Originally posted by: cool_tuliI actually had to go n revise the previous update... π
but now i need to reserve it... I'll comment properly later... π
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Amazing, fabulous... such a beautiful update...! It had everything... drama, emotions, fun, everything... ekdum complete update... π N bcoz u took such a longgg tym to update this... u'll b punished... π N ur punishment is that in the next update when u'll write abt Samrat goin to meet Gunjan na!? Their meet shud b sooo mindblowing that it shud stay in our minds forever... π π³π³ No complaints, no options.. u HAVE to do this π
Okay now... the update... Thanks a lot Tuli for your this sweet Comment.I am really sorry for this late posting...π³so,I accept your punishment..π³. We'll try our best for improve that part...Please,decide after reading.π³.
Bhushan House conversation... brain bouncer...π M sooo damn confused right now regarding their decision of goin back to Delhi... I loved Gunjan allooot... the way she managed every member of her family... it was sooo beautiful...! π M dying to noe d reason but wats worrying me is that u hav not mentioned abt it in d precap... which means that i hav to die for sum more days π urrrgghh i hate you for this π π‘I know,this was the Brain bouncer for you...π π π Toh,itni tension kyun leti ho...??π π .only wait N watch naa...π.It was important n main twist of story...abhi reveal kar diya toh,upcoming light ,oments enjoy nahin kar paaogi...
Shergill house part was the best... 1st of all the way Samrat was blackmailing Rohan.π The language that u used was superbb...like "nikal yaha se" or "jaata hai kya"... n all... I had soo much fun reading it... N then later on when Yamini entered... π
aaah I just loved the way Samrat was responding to Yamini π. I was actly laughing when Samrat was replying Yamini only to make her a POPAT π π π. Bechari abla naari π ππ
And the bestest thing in that part was Samrat's expression... they r explained sooo sooo soo cutely... that credit goes to the writer (no name coz m confused who exactly writes d thingsπ )
Awesome work... πThanks for appreciating that part.π³.SAM-ROHAN conversation was very simple...we used simple common lines n language in this part.YAMINI as 'Abla naari'...?? Nice jokeπ π
Awww... Arnav... he is chooo chweet yaar... His bell ringing activity is just like me... Even I hate if my house is locked when I cum from outside.π Joseph... r u tracing me?? π Then how cum ur characters r getting similar characteristics as me... π€£ ? anyways... its soo gud to see Arnav like this...π poor thing... donno wats disturbing his family but thats not worrying me coz u hav said that u'll disclose it in d next update... n Joe if u don't na I'll put u in that ship on Juhu Beach π€£Oh !! Actually,that bell ring activity is very common n normal activity π³(Thank God ! You are normal personπ ).I don't like too.π But,seriously...We really want to show our all characters in little realistic way...Readers can be relate to them. And about you threating...π€£ π€£ π€£ JUHU beach waala ship toh kab ka dub chuka...π€£
And finally the last part... again Sam... an adorable, charming, lovable, ahem ahem... his attempt to meet Gunjan... I wont comment on it now... coz i hav given u punishment based on this thing... so after you do it.. i'll comment π
Ok Boss...we'll be waiting for your comment.π
So overall.. again a clap for u all who hav contributed to this beautiful update π!!!!
N thank u soo much for not creating much hype... otherwise my brain wud hav actly blasted out n when my mumma wud ask me the reason i wud take up u ppl's name n she wud hav hadnever spared u guys π€£ π€£ π€£ Thanks for save our life from AUNTY's anger...π€£ π€£ Woh apni naughty daughter ka sara anger hum bachhonπ³ par nikal deti.π€£ π€£ π€£.
Again... Eagerly waiting for the next update so that sum of my doubts will get cleared.. arrey haa... my old doubt isn't cleared yet if u forgot...π about Arnav's marriage to Gunjan but Grewal's regrets π³ remember na? but i guess that doubt will b cleard in this phone call... okay then I'll wait for d call... π
Till then... Gud luck and Belated Happy Friendships Day to you too... π€
Please,read the Next part...(1 of the longest part) I hope,ARNAV-ANKIT conversation se thoda doubt clear ho...(No Guarantee...Confusion increase bhi ho sakti hai).Really,very thankful to your this brief feed-back...Bye..till next part...(waise,REPLY ko re-reply bhi kar sakti ho,I don't mind)
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