouth as she heard SAMRAT... she blinked her eyes, not believing she had just heard what SAMRAT had said... SAMRAT smiled and turned to face NISHA Jii again... and in a calm tone, he said...Don't wory Aunty...main ab aa gaya hoon naa...Main GUNJAN ko sab kuchh sikha doonga... aur yeh bhi samjha doonga ki, Badon se Aashirwaad, hamare liye kitne zaroori hain... Aakhir yeh hamara culture hai...Hum isse kaise bhool sakte hain...? (he sounded like a lecturer... he spoke so seriously...)
 
GUNJAN scrunched up her eyes as she turned her face away angrily to see TINKU looking at her...totally shocked... he kept looking at his Di as she thought... (( What the Hell...?? Who is he...?? No...How dare He...?? Yeh mujhe hamara Custom aur Culture sikhayyenge...? Woh bhi mere ghar mein...? I can't even imagine... Oh God !! He is really too much SAMRAT... I mean SMART... aate hi hamare Mummy-Papa ko apni Party mein kar liya...?? Aur,Mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai jaise...Yeh inka ghar hai aur Main aur TINKU...yahaan apne hi ghar mein 'Refugee' ki tarah khade hain...??
 
No way...this is the limit... This is our Home... aur yeh hamare Mummy-Papa hain...He is a very dengerous person... Isse jald se jald, Dinner kara ke yahaan se bhejna hoga..warna,yeh aise hi apni Good Qualities bata-bata kar hamein daant sunwaate rahenge... wait,Inka kuchh toh karna hoga... ))
 
Seeing his sister lost in her thoughts..her eyes spewing anger, got TINKU all charged up. His mind was crowded with thoughts...dominating them was the effect SAMRAT had on his parents... and this thought was irritating him to no end. making all kinds of faces that explained displeasure at it's best... TINKU thought... (( Some one really Pinch me...!! I can't  even imagine ki, 1 din yeh sab meri aankhon ke saamne hoga...?? Oh God !! Yeh main galti se kisi 'Saas-Bahu-Bete' ki theme waale kisi 'Family Daily Soap' ki shooting toh nahin dekh raha...?? Sach...yeh kitna bada Actor hai... Yahaan aate hi,hamare Normal se ghar ko "Hum Aapke hain kaun...!" type movie ka Set bana diya...
 
Sanskaar...Aadarsh...aur Ashirwaad... OMG !! kahaan se churaye hain itne bhaari-bhaari Filmy words...?? Iske 'Sanskaroon' ki Dukaan [shop] toh main band karwaoonga... 'Bhole-Bhale' bachhon ki window par chadhna... Unke ghar 'Bhukhhad' ki tarah Dinner lene ke liye pahunch jaana... Yeh  kaun se 'Sanskaar' hain...?
 
..Aur Mom-Papa...? Pata nahin inhein kya ho gaya hai...?? isse dekh kar yeh bhi kitne filmy-fillmy se ho gaye hain...kitne saare Filmy dialogue maar diye...woh bhi back to back...?? Inhein kuchh dikh kyun nahin raha...? Inhein hamari "Good Qualities" toh kabhi nahin dikhti... lekin,iss SAMRAT mein saare 'Gun' [Qualities] nazar aa rahe hain... sach hai...'Ghar ki murgi daal barabar'...Iske saamne ,hamari toh koi value hi nahin... What Rubbish...!! wait,abhi iss "Sanskaari Purush" ke saare sanskaroon ki hawa nikalta hoon...Pata nahin, khud ko kya samajh raha hai...? Aaj hi pata chal jaayega ki, yeh 'Chindi Chor' kitna 'Sarv-Gun-Sampann" hai... ))
 
TINKU walked over to his mom and tugging at her dupatta, in the sweetest tone that he could , he said... "Mom ! Aap abhi tak baatein hi kar rahi hain...? SAMRAT 'Bhaiyaa' (Stressing on the word 'bhaiyya'... so as to tease SAMRAT) ko kuchh khane ko nahin dengi...?? Kitne bhookhe lag rahe hain...? (he looked at SAMRAT and smirked...)
 
GM - Oh...Main toh sach mein bhool gayi...Aap sab baitho...Main abhi kuchh le kar aati hoon...
 
T - (said immediately) No Mom...Yeh 'Kuchh' bhi khaane nahin...'Dinner' khane ke liye aaye hain... (turned to SAMRAT side) Hai naa SAMRAT "Bhaiyya"...??
 
SAMRAT faked a grin at TINKU... his temper soaring each time TINKU uttered the word 'Bhaiyya' . GUNJAN knew where this dialogue was heading. She had to call for  a truce. She quickly walked up to TINKU and pulled him closer to her...widened her eyes and nodding her head in a NO, asked him to keep quite... thankfully AMIT spoke... "Haan NISHA... Maine inhein Dinner ke liye rok liya hai... Ab SAMRAT pehli baar hamare ghar aaye hain toh hum inhein aise toh nahin jaane de sakte..."
 
S - (Little soft tone) No Uncle...Aap sab yun hi takleef kar rahe hain...Main toh...sirf Aunty se milne aaya tha...Ab mujhe chalna chihiye...
 
GM - Arre...aise kaise chalna chahiye...Tum kahin nahin jaa rahe... her tone was strict... like she was ordering him to stay. SAMRAT smiled as he heard NISHA Jii say this and unfortunately for SAMRAT, TINKU saw his smile... folding his hands across his chest, TINKU thought... (( I knew it... Yeh aisa kuchh Drama zaroor karega... Arre jaana hi tha toh andar kyun aaya...? Bahar se bhi toh ja sakta tha...? Mom se kal subah mil leta... Par,nahin... Isse Mom-Papa ki Good List mein jo aana hai... Par,yeh itna sweet-sweet sa behave kyun kar raha hai...?? Pata toh karna padega ki,aakhir yeh SHOLEY ka GABAAR SINGH suddenly DDLJ ke RAJ jaisi acting kyun kar raha hai...?? Yahaan kaun si SIMRAN...? OMG !! Kahin yeh... Di ke liye toh...??No...No...main bhi kitna filmi ho gaya hoon...Phir bhi...Di ko careful rehne ko kehna hoga... Iss 'Lafange' ka koi bharosa nahin... ))
 
NISHA Jii was happy that AMIT had asked SAMRAT to stay over for dinner. It was not often that they had guests... and after whatever had happened today, SAMRAT's visit would perhaps lighten the situation at home. She said... "Bahot achha kiya aapne... Waise bhi iss Ajnabi shahar mein yahaan koi aata bhi toh nahin... Aap sab thoda wait kijiye...main abhi Dinner serve karti hoon... And she turned to leave, when GUNJAN's sweet and soft voice stopped her... as she spoke lovingly... "Aap rehne do Mom..Main serve kar deti hoon...waise bhi aapko rest ki zaroorat hai..."
 
GM - Arre...Koi baat nahin...Bete...main kar loongi... Tum sab Baatein karo...
 
G - Nahin Mom...Maine kaha naa main kar loongi...Aap aaram kijiye...
 
NISHA Jii wanted GUNJAN to be with her Dad and TINKU as much as she could, so she was about to say something, when SAMRAT cut her off... "Aunty...Ab aap kuchh nahin kahengi...GUNJAN is right...Woh kar legi... aur phir Main aapse hi toh milne aaya hoon... aur agar aap hi kitchen mein chali jaayengi...toh main baat kiss se karoonga... Aur GUNJAN se toh baatein hoti hi rahengi... (looked at her side n winked) After all humari 'Friendship' jo ho gayi hai... toh iss liye,abhi toh mujhe sirf aap aur Uncle se hi baat karni hai... (said with smiling face)
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and TINKU glared at him... both scrunched up their eyes... and both thought about the same thing... as they looked at each other... (( What the Hell...?? Yeh 'Friendship' kab hui...?? )) Though GUNJAN was only glaring at SAMRAT, but TINKU... he was not letting SAMRAT get away so easily...
 
T - Haan...Mom... Aapko inse baat karni chahiye... He is very Multi-Talanted... Aapko pata nahin ki,yeh kitni easily Window par chadh jaate hain... Bilkul 'Chimpanzi' ki tarah... (TINKU bit his tongue as he saw thae reaction that his choice of words gave...both, his Dad and SAMRAT glared at him... TINKU changed the word as quickly as he had uttered it...) ...woh...woh..mera matlab tha ki bilkul aise jaise ki, kaafi experienced Practice ho...  (Looked at SAMRAT side) Hai naa SAMRAT 'Bhaiyaa'...?? (winked evily)
 
GM - Matlab...?? Main kuchh samjhi nahin...? (asked in very curious tone)
 
GD - Arre NISHA..iska matlab tha ki,abhi..
 
S - (Cuts immediately) Matlab main aapko batata hoon...Aunty...par,pehle aap chaliye toh... phir,aaram se baith kar baatein karenge...
 
SD - Haan...Yeh sahi rahega...Chalo 'Drawing Hall' mein chalte hain...wahin baatein karenge...
 
He had succeeded... GUNJAN's parents were impressed... finally, the first milestone was complete and it was not really all that difficult. He looked at GUNJAN  and winked at her as he left with AMIT...  NISHA Jii spoke to GUNJAN...in very low voice,  "Refregirator mein 'Paneer' honge... unse "Matar-Paneer' bana lena... Butter ka packet kitchen mein hi hoga... aur 'Rotiyaan' rehne dena...Main aakar bana loongi...main nahin chahti ki tum unhein apna 'Map-making' talent dikhao..." (said in little ordering tone)
 
GUNJAN only nodded in a positive... and this was when SAMRAT turned around to catch a glimpse of her... he was so lost in her for she looked so innocent, so pretty when she was nodding her head... It was when NISHA Jii came closer to him and tapped him on his shoulder that he came back to the present... smiling at NISHA Jii he waited for her to lead the way... leaving behind a helpless brother- sister duo... all they could do was look at each other...
 
                                                                     [To Be Continued...]

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Friends !Smile I think,this is enough for Today.Embarrassed Thanks guys for bearing us with this Update.

Since we are updating after a long time, this update is slightly longer. We hope,we have not disappointed you with the update.But,If you are disappointed with it..then, really Sorry for thatEmbarrassed.and,We know...you all are eagerly waiting for MBYPH update...Its coming very soonEmbarrassed. Thanks !!
 
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Hey Joseph and S3..Extremely sorry this time for being too much late in comment n reading this teaser...but today before posting ur next part i have finally read it...Big smile
and Joesph welcome back..feeling very happy to see u again on i-F..hope now u r enjoying ur gud health...actually i knew..next part of this ss was not be expected so early..untill u'll come back..thats wyh i became too much lazy to read this...but when i saw ur name in my comment on Mbyph's lik list..then i realized u r back..n now definitely you'll update the next part very soon...so in no time i have completed this part today...LOL..sooryyy
Teasor was mind blowing...i can say its not much confusing than Mbyph's teasor..it was quite easy to understand the up coming tracks...Arnav gunjan scene was vry nice...dont know what the matter is..n when will come this meeting in actual but convo was very nice.. very nice para that POV ones...EmbarrassedClapClapClapClap
then Samrat n brij scene was also very well written...hmm it means except sam's dad all r with Gunjan's side...then whats the problem guys...itne sare log mil k ek Dad ko nai mana sakte...Confused
Yamini truly does not deserve to samrat...and Samrat Tinku scene made me amazed...lion n bakri..ek hi ghaat pe...WinkWinkWink...this was the best scene of this whole teasor...the way Sam got irritated with word JIJU n Tinku has enough sense to understand something wrong...n obviousely he loved to tease n annoying samrat...then how could he miss this chance.LOL...but very glad to know that before leaving Delhi...Sam n Tinku became a gud frnds...EmbarrassedBig smile
now continue soon the next part of update...and solve these all mysteries very soon guys... 
thanks for the pm...
again veryyy veryyy Sorrryyy for late comment


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Originally posted by gunurlove

Hey Joseph and S3..Extremely sorry this time for becing too much late in comment n reading this teaser...but today before posting ur next part i have finally read it...Big smile
and Joesph welcome back..feeling very happy to see u again on i-F..hope now u r enjoying ur gud health...actually i knew..next part of this ss was not be expected so early..untill u'll come back..thats wyh i became too much lazy to read this...but when i saw ur name in my comment on Mbyph's lik list..then i realized u r back..n now definitely you'll update the next part very soon...so in no time i have completed this part today...LOL..sooryyy
Teasor was mind blowing...i can say its not much confusing than Mbyph's teasor..it was quite easy to understand the up coming tracks...Arnav gunjan scene was vry nice...dont know what the matter is..n when will come this meeting in actual but convo was very nice.. very nice para that POV ones...Clap
then Samrat n brij scene was also very well written...hmm it means except sam's dad all r with Gunjan's side...then whats the problem guys...itne sare log mil k ek Dad ko nai mana sakte...Confused
Yamini truly does not deserve to samrat...and Samrat Tinku scene made me amazed...lion n bakri..ek hi ghaat pe...WinkWinkWink...this was the best scene of this whole teasor...the way Sam got irritated with word JIJU n Tinku has enough sense to understand something wrong...n obviousely he loved to tease n annoying samrat...then how could he miss this chance.LOL...but very glad to know that before leaving Delhi...Sam n Tinku became a gud frnds...EmbarrassedBig smile
now continue soon the next part of update...and solve these all mysteries very soon guys... 
thanks for the pm...
again veryyy veryyy Sorrryyy for late comment



Thanks Rija for your all concern and Nice Feedback about TEASER Part.Embarrassed. And don't say sorry for Late thing... Its Ok...Embarrassed. V all understand the readers other problems...about their previous commitment and time limitationEmbarrassed.(Now,I am facing this problem,too muchLOL).

I agree with you...'MBYPH - Teaser' is more confusing and full oh suspense... Because,that story is based on a totally different concept. and, second side APHG is truly based on Family bonding and relationship... That Arnav-Gunjan convo is very important part of story... They both are Right on their own place so,can't take any Decision for their future.

Actual content of Samrat-Brij scene is little bit different from all routine scene...Its very emotional part of this storyCry... and Yes...Samrat-Tinku part is our favorite tooSmile. We really loved to write their parts... They are sharing A Perfect "Tom-Jerry" type relationship..Smile.LOL I hope you'll definitely enjoy,the current Part also (Just UpdatedEmbarrassed).

Thanks again for your Appreciation...eagerly waiting for your feed-back about Current Part.Embarrassed

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Posted: 29 September 2011 at 8:50pm | IP Logged
hey joseph , first of all heard about ur surgery.. How are you nw? Hope u are doing well..
Well talking about this part seriously i loved it completely... I liked tinkus naughtiness bt i felt ki it was too extreme ROFL dnt mind huh i only felt it ROFL each n every dialoge and scene were too good liking the current story line.. Hope samrat creates a good impression that would perfectly help him in his future planning ROFL in all loved the update do cntinue soon

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tht was soo nice update hope soon samrat ,gunjan and tinku ka bach sab acha ho jaya

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