Love Gunjanπ...
Originally posted by: 1gunjan7PART--9
Hi Joseph,Soham,Sonia,Swati ...π€...
OMG! Wow!What a Fantastic update...π...It was totally rocking and Fully OUT-Standing...ππΌ...Bahut bahut bahut bahut mazza aaya read karkey...ππΌ...I loved and enjoyed reading this update a lot...It was so so so good that I am speechless ...Mindblowing and Fantabulous update...ππΌ...though I love your all updates very much and Tinku-Samrat part is my favorite But this update Tinku-Samrat part was so rocking so awesome,amazing and fabulous that I loved it the most...Samrat stole the show today...Very well written and Presentation was fantastic...each part each scene and Every dialogue was amazing and Excellent...Gr8 update...ππΌ...You all Joseph, Soham,Sonia,Swati are great and out-standing n excellent writers..ππΌ...Maaza aa jata hai your FF APHG and MBYPH read karkey...they are Rocking FF's.....ππΌ...
In this update also you have written everything so well and each situation, each scene and each characters emotions feelings have been described so properly and so awesomely that imagining each characters expressions and visualizing each scene and each part was easy...I felt as if I was watching a show ON TV ...I really could imagine in my mind every part ...and how this character must be acting and expressing his emotions in this particular situation ...the update was just AMAZING and FULL ON ROCKING and FANTABULOUS...πππ...EXCELLENT WORK Joseph,Soham,Sonia,Swati..π...Loved the whole update a lottt...You know the update was not long at all infact it was a short update...I was enjoying reading it so much that when it ended I was like Oh! man It has ended ..I wanted 2 read more n more...Infact I will say THIS JOSEPH SOHAM SONIA SWATI PLEASE Plsss update SOONNN...I am desperate 2 read Whats Gonna Happen next In Both your FF's APHG and MBYPH......Plss jaldi update karna ...Once again MAZZA AA GAYA READ KARKEY...Fabulous Work π...
Samrat-Tinku-gunjan-GM_GD part was just Rocking Guys...I enjoyed it so much that I couldnt stop laughing....Just imagining and Visualizing the scene and characters expressions Especially Samrat-tinku part made me Roffle hard..Infact I am still laughing after π..I have never laughed so so much ...WHAT a fantastically written part π...TINKU My God he is so naughty π...He was enjoying samrat in trouble infact he was making sure Samrat fell more in troubleπ€£...Bicharey samrat ko bolney hi nahi diya when GD (AMIT) was speaking 2 samrat and asking him questions...1st Samrat was in trouble and Tinku was enjoying and calling him funny namesπ.Then Tinku in trouble and Samrat was smirkingπ...Tinku toh Phir bhi kid hai But samrat he is also too much he also becomes a Kid when Tinku is around...π...Tinku is so naughty...loved the whole part ...from GD asking samrat who is he and tinku enjoying you know though Tinku didnt make face at samrat when his dad was there but I could just imagine Ki Agar tinku laughing faces banata seeing samrat in a situation toh kasey banataπ...to Gunjan saving samrat that was very sweet but we know why she did it ...π...then tinku getting scolded samrat enjoying and samrat saving Tinku from getting scolded just 4 gunjan was very sweet and it showed Samrat really like gunjanπ.....I COULD visualze this scene when TINKU said SORRY 2 samrat Bicharey tinku ko kitana effort karna pada hogaπ...U know when AMIT GD said 2 samrat stay 4 DInner this scene and GUNJAN-TINKU WHAT dialogueπ...When I imagined this scene I started laughingπ...And Samrat so naughty full FAYEDA uthayaπ π...and TELLING NISHA-GM that mein SIKA dunga CUSTOMS...π.π...Man Gunjan and tinku kitana angry huey hongey I could visualize itπ...U know when in real life also parents Praise other children we children think the same in our minds GHAR ki MURGI Dal BARABARππ...MAN what a PART Fully AWESOME...π ...MAN Poor samratπ yeh Naughty and sweet and over intelligent Tinku Samrat ko kitaney Name dege...MOGAMBO-πGABBAR SINGH-πCHINDI CHORπ€£-GANG ko belong karta hei yeh and Call POLICE when Tinku said this I cracked up with laughter π-----CHOR-----ROOM SERVICE MANπ€£-------BANDHAR------ππMonkeyπππ-----SPIDER MANπππ------------BHUKKHAD--------π--------π€£----U KNOW when Tinku said meri sari mango custard na kha ley...π..I remembered When My sis and me were kids very small kids and Mom made our favorite sweet dish for us only and that day only always guests used 2 visit and BEING small kids we used 2 think like this only KAHIN humrai FAVORITE DISH na finish ho jaye...ππππ...WHOLE PART WAS AWESOME ...ENJOYED it a LOTTTππΌ...π...
ARNAV part was also good it showed arnav love 4 gunjan and that arnav is a good person and his talk with his friend raj was interesting also the bonding close between both were excellent and showed they were loyal n good friends...Friendly Taunts and teasing happen like this only between friends...π...ARNAV worry is genuine I also want 2 know What happened after arnav left and though arnav said he said yes 2 marry Gunjan bec he fell in love with her but he also Said he did it 4 another reason ...I really want 2 know what that reason was ππ...and WHY was ANKIT as shown in last part was SO Rude when talking about Gunjan and what was he hiding and it looked like His wife had left him ...ππ...Kya Hua tha 2yrs back ...π...
Do tell soon Joseph,Soham,Sonia,Swati...Plss...whats the Mysteryπ and Why does gunjan take injections ??π...accident ka tetinus injection toh doc neh lagaya hoga then when Tinku said in last part injection liya di ?what injection??π...
SD and SM talk was also interesting ..U excellently showed the Generation gap which happens between parents and children due 2 lack of communication....Same has happened with SD ..though Sd loves Samrat in his own way and wants best 4 him but he is also Stubborn and just thinking about Society thinking and his friendship with yamini dad and he gave his word BUT why did he gave word without even asking Samrat once whether he now loves yamini...just bec they found his pictures with her and they studied in same college and work same office OK Misunderstandings like this happen when parents find PICTURES of their SON/Daughter with another girl/boy but atleast ONCE only SD n Sm should have asked samrat DO you Like yamini ? I agree with SM she understands samrat more then SD and respects her sons feelings also And The way U showed Her taking Samrat side and trying 2 make her husbands understand that Samrat View who he wants 2 MARRY should be asked Once his view is important...The motherly love and trust U showed 4 her son was excellently written Joseph ,Soham,Sonia,Swati..I agree Ultimately Samrat view who he wants 2 marry is Important as he has 2 stay whole life with the girl whom he marries and girl should be of his choice...ACCORDING 2 Sd he is doing right I know Sd is right in his own way what society thinks is also important BUT ONLY upto an extent as SOCIETY TO KUCH BHI BOLTI HAI and everytime if we do what society thinks and wants then What about what WE want????? As in bad times society doesnt come 2 help only our close and loved ones help us...and INSTEAD of saying what society thinks SHOULDNT SD think what his SON WANTS...SHOULDNT SD trust his SON and instead of believing a Rumor ...I FEEL their is communication gap between father n son as Mother has understood her sons feelings But father has not and SD doesnt even realize and know what TYPE Of WIFE his son wants...he is Judging his SON DESIRES and what Samrat may like in his wife by just seeing Samrat outer image But inside what he thinks SD doesnt know...I WONDER WHAT SD will say if he knows Samrat wants a Sweet ,SIMPLE and TRADITIONAL girl as His WIFE ...??I think he will be shocked...BUT will He agree 2 GUNJAN-Samrat Marriage?π As RICH Class status is important 4 SD...BUT 1 qs is will Sajan marriage happen ??π...ONCE AGAIN TOTALLY Gr8 , RAPCHICK, MIND Blowing Update ...Loved each part a lottt...Excellent work Joseph,Soham,Sonia,Swatiπ...
THANKS 4 Pm friendsπ€..really want 2 know what will happen next ...SO PLSS PLSS...DO Update soon JOSEPH,SOHAM,SONIA,SWATI ...and Do pm me whenever you update Plss...
Love your good friend
Gunjanππ...
Originally posted by: ekta_monayaYe Aaplogo ke 'WAIT & WATCH' ke Chakkar me Logo ki Zindagiyaa Barbaad ho Jaani h, By God..!! π³ π€£
& BTW 'ZINDAGI NAA MILEGI DOBARA' π€£ isiliye stop dis 'WAIT & WATCH'... π€£
Originally posted by: gunurloveHey Joseph and S3...π
hope so this time im on time...As Usual update was Superb...Mind blowing and very very very interesting...π³Very Well written...πTinku Samrat's AS Tom and Jerry scene was fantastic...tinku was not missing a single chance to trap samrat...Poor sammy had completely in traped between Tinku and his dadπafter all Tinku is indeed a very smart kid ...i thoroughly enjoyed Samrat miserable condition in this scene..unless Gunjan didn't come...Tinku ka bas chalta to sam ko Jail bhijwa k hi dam leta...πi love the line when Tinku said after long pause of Samrat's silence...that kuch bolte kyu nai..tum is tra papa ko ignore nai kar skte..then to papa.ye to apko importance hi nai de raha...πand the best thing was...when GD kept asking to Sam what was he doing on window...and he had no excused and reason to tell then only one reason did strike in my mind...and it was the same which u mentioned...n i was again so happyyy...ππ³Finally Gunjan saved Samrat...thats what he wanted..but this Tinku was trying to creat pangaaa again n again ...obviousely na..he cant see samrat in peacefull condition..n most of all his Di was trying to defend and save him...and tinku simply couldnot digest this...πand then its Samrrat's turn to tease Tinku after convinced GD...that Mukka-laat line was also very Gud...i must say...Samrat ka ek hi "Saala" he jo k us ko bht bhaari parta he...ya parne wala he...but for Gunjan he'll surely tolerate him happily...abi b to Gunjan k liye bacha lia na us ne Dad ki daant se...πExtra ordinary smart and intelligent child...that whole scene since start to end of Samrat Tinku Gunjan and GD, GM was tooo Gud..im really speechless to tell how much i love this whole update and specially for this scene...when samrat himself invited him for dinner...what a straighforward guest...my most fav part was last part of 3/3...it was outstanding part...here Tinku's irritation was worth to watch..calling Sam's bhukkadd...Chipku..n etc etc...Finally Samrat was successfull to won GD and Gm's hearts..his 1st gud impression works on them...morever he was trying to be extra smart...like taking aashirwaad and giving gyaan to Gunjan..badon se behass nai karte ..ye woo...i was feeling like laughing on this whole scene...ππthis time i dont think therez any particular my fav line..but i think the whole whole part was mine fav...but the last sequence was out standing...that "Sanskaari purush kk sanskaroon ki dukan me band krwata hun"...haan ek line thi jo mujhe bht achi lagi..."YEh kuch b khanne nai aye hen ..Yeh to Dinner khane aye hen..." oh God Tinku is sooo Sweet and soo Gud...no doubt hez my fav character in this story...kahan se dhoonda he aesa bacha...Hatts of to Joseph and S3...for making Tinku's charcter so interesting and mind blowing...and Hatts of to you guys for writting all this lines and stuff u used to write this scene..βοΈSuperb work guys...after so long u updated but with very splendid and tremendouse peice of workπSamrat's Mom Dad scene was also very nice and wonderfully written...dont know his dad is ryt or wrong at his own place..regarding to chose a life partner for samrat...what to say...samrat k past ko dekhte hue to theek hi lgta he uska dad...apni jaga...but now atleast they have to ask to him abt his choice ...atleast for once na.....but hez adamant for Yamini's proposal...Arnav and his frnd phone conversation was very nice...here again i liked one more line..that jail one was...πoverall Amazing and Fantastic update...no words to describe...π³πthanks for the pm..now continue soon the next part...π
Originally posted by: cool_tuliOMGGG m soo sorry i cannot read it now...
I have sum prior commitments to fulfill... π but will comment as soon as possible pakka... π π
The pics r soo lovely that m really desperate to read it fast...
See I said I'll edit is soon... I wonder what can be d definition of SOON π π
Awesome Teaser...!! But again CONFUSING...!!
Woahhh the 1st part of d teaser was scary... π² Arnav in that tone???? Surprising hun... that too Gunjan k saath?? Freak... I don wanna imagine wat r u all upto with this write up...!!
Very nicely explained... Superbb dialogues... Gunjan's especially... very matured n heart touching! π
Brij came to noe something???? WHAT???? I mean not d shocking waala What? Its like What did he come to noe... π Nai nai kuch mat bolo... I noe u'll say "Wait for d Story to unfold. U'll come to noe..." π But seriously this is teh best thing in your writings... hell lot of suspense...!! Loving it yaar...π
Yamini is such a B****...π‘... Poor Sam...
Samrat-Tinku conversation was sooo damn adorable mahn...! π³ π³ π³ Tinku was sooo good! Loved him soo much...! The way he teases Samrat n then manages the situation to flash a smile on his face. Sooo cute.S - WIFE...?? (shockingly) Who...? Meri ab tak shaadi nahin hui hai...T - Oh...Sorry 'To-Be' add karna bhool gaya tha...I mean "To-Be wife",Arre wohi jo last evening aapse Favicol ki tube ki tarah chipak rahi thi... But,I must say...Your face expression was so funny... lag raha tha... jaise koi vamp,kisi villain ko kidnap kar le ja rahi ho... and start to laugh... SAMRAT stopped his Cycle and glared at him so angrily...TINKU stopped as he SAMRAT's face red with anger... and looking downwards, he said meekly... "Sorry...just kidding..."SAMRAT started walking pushing his cycle along with him. TINKU too got off and started walking... mumbling... "GABBAR ke liye MONIKA Darling ! WoW !! Kya casting hai..."
π€£ Awesome dialogues...!!!! π€£ π€£ π€£ Cudnt stop myself from laughing loudly... π€£ π€£
Superbb post guys...!!! Waiting for d story to uncover itself soon... so that all these teasery stuffs r cleared... π π π
Keep writing more... not a huge comment lyk always but Teaser k liye itna kaafi hai, hai na? π π
Thanks Tuli for your belated Unreservedπ. Thanks for compliments about Pics. selection...π³
Yeh TEASER bhi Confusing...??π π. ((Promo curiosity develop nahin karenge toh Movie dekhne kaun jaayega...π))
ARNAV-GUNJAN scene is very important sequence... (Obviously,this time can't reveal main content of that sceneπ³ You know me...π³π Bachhon ko zyada tang nahin karte...π³) Yes,GUNJAN dio reflects the true situation of girls in our society ((By the way, here I am not talking about you...You are exceptional case...Sabhi tumhaari tarah 'Jhaansi Ki Raani' thode na hain...π€£))
Samrat-Brij scene is very emotional part... You can better judge that scene after reading whole sequence. Yamini...as usual... what can I say...π³??
That Samrat-Tinku scene is our favorite too... Tinku can't leave any chance to tease Samrat...π Poor Samrat... due to Gunjan he can't say anything to him...π³.
Josephβ€οΈ.
Yup Offcourse i was waiting for your reply...but no need to say Sorry..As swati told me abt your condition..and definitely You need rest and you Should take care of your self ...Originally posted by: Joseph_A
Thank you Rija for your sweet n long feed-backπ.Your comments are very precious for usπ³.Yes this time you are on time...(Umeed se bhi pehle...π³actually,want to say sorry for my very-very late Replyπ³)Thanks for appreciating Samrat -Tinku parts...π We got mixed response for it...we really respect the readers view...any way, yes They both are trying to re-difine, Tom-Jerry type chemistry. Tinku don't like Samrat because,in his view.. Samrat' car was reponsible for her Di enjury. Toh woh toh itni asani se Samrat ko chhodega nahin... That comparison with 'Spider-Man' was instant reaction for anyone.wonder,we thought same thingπ.Tinku was feeling little bit jealous...why her 'Di' protect to Samrat...π this is the another reason of her rude behavior. Second side, SAMRAT knows that GUNJAN loves her little bro too much... totally 'Tedha hai par Mera hai' type situation hai...π Tinku ko kuchh kehna means GUNJAN ko upset kar dena... 1 hi baat hai..so, 'Keep Silence' is best option for himπ.I am so glad that you liked whole Update n sequences... Thanks for liking n appreciating Tinku's character...π³ We love his character too... because,the character of Tinku is very-very important part of story... he is not only for fun making scenes... His Naughty but,mature character is 1 of the main USP of this story...without his character..story can't be move....SD is self-obsessed person...He thinks,Woh aur unke decisions always right hote hain... and this is the problem. Arnav is very sensible person... he wants Gunjan in his life with his family acceptance.. He didn't know anything about Problems of his family or Gunjan's family. We'll be reveal his family problem very soon. Its totally different from Bhushan's family problem.Thanks again Rija for your regular detailed view about this story and all updates...π Its very encouraging for us...π³ New part is almost ready...We'll be post very soon...π³Josephβ€οΈ.
Originally posted by: Joseph_A
OMG !! TL here...π² π² π²...π€£ π€£!! What a 'Besharm' followerπ²π π π€£... Ab tak Previous parts par Comment bhi nahin kiya aur Next update bhi chahiye...??π€ π.
Yaa...ZINDAGI NAA MILEGI DOBARAπ³...toh apna FF kaun se janam mein update...sorry Start πkarogi...??π
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