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_SilverLining_ IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 15 January 2012 at 12:41am | IP Logged
cool update... do continue soon!!!!!

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Joseph_A IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 07 February 2011
Posts: 28727

Posted: 15 January 2012 at 3:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sukklover


 4 keep pming me...Big smile
  4 late commet...Ouch
keep it up this  dear..ClapClap
ur all updates r   & u add juhi...
 each n every update of urs...Star
really  ...dearClapClap
lots of     4 u sweety...
after one week ...
...Big smile
P.S.: plz don't copy paste my comments...i only made it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as i saw many of my comments r copied i'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but donn't coppied it whole as my post...Angry
 P.S.S.: Plz guys also comment on my stuff...i tried to post comment in everyones...but my most of buddies didn't comment...if u not liked tell also...plz guys...ShockedOuchConfused.

Thank you so much Tama for this sweet ReplySmile.We are really glad that you liked JUHI as ISHITA Embarrassed

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agreatperhaps IF-Rockerz

Joined: 14 March 2010
Posts: 7750

Posted: 15 January 2012 at 4:22am | IP Logged
S3 and Joseph Bhai! You all intend to kill me some day for sure!Dead

I mean.. Itne amazing ideasShocked? Where do you get them from!Confused 
Your updates are so so amazing, wonderful and CREATIVE!Clap Aur mere.. Chodo! OuchKoi comparison hi nahi hai! Approve They look awful as compared to yours any DAY! Disapprove

Starting from the beginning.. Wish you Four a Very Very Happy & Prosperous New YearHug.. 
Hope this New Year bring loads and loads of GOOD LUCKThumbs Up, PROSPERITY, HEALTH (Most ImportantlyWink), NEW FRIENDS, HAPPINESS, LONG UPDATESLOL AND AMAZING COMMENTSEmbarrassed for you! Big smile

Hope the digits prove to be lucky for all of you!Big smile

H Ours Of Happy Times With Friends And Family
A Bundant Time For Relaxation
P Rosperity
P Lenty Of Love When You Need It The Most
Y Outhful Excitement At Lifes Simple Pleasures

N Ights Of Restful Slumber
E Verything You Need
W Ishing You Love And Light

Y Ears And Years Of Good Health
E Njoyment And Mirth
A Angels To Watch Over You
R Embrances Of A Happy Years!

Well now coming back to the update! LOL
Wow.. It was simply fantastic.. And Hussein and Juhi as Brij & Ishita = Awesome Choice! Wink

I simply loved the duo as the characters you wished to present them as! Tongue Interesting ideas, cute Nok-Jhoks and some POVs made your update wonderful! Star

I truly liked the way you presented all of it .. It is like a big Surprise MAGICAL package .. Hug

The Sam- Gunjan scenes were truly marvelousDay Dreaming ! And believe me when I say that! It comes out from the bottom of my heart!  Approve

I was just imagining them once again together... Blushing 

The Pooja Conversations and the Family Time [Especially BABLOO] was stunning and I was ROFLing all the time.. And believe me when I say this that I was truly Broken Heart Heart-broken when the update ended.. It felt like SO SOON?Ouch

Anyways.. Your writing, dialogues and scenes are truly fascinating and there are so many things to learn from you! Embarrassed I wish I could also get a team like yours to have such wonderful updates but I am always left UN-HELPED!Ouch Anyways.. Bahut hogayi meri dukh bhari DASTAN! LOL

Hope you update the next part soon and I am able to read and comment SOONERLOL! I know I am 11 days LATE!Embarrassed SORRY for that part.. Did not get ample time to read .. Unhappy


Keep Smiling and Updating.. Cool

Thanks for the PM & Continue Soon! Geek

Heart Nivi!

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shikha_bhargava Groupbie

Joined: 31 October 2011
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Posted: 15 January 2012 at 11:07am | IP Logged
TongueBig smileEmbarrassedHey joseph,
Sooner or later I finally got through this FF of yours , and seriously I am completely loving it.
First of all I just loved the way you portrayed the character of samrat , not to loud but a naughty personality loved the way he teases gunjan and then I seriously admired the way you showed the bhabhi devar jodi, unlike these days the negative avatars and all you beautifully portrayed their realtionship lots of masti lots of dhammal lots of teasing with lots of love , and with juhi portraying the character was a fantabulous decision (btw congrts to her for winning this big boss season)

Now comming to gunjan I just love her , her sweetness with masti , with caring nature is all needed in a perfect girl. The way she helps everyone ,understand their grievances try to solve them , she is a completely darling . 

And how to forget my most favoirite character of this FF 'tinku ji ' . What a kid with what a brain M seriously joseph manna padega , I never saw someone naightier than him. Most probably behind the scene u may be the one portraying his character. Ab koi experienced person hi aisa kuch likh sakta hai.

And now talking about the LATEST update ,it was totally brilliant . The way you mentioned each and every scene was outstanding. Loved gunjan caring so much for samrat and he always cooking plans to irritate her , but iske peeche bhi uska pyaar chupa hai. Loved the scene were the meaning of 'agni' was mentioned never mentioned more beautiful than this. I am just waiting for the most awaited 'unofficial date' looking forward to it.

Sorry joseph, I know u sended me the links of yoir FFs early only but due to the busy and hectic schedule and work could manage to comment now. So I hope you didn't mind it.

Between all the best for your life and future updates.
Keep enjoining and have lots of fun

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gunurlove IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 15 January 2012 at 11:18am | IP Logged
Hey Joseph and S3...Very Sorry for so late comment...but honestly i didnt get time to come online and reading update and do comments..but today finally i got some time..and i read this one...As usual update was Superb Fantastic and Fabulous...thoroughly enjoyed it alot...starting with sam and his mom scene and then that pratha's one...It was wonderfull...Samrat mom is really very nice...Embarrassed...when he first refused to eat thanda pratha there i got some kind of hint that there must b going on something in his mind.then he said my Plan scene was too Gud..the way ishita was noticing him and then teased him...i thought both are playing prank on each other...and poor Gunjan totally unaware from all that Khichri..Wink..Ishita is Too Smart...afterall shez Bhabhi of Samrat scene was the soul of this update...part 1 Sajan with Ishita was realy nicely written...when ishita was trying to know abt Sam's feeling abt Gunjan and then giving suggestion to Gunjan for choosing her life parrtner carefully everything was mind blowing...ClapClapClapClapClapClapClap
i enjoyed every  bit of this update but mine most fav scene was Kitchen part 2...only Ishita nad Samrat's scene..that was something Extra ordinary kind of...u know in ur both FF while reading i always think that its a perfect new Show for Monaya..Joseph  u should b a producer and  writer too...and then u have to take Monaya together in ur new course S3 too...bcoz u have a great team work...i really mean it..bcoz whenever i read ur stories its just like a perfect show which is going on infront of our eyes and getting store in our minds with all its clearity of scenes and dialogues...ClapClap
okk that kitchen part was i loved to the core..Ishita was finding ways to confess Samrat and teasing him..and the Excuses that he was giving to Ishita to stop think abt Gunjan and Rohit Marriage were so hillarious. so meaningless...Both "Dever , Bhabhi " were Too much...and when they acted infront of Gunjan oh was beautiful scene...Very Very Well written guys...Thumbs UpThumbs UpThumbs UpThumbs UpThumbs Up...Brilliant Performance was done by both...started form "its Ok bhabi..kisi ko parwah nai the end of their was my fav scene...Embarrassed
Gunjan is such a innocent so easily she beleived on what ishita said..her praying and worrying scession for her future was also Mind blowing...Thumbs Up
Dinning table scene was also nice.i think now she must be thinks that hez really very irritating..but when i read abt that diffrent feelings i was quite happy...Wink.
Samrat's mom so wished to make Gunjan her Bahu only...Shez indeed Perfect for her son..but there are so many barriers in is SD and the 2nd is Arnav...that going to market scene was also Superbly written...naughty Samrat with his naughty ideas...awww hez so in love wid her..hope he soon get his desire...but lets see...Sam's mom thought scene was Awesome...Poor mom didnt know how much her son is in love with Gunjan...Big smile i think after knowing this truth SM will b the happiest person among all...
Guys Is there any Proeblem with Gunjan?..OuchOuchOuch.i felt such like by that medicines lines..Conversation between Gunjan and her mom...plz reveal soon this mystery na...
OVERALL it was Mind blowing part...IShita nad Gunjan made a Perfect and Best devrani jethani CoupleSmile
plzzz continue soon the next part and thanks for the pm

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Joseph_A IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 07 February 2011
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Posted: 15 January 2012 at 6:35pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by fend

hey guys Hugawesome update loved itClap
loved sajan scenes it was really very cuteEmbarrassed gunjan is soo sweatHeart
loved ishita n sams convo it was very niceSmile beautifully written ClapStar gr88 gng guysThumbs Upnow cannot wait for the next part cont soon n thanks for the pmSmile

Thank you so much Rukma for this sweet replyEmbarrassed.We are really glad that you liked the whole parts of this UpdateSmile.Now,we are working on Next part...It will be post so soonEmbarrassed.

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Joseph_A IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 15 January 2012 at 7:08pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by arzzo

first of all really really sorry for the late comment i am a lil busy these days so sorry Embarrassed and now about the update
it was super duper cool just love sam he is so samrat i mean smart and now ishita on his side he becoming smarter so starting from mornin scene
sam and his mom was sooo sweett and cute love their mothe son talk willl with fake anger and lots of lots of love an sam being a great actor trick his mom and confrm her views about gunji love the dialogues and the the love for gunji in sams mom heart the my fav dish aloo kah paratha and sam nakra about paratha being cold was reaally sweet and cute then my fav kitchen scene love the way sam was trying to get gunji hand made paratha and ishita all being naughty and after all he is samrat then she is his bhabhi love and enjoy their scene in the kitchen ishita trying to get sam speak up his feeling and sam giving stupid reason to ishita for avoiding rohit and gunji wedding and at last ishita win and sam speak up ishita dreams come true she always want gunjan and sam too be together and then the lafanga wala dialogue was really awesome and ishita knows gunji so well she also give the same comment as gunji and then gunji pov about sam being a tantrum thrower and suddenly the idea of arnav being like sam strike on her mind and she get tense the whole pov was sweet and innocent then again the kitchen scene where sam act as no one is more innocent then him and gunji being a real sweet and innocent girl get trap i reall love the scene when she stops her in the mid and the table scene was really sajan part where even gunjan feels something strange love the stupid reasons given by sam of not eating alone and poor gunji was indeed surprise of his reasons the family tym was cool sam called babloo oh i can understand what he shoulb be feeling at that tym soo embrassed and then the poja description was gud sams mom pov was indeed emotionall she desire to see gunji her daughter in law now that we have sams mom brij bhaiya will also be ready for gunji and ishita is already on sam side now we left with sams dad so i know sam will come out with something and with family support nothing is hard and now gunji call conv is really tense i am really confused i think some one is going through a dangerous disease and it may be tinku bt lets see wait and watch love the way sam always get glimse of gunji and sam being sam has also make gunji ready for an unnfocial date according to him and gunji is comp unknown of it love rohan gunji and ishita scene it was really sweet  and yah one request can u also give pics of rohan and tinku pllzz  its an request its not necessary ok if u can u can give i am not insisting

Thanks Arzzo for your detailed viewEmbarrassed.We really loved to read it.Don't feel sorry for late...actually,I should say sorry for late answeringEmbarrassed.

Yes...SAMRAT is really Samrat...I mean SmartLOL.SAMRAT is favorite of his Mom..n he knows,wants to take benefit for itEmbarrassed.Ishita is smarter then Samrat...finally she trapped himWink. Gunjan is too innocent for caught their plan.She is so caring person...n she also don't know why but,she cares Samrat...same time she knows the fact that her marriage has been fixed with,she scared about his habits n behaviorEmbarrassed.

Samrat hates to his Nick name..LOL.SM really wants to Gunjan as her Daughter-in-Law. Disease part will be reveal soon.and about Pics of Tinku n Rohan...I think we posted Tinku's pic before...[Check this]

n yes we'll be definitely try to post Rohan's pic too.EmbarrassedThanks again for your sweet feed-back.

Edited by Joseph_A - 15 January 2012 at 7:13pm

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agreatperhaps IF-Rockerz

Joined: 14 March 2010
Posts: 7750

Posted: 16 January 2012 at 3:24am | IP Logged
You did not reply on my comment! :( Apologies again .. [For the late comment]

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