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MoNayaHolicPrag IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 10 October 2007
Posts: 17474

Posted: 01 June 2011 at 11:18pm | IP Logged
Shock of my life lolz!LOL ROFL
you updated so thankyou so soo much! Thumbs Up
well maaaiinn kkyaa bolu? Ouch LOL
i dnt know! Wink
i would say better than the last update! so i think thats a positive thing! Clap
it was so much fun! Wink
well i love this character of gunjan! so different form the one in mjht! so bindaas yet simple! Smile
i loved the possessive brother! he is an absolute Cutie-Pie! Day Dreaming
tough he wasnt the show stealler this time! coz this time the show stealler was definetly the samrat gunjan scene! Blushing  Day Dreaming  Sillythe "so called first meet" coz the yhave met before but havent seen each others faces Big smile
i loved ishita and gunjan ka rapport! its awesome! Clap
well i agreee with ishita and sam mom! even i want SG to get married! Day Dreaming ROFL LOL
and yeh kya samrat ji sab galat soch rahe hai!D'oh ek word "bhabhi "  ne kya kar diya! lolz! well interesting! now sam will be wondering that whom he is gonna marry will b gunjan! abhi se sapne dekhan shuru! ROFL Day Dreaming
and he will get a shock of his life that it wasnt gunjan! Shocked
well jo bhi ho at the end of it i want to see SG married no other couple! or else i will killl you there and then! i swear lolz! LOL ROFL
aur kya bolu! amazing dialouges! Clap
then waiting for the next update! 
and hey you will not use the other banners? i made so many on sg? iss scene ke liye toh ke banta tha! LOL
welll jo bhi hai! all in all dhamaka update! i want one reallly soon! i dnt mind making anotehr banner if you upate sooner! lolz Embarrassed

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Glowing_Star IF-Dazzler

Joined: 28 December 2010
Posts: 2846

Posted: 01 June 2011 at 11:31pm | IP Logged
tooo  good..Clap amazing, fab, awesome... last part was embarrassing..Embarrassed cont soon & thanks a lot for pm..Smile 

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SandCastle. IF-Rockerz

Joined: 09 February 2011
Posts: 9388

Posted: 01 June 2011 at 11:47pm | IP Logged

after reading...

Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing

OMGGG...blushing like hell...!!!!
Will edit soon...Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing


Ok again i failed to comment 1st...Cry...but no problem coz m 1st on the 24th m so ENTHUSIASTIC to comment 1st...ROFL...hope nxt time i succeed in commenting 1st...ROFL & this time i ressed before u updated too...LOL Wah HATS OFF to me...ROFL

Ok now cuming to this was really EXTRA-SPECIAL for me as i mentioned was superb, mind-blowing, ultra-cute, terrific & Ultra-januable... & way too much BLUSHABLE...OMG I still cant blive wat i read...Blushing...was it really true?! Someone PINCH me plzzz...Embarrassed...u knw wat i read this update almost 8 times!! & this "SPECIAL SAJAN MEET SCENE almost 10 times...i still cant blive myself that i read it so many times...this can xplain to you how much ADDICTED i am to your FF...I Love this FF completely...Day Dreaming & m hoping for some more ultra januable scenes...Embarrassed

now cuming to Samrat-SM was really cute...awww...sam is the adorable son while SM is the caring & sweet mom...totally mother-son convo & way too adorable...superbly written scene...loved it...Embarrassed...Thnk god Samrat ke bathroom ka shower kharab ho gya warna "AISI" meeting "KAISE" hoti SaJan ki...ROFL...Thnk u so much SM for letting him in Brij's room...ROFL

& now cuming to ISHITA...awww...shez so sweet...a REAL character actually & not the typical nagging daily-soap bhabhi...instead a loving soul...m loving her character whu knws wat is good for evryone & wat not... & i hope that she suceeds in bringing gunjan in sam's life...*FINGERS CROSSED*...

& now Gunjan-GM scene...again a very sweet scene...totally mother-daughter convo... & 1 line was so typical said by gunjan's mother..."SALWAR SUIT tumpar acchi lagti h, atleast uss JEANS TOP se toh zyada acchi lagti h..." Its such a TYPICAL dialogue by mothers...ROFL...isse padhke meri mom ki yaad aa gyi...always telling me the same thing...ROFL...i must say u wrote the girl's convo so well...terrific yaar...simply superbbb...Clap Clap Clap

& then i loved Gunjan-Ishita-SM convo...m sure jab SaJan ki marriage ho jyegi tab in teeno ki convo's padhne me bohot mazza ayega...LOL...Gunjan is so INTELLIGENT...apni family ke saath PLAYSCHOOL banayegi...ROFL...too good Gunjan...i must say vry practical thinking...ROFL...loved this convo vry much & then i evn loved ISHITA's thoughts...shez so right...Gunjan ko koi NAA kaise keh sakta h... how true!!Embarrassed

& then cuming to my FAV scene...SaJan 1st meet scene... OMG OMG...i was like...Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing after reading was just...i dont have words yaar...i was blushing like HELL...Blushing...Samrat in TOWEL...Blushing & then...Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing...Poor Gunjan!! I really can undrstnd her condition...really a very JANUABLE scene...aisi meeting maine aajtak nai dekhi... & then Samrat assumed her as the would-be-Mrs.Samrat Shergill...?! OMG OMG m gonna fainttt...Shocked...itni ACCHI galat-fehmi ho gyi isse...ROFL...thnk god Samrat is not a DHAKKAN fact he's the SMART one here...ROFL...but i wonder wen he'll cum to knw the truth toh bechare ka kya reaction hoga?! W8inggg eagerly for it...lets see if he really chooses that YAMINIII over Gunjan...Dead...i know NEVER...hope so uski assumption sahi ho jye...plzzz joseph plzzz... & iss meeting ke liye spl.thnks to ISHITA bhabhi...really ISHITA ki JAI HO...!!ROFL...m just waiting for Gunjan's POV & Sam's teasing with her in the nxt update...i really cant wait nymore...Embarrassed & then samrat's last dialogue...Ermmm...Ahem Ahem...Blushing ROFL...i wonder how u wrote this?! I mean Mr.Khadoos writing SUCH scene is totally UNBELIVABLE...ur suceeding in breaking the image wich u created by MBYPH...Gr8 coz m really loving it...Embarrassed ROFL

& then i forgot to mention TINKU-GUNJAN was so so cute...LOL...DD...ROFL but BTW wats MB & MBA???...m curious to know... & BTW u said that "Delhi waale kisi ki bhi bolti bandh krwa sakte h..." maybe karte honge but Mumbai waalo ki kabhi nahi coz we Mumbaiwaalas r the BEST...Hum kisi ki bhi bolti bandh krwa sakte h...for eg. MoNaya...Mohit is Delhite while Sanaya is Mumbaikar & kabhi dekha h mohit ko sanaya ke saamne zubaan chalate hue?!...nahi naa...ROFL ROFL ROFL so this proves my point...ROFL ROFL ROFL...this Tinku is just like my elder-cousin bro, SID...actually mera bro isse bhi aage h...ROFL ROFL

This update was a complete package for me...BEST update of this FF till date...m in LOVE wit it completely...Superb, fantastic, mind-blowing, marvellous, terrific update...HATS OFF to you Mr.Khadoos...Clap Clap Clap
Ah! Finally i Un-ressed...Sorry for Unreserving so late...actually my Grandpa is not well & so i've cum here wit my lappy & hardly get time to cum onlyn...hope u undrstnd...really sorry yaar...doosra wala unress i'll do aaram se fursat me...Thnk You So much for bearing me & my rply...nxt time btter rply krungi...pakka promise...Embarrassed
BTW wen r u updating???...Ab toh maine bhi UNRESS kr dia, ab toh update kr do...LOL...m waiting eagerly plzzz update soon...Embarrassed


W8ing eagerly 4 nxt cont soon...ROFL ROFL


Edited by ekta_monaya - 06 June 2011 at 6:18am

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agreatperhaps IF-Rockerz

Joined: 14 March 2010
Posts: 7750

Posted: 02 June 2011 at 2:00am | IP Logged
The banner is stunning!! Waiting for you to continue! 

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Swaatii Goldie

Joined: 02 January 2011
Posts: 1034

Posted: 02 June 2011 at 2:42am | IP Logged

Hi Joseph !
I know its long time i have commented . But what to do i am really busy Dead now days .
But this part is sooo AWESOME that i can not stop my self appreciating you .
Love that sweet , little , cute , naughty bro of Gunjan . Oops i miss POSSESSIVE .
The best scene is of course of SAJAN . Haaayeee Samrat blushing . Sooo cute . Ab dekhte hain ki samrat kaise APNI chashmish ke magic se bach pata hai . By the way kya Gunjan Chashmish hai?
Wanna see Samrat dreaming of GUNJAN. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Waiting for the update
As always
luv you


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KuchBhiMatBol IF-Rockerz

Joined: 22 September 2010
Posts: 9863

Posted: 02 June 2011 at 3:24am | IP Logged

Wonderful updt joseph loved it loads thnx fr d pm

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gnaneswari Goldie

Joined: 07 January 2011
Posts: 1288

Posted: 02 June 2011 at 4:06am | IP Logged
Awesome update. Loved it. Every scene is very nice and entertaining. Kitchen convo is very nice. And sajan meeting was awesome. It made me blush. And sam is thinking that she is the girl who his parents r chosen for him! This is very intresting. And sam's mom is wrong! Sam is going to say yes for gunjan. I loved samrat's thoughts for gunjan. Waiting for next update eagerly. Sorry for my short comment. I'm very busy. Hope u understand me. Do cont very soon. Thanks for pm

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Joseph_A IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 07 February 2011
Posts: 28704

Posted: 02 June 2011 at 4:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by 358674

its awesome
tooo gud Thumbs Up

Thanks Buddy ! for your sweet comment.Embarrassed

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