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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 11:08am | IP Logged
YAY! YAY! Finally u started ur new FF...m sooo happy...OYE BALLE BALLE...DHINKA CHIKA...mazza aa gaya...Party Dancingbut m also angry Mr.Khadoos...Angry Angry...itni bhi kya jaldi thi post krne ki??? Cudn't u wait till i came back...???!!! Sirf 3 days ke liye to gyi thi...!!
Kya yaar...i wanted to comment 1st after ur CS posting...vryyy bad u are...nyways m the 1st one to comment on the 1st update...Big smile...OYE BALLE BALLE...DancingThnx to you Mr.Perfectionist Cum Khadoos...LOL Embarrassed

Wen u told me that ur starting a new FF & wer asking abt Title, '...Aur Pyaar Ho Gaya'...i was so happy as if on cloud 9...i was seriously missing ur writing & Updates evn though S3 is doing a fantastic job with MBYPH...but still... & m so happy that ur back with a "SIMPLE" SaJan FF...((SIMPLE...sounds wierd with JOESPH's FF...LOL))...a total diffrent CS & Concept from MBYPH...Approve

Ok now cuming to Samrat's CS...awww...its so awesum...unlike the MBYPH Khadoos Samrat...he is sweet, friendly & helpful here... & Is Single too...& evn ready to Mingle...?!Day Dreaming & is Ok with his Parents Choice for him...DHINKA CHIKA...Dancing...mazza aa gya...SaJan Arrange Marriage...i love this concept...superbbb joseph...m seriously lovin it...
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& now cuming to Gunjan's CS...OMGGG...A cuttteee, beautiful & bubbly girl...Girl-Next-Door type...Superbbb...thnk god shez not Shy & Dari-Dari si...m fed up of seeing gunjn like that & m so happy to see her confident here... & shez getting married to Aarav??? Ab ye kah se aa gya...IPKKND me kaafi nai tha kya???!!!...hmpphh...Unhappy

& now cuming to Aarav...hmmm...curious abt this guy...itni kya jaldi h isko gunjan se shaadi ki???? Kuch To Gadbad h...mujhe kuch theek nai lag raha h...wat is he upto??? I think i hav to cum to my detective mode & find out...Mission- Aarav ka secret...LOL Cool

& now cuming to Yamini...Dead...i dont like her AT ALL...Samrat ki "EX"...let her just remain an "X"...hating her from the CS itself...LOL...LOL...Iss Story ki New SHEENA...Dead

& the Concept...ARRANGE MARRIAGE...Wow!! M loving this topic...Big smile...u knw i love the love stories wich r set after marriage so in short i like Arrange Marriages...actually it doesn't matter coz marriage shud be based on Trust, Faith & Love... & i wud love to see SaJan married... & then...AUR PYAAR HO GAYA...!!Embarrassed

Amazingly superb, mind-blowing, rocking, awesum & Fresh Concept...thnk god its not VIVAH kind of story...actually i love that movie but still want to see somethng more realistic & the Characters r so diffrent here...Superb yaar...HATS OFF Joseph...again u rocking the FF section with ur writings...Clap Clap
Clap Clap Clap...BEST OF LUCK...u'll rock it for sure Mr.Perfectionist...Thumbs Up

Finally i unressed...LOL...do rply to it coz i love reading feedback & will edit my other comment today itself...promise...Approve

CONTINUE SOON
UPDATE ASAP
THNX 4 THE PM & DNT 4GET 2 PM ME...

W8ing eagerly 4 nxt k nxt update...LOL...do cont soon...

Luv,
Ekta...Hug


Edited by ekta_monaya - 21 May 2011 at 2:22am

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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 11:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Joseph_A

Originally posted by pragya_luvsajan

Nice concept again! 
ummm i will be waiting for the update! soo please update really soon! 
and add me to the pm list 
thnks for the pm! 


Oh Thanks a lot Pragya for your appreciating words.Embarrassed Definitely,I'll add your name in my new PM List Embarrassed,How can I forget youEmbarrassed I'll try to post First Part today. Embarrassed Anyway,This is very Nice siggyWink-

       
Well firstly toh u r welcome! Ah and u should not forger me also! especially when it comes to sajan and monayaaa!!!!  and thnks for appreciating the siggy! :) 

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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 12:03pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by cool_tuli

nyc one buddy...
pm me soon


Thanks TulliEmbarrassed Definitely,I'll PM you.


Edited by Joseph_A - 18 May 2011 at 5:54pm

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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 12:03pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ekta_monaya

RESERVED...Cry Cry
i cudn't comment 1st...Cry Cry
ur so DEAD Joseph...m gonna kill you...Angry Angry
cudn't u wait to post it before i came back...?!Angry Angry
ur so BAD...nyways its RESS for now...Cry Cry
will edit soon & be ready for chappals Mr.Khadoos... Angry Angry


Sooorrryyy EktaaEmbarrassed But,see...in My PM List...Maine all ready Name add kar liya thaEmbarrassed By the way,Yeh Kab tak Unres. karogi...??LOL


Edited by Joseph_A - 18 May 2011 at 6:00pm

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                       ...Aur PYAAR Ho Gaya !   

PART-1



A shinning morning in MASOREE
 

BHUSHAN House
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Mr.AMIT BHUSHAN(GD) entered in the kitchen..and saw her wife NISHA(GM) ...who was busy in her Kitchen works and preparing the break-fast...he said in little worried tone...
 
GD - Oh ! Aap yahaan aaram se kitchen mein work kar rahi hain...aur main kab se pareshaan ho raha hoon...
 
GM - Pareshaan kyun...? Mere liye...? Arre! aap bhi naa mujhe kya hona hai...? (said with smiling face)
 
GD - Aap ke liye nahin...Bachhon ke liye pareshaan ho raha hoon...Aapne time dekha hai...8 baj chuke hain...aur abhi tak woh donon nahin aaye...
 
GM - Oh ! Aap bhi naa...! aate hi honge ab GUNJAN koi bachhi toh hai nahin jo,yahaan kho jaaye...
 
GD - Par ab tak toh aa jaate the naa...? Yeh 'Heal Point' tak roz jaane ki kya zaroorat hai...jogging karne ke liye paas waale Park mein bhi toh ja sakte hain naa...Aap bhi naa...unhen kuchh kehti hi nahin...
 
GM - Yeh aap keh rahe hain...? Yeh sab aapka hi kiya hua hai...Mujhe toh koi haq hi nahin hai aapki laadli ko kuchh bolne ka...Aap mujhe kuchh bolne kahaan dete ho...? waise,woh donon 'Heal Point' se aa chuke hain...Woh GUNJAN market gayi hai...kuchh vegitables aur kuchh aur zaroori saaman laane ke liye.
 
GD - (Said shockingly) Kya...? Par,kyun NISHA...?? main le aata naa...GUNJAN ko kyun jaane diya...?
 
GM - Arre...main toh bas waise hi keh rahi thi...Par aap toh GUNJAN ko jaante hain naa...woh zidd kar khud hi chali gayi...woh bhi apne uss 'Asst.' ke saath...
 
GD - Zidd kar khud gayi...isska matlab hai...Oh GOD ! Kahin woh SCOOTY se toh nahin gayi...?
 
GM - Haan...ussi se toh gayi hai...Don't worry...usse driving aati hai...
 
GD - Haan...jaanta hoon usse driving aati hai...aur kuchh zyada hi achhi driving aati hai...aapne usse SCOOTY le jaane ki permission kaise de di...? Aapne usse roka kyun nahin...? (asked in very worried tone)
 
GM - Arre...! Aap toh mujhe aise keh rahe hain jaise,woh donon mujhe har kaam bata kar hi karte hain...Mujhe toh laga woh donon.Cycle se jaayenge...woh toh jab SCOOTY start hone ki awaaz aayi tab mujhe pata chala...par,aap bewajah pareshaan ho rahe hain...
 
GD - Nahin...Aapne uski speed nahin dekhi...? Main toh usse drive karte dekh bhi loon toh,mera dum nikal jaata hai...Kitni baar kaha..itni speed se SCOOTY mat chalaya karo...par,yeh ladki...yeh ladki toh apni shararaton se baaz hi nahin aati...
 
GM - Ab aap kuchh zyada hi pareshaan ho rahe hain...? Kya Aaaj tak koi accident kiya hai kya...?
 
GD - NISHA...'Accident' Muhurat nikal kar nahin hote...Accident toh ho jate hain...I hope woh sahi-salamat aa jaaye...main toh aaj uss SCOOTY ki key hi lock kar doonga...Na rahega baans Na bajego Bansuri... He said in little worried but,caring tone and went from the kitchen...
 
NISHA Jii smiled softly,said nothing because,she knew... (( Oh yeh aur inka gussa...Hamesha,yehi kehte hain...Par 1 baar GUNJAN ko dekh le...phir kuchh yaad bhi nahin rehta...Naa SCOOTY aur naa hi uski Key...Kya karoon main iss ladki ka...? kab band hongi iski shararatein...? Jab tak yahaan hai thik hai...Shaadi ke baad kya hoga...? Ab zyada time bhi toh nahin raha...Ab toh ARNAV bhi U.K. se laut aaya hai..aur yeh ladki hai ki,kuchh samajhti hi nahin...
Kaise sambhalegi apne Ghar...apne Pati ko...? yeh toh khud ko bhi nahin sambhal paati... Mujhe usse 1 baar phir samjhane ki koshish karni hogi...oh GOD ! iss baar woh meri baat samajh le...))
 
 
MASOOREE STATION
 
A Young,Handsome n Dashing Guy...wore a Blue jeans n black t-shirt...stood in TAXI-STAND...his eyes were searching someone here n there...but,not found that 'Expected person' face...suddenly a new car came near of him n stopped.A Guy opened the door n said in exciting tone... "Hey ! SAMRAT ! Wassup Bro...? Sorry Yaar,Bas thodi der ho gayi...  came near and hugged him tightly...He was SAMRAT...SAMRAT SHERGILL son of SURAJ n RIMA SHERGILL...younger brother of BRIJ SHERGILL...
 
SAMRAT replied in same way...hugged him tightly and after some second they broke the hug and SAMRAT said in little upset tone... "Its not fair Bro main itni door se aaya aur phir bhi aap mujhe lene itni late se aaye...mujhse milne ki laldi nahin thi kya...?"
 
B - I am sorry Bhai...jitni bhi shikayatein hain...car mein baithne ke baad kar lena...par,abhi toh yahaan se chalo..kitni Dhoop hai yahaan...Drive karte hue A.C. mein aaram se baatein karenge...Ok...?
 
S - (said with smilng face) Ok...chalo...




MASOOREE Market
 
A Girl stood in in-front of MAGAZINE-CENTRE...she wore a Blue jeans and Pink top. Shop was closed and this is the main reason of her irritating mood...said to her little bro.,who stood beside on her... "TINKU...yahaan par Koi aur Magazine Shop nahin hai kya...? Yeh toh kisi lazy person ki shop hai...9 baj gaye aur isne ab tak Shop open tak nahin ki...Pata nahin yahaan ke sabhi log itne lazy kyun hain...Hamari DELHI mein toh...
 
Her little bro. cuts her sentence quickly... "GUNJAN Di...!! Ab DELHI ko yaad karne ka koi fayda nahin..hamein rehna toh yahin hai...jab tak Papa ka transfer kahin aur nahin ho jaata...Yeh Shop toh close hai...aur hamein der bhi ho rahi hai...Aaj toh Mom ke saath saath Papa bhi hamari class lenge...abhi chalo...evening mein aa kar try karte hain...shayad tab tak yeh lazy person utth jaaye..." said in little mature but,cute tone.
 
GUNJAN knew...TINKU was right...No any benefit to remembering the Golden Days of DELHI..said in little sad tone... "You are right Yaar! Koi benefit nahin hamari DELHI ko yaad karne ka...Kitni saari magazines leni thi...Hey ! Main Market chalen kya...? Wahaan bhi toh 1 shop hai shayad woh open ho...?"
 
T - Woh toh hai...par Papa..? (said in worried tone)
 
G - Arre ! Don't worry...Papa kuchh nahin kahenge...Main Hoon Naa.. (said in very Proud to herself tone) Aur phir meri SCOOTY...JOHN ki Bike se kum thode hi naa hai...Hum DHOOM style mein jaayenge...Magazine purchase karenge...aur phir direct ghar...kuchh nahin hoga...


 
T - Yaa...Chalo Di...phir toh kaafi mazaa aayega... (said excitedly)
 
GUNJAN started her SCOOTY...TINKU sat behind her and hold her tightly... and now,they both were going to 'Main Market' side...
 
 
 
Meanwhile SAMRAT in Car
 
BRIJ drove-off the car smoothly...and SAMRAT sat beside on him on passenger seat..
 
S - (looked at here n there) Bro. ! Sach yahaan kuchh nahin badla...sab kuchh pehle jaisa hi hai...
 
B - SAM ...tum sirf 8 month ke baad aa rahe ho...8 saalon ke baad nahin...jo sab kuchh badal jaaye anyway,Apni batao...MUMBAI mein kya chal raha hai...? Koi new Link-Up...?? (smiled...wanted to teased him)
 
S - Haaa...Haaa...Haaa...Very Funny Joke...par really its totally P.J... look,mujhe hansi bhi nahin aayi...Aap toh aise keh rahe ho jaise aap ko kuchh maloom hi nahin...? Aap sab bhi naa...bachhe ki jaan le kar hi maanoge...? (made a puppy face)
 
B - OMG ! Tum aur woh bhi 'Bachhe'...?? (laughed) No Comment Dude ! lekin,ab bahot ho gayi 'Mauj-Masti'...ab toh iss baar Mom-Dad ke order se tumhen koi nahin bacha sakta...main bhi nahin...
 
S - Wohi toh problem hai Bro. Iss baar toh koi chance hi nahin...pata nahin unhen itni jaldi kyun hai...meri marriage ki...aur,mujhe toh yeh bhi pata nahin ki woh kaun hai...? Kaisi hai...? Kaisi dikhti hai...? Mujhe samajh bhi paayegi yaa nahin...? yaa...  BRIJ laughed very badly...SAMRAT was shocked after seeing his bro reaction...said curiously..."What's the matter...? Aap hanse kyun...? I am not in funny mood...This time,I am serious Bro...
 
B - I know...You are serious...and laughed again...SAMRAT looked at his side with very angry look...
 
BRIJ said again... "Sorry ! Sorry...! Ab nahin hansoonga...actually,SAM agar kisi ladki ne tumhen really samajh liya toh tumse kabhi shaadi nahin karegi... sabhi chali jaayengi...tumhaari Ex-Girlfriends ki tarah...
 
S - Bro. ! Aisa nahin hai..Mujhe marriage se problem nahin...whatever,LOVE Marriage ho or ARRANGE Marriage... 'LOVE' mein successful nahin raha toh 'ARRANGE' se hi compromise karna padega...I am ok with that...par,phir bhi 1 darr toh rehta hai naa...Ab yeh koi 'Live-in' relationship toh hai nahin ki,jab tak saath rahe...reh liye...phir,after some problem easily ek dusre ko Tata-Bye-Bye keh diya...'Marriage' toh ek life time commitment hai naa...? (said all things in very serious tone)
 
B - I agree...anyway,Kuchh aur kahoon iss se pehle...'Live-In' se yaad aaya...Kya tum kisi NIDHI ke saath 'Live-In' relation mein the...? (asked seriously)
 
S - How Rubbish...!! Kisne kaha yeh...? Hum sirf ek dusre ko Date kar rahe the...Hum sirf...1 Building share kar rahe the..Flat nahin... (said in irritating tone)
 
B - Oh...! Its means..Tum donon mein "Waisa Relation" nahin tha...? (asked in serious tone)
 
S - (said after long pause) Look...Bro...I don't deny ki,hamare beech 'Physical Relation' nahin the...Its a 'Casual thing' not a big deal...toh...
 
B - (cuts seriously) No...SAM Its not a 'Casual' thing...Har rishte ki 1 boundry hoti hai...jise hamein cross nahin karna chahiye...
 
S - Bro ! I know,har rishte ki 1 boundry hoti hai...Ok...I tell you...Hum donon ek dusre ke liye serious the...usse 'unn cheezon' se koi farq nahin padta tha...It was not just like, '1 Night Stand'...But,after some time...we realized ki,shayad hum ek dusre ke liye nahin bane...Hamare kuchh issues the jo sort-out nahin ho sake...toh hum seperate ho gaye...
She is still my friend...ab hum zindagi bhar ek-dusre ko iss liye toh tolerate nahin kar sakte the kyunki,hum mein kabhi 'Physical Relation' tha... (said in very normal tone)
 
B - Anyway,Yahaan kuchh logon ne Dad ko yehi bataya ki,tum kisi NIDHI ke saath 1 hi Flat mein rehte ho...Issi liye,ab woh tumhaari marrage jald se jald karana chahte hain...
 
S - Yeh logon ko aur koi kaam nahin hota...? Inhen milta kya hai..kisi ki personal life mein interfere kar ke... (said angrily) Anyway,Bro ! Aapne toh us ladki ko dekha hoga naa...Kaun hai woh...? I mean,dekhne mein kaisi lagti hai...? 
 
B - Hummm Dekhi toh hai...par abhi bataoonga nahin...Tum khud hi usse dekh lena...uss se mil lena...I am sure,Tum usse 'Naa' nahin kahoge...
 
S - Par Bro...? aise hi...? (asked in doubtful tone)
 
B - (seriously) Dekho SAM Main tumhaara bada bhai baad mein hoon...par hum pehle achhe friend hain...MARRIAGE koi bhi ho...LOVE yaa ARRANGE...usse nibhana 2 Individuals ko hi padta hai...woh bhi ek saath mil kar. Main... Mom...Dad sirf tumhaari marriage kara sakte hain...uske baad...? Usse nibhana toh tumhen hi padega...! Tumhen Marriage karne se pehle Marriage ki importance samajhni hogi...Hum Marriage sirf hamari 'Physical need' ko pura karne ke liye nahin karte...Marriage ke saath-saath humari life mein ek Responsibility bhi aati hai...ek-dusre ko sambhalne ki responsibility...ek-dusre ko khush rakhne ki responsibility...ek-dusre ke har gham mein uske saath rehne ki responsibility...kyunki,hamein pata hota hai...jab koi hamare saath nahin hoga...woh hogi...hamari zindagi ke har achhe-bure pal mein...
 
SAMRAT was listning all things very seriously...BRIJ said after a pause... "Look SAM...I am not saying...'LOVE Marriage' achhi hoti hai yaa 'ARRANGE Marriage'...because,I know...Marriage koi bhi ho...hamain usse maintain... uss ke saath Adjust karna aana chahiye...No Body can PERFACT...Kuchh demerits hum mein hoti hain...Kuchh saamne waale mein...successful relation maintain karne ke liye humain woh demerits ignore karna aana chahiye...
 
S - Bro ! I understand...par phir bhi...ek insaan ke sath...? jise aap sirf 1 yaa 2 time hi mile ho...? Uske saath puri life kaise spend kar sakte hain...?
 
B - Kyun...Kya...Main aur ISHITA (His wife) saath nahin...Mom-Dad saath nahin...? Hamari bhi toh 'Arrange Marriage' hi hui thi naa...aur,yakeen karo hum sabhi kaafi khush hain...aur phir kya 'LOVE Marriage' mein divorce nahin hote...? Agar tumhaari theory ko accept kar liya jaaye tab toh 'Love Marriage' mein divorce hone hi nahin chahiye the...
 
S - (said after a serious thaught look) Yaa...I think,you are right...Ok...dekha jaayega...Ab jab Mom-Dad ko apni acceptance de di hai...toh usse wapas nahin loonga...I trust them...Ab woh jo ho..jaisi ho..agar aap aur Mom-Dad ko pasand hai...mujhe koi aitraaz nahin... (said with smiling face)
 
B - That's good...! and believe me...Hum jo bhi decision lenge...tumhaari bhalai ke liye hi lenge...
 
Suddenly,BRIJ stopped the car...in-front of a Office...
 
S - Bro ! Kya hua..? Yahaan Car kyun rok di...? (asked in curious tone)
 
B - Actually,mujhe iss office mein thodi der ka kaam hai...Tum aao mere saath...sirf.10 min. lagenge..Phir hum saath chalenge...
 
S - Ok...I come... suddenly he said, Bro ! Aap chalo main ROHAN (his Nephew) ke liye wahaan se (pointed to a shop) kuchh chocolates le leta hoon...
 
B - Ok...Tum le lo...main office mein hoon...   and they both lived the car...
 
SAMRAT was busy in purchase some chockolates and some packates of Biscuits...suddenly he heared a Crashing Voice...
 
      CCC...RRR...AAA...SSS...HHH...EEE...DDD
 
And saw,A SCOOTY crashed to his Car very badly...He didn't saw the face of SCOOTY Driver clearly because,He was stood at very distansce from that 'Accident Spot'...but,he recognise...she was definitely a girl...he saw her back side and SCOOTY number also...and Yes...a kid also stood beside on her...
 
No Wonder...!!! She is none another GUNJAN and her sweet little Bro TINKU...
 
 
Meanwhile 'Accident Spot'-
 
GUNJAN was feeling very pain this time...Her Right leg was injured...it was bleeding very badly...suddenly,TINKU turned back and saw...SAMRAT who was coming...in very very anger mood... (Obviously)
 
T - Di...Kya hua...?? Uttho jaldi...aur bhagao hamari 'Dhanno' ko...Aaj hamari bhi Izzat ka sawaal hai... (said in very worried tone)
 
G - (asked in same way) Arre ! Kya hua... Dekh nahin rahe...kitna bada 'Cut' hai...Oh God...! Kitna blood aa raha hai...aur... (looked at her jeans) Yeh toh...Oh God ! meri toh jeans bhi gayi...ab toh aaj ghar mein koi nahin bacha sakta...!! (said in totally worried tone)
 
T - Di...chalo jaldi...agar yahaan se abhi nahin gaye...toh yahaan bhi hamein koi nahin bacha sakta...Bhagao naa apni 'Dhanno' ko..."DHOOM" style mein...
 
G - Arre...! Yeh 'DHANNO-DHANNO' kya laga rakha hai...? saaf-saaf kaho naa...hua kya...?
 
T - Di...agar abhi nahin gaye naa..toh 'GABBAR' ke gunde nahin...khud 'GABBAR' aa raha hai...
 
G - Kaun 'GABBAR' ?? (asked in very worried tone)
 
T - Wohi 'GABBAR' jiski tumhaari 'DHANNO' ne abhi-abhi Headlight tod di hai...agar hum donon abhi nahin bhaage...Woh hamein definitely,tod dega... 
 
He turned back again and saw...SAMRAT was still coming...He helped to GUNJAN for stand-up again... GUNJAN had been started her SCOOTY again...TINKU had sat beside her...and They had gone...before SAMRAT reached to 'Accident Spot'.

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Edited by Joseph_A - 18 May 2011 at 6:21pm

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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 12:05pm | IP Logged
Hello Friends !Smile
                Finally,I posted my First part of this FFEmbarrassed Guys...I don't know what is your First take about this Update and Story move. Its little bit 'Mature' subject...I am really trying to justify it with my own capability...May be,My age is not enough for justify these things so,maturely...but,Its not a excuse...I am ready for any kind of Criticism...because,I know its better for my improvement.

This story mainly focused to Today's Youth..their thinking...their living style...(As per General viewEmbarrassed) and  'Arrange Marriage' concept...I am waiting for some 'True view' about these things...Embarrassed Sorry Guys for any Disappointment.Embarrassed
Extremely Sorry Embarrassed

Thanks,Embarrassed
[JOSEPH]



*Watch  'n'  Enjoy...Embarrassed
(made by, a 'SANYA-BARUN' Fan)




Edited by Joseph_A - 19 May 2011 at 4:20am

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YAY! YAY! Me 1st to comment...*VICTORY SMILE*...yes yes yes i commented 1st on ur 1st update...Party Dancing
m so happy...i got 1 more FF to spy on other than MBYPH...ROFL...thnk u Joseph...u cant imagine how 
much i was missing ur writings...Embarrassed & u have simply made my day...Big smile CONGRATULATIONS on the 1st update 
of ur FF... & i always want to be the 1st one to comment on ur FF...Embarrassed... MBYPH & ...APHG ROCKSSS...!!!!!...Clap Clap Clap

Ok now cuming to the update...wat to say Mr.Perfectionist...u truly are a PERFECTIONIST...Clap Star Clap Star Clap Star Clap Star Clap Star m so much much much in LOVE with this FF...Heart Heart Heart
maine to bas concept & 1st update padha..."...AUR PYAAR HO GAYA" mujhe iss FF se...Day Dreaming...i think m gonna 
love it more than MBYPH...seriously awesummm, superbbb, mind-blowinggg, 
fantasticcc & totally roccckkkiiinnnggg update...
i just loveee it sooo much Joseph...ur seriously back with a BANG dude...Approve Cool
Wonderful FF...just Perfecttt...i can say that from its start only...really Gr88888888...u knw
ever since i've seen the name & the FF my heart is repeatedly singing MERI SAASON ME BASA H...its from 
a movie starring Aishwarya Rai & Bobby Deol & i guess it was Ash's 1st movie & its name was "...AUR PYAAR HO GAYA"...Embarrassed
& since the day u tld me abt this title of ur new FF, since that day & till today, this song is repeatedly playing in my mind...
do hear it...its really superb & 1 of my favs...Embarrassed

now cuming to GD & GM scene...awww...they r so cute & adorable...loved thier convo...Heart
just perfect  doting parents...loved thier convo so so so much...awww...GD cares for her so much for
 his daughter like all fathers...really loved his concern... & OMG!! his dhamki...so sweet...Embarrassed Big smile
really awesum & fantastic scene...loved it...Clap Clap Clap

now cuming to Gunjan-Tinku scene & Gunjan's introduction...awww...Adorable siblings...OMG!! Tinku is sooo cute<3...Embarrassed
& wow!! Gunjan is vry much diffrent here...Bubbly & Chirpy...like me...Embarrassed...awww...m loving this new
gunjan...shez won my heart in the 1st updte itself...Sooo cuttteee<333333...Heart
Poor Girl...misses Delhi...& is getting married to AARAV...ummm, intresting...m really vry keen to knw abt 
this Mr.Aarav...his character is quite misterious & i wud love to see the developments in them...lets see
how FANTASTICALLY u handle them Mr.Khadoos...Stern Smile((old habits die hard...ROFL ROFL))

& now cuming to Samrat-Brij scene & Samrat's introduction...hmmm...quite mature talking between 
two brothers & m happy that u maintained the REALISTIC assence...i mean its OBVIOUS in Brother's to
talk abt this matters... & m so happy that u showed & potrayed it well...witout any OBNOXIOUSNESS...Stern Smile
Well-done Joseph...u really deserve applauses for this scene...Clap
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i was actually a bit shocked readng this scene & Samrat's views on PHYSICAL RELATIONSHIPS... NIDHI...?! Ermmm...Ahem Ahem...LOL & m happy that
u've not shown him as a typical, goody-to-shows hero but a man whu has certain FLAWS in him...a few negetive traits
& a MAN whu is NOT PERFECT...dats wat a character is...Clap & i really loved the BOND between Samrat & Brij...Embarrassed & Brij being the Responsible, elder brother that he is showing correct path to samrat & making him realize what Relationship, Marriage & Commitment is...Embarrassed...m sure Samrat will undrstnd...Embarrassed
i wud really love to see thier BOND develop more Stronger in ur FF...Approve
& m also happy to knw that he respects his parents & thier views
& perceptions so much...i wonder whus the gal his parents have chosen for him...Embarrassedobviously NOT Gunjan coz her marriage is already
fixed to AARAV...Dead then whu is it...???!!! YAMINI...!!!!!!!Dead OMG...!!!!!!! No No No No Never...hope so not...*FINGERS CROSSED*...Ermm
Really Superb, amazing, marvellous & my fav scene of the update...HATS OFF yaar...Clap Clap Clap

& OMG!! the BEST & the Most Hillarious part was the "DHANNO" & "DHOOM" sequense...OMG!! I was seriously ROFLing like HELL...it was stupendous...ROFL ROFL
OMG!! Samrat as GABBAR...LOL...Tinku is so damn funny...LOLloved him... & Gunjan...?!LOL & they ran away...!! OMG!! M sure OUR GABBAR will kill them if he 
finds out...ROFL Poor Gunjan is hurt too...Ouch hope the CUT is not deep & hope the LECTURE is not Long...LOL Ouch((i knw wat it i to bear a lecture as i get 1 almost evryday...ROFL LOL Embarrassed))
God this Gunjan is too too too much like me & dats y m loving her so much...
eagerly w8ing 4 OFFICIAL SaJan meet...Day Dreaming

The update was just mind-blowinggg, Superbbb, Roccckkkiiinnnggg, Fantasticcc...
i loved it to the CORE...really wonderful...Clap Clap Clap...thoda goof-ups the bt they wer vry minor & ignorable to chalta h...do not worry bout it & keep doing the
out-standing job that u r doing... & ya 1 more thing...does this FF too have a 1st LOOK SCENE...????...Confused If yes, then OMG!! OMG!! M waiting eagerly 4 it...Shocked Shocked
plzzz post it soon so that i have 1 more thng to PONDER on wen the BLACK MONDAY cums & the suspense reveals...
Insomniac banne ke liye kuch to hona chaiye n...LOL...LOL...Really Superbbb update...loved it...!! & VM of Sanaya-Barun is fab too...Embarrassed
m eagerly waiting 4 IPKKND to start soon...cum soon 6th june...m w8ing...& thnk u so much for sharing the wonderful VM with us Joseph...Hug

Ah! Finally i unressed before u posting the next part...hope ur satisfied with it... & plzzz dont kill me for unressing so late, coz i knw m vry late but was
being lazy...u knw AADAT SE MAJBUR...ROFL ROFL...m not the 1 to be blamed for this... & yeah AMBIKA ka Thoda-Thoda Asar ho raha h mujhpe bhi...LOL Embarrassed
 & wat do u mean by "MAINE KAB KAHA SAJAN ARRIANGE MARRIAGE"...???!!!Angry Angry
Joseph plzzz tell me wats goin on in ur DEVILISH mind...Angrycoz i really knw u well by now...batao kya chakkar h????!!!!Angry Angry
i hope  tumhare iss FF me SaJan safe h...& agar nai h na to i'll eriously KILL U...!! Angry & i MEAN IT...!!Angry so save urself from dying & me from going in prison...Angry LOL
apni jaan pyaari ho to meri dhamki yaad rakhna & ye kya JEEJU ki dhamki laga rakhi h huh???? My JEEJU Loves me a lot & he will nver shout at me...Embarrassed
evn if his chotta bhai Mr.Khadoos tells him to...to jisko  complaint krna h karo coz mai nai darti kisi se...ROFL ROFL
 & tumhe hame BADNAAM krne ki zarurat nai h...i already knew that it wont be 
"SIMPLE" coz U & SIMPLE...not at all a combintion so...& MBYPH ne tumhe already bohot BADNAAM kr dia h...ROFL ROFL ab aur kitna hoge...???!!!LOL LOL & sorry yaar
but yaha bhi  tumhe mere Lambe & Boring comments Jhelne honge...ROFL & OMG!! Ye waala to kuch zyaada him lamba ho gya h...sorry yaar...wont repeat again...Embarrassed
promise...at least i will try NOT to...((its impossible yaar...Cry))...hope u dont mind & if u do then plzzz tell me...hope My RELATIVE is co-operative
otherwise i'll complain to JEEJU abt his younger Bro...LOL ROFL Embarrassed
...ab FF start kia h to BHUGTO...i cant help it...ROFL ROFL hope u dont mind... & wen r u updating????...Embarrassed
its been long yaar...plzzz update soon...m w8ing desperately 4 it...Kuch seekho S3 se...kitna fatafat update krte h vo...in fact mere comment krne se bhi
pehle...aaj kal waha 1st comment to kya, only comment krna bhi MUSHKIL ho gya h coz of thier speed... ROFL ROFLkuch seekho unse plzzz & plzzz update soon... Embarrassed
m w8ing desperately 4 it...Embarrassed

& do rply to this comment of mine...bohot mehnat se likha h isiliye...Embarrassed & agar nai kia na to direct JEEJU se COMPLAINT kr dungi...ROFL ROFL

CONTINUE SOON
UPDATE ASAP
THNX 4 THE PM & DNT 4GET 2 PM ME...((yaha pe bhi jhelo meri TYPICAL lines...LOL ROFL))

W8ing eagerly 4 nxt update...do cont soon...Embarrassed

Luv,
Ekta...Hug


Edited by ekta_monaya - 26 May 2011 at 10:31am

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Awesome update. Loved it a lot. Firstly, i was prepared for a shock, as i know u. And i was very much eager to read it. Thats why i haven't waited for ur pm and visited here to check if u have posted it. Coming to update, what can i say u wrote it amazingly like always. Gd&Gm's convo is very realistic like it happens in every one's house. GD is very concerned about gunjan and why not he is her father after all. And Gm's thoughts r also very nice. U wrote it very nicely. Every mother thinks like that only when it comes to their daughter's marraige. They want them to understand the priority of marraige and to change their mindset to adjust and organise themselves in a new house. Mothers really worry about these things. Samrat and gunjan's entry was superb. The way gunjan saying 'hamare delhi' shows that how much she misses delhi. And brij seems to be a very sensible guy. The way he is telling about marraige says that he is a responsible and sensible guy. And u have depicted samrat's charector very nicely and brilliantly. Samrat is a nice guy. The way he said that 'marraige is a life long commitment' shows that he is serious about marraige. He respects it and wants to maintain it in any situation. By this scene, i can say that he is not taking marraige as a small thing. He knows its value. And he said that he will respect their parents decision and they take only right decision for him. How sweet! He respects their parents a lot. But, his relation with nidha is little shocking for me. Frankly speaking, i hadn't expected that samrat will take a physical relationship very lightely. May be because, i don't a boy's way of thinking in relations and their life style. Thats why its shocking for me. And coming to accident part it was hilarious. I loved it. I thought that sajan will meet. But they hadn't. Hope they'll meet in next update. U have done a great job. I know arrange marraige is cute but little complicated concept to write and our age is not quite enough to write it in a 'mature' way. I can understand. But, i have faith in u, that u can justify it. As u said that u r preparing to write this from 2 months, this shows ur dedication and hard work towards this ff. Thats why i tell u, that u can do it. Sorry for my longer comment. Do cont soon. And give me a long update next time. And yeah, don't think that i will come and read without pm everytime. Do pm me from next time.

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