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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 6:27am | IP Logged
hey joseph
awesome updateClap
loved the way u have described the bond bet tinku n gunjan their caring towrds each other
then also relation bet gunjan n her mom
very beautifully wriiten Clap
cannot wait for sajans meeting nowEmbarrassed
do cont soon
n thanks for the pm


Edited by fend - 01 June 2011 at 6:28am

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 7:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by fend

hey joseph
awesome updateClap
loved the way u have described the bond bet tinku n gunjan their caring towrds each other
then also relation bet gunjan n her mom
very beautifully wriiten Clap
cannot wait for sajans meeting nowEmbarrassed
do cont soon
n thanks for the pm


Thanks Buddy! for your precious Comment...Embarrassed.Thanks for liking the bonding of GUNJAN between her Mom n Tinku.SmileI'll post my next part today night or tomorrow morning... SaJan first meet part is main attraction of Next Update.Embarrassed.


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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 9:49am | IP Logged
Fantastic part JosephClap ...loved each n every scene Heart...u wrote so superbly that i was feeling that i m actually watching it..Day Dreaming...excellent update Joseph Star...HATTSS OFF to ur writing skills n ur ideas ClapThumbs Up...cont soon bhai n thnx for the PmSmile

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 10:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SwaNia_1

Fantastic part JosephClap ...loved each n every scene Heart...u wrote so superbly that i was feeling that i m actually watching it..Day Dreaming...excellent update Joseph Star...HATTSS OFF to ur writing skills n ur ideas ClapThumbs Up...cont soon bhai n thnx for the PmSmile


Thanks Sonia, for this sweet feed-back. Embarrassed I am really glad If,you liked it.Embarrassed your compliment is very precious for me...Embarrassed I am really missing Swati n Soham's Bhai's feed-backOuch Cry but,I know the main problem...so, I am waiting...Smile I really wish,woh jaldi se again I-F join kare...Smile. I'll post my next part in next Day MorningEmbarrassed

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 11:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Joseph_A

Originally posted by pragya_luvsajan

amazing update! 
it wasn't boring it was really nice! 
well i love the sister brother bond between gunjan and tinku! 
such loving siblings! its so nyc to see how they care for each other! 
i loved the sam brij convo too!
and both the mothers giving love to their children it was good! 
well now its a suspense for all of us too! ki who is the girl for samrat! 
and after that how will sajan meet ? 
if they meet kya hoga ? will they get married? will they fall in love ? all these questions are coming to my mind! 
aage aage dekhte hai kya hota hai!! 
well there are few lines which i really liked from this update 
like well tinku was the show stealler in terms of dialouges! 


T - Mom...'Di' koi Train yaa 'Flight' thode hi hai... jo uske aane se pehle Announcement hogi... Aapne unhen nahin dekha hoga simple...

T - Sorry Di ... Ok..Tum kahti ho toh chood deta hoon...par, Tumhen Uska face dekhna chahiye tha... Pura 'Gabbar Singh' lag raha tha woh... (and laughed...GUNJAN smiled too) but,Di...be carefull...Mom ko kuchh doubt ho gaya hai...maine situation sambhalne ki koshish toh ki...par,kya karoon...? meri reputation hi itni khraab hai ki, koi mujh par Yakeen hi nahin karta... (said innocently n made a puppy face)

T - Ok...Mom... Main jaata hoon... suddenly,came close to GUNJAN's ear n whispered... "All the BEST Di... lecture time start ,now..." smiled n left the room.


Well now i am waiting for the next update which is on 3rd will be waiting! zyada time maat lagana please! and keep rocking! 
waiting too see how you put up the sajan chemistry! :) 



Thanks a lot Pragya for your precious feedback.Embarrassed ur welcome Actually,This time I really want to show some strong bonding between Family members. GUNJAN-TINKU and SAMRAT-BRIJ bonding is only a attempt to show a loving relationship with siblings. Yeah i can see that

Definitely the character of TINKU is show staler... He is playing a very important part of this story... He is kid but,extra protective for her 'Di'. SAMRAT ko toh woh kaafi pareshaan karne wala hai...EmbarrassedLOL. Actually,this story theme is very serious... so,1 fun loving character is necessary for this. n TINKU... he is extra smart n Dangerous Kid... LOL awww i love such kids bechara samrat but hopefully the ywill bond well! and do lots of masti together1

And,about your all questions/Doubts... Please,wait till Next part...Sajan 1st meet scene is very interesting...Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed You can't forget this scene... ( Just like MBYPH...Embarrassed) AHHH I AMS OO WAITING FOR IT! :)I am still working on improve that part... Embarrassed. Anyway,Thanks a lot for your valuable advice (through PM).Embarrassed ANYDAY! I changed many scenes and concept (little-bit) after your advise...(this is the main reason of this Late Update...but,now my story is completeEmbarrassed) Good to hear that! :).I'll definitely post my next part on 03 Jun 11.Smile

And,Again Thanks for  that,'Beautiful n CuteBanner'.Smile Please,make 1 another...If Yoh have some time.Embarrassed yup i did make one! pmed u! 
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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 1:01pm | IP Logged
Reserve.Embarrassed
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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 3:27pm | IP Logged
Hey JOSEPH Buddy I have Unreserved my comment on page 18th...Pss do check ...Sorry 4 late comment...

and Banner of ur FF made by Pragya was Awesome n excellentClapClapClap...

Do Read my reply on Pg 18th...Smile...and comment zaroor karnaSmile..

Love GunjanSmileSmile...
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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 3:30pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Joseph_A

Reserve.Embarrassed


I think yeh update ke liye reserved hai Wink..RIGHT JosephWink...if yes then me 1st this time ekta...WinkLOL...

Love Gunjan...

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