Posted: 29 December 2011 at 7:46pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by 1gunjan7Hi My dearest friends Joseph,Soham,Sonia,Swati ......
1stly SORRY Sorrry for so so late comment...I know you all updated on 17th nov and My comment is coming so so late ......Once again I am really SORRY guys......
The update was just too too out-standing, fantabulous, Mind -Blowing,rocking, awesome, amazing and SUPERB...Gr8 work Joseph, Soham, Sonia, Swati......Your FF's are getting interesting and excellent with every update..each new update is more rocking and more superb then the last one...I am enjoying reading the updates of FF very very much...in this update also I loved reading and Visualizing each n every scene...fantastic work ..
the starting was very good...U very well described the emotions of GM n GD...each was very sad about what had happened in their past and what they and their children had will go thru in future...each was in deep pain and both were trying 2 hide their pain from the other and both were trying 2 comfort the other and be strong 4 one another and their children.Whats wrong ? whats happened? I feel something very bad happened that has reduced GM n GD 2 tears.....from their conversation I came 2 1 conclusion that whatever happened in their past concerns their children...as when something is wrong with the children and something is about 2 happen 2 them and thinking of their pain and what they will have 2 go thru and face in future...after thinking all this and only their childs pain can make PARENTS cry so much...The way u showed amit(GD and Nisha(GM) pain it was shown in so excellent way that their pain bought tears 2 my eyes...u very well showed their deep pain and feelings....AM I right that what tragedy happened concerns Gunjan and Tinku...??Let's see whether I am right or not...Gunjan and her father amit scenes were very sweet...I loved them and their father-daughter conversation...Parents love their children very much and 4 them each child whether its a girl or boy is equal and same they love both equally ...But as a son is the apple of mothers eyes same way daughters are apple of fathers eyes...Fathers love their sweet daughters very much and fulfill their every wish N they can do anything 4 their little girls..and they protect their daughters also from pain...In this GM n Gunjan part also this was excellently shown AMIT concern for Gunjans fast driving and telling her he will bring medicines ...and 1st he had said he won't eat breakfast but when Gunjan said Breakfast khanna hai he couldn't say No 2 her...In this part father-daughter understanding protectiveness and love is excellently shown...Loved this part ...This is the 2nd time topic of Medicines have come up 1st tinku said 2 gunjan medicine le lii di...Now GD asked about medicines...What I am wondering is IS GD talking about general everyday Medicines like Vitamins and BP etc or Is their more 2 this part??...
Shergill break fast scene was also superbly written...every characters feelings emotions and POV was superbly described...SM and SD scene was interesting SD was trying 2 catch SM attention But she was not looking at him As she had enough of his arrogant and stubborn thinking...their conversation showed SM and SD feelings both for many situations...Why is SD always so rude towards samrat...? they have a deep conversation gap ...He doesn't understands his son at all & thinks him good 4 nothing...he doesn't realize samrat is very intelligent n good in his work...SD is still in the same frame of mind of How samrat was in college...he doesn't accept his son has changed 4 good..Samrat has come 4 holidays and for his marriage purpose and SD wanting samrat 2 still wake up very early morning When he is on leave from work was very strange ...Though he loves Samrat but he doesn't understands his views and thinking at all..But SM loves and is somewhat trying 2 understand Samrat now.....though she is still wondering about Samrat-yamini pic but has realized that samrat doesn't like yamini...and she also has realized what type of girl yamini is and she doesnt have any good qualities and her each conversation showed that she wants a sweet girl like Gunjan as her bahu and samrat's wife and she wants samrats happiness and even Brij and ishita n rohan like gunjan and not yamini...BUT SD I was shocked the way he behaved so rudely towards Gunjan...IS THIS The way 2 behave with a guest in ur home ?? Even if u donot like someone u never behave the way SD behaved ....What I was wondering was WHY SD doesn't like Gunjan..why is he so rude towards her??...she is so sweet caring and loving girl so why doesn't he like her??...and Is it because gunjan is from middle class family ??..I saw 1 think in this part that 4 SD this rich and middle class thing matters and even though SD has realized yamini has many bad habits and faults even then he is ready to look away from Yamini's faults and accept her as his bahu she is from rich family and share same standard as him and as for SD his word his everything...and he knows his whole family likes Gunjan more and not yamini and he has realized they will love if Gunjan becomes samrat's wife and their daughter-in-law and he knows Gunjan is a very good girl with awesome qualities which they want in their bahu and yamini lacks good nature & qualities and they both can't be compared. I think that is why SD is rude towards gunjan and doesnt want her 2 come 2 his home and he doesnt want his family 2 get 2 attached 2 gunjan and he thru his rude behavior was making sure every person in his house understands this and that he wont change his decision...THIS is what I think about SD rude behavior why he is behaving this way suddenly now...Lets see whether I m right or not.....I think SD should change himself and stop this attitude of I AM ALWAYS right.. this stubborn & arrogant nature before samrat and his family rebel against him ..I didnt like SD behavior towards gunjan at all ...his saying He will tell gunjan himself 2 stop coming here These words of SD SHOCKED ME and made me think How can a person behave so rudely towards a person who has never harmed him n his family who is so loving ..how can SD HATE her just 2 get his way in his house???...SD...SM n BRIJ are very nice ...and I loved it the way SM questioned SD about His rude nature towards Gunjan and why he is doing this...and I think if Brij hadnot handled the situation then arguement would have happened...interesting part...This part made SD nature more clear and showed how stubborn and arrogant he can be and also cleared the whole family views about different things and yamini...Nicely shown n written part.......
I just loved this part ...ISHITA and Gunjan part was superb...their love care and feelings 4 each other was excellently shown in this part ...their each conversation showed how much they both respect ,love & care for each other...their deep friendship and understanding was superbly described and shown in the whole part....I loved the way gunjan teased Ishita about Baby thing and took care of her gave her medicine and told her I will take care of everything and u rest 4 a while and then Ishita teased Gunjan about that she will tell brij that Gunjan teased her about Baby part and Gunjan so sweet n innocent didn't realize she was being teased and got scared and I loved the part when Ishita called Gunjan her little sister so sweet ..It showed How much deeply she loves Gunjan ...and ishita thoughts when Gunjan said samrat is nice Ishita immediately realized something has happened 2 change Gunjan's opinion showed how much she understands gunjan... and when she realized that Samrat likes Gunjan and may want her 2 be his wife...the way ishita got excited showed she loves this idea very much and she also doesn't like yamini like her M-I-L and Brij ...and 3 of them r of same opinion infact I will say 4 of them including Samrat think same and want Gunjan as shergill bahu......I loved Ishita's excitement......her thoughts that she will help samrat but she will wait till samrat tells her himself about his feelings and her thoughts about making everyone agree He M-I-L and brij were awesome...I just loved the whole part very very very very much...I wish kash Ishita-gunjan part thoda aur hota...EXCELLENTLY part ...
Now SAJAN PART...wow!! kya awesome part thaa yaar...mazza aa gaya...whole situation visualize karkey...My memories of MJHT and sajan and samrat sleeping in shorts and Gunjan woke him up these memories were refreshed......Pictures choosen suited the part fully ...nice pic...Loved the whole part very very much guys.........Gunjan hesitation 2 enter the room and calling samrat from outside and rohan teasing Gunjan about samrat sleeping habits and when gunjan entered the room and her calling samrat ..1st Samratji...wow!! samratji...I felt as if she was calling her husband ..Suniyee ji but here samrat ji ...and when she called him MR SHERGIL...MAN I felt as if 60 saal ke old person ko she was calling...She is so sweet she couldn't decide what 2 call samrat...and her tripping on bed wow!! and Samrat thinking he was having dream and calling her chashmish Gunjan getting angry WOW!! so sweet.....and when samrat woke up Man his acting ...Samrat bhi GUNJAN Ko tease karney ka koi moka nahi chodata......I was roffling so hard .......his words what u doing here ..kya hum ladkoan ki izzat nahi hoti kya ..Kahin subha subha asa wasa kuch ho jata uske sath His these words and when he said to her I hope tumney kuch wrong benefit nahi liya hia OMG!! SAMRAT SO NAUGHTY...and when he teased her about his sleeping habits shorts think ...Just Like Rohan teased her and POOR Gunjan she is so innocent she believed samrats each n every word..she didnt realize even 4 1 moment he was teasing her... ...and when he pretended 2 call his mom n bhabhi...OMG!!...What an excellent infact super duper awesome Sajan part ...Loved it immensely .....SUPERB PART And My most favorite...and awesomely written part......U know the way SAMRAT and Rohan teased gunjan about Same shorts thing.....I thought 1 thing BOTH Chacha-bhatija are the same........Rohan full on has gone on his chacha and also agrees with his chacha's every word...I remembered this SONG 1 line---" KYUN Bhai chacha haan bhatija"......and I donot remember But I think chacha-bhatija was a movie also......Awesome part...
Now ARNAV part ...OMG!! was shocking...the man who always was shown 2 love Gunjan so so much that he was even willing 2 do anything and confront his family about why they not answering his questions about her Now when his friend emailed something 2 him His attitiude changed ...what was in that email and what did his friend tell about Gunjan that changed arnav thinking and made him say this how could she do this ...and he even deleted her pic from his lappy......and he was suddenly supporting his family and decided not 2 do anything against their wish they have suffered enough and now he has decided 2 go 2 delhi ... these thoughts of Arnav and his actions confused me and is making me ask again What happened 2 years back that changed everything and which is giving everyone pain..and why did ARNAV say yeh nahi ho sakta woh asa kasey kar sakti hai......???????? whats the meaning of these words??...and why does Arnav family donot like Gunjan anymore?? what happened......I think something BIG happened...BUT WHAT???......
Awesome and Outstanding update Joseph,Soham,Sonia,Swati...Very well written...BAHUT BAHAUT MAZZA AAYA WHOLE update and each and every part scene and dialogue READ and Visualize KARKEY...Excellent work My friends...and Once again Sorry 4 my late comment......
Thanks 4 Pm and do update soon ..very curious 2 know what will happen next......
Now MBYPH's turn ...I will read part-35 soon and reply soon also S3J...
Love your good friend
Thank you Gunjan for this sweet feed-back.Its really very precious for us this time , sorry for this very late reply to you.
parents, even a slight scratch on their child brings tears to their
eyes. So it is but obvious that something huge has happened, that is the
reason for their sadness. However, you will have to wait to find out
what it is as gradually all the reasons will be revealed.
father-daughter scene is a normal scene, in almost every household,
where the daughter is perhaps the only one who gets the Dad to listen to
her. Medicine mystery will be unfolded soon.
is not that Samrat's Dad does not understand him. But , he is hurt
when he hears people speak something bad about his son and then he can
only vent his anger on his own people, not outsiders. So he is a bit
harsh with Samrat. He wants Yamini as his daughter in law for... SD is rude towards Gunjan.n he has some reason behind this....He doesn't want to take any chance.Yes...'Social Status' is also important for him.
am right is what most people think and this does cloud their normal
thinking process, but it is characters with this trait that help the
story move forward. Smarat's mom knows her son. She is after all
another, who can read her child's mind... so she has guessed that
Yamini may have been her son's choice once, but maybe not anymore. But
typically, she is unable to voice her thoughts.She wants to respect her hubby decision.
and Gunjan share a Great bond of friendship, but here too, Gunjan ensures she
does not cross the line. She just says it to lighten the atmosphere.Ishita really likes her qualities...so,wants her for Samrat.
part...our favorite too. Writing this scene was a pleasure and we had
to ensure, it did not turn out cheap and sleazy. MJHT will always have a
place in our hearts and we will always write some scenes that bring
back those wonderful memories of SaJan. So, Samrat will never change. he
will need any reason to tease Gunjan. Arnav now knows the reason his family refused to talk about Gunjan. He is shattered, but...after all he is family person...His family is his first priority. He is right on his place... we'll be unfold the reason of his family decision in Next Part.
This story is really close of my heart... because,Its based on a real incident and I am witness of that family tragedy [here,Gunjan's family].As a outsider...is very easy to blame to anyone but, Its not fair... Everyone has own view... own problems... n some times uncontrollable circumstances... and most importantly...Destiny can never change. We'll be Update Next part on 3rd Jan.12... will be wait for your about that part also...