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Posted: 22 June 2011 at 12:27pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by 358674

great news Smile


Thanks Buddy !Embarrassed Its definitely better for this story.

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Posted: 22 June 2011 at 12:35pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by aashizin

owww thats pleasant surprise Hug wowww it will be deg treat to get ur all  4 's update i would love to call ur team as fantastic 4 Big smile u guys rock now can't wait for update Embarrassed


Thanks AASHI for your sweet Comment.Embarrassed Nice name...FANTASTIC 4 Smile I hope...yeh Name after Update bhi use ho...LOLWe'll be next part...after some hours.Embarrassed
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Posted: 22 June 2011 at 12:41pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by SajanRox

How did you get the youtube song here?


which 'YouTube' song...?? YouTube posting is very easy..just like IMG posting... only write
[YOUTUBE]paste copy youtube link[/YOUTUBE]

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Posted: 22 June 2011 at 12:52pm | IP Logged
Wow!! what a totally Great newsClapClap...Awesome Decision josephThumbs Up...S3 are Indeed the best writers of IF..Thumbs Up...

Welcome S3Hug...

U Guys Joseph and S3 are the best  Thumbs Up..Joseph with S3 combination will rock IF I am sure of that...I am very happy that S3 are joining this FF...It will be a treat 2 read Update by all 4 of U...So plss do update soon... and Once again Great News Thumbs Up...and thanks 4 Pm JosephHug...and Joseph Thanks 4 replying 2 my comment...Smile...

Love ur friend
 GunjanSmileSmile...

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Posted: 22 June 2011 at 6:03pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by charmee_sammy

ohk thats a good news...
Welcome S3 :) would be waiting for ur 4's updt soon :)


Thanks CharmeeEmbarrassed Finally,New Part posted, now.
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Posted: 22 June 2011 at 6:06pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by gnaneswari

Wow! This is an awesome news. I'm sure that s3 and joseph's combo will rock. And don't worry joseph, take ur own time. I'll wait for ur update. Thanks for pm


Thanks LAKSHMI for your all encouraging comments.Embarrassed Now,wait is over...Embarrassed Please,read and give your precious Reply...SmileWe are waiting for itEmbarrassed.

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Posted: 22 June 2011 at 6:10pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by 1gunjan7

Wow!! what a totally Great newsClapClap...Awesome Decision josephThumbs Up...S3 are Indeed the best writers of IF..Thumbs Up...

Welcome S3Hug...

U Guys Joseph and S3 are the best  Thumbs Up..Joseph with S3 combination will rock IF I am sure of that...I am very happy that S3 are joining this FF...It will be a treat 2 read Update by all 4 of U...So plss do update soon... and Once again Great News Thumbs Up...and thanks 4 Pm JosephHug...and Joseph Thanks 4 replying 2 my comment...Smile...

Love ur friend
 GunjanSmileSmile...



Thank you so much GUNJAN for your support to my decisionEmbarrassed.And,No need of any thanks to my Reply to your comment...Embarrassed I really loved to read your detailed review.

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Posted: 22 June 2011 at 6:21pm | IP Logged
                       ...Aur PYAAR Ho Gaya !   

PART-5   (1/2)

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SAMRAT  stormed into ROHAN's room. He was muttering to himself in anger. What had just happened in the kitchen had upset him, and there was no denying that. Everything was going so well... but, that... brat...  "Samjhta kya hai Apne ko...?  Mazaak ki bhi hadhh hoti hai... Tameez naam ki toh cheez hi nahin... agar uska bhai nahin hota toh bata deta, SAMRAT se panga lena kya hota hai...
 
ISHITA - Hey...! Kya hua tumhen...? Itne gusse mein kyun ho... ? aur,khud se kya baatein kar rahe ho...?
 
SAMRAT did not respond to ISHITA. It was as If her words had not reached his ears, beacuse in his ears, words uttered by TINKU  were echoing yet. He flopped down on the bed beside ROHAN ... anger evident on his face. ROHAN looked at him and then his Mom...  Both shrugged their shoulders. ISHITA then came closer to him and keeping her hand on his shoulder asked him in a gentle voice...   "Arre ! Kya hua...? Batao toh...,aur tum yahan kaise...? Tumne toh kaha , tum Kitchen mein hi reh kar GUNJAN ki help karoge...? Phir yahaan kyun aaye...? (Asked without a single pause)
 
S - (in an Irritated tone) Main tha Bhabhi... wahin tha... Uski help bhi kar raha tha... tab tak... jab tak ki woh...
 
R - (Cuts excitedly) KYA...??  GUNJAN Di aayi hain...? aur,aap logon ne mujhe bataya bhi nahin... closed his all books and copies immediately, Main chala... Mujhe unhen mera new 'Video Game' dikhana hai... Enthusiastically ROHAN jumped off the bed. He picked up his new Video Game and was about to leave the room when he was held back.  He looked to see who was holding him back. It was his Chachu... 
 
S - Tum kahin nahin ja rahe... Tumhaari GUNJAN Di akeli nahin aayi... apne Body Guard ke saath aayi hain...
 
R - Body Guard...?? Kaun Body Guard...? Unka toh koi Body Guard nahin... (asked innocently)
 
S - Arre ! Hai naa... woh... "Short Circuit"... Kya naam bataya tha usne...?
 
R - TINKU...?
 
S - Haan... Wohi shayad... Mujhe toh uska naam bhi yaad nahin raha... turned to face ISHITA and  complained..... "Bhabhi usse bulane ki kya zaroorat thi...? Mujhe toh thik se baat bhi nahin karne di...
 
I - (strangely) Matlab... ??
 
R - You are Right Chachu...! Woh 'DD' hai hi aisa... Mujhe bhi woh bilkul achha nahin lagta...
 
S - Mujhe toh bilkul bhi nahin... waise woh rehta kahaan hai...?? Kyunki, usne kaha ki, GUNJAN ko uski Mom bula rahi hain...
 
R - Oh ! Woh toh hamare Bungalow se next waale Campus mein jo ghar hai... Ussi mein rehte hain... Wait main... Aapko dikhata hoon...  ROHAN's  fingers held SAMRAT's wrists and he almost pulled SAMRAT towards the window. SAMRAT walked with him towards the window and looked towards where ROHAN was pointing. He saw a quaint house situated on the plot next to their bungalow. ROHAN was showing SAMRAT,  GUNJAN's house with excitement.   " Woh dekhiye...woh raha GUNJAN Di ka ghar... jahaan woh 'DD' bhi rehta hai..."
 
SAMRAT looked at the house and memories of the incident in the morning flashed before his eyes. And he had a smile playing on his lips as he realized that, it was GUNJAN who had hit his car...  (( Oh ! Yeh toh wohi ghar hai jiske campus mein maine woh SCOOTY dekhi hai... yaani woh ladki...GUNJAN thi...!! not bad... really Smart girl...tabhi Bro itne cool the... aur jab maine unhen...bataya toh... woh accident topic ko ignore karne lage... Good ! woh toh abhi se hi meri puri Family ki favorite ho gayi hai... Mere liye toh koi scope hi nahin choda...(smiled naughtily)par,wait...uska woh Bhai...?? Usse itni asani se nahin chodunga... )) turned to face ISHITA  and  looking at ROHAN who had gone and stood next to his Mom, he said in a normal tone... 
 
S - Huuummm!! Phir toh uss TINKU-MINKU ka kuchh karna padega...
 
R - (Excitedly)  Good Chachu...!! Please, kuchh aisa karo... naa... jis se uss 'DD' ko achha sabak mile...
 
I - Oh ! ab bas karo tum donon...! Aur, ROHAN khabardaar jo tumne usse DD kaha... Tum usse chidhate ho tabhi toh woh tumhein...
 
S - 1 sec... usne mujhe 'MB' kaha...aur, Member of 'MBA' bhi... shayad woh Student of MBA kehna chahta hoga...but,what is 'MB'..?? waise bhi main MBA pass out hoon... Student nahin...Duffer kahin ka...
 
I - SAM tum bhi...?? woh abhi bachha hai aur...
 
S - (Raising his eyebrows in utter disbelief, he looked at ISHITA) Bachha aur woh...?? Bhabhi woh bachha nahin Baap hai Baap... saare, Shaitanon ka... Aapko pata nahin... usne kya kiya...? turned to face ROHAN ... par,usne mujhe 'MB' kyun kaha...?
 
R - Chachu ,Woh duffer nahin... Aap ko cutely abuse kiya usne (said in a tone that resembled taunting.)
 
S - WHAT ?? came close to ROHAN n asked in low volume...  Kya yeh kisi Abusing Word ka short Form hai... Waise... matlab kya hai,Iska (said in more low volume... with full Curiosity)
 
R - (Whispered in his ears) Chachu...!! MB means "MUSSOORIE BEE"...woh hamein 'MUSSOORIE ki Makhhi' kehta hai...
 
S - WHAT..?? (surprised at the word) 'MUSSOORIE ki Makhhi' ?? aur, 'Member of  MBA' means...?
 
R - Simple, woh hamein "MUSSOORIE BEE ASSOCIATION" kehta hai... Aap mere Chachu ho iss liye Aapko iss Association ka Member bana diya hoga.
 
S - OMG !! No Way...,Its really too much... He turned to face ISHITA and asked in a voice that hinted anger and disbelief...  Bhabhi sun liya aapne...Aapke uss Chhote Bachhe ki chhoti si 'Dictionary'...!!
 
I - Oh SAM... tum bhi kya inn bachhon ki baatoon mein...
 
S - Phir Bachha...?? Bhabhi...tell me, Aapko koi aur ghar nahin mila... ? I mean...GUNJAN is OK... I mean ki...thik-thak hi hai...  (And he bit his lip.  He was a bit shy to talk about ' his wife to be' . ISHITA looked at him questioningly... what was he trying to say?? She could not make out the meaning of his sentence. She just stared at him. SAMRAT saw the look on his Bhabhi's face and he composed himself. Trying to show that he was not much interested in her, he said...)  par...Uska Bhai...No way...No Chance... Mujhe toh, sirf uss CHINKU-TINKU ki wajah se apne decision par dobara sochna hoga. 
 
SAMRAT tried to act serious. He stole a glance at his Bhabhi, who was now looking at him wide eyed. Had she understood correctly?? Was SAMRAT indicating...???? No... she had to make sure... but, before she could say anything, SAMRAT continued in his put on serious tone... "Ab toh baat tabhi aage badhegi... Jab aap mujhe assure karo ki,woh TINKU-MINKU yahaan dobara nahin aayega...He is such a mannerless child...Main toh usse yahaan dobara dekhna hi nahin chahta... Aap yeh baat usse...Kya naam hai uska...haan GUNJAN... GUNJAN ko  bata do..."
 
Out side the room stood GUNJAN. She had come to tell ISHITA that she had completed the cooking and she was leaving. But, she had stopped as she heard SAMRAT's serious tone  and unfortunately, she had heard the last 3-4 lines... about her darling brother, TINKU.  She felt bad... tears brimming in her eyes. How much did SAMRAT know TINKU??  What did he know about TINKU?? Then how could he pass such comments about the kid??  His words were echoing in her ears... "Main toh usse yahaan dobara dekhna bhi nahin chahta"

... She stifled a sob as the tears left  her eyes, spilling on to those soft cheeks. She was hurting on remembering those words. She wanted to scream... yell and tell SAMRAT he thought wrong about her brother... but, as was her nature, she controlled her anger and wiped her tears. 
 
 
GUNJAN  curled her delicate fingers and knocked gently on the door. The knock startled all those present in the room. SAMRAT and ISHITA turned around to see GUNJAN standing at the door... her eyes still a bit moist. ISHITA looked at SAMRAT with a glare that showed displeasure. Though his face had the 'I Don't care' look, deep down , in his heart...  ((Kahin usne sab kuchh sun toh nahin liya...? Kahin usne bura toh nahin mana...? Main toh sirf Bhabhi se baat kar raha tha... Ok...sun liya toh sun liya... who care's...?? agar Bhai aisa hoga toh Behan ko yeh baatein sun ni hi padengi... Maine kuchh bhi wrong nahin kaha hai...,I hope,ki woh itni sensible ho ki,usse reality ko face karna aata ho.))
 
ROHAN ran gleefully towards GUNJAN as he saw her enter his room. He was happy to see his 'Di'... "Di aap kab aayin...? aur mujh se mili kyun nahin...? Aapne promise kiya tha ki,Aap jab next time aayengi,hum saath mein mera New Video game khelenge" said in complaining tone.
 
GUNJAN  looked at ROHAN and smiled. She bent to kiss him on his soft cheeks and  holding her ears, said in her sweet voice... " Sorry! But,promise next time definitely... " 
 
R - Ok. (smiled) Phir thik hai... went to near ISHITA n said softly ...Mom ! Ab main video game khelne ja raha hoon... Ok...
 
I -Thik hai... ROHAN said bye to the 3 elders in the room and ran out with his video game. ISHITA looked at GUNJAN with a warm smile... "Arre GUNJAN tum wahaan kyun khadi ho...? Andar aao Naa...
 
G - Nahin Bhabhi... woh main yeh kehne aayi thi ki,maine sab kuchh bana diya hai... PUDDING ko bhi Refrigerator mein rakh diya hai... aur "Chicken-Pop" bhi ready hai.
 
I - Oh ! Toh yeh achha hai naa...Chalo ab hum aaram se baatein kar sakte hain... bina kisi tension ke...
 
Unknow to himself, SAMRAT was smiling continuously, looking at GUNJAN. He was lost in his thoughts... of a future with GUNJAN...  ((She is really very close to every member of my Family...so sweet... (smiled)I don't think after marriage adjustment ki koi problem hogi...waise,bhi isse yahaan toh rehna nahin hai...isse toh mere saath MUMBAI mein rehna hai... But,kya yeh mere saath adjust kar paayegi...? Ok...koi baat nahin main adjust kar loonga (again smiled)She is really Perfect Mujhe toh koi problem nahin... I think mujhe toh 'YES' keh dena chahiye... But, Woh... TINKU...?? Kaash... woh nahin hota...  par,Itni sweet ladki ke liye...toh usse bhi tolerrate kiya ja sakta hai...)) The thoughts would have continued had GUNJAN not spoken and broken his chain of thoughts... her soft, sweet voice brought him back to the present... 
 
G - Sorry Bhabhi ! par,abbhi mujhe jaana hoga...woh ,Mom ko kuchh kaam hai...
 
I - Arre...! par aise kaise... Tumhein toh hamare saath abhi Lunch karna hai...
 
G - Thanks lekin, aaj nahin... TINKU wait kar raha hai... aur aap toh usse jaanti hain...woh..
 
I - He is really a caring Brother...I know, Its Ok... Aunty ko meri taraf se Sorry kehna... Main jald hi unse milne aaoongi...
 
G - Definitely, waise bhi woh aapko kaafi yaad karti hain. Ok...ab ,main chalti hoon... Smiling at ISHITA, she turned to leave. SAMRAT  did not want her to leave so soon... her presence felt nice...
 
S - ((What ? woh jaa rahi hai ...aur,meri taraf dekha bhi nahin...?? Kya main usse pasand nahin...?? but,why ? Aisa kaise ho sakta hai...? Aaj tak mujhe kisi ladki ne iss tarah ignore nahin kiya...phir yeh kaise...? woh bhi tab jab hamare rishte ki baat ho rahi hai...?? 

He looked at her and then that smile returned to his lips. GUNJAN had turned around and was walking towards him. She looked so angelic... so pretty... his trance was broken as he felt her close to him...  Finally,Tum mere paas toh aayi... (smiled) I knew it...SAM ka jadoo kisi par asar na kare yeh ho nahin sakta...so,now...come on...ab mujh se woh kaho jo,main sun na chahta hoon.))
 
She said softly, "I am really Sorry ! I know, Aapko TINKU ki wajah se kafi bura mehsoos hua hai... Uski taraf se main aapse Sorry kehna chahti hoon...
 
S - No,Its Ok...I understand...
 
G - (cuts) Thanks...and,I assure you...woh dobara yahaan kabhi nahin aayega... In fact,woh yahan aaj bhi sirf meri wajah se aaya tha...par,main aapse promise karti hoon... Next time,Main usse yahaan aane ki koi wajah nahin doongi... (said in very hurt tone)
 
SAMRAT realised that she was hurt... her voice gave away her feelings... she had heard all the harsh words he had uttered against her brother... 
 
S - ...Woh...actually,...
 
G - No...Its Ok... I know,woh thoda Naughty hai...some time thodi limit bhi cross kar jaata hai... But,woh jaisa bhi hai... I love him a lot... But,Don't worry...Ab uski wajah se aapko kabhi koi pareshani nahin hogi... and believe me...woh aapko phir kabhi bhi irritate nahin karega...
 
I - (Interrupting her) GUNJAN...! Please,Don't feel bad...SAM ka woh matlab nahin tha...He also loves kids... woh toh sirf...
 
G - I understand Bhabhi... (in a serious tone, but still looking at SAMRAT) I am not complaining... Actually,He is right...in his place but,I can't tolerate any single word against my bro.,main koshish karoongi... ki,phir,usse kisi aur ki aisi baatein na sun ni pade. (said in very hurt tone)
 
She moved her gaze away from SAMRAT as she completed the sentence.  Looking at ISHITA, she spoke in her normal, soft tone... "Bhabhi main chalti hoon... Mom wait kar rahi hongi..."
 
SAMRAT was rendered speechless. He had not expected GUNJAN to react so badly to his statement on TINKU. But this was a fact that she was hurt... and his words had hurt her... he did not know what to say...
 
ISHITA knew she had to speak up... she knew how attached GUNJAN was to TINKU.   "Ok...par,GUNJAN...Please,I am sorry...Maine kabhi nahin socha tha ki tum iss tarah... but,please don't take him wrong...
 
G - (cuts in soft tone) Its ok Bhabhi... I understand...I am really fine...par,abhi Mom ko meri zaroorat hai mujhe jaana hoga...  And she turned around and walked out, without even so much as giving SAMRAT  a glance. SAMRAT just kept looking at her as she left, guilt seen clearly in his eyes by ISHITA.  But, this time, she was not going to let it go this easily.  She looked angrily at SAMRAT... spewing venom as she spoke...
 
 "What is this SAMRAT...? Aisa kya kar diya uss bachhe ne jo tum itna over-react kar baithe...Tumhen pata bhi hai tumne kya kiya hai...? Maine last 2 months mein kabhi GUNJAN ko itna sad aur serious nahin dekha ,jitna woh abhi thi... Tum nahin jaante woh kitna pyaar karti hai apne bhai se...Kitni possesive hai woh uske liye.
 
S - Maine bhi kuchh galat nahin kaha... usse pata hona chahiye ki uske pyar se woh, bigad raha hai...zara bhi tameez nahin hai uss ladke mein. Bachhon ko pyar karna koi buri baat nahin par,har cheez ek limit mein honi chahiye...
 
I - Ok... Fine... Tumhen lagta hai tumne jo kiya woh.sahi tha...toh argument karne ka koi benefit nahin... Tum Fresh ho kar aa jaao...main Table par Lunch serve karti hoon...
 
Not hiding her disgust at his behavior, ISHITA  too was about to leave as she heard  SAMRAT's voice ... riddled with guilt...
 
S - Bhabhi...I am sorry...! (after a Pause) Bhabhi maine usse hurt kar diya... Kya woh itni si baat ke liye iss rishte se mana kar degi...??
 
ISHITA stopped as if lightening had struck her... She was shocked when she heard the words uttered by SAMRAT. Slowly, she turned around to face SAMRAT... and with shock so evident in her voice, she asked...  " WHAT...?? What are you saying SAM...?? Kaun sa Rishta...?? "
 
S - ( He came  closer  n said ) Hamara hone wala Rishta Bhabhi...Aapne dekha nahin...usne jaate hue mujh se baat bhi nahin ki...kuchh kehna toh door...meri taraf dekha bhi nahin...woh,meri baatoon se kaafi hurt hui hai...Aap dekhna... ab woh definitely,iss rishte ko 'Naa' keh degi. (said in a very upset tone)
 
Things cleared for ISHITA as SAMRAT kept on talking. She now understood that SAMRAT had misunderstood... everything...about who GUNJAN was... why she was here... everything. She had to clear this misunderstanding as soon as possible. She walked up to him and said in a caring tone... "Woh aisa nahin kar sakti SAM...woh tumhen kabhi 'Naa' nahin keh sakti.
 
S - ( Looking at her with glee in his eyes, he spoke with excitement...) WHAT...?? Aap sahi keh rahi hain...?? (Happily) Yeh aap itne confident se kaise keh sakti hain...? I mean, maine toh usse hurt kar diya... phir,bhi woh mujhe 'Naa' nahin kahegi...? Kyun Bhabhi..??
 
I - (said in a serious tone) Kyunki,usne kabhi tumhen 'Haan' nahin kaha tha SAM...aur naa hi kabhi 'Haan' karne ki soch sakti hai.
 
S - (Shockingly) WHAT?? Yeh aap kya keh rahi hain...?? Meri toh kuchh samajh mein nahin aa raha... Kya main usse pasand nahin...? Agar usse mujh se Shaadi nahin karni thi toh,woh yahaan aayi kyun...??
 
I - Tumne usse misunderstand kiya hai SAM... woh yahaan tumhaare liye nahin aayi thi... woh yahaan sirf meri aur Mom ki help karne aayi thi... Kyunki woh humein pyar karti hai...hamari izzat karti hai... GUNJAN woh ladki nahin hai SAM ,jise Mom-Dad ne tumhaare liye choose kiya hai... Woh toh koi aur hai...
 
SAMRAT was dumbfounded when he heard ISHITA say this. How could this be??  Was Bhabhi speaking the truth?? he brushed the thought aside... Then he looked at her, his eyes gleaming ... he smiled and said ...  "Bhabhi... this prank is good...but, it will not work on me... Kuchh new try karo...yeh old n boring hai...
 
I - Its not a Prank SAM...
 
S - Really...?? par,mujhe yakeen nahin ho raha...ok... now,serious ho jaate hain...Yaa,maine GUNJAN ke liye 2nd thought yaa aisa aur kuchh kaha tha but,woh waise hi tha...nothing serious...toh please,Aap bhi usse serious mat lo... aur at least,mujh se iss matter par mazaak toh karo hi nahin... hamein inn matters par serious rehna chahiye...  (still smiling)
 
I - This time,I am very serious, SAM. Its not a Joke or Prank. This is true...GUNJAN is not that 1. Dad ne jise tumhaare Rishte ki baat ki hai... woh log shaam mein aa rahe hain...
 
S - WHAT...?? (with disbelief) Aapko pata bhi hai,Yeh aap kya keh rahin hain...?? (said in very serious tone) Bhabhi... Its enough... ab bas kijiye... Maine kaha naa...Main abhi kaafi serious hoon...
 
I - Main bhi serious hoon SAM. Iss liye keh rahi hoon. Please,don't misunderstand this situation.This is not good for any1.
 
S - Yaa...! I am saying also same thing... This is not good for any1...(after a pause) lagta hai mujhe abhi Mom yaa Bro se baat karni hogi... Kyunki,ab yeh sachhai jaan ni mere liye bhi bahot zaroori hai.
 
SAMRAT was now really upset and angry. ISHITA would not be so adamant if there was no truth in what she said...  she would have admitted to the prank.  But then why was this so difficult for him to digest ?? What was disturbing him??

He just walked out of ROHAN's room, leaving a worried ISHITA behind. 
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As GUNJAN  reached the living room of the SHERGILL's  sprawling Mansion, she saw her lil bro TINKU waiting for her.  His face reflected happiness on seeing his sister. She gave TINKU  a hug and both left...hand in hand.  
 
On the way, GUNJAN was quiet. She was upset with the way things had unfolded at the SHERGILL's. She was still seething with anger as she recollected SAMRAT's words... (( How dare he...?? Woh aisa soch bhi kaise sakte hain...?? Meri hi galti hai,Mujhe TINKU ko wahaan bulana hi nahin chahiye tha...par... par...mujhe bhi kahaan pata tha ki, wahaan meri mulaqat unse ho jaayegi... par ab...! ab toh woh jab tak wahaan hain...Main toh wahaan jaongi hi nahin...aur naa TINKU ko jaane doongi...samajhte kya hain woh khud ko...? Itna kuchh keh diya... Woh jaante hi kya hain... hamare baare mein...?? Bina kuchh jaane... samjhe hi itna kuchh keh diya... Par,koi baat nahin...ab unhen kuchh kehne ka mauka hi nahin doongi... sabse pehle toh Unki Car ke damages ka fine doongi...warna unhen 1 aur mauka mil jaayega hamein point-out karne ka...))

Just then TINKU said in his innocent tone.
 T - Di kya hua...? Kya soch rahi ho...? Aur,Hum itni jaldi-jaldi kyun ja rahe hain...? Hamein ghar hi jaana hai...'Mount Everest' par nahin chadhna...
 
GUNJAN stopped n turned to TINKU n said in little strict tone,
 
G - Pata hai...Ghar hi jaana hai...aur hum wahin ja rahein hain... And she started walking again... going back to the thoughts interrupted by TINKU... only to be interrupted  again by him...
 
T - Di kuchh hua hai kya...? (asked innocently) Wait,Kahin uss GABBAR ne toh aapko kuchh nahin kaha...? tell me, I swear main usse nahin chodne waala (said in cute anger tone)
 
G - Nahin...! Mujhe kisi ne kuchh nahin kaha...aur,tum unse kuchh bhi nahin kahoge... even, unse next time baat bhi nahin karoge... (she said strictly)
 
T - Kyun...? Phir toh zaroor hi kuchh hua hai... Aap mujhe batao toh...
 
G - Kuchh nahin hua... Aur main nahin chahti ki,kuchh aur ho...Iss liye keh rahi hoon tum unse door rahoge...Ok...
 
T - Par...Di...
 
G - (cuts) Koi par-war nahin... Maine unse promise kiya hai ki,tum kabhi unhen pareshaan nahin karoge...aur naa hi unse baat karoge..agar tum chahte ho ki,tumhaari Di ka promise tut jaye toh ,Its your choice. (said in little upset tone)
 
T - Ok...phir nahin karoonga...Kabhi nahin karoonga...Kuchh kahoonga bhi nahin... (said innocently)
 
G - (smiled n caresed his hair) Good.
 
T - (( Bach gaya, GABBAR SINGH..warna,toh puri MUSSOORIE usse nahin bacha paati...)) But asked innocently...  Par...Di...?
 
G -  Par...? par...Kya?
 
T - Di...agar usne mujhse baat  karne ki koshish ki toh...?? (asked in very innocent tone)
 
G - Toh tum chup rahoge...aur unhen answer nahin karoge...
 
T - Ok... (nodded in positive) par...?
 
G - Ab kya hai...?
 
T - Di agar usne mujhe pareshaan karne ki koshish ki toh...?
 
G - Toh tum chup-chap ghar aa jaaoge...
 
T - Ok...Par...?
 
GUNJAN stopped n glared at TINKU...
 
T - (Innocently) Wo...woh...main toh bas yun hi thode se doubts clear kar raha tha...
 
G - Ho gaye naa saare Doubts clear...? 'No' means 'No'...Kuchh bhi ho jaaye...Tumhen unse baat nahin karni hai...even,unke Campus mein bhi nahin jaana hai...
 
T - Ok... par ...Di... GUNJAN glared again...he said, making a puppy face,  1 last question...bilkul Last...
 
G - Poochho...
 
T - Di...agar usne mujhe pinch kiya toh...?? Toh main kya karoonga...??
 
G - Tum unhen ignore kar doge...just like,he is invisible for you... Ok...?? anything else...??
 
T - Yaa...Last confusion... Iss baar, Pakka wala last...(said in extra cute n innocent way)
 
G - Ok...ask...
 
T - Di... Aapne kaha main unke Campus mein bhi nahin ja sakta...ok...Fine...nahin jaaoonga... But, Agar woh GABBAR hamare Campus mein aa gaya toh...??
 
GUNJAN said in iritatting way... "Agar woh aaye... Mujhe yaa Papa ko bata dena... Hum unhen sabak sikha denge... ab toh koi confusion nahin...??
 
T - Nahin... All confusion cleared now. (said innocently)
 
GUNJAN could not resist a smile. TINKU was so innocent... so sweet... she and her words meant everything to him... and all he said and did was for her...to protect her... or so he thought. It was his way of showing his brotherly love for his sister, and she knew that only too well. She placed a small peck on his forehead, her eyes moist.

TINKU was happy to see his sister smile... he missed those moist eyes. GUNJAN's smile was all he could see...all he wanted to see. He could never see her upset and he knew his silly talk  would cheer her up. And he was right. As they continued walking home, TINKU once again broke the silence... he said...
 
T - Do U know Di...woh ROHAN keh raha tha...uske Chachu... I mean woh GABBAR uske liye PS-3 laane waale hain...
 
G - ( Out of her thoughts, she stopped to look at TINKU and in a loving tone, she asked...) Tumhen bhi chahiye...? Kya,main tumhaare liye la doon...??
 
His eyes gleaming with happiness, TINKU looked at GUNJAN. He wanted to say YES... he so wanted to possess one... but, then... suddenly his smile disappeared and in a sad and serious tone , he said...  No,I don't want any Video Game or PLAY STATION... Main unke saath nahin... Aapke saath khelna chahta hoon...Mere jaane ke baad... (stopped immediately) I mean,Jab Aap chali jaayengi... toh phir toh main aapke saath nahin khel paaoonga naa...
 
GUNJAN could feel the pain in his voice. To other's this may be a casual statement made by a brother. But GUNJAN knew the hurt... the emotions TINKU was going through at that time. She wanted to say something to cheer him up, but words failed her as her eyes welled with tears...
 
T - Aur Di... Sabhi kehte hain naa ki, hamein zyada TV nahin dekhni chahiye...zyada se zyada yahaan ke pollution free environment mein rehna chahiye...woh hamare health ke liye zyada zaroori hai... TV,Computer se toh hamari aankhen bhi kharaab ho jaayengi...  (said in cutely serious tone)
 
GUNJAN was moving her hands over his head, her delicate fingers caressing his thick lock of hair. But the tears had now left the safe confines of her eyes and flowed freely down her cheeks. TINKU could feel his sister's anguish and wiping the stray drops of tears that were on his cheeks, he looked up and hated what he saw. His sister was crying... he wanted to see her smile... only smile... these tears spoiled everything... not that his sister looked awful when she cried... she still looked pretty... but not as much as she did when she had that smile.

He lifted his hands to wipe her tears and with his little fingers... touching the edges of his lips... he signaled her to smile... blinking his eyes as if pleading... GUNJAN humored him... she smiled faintly. Much better..he thought. Trying to act normal, he said...
"Di ghar chalein... ? Mom ab sach mein pareshaan ho rahi hongi..."
 
GUNJAN hugged her baby brother... tightly... her hug filled with immense love for him. She wanted to cry her heart out, but for TINKU,  she controlled herself.  TINKU was holding her tightly too... his eyes not able to retain those tears. GUNJAN knew her brother was crying.  Gently she moved him away from her and looked at his tear stained face. She wiped his tears... and just like he had... she too held the edges of her lips and spread them asking him to smile.

TINKU smiled through his tears... smiling at him, she held his hand and both walked home... along with them walked ...SILENCE...



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