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                            ...Aur PYAAR Ho Gaya !   

PART  13 :   (5/5)  [with New Edition]



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As GUNJAN walked towards SAMRAT, who was continuously staring at her, she smiled... and then in her honey sweet voice, she asked him... " Kya hua...?? Aap aise kya dekh rahe ho...?? Sorry ! woh thodi der ho gayi...woh kitchen mein...
 

But before he could say anything, TINKU came and stood in front of him and looked at his 'Di' who was surprised to see him here...lovingly, she asked him... " Arre! Tum kab aaye...?? Meri Mom se jab baat hui, toh unhone batyaya ki,tum...
 
TINKU clutched her hand as he cut her off, saying... " Haan ! Di ...par,jab Mom ne bataya ki,Aapki call aayi thi aur aap Market ja rahi ho toh...  Just then his eyes met SAMRAT's eyes, who was signaling him to keep quite... his index finger on his lips...

TINKU let go of GUNJAN's hand as he looked downwards... leaving a surprised GUNJAN looking at him. In a fake strict tone, SAMRAT turned to GUNJAN and said... " Woh sab baad mein...Now,tell me... Tumne usse hamare ghar aane se mana kyun kiya...?? "

 
GUNJAN looked at TINKU angrily... who looked at her dolefully and then again looking downwards, he said... innocence spilling out of every word he spoke... " Wo...woh...Inhone kaha ki, Tum andar kyun nahin ja rahe...?? toh,maine sirf yeh bataya ki,aapne mujhe mana kiya hai... after a small pause... Bas...itta hi bataya... sachhi... aur toh kuchh bhi nahin kaha... " said so innocently. 
 
S - (in fake strict tone) Usse kyun darra rahi ho...?? Jo kehna hai meri taraf dekh kar kaho... Bachhon se koi aisi baatein karta hai kya...Bachhe toh bahot hi masoom hote hain... bilkul 1 'nazuk phool' ki tarah...??


This statement of SAMRAT's stunned GUNJAN ... who looked at him, her mouth open. As SAMRAT waited for an answer, she closed her mouth and ran her tongue over her lips... and then, her tone soft, she said... " No...Mr.SHERGILL !! Actually, woh...aap kal...
 
S - (shock evident in his tone, he cut her off...) What...?? Kya kaha tumne mujhe...?? Mr.SHERGILL...?? Kya main tumhein itna senior yaa serious type insaan lagta hoon... Jo tum mujhe itne formal name se bula rahi ho...?? Maine toh kabhi tumhein, Miss BHUSHAN nahin kaha...


This time too, before GUNJAN could say anything, yet again, her possessive lil brother spoke... " Toh...?? Aur kya kahengi woh...?? Aapne hi toh kal hamein, khud ko Uncle yaa Bhaiyaa kehne se mana kar diya... toh hum kya karte...?? Hamein kuchh samajh hi nahin aaya so,humne yehi name decide kiya... Kya aapko yeh bhi pasand nahin..?? " asked innocently...
 
SAMRAT was not looking at TINKU...his eyes were fixed on GUNJAN... he walked slowly towards her...she looked downwards... she could feel something different...but her awkwardness was evident as she looked up and then looked away... SAMRAT came close to her and in a husky voice, he asked her... " Kya jab tak 1 rishte ko naam nahin mil jata... Tum mujhe mere naam se nahin bula sakti... woh itna bura bhi nahin..., Chashmish...!!  and smiled...


GUNJAN
did not know what to say... She was totally confused...what is the meaning of his sentence..?? she tried reading his eyes, but was unsuccessful... but she knew...his smile, his eyes wanted to say something...her fluttering heart seconded her thoughts... she looked at him ... 
 
TINKU hated the sight he saw...his Di and SAMRAT so close to each other... and that nick name...'CHASHMISH'... He scurried over to where the 2 were standing and pushing SAMRAT away, he growled... " Thoda door reh kar baatein nahin kar sakte ...?? Aur ,Aapne abhi meri 'Di' ko kya kaha...?? "Chashmish"...??  How dare U...?? Meri 'Di' koi 'Chashmish-Washmish' nahin hai... Woh toh generally specs pehanti bhi nahin... Phir,aap unhein 'Chashmish' kyun keh rahe ho...?? Aur,aapko kaisa lagega,agar hum bhi Aapko 'Lafanga' yaa 'Bhukhhad' kahein toh...?? (said so angrily)
 
S - (shockingly) What ?? 'Lafanga'... aur 'Bhukhaad'...?? Kaun..main...?? angrily, he looked at GUNJAN who had shut her eyes in exasperation... SAMRAT then looked at TINKU and said...anger clearly audible as he spoke... Tumne...Tumne mujhe abhi 'Bhukhhad' kaha...?? Main...main tumhein... (said in totally threatening way)
 
T - (cuts in same tone) Hello ! Main aapse darrta-warta nahin... Agar aap meri 'Di' ko 'Chashmish' kahoge...toh main bhi aapko 'Bhukhhad' kahoonga... aur haan saath mein 'Lafanga' bhi...(point his index finger to him as a threaten style)



As she opened her eyes slowly,GUNJAN realised that a war of words was on the cards... no one was going to back off... she looked at SAMRAT who looked very angry... (( Oh !! Abhi thodi der pehle...yeh mujhe lecture de rahe the ki,Bachhon se kya kehna chahiye...aur kya nahin... uss waqt toh inhein bachhe 'Nazuk phool' nazar aa rahe the...!! Ab kya hua...?? I knew it...yeh donon jab bhi milenge... aisa hi hoga... issi liye toh TINKU ko roka tha...?? Ab kya karoon...?? Kaise rokoon inn donon ko...?? Yeh donon toh aaj ek dusre ko chodne ke mood mein nahin lag rahe...God ! Please help me))

She quickly walked over to them and stood between them... she then turned to TINKU and keeping her hand on his shoulder, she bent slightly n said in little voice but with a strict tone... " Dekha...!! Issi liye , maine kaha tha... Yahaan nahin aane ko... Lekin,tum ho ki, kabhi meri baat hi nahin sunte... Main..."
 
T - (innocently) Aap mujhe kyun daant rahi ho...?? Isse kuchh kyun nahin kehti...?? Aapne suna naa...Inhone kitni 'badtamizi' se aapko 'CHASHMISH' kaha...?? (said in totally complaining tone) How dare he...?? (more angrily)
 
SAMRAT was furious... (( Saala !! Yeh toh perfect 'Narad Muni' ka avtaar hai... Yeh toh kisi ka bhi 'Break-up' karwa sakta hai...!  'Badtamizi'...?? Kaisi 'Badtamizi'...?? CHASHMISH toh pyaar se kaha tha...?? Issne toh puri feelings ko hi change kar diya... Abhi-abhi toh laga tha iss se 'friendship' ho gayi...lekin... yeh...yeh toh... CHASHMISH ka khyaal nahin hota abhi jaakar Aunty se  iski complain karta... wait ! Isse toh baad mein sabak sikhaoonga... lekin,abhi kisi tarah yeh situation sambhal jaaye... )) 
 
GUNJAN knew there was no way TINKU was going to stop... so she did what she thought was the next best thing... she turned to face SAMRAT and lip synced asking him to apologise to TINKU... SAMRAT looked at her in disbelief and standing behind her, TINKU was wondering what was going on...  his confusion clearing shortly when SAMRAT spoke in a huff...
 
S - (Questiongly) What...?? No way... !! I'll not say sorry to anyone !!
 
GUNJAN brought her palms together and joined them and pleaded with SAMRAT...who was not going to give in either... he looked away...
 
TINKU walked over and stood in between them and then looking at GUNJAN , he asked her... " Kya hua...?? Aap isse daant kyun nahin rahin...?? Ok ! Fine... mat daanto... phir,main aapko yahaan akela nahin rehne doonga... Aap abhi chalo mere saath... waise bhi, Mujhe aapke saath abhi kahin jaana hai...aur..aur...Aapko kuchh dikhana bhi hai..."

holding her wrist, he started pulling her away from SAMRAT...she stopped him as she gently freed her wrist from his grip and spoke softly...
 "Achha Baba...Chalti hoon... bas 2 minute toh do... she turned to look at SAMRAT who had a shocked expression...he could not believe that she was leaving...

 
She smiled at SAMRAT as she spoke... " Sorry ! I think,mujhe jaana hoga... I M Sorry ! agar aapko TINKU ki kisi baat ka bura laga ho toh... I M extremely sorry... ! " said in very sweet n soft tone


and she held TINKU's hand and started walking away. But they had barely walked a few steps when they were stopped by SAMRAT's words... " Ok ! Fine... !! I M Sorry !! "
 
Glee writ large on his face, a smirking TINKU turned around to look at SAMRAT... as he said excitedly... " Aapne hamein kuchh kaha ? "
 
He was not looking at TINKU...his eyes were fixed on the girl of his dreams as she slowly turned around to look at SAMRAT...as their eyes met, he said once again... " Haan...Tumhein hi kaha... Sorry ! Ab toh koi problem nahin...? "

GUNJAN  looked at SAMRAT...what was it that his eyes were trying to convey?? Why was she sure that he wanted to say something but was faltering?? He kept looking at her as she tried reading those emotions in his eyes...and God knows how long this unspoken dialogue would have continued had TINKU not got them out of their trance...
 
In his victorious tone, he said... " Good ! Achha hua jo aapne Sorry keh diya... warna toh... (said again in threaten way)
 
SAMRAT looked at TINKU and then at GUNJAN who smiled at him and muttered just ' THANKS...! ' SAMRAT said nothing and looked at TINKU...forcing a smile so as to camouflage his feelings for him, he thought... (( Saale ! Kahoonga... Roz kahoonga...1 baar nahin... Baar-baar kahoonga...

CHASHMISH... CHASHMISH... CHASHMISH...

bas,sirf tere saamne nahin kahoonga... Bas 1 baar shaadi ho jaane de... uske baad toh sabke saamne bhi ''Chashmish hi kahoonga... phir,dekhta hoon tab tu kya karta hai... Hadhh hai Yaar ! Apni hone waali wife ko koi 1 pyara sa 'Nickname' bhi nahin de sakta kya...?? ))
and came close to him...
 
GUNJAN looked at TINKU and lovingly patted his cheeks as she asked... "Dekho...ab toh unhone sorry bhi keh diya... Ab toh sab thik hai naa...?? Ab batao...Kyun aaye the...?? Kuchh kaam tha kya...?? aur kahan jaane ki baat kar rahe the...?? Tum kuchh dikhane ki baat kar rahe the..??   
 
But before TINKU could say anything...SAMRAT cut him off...keeping his hand a bit with force on TINKU's shoulder and then moving his hand to put it around his shoulder, he clutched the collat of his shirt  and said in a fake happy tone... "Wo...woh...kuchh nahin... actually, woh bas thoda naraaz ho gaya tha naa...iss liye... wait...mujhe usse akele mein bhi 'achhe' se sorry kehna chahiye... Tum...tum... yahin ruko... Hum akele mein apni problem sort out karte hain... ok...?? " 
 
and He pulled TINKU along with him as they walked a little away from GUNJAN... and said...
 " Look ! bahot hua ok...!! Hamari baat hui thi naa... ?? Ki,main uska 'First-Aid' karaoonga...aur tum hamamare beech problem create nahin karoge...?
 
T - (innocently) Toh..?? Iska matlab yeh thode hi naa hai ki,Aap meri Di ko 'chashmish-washmish' kaho... aur ek dum se unke paas hi jaa kar khade ho jaao...
 
S - Ok...Fine...!! Ab se 'Chashmish' nahin kahoonga...
 
T - Aur unse door khade rahoge... 'shareef' aadmi ki tarah... (said in ordering tone)
 
S - (in full irritatting tone) Achaa... Door hi khada rahoonga... ab toh thik hai...??
 
T - Aur unse 'Lafangon' ki tarah baat bhi nahin karoge... (ordered to him again)



SAMRAT
  let go of his collar as he smirked and said...
 " Iss se pehle ki tumhaari 'Do n Don't' List khatam ho jaaye... I think,mujhe abhi Aunty ko sab bata dena chahiye...ya phir tumhaare PAPA ko... said in threatening way... n turned to GUNJAN side with fake smiling face... said with extra sweet tone ,


 
" Now...! all problems sort ho gayin... looked at TINKU side... he was stood there with a confusion... He asked to GUNJAN again ...waise tumse poochna toh bhool hi gaya... Uncle kab tak aa jaate hain...? Bank se...??
 
G - (suprisingly) Jii...par...PAPA...??
 
S - Haan... wo... woh... soch raha tha unhein bhi 'Pooja' mein bula loon...Kyun TINKU ?...maine sahi kaha naa...??
 
TINKU knew what SAMRAT was hinting at... clutching SAMRAT's hand in his palms, he pleaded... " No... No... Aap... Aap...unhein kyun bulayenge...?? Woh... woh... toh shaam tak aate hain... said quickly with worried tone.



This time the look on GUNJAN's face was that of surprise... as she asked...  " What..? Lekin... Tumne abhi tak toh bataya hi nahin ki,tum kyun aaye the...??

TINKU looked at downward side n said in very soft tone.. " Nahin... Koi bahot zaroori kaam nahin tha... Woh ghar par akele bore ho raha tha naa... issliye milne aa gaya... (looked at her) Aap Market se kitni der mein aaogi...??

GUNJAN caressed his hair ,lovingly...smiled n said in very soft tone... " Bas...thodi he der mein aa jaaoongi... " made a sweet insurance...to him...


SAMRAT
came close to GUNJAN..n asked in very strange way...
" What...?? Tum.. tum... 'Pooja' mein nahin rahogi...?? "

GUNJAN stood quickly n said in her soft tone...with smiling face " Nahin ! Woh actually,Aunty ne abhi 'Pandit Jii' se baat ki...unhone kaha ki,unhein aane mein thodi der ho jaayegi...aur waise bhi , yeh 'Navgrah Shanti' ki 'Pooja' hai... wahaan 'Family Members' ko hi hona chahiye...Main wahaan ruk kar kya karoongi...?? Wahaan mera ab koi kaam bhi nahin... "

TINKU respond so excitedly, "Sach !! Wow !! Phir thik hai...Aap jaldi se  jaao... I'll wait for you...waise bhi mujhe aapko kuchh 'very spl.' dikhana hai... " said so happily...

SAMRAT glared to him...n said in very strict tone... " No way !! Woh kahin nahin jaayegi... Woh 'Pooja' mein zaroor rahegi... n turned to GUNJAN side... n said with same tone... "Look ! Mujhe yeh sab 'Pooja-wooja' ke baare mein zyada kuchh
nahin pata...lekin,Main itna jaanta hoon ki,Mom ne kal tumhein 'Pooja' mein aane ko kaha tha... agar aisa kuchh hota toh tumhein bulati hi kyun...?? Iss liye tumhein,'Pooja' mein rehna hai bas... Main aur kuchh  nahin jaanta..." said in ordering tone with a soft possessive touch...

GUNJAN n TINKU looked at each other side so,strangely... TINKU was about to say something, just then...SAMRAT give a signaled for shut his mouth... N convinced to her for stay... TINKU understood his signals very well... because,It was a part of
SAMRAT's threaten. He said quickly...
" Haan ! Di... Aap... aap...'Pooja' chhod kar mat aao... Main...main...jab tak koi 'Cartoon-Film' dekh loonga... "


G -
(strangely) What...?? Lekin,abhi abhi toh tumne kaha ki tum bore ho rahe the..phir...suddenly...

T - (quickly) Wo...woh...toh waise hi keh diya... Aap... 'Pooja' ke baad aa jaana naa...
 
G - Haan lekin... (asked confusingly)
 
TINKU ran towards his sister..and tugging at her hand, asked her to bend down as he whispered in her ear... " Maan jaao Di !! 'Pooja' mein rehne mein hi hamari bhalai hai...warna ghar par hamari... aisi 'Pooja' hogi...ki, hum phir kabhi kisi 'Pooja' mein nahin ja sakenge... (said very innocently)
 
G - What...?? Matlab...?? (asked more confusingly)
 
SAMRAT stifled a chuckle as he saw the brother-sister duo talk... then he walked over to them and said... Uska matlab hai ki,abhi hamein kaafi der ho chuki hai... Iss liye baaki baatein... aane ke baad.. Tum chalo abhi mere saath... holding her wrist gently, he pulled her towards him... and then he turned and walked towards the car... and barely had he opened the passenger seat door for GUNJAN , when he saw ROHAN... he looked at him and after some thought, called out to him " ROHAN... yahaan aao... ! "
 
GUNJAN looked at SAMRAT and then at ROHAN as he came close to where they stood and asked... " Kya hai Chachu...?? Aapne kyun bulaya...?? "
 
SAMRAT kept his hands on ROHAN's shoulder as he said... " Tumhein PS3 chahiye...?? "
 
R - Off Course chahiye...! kal se toh keh raha hoon...
 
S - (softly) Ok...then...jab tak main woh le kar aata hoon...Tumhein mera ek kaam karna hoga...
 
R - Kya...?? Kaun sa kaam Chachu...??
 
SAMRAT turned to look at TINKU who stood a little far away, looking dejected... SAMRAT called out to him... " TINKU...!! Please come here ... 
 
Surprised, TINKU looked at him, but did not budge from his place...till SAMRAT called out again... he ran towards the car where all were standing and stood next to SAMRAT... who kept his arm on TINKU's shoulder and turning to ROHAN , he said...  " Tumhein sirf itna karna hai ki,jab tak 'Hum' wapas nahin aa jaate... Aap donon saath mein hi khelenge...ek achhe dost ki tarah... koi jhagda nahin...Ok...?? "
 
ROHAN nodded in a positive but GUNJAN interrupted... " No... I think iski zaroorat nahin...He is fine... aap nahin jaante...inn donon ko... yeh saath rahenge toh... "
 
S - (cuts softly) Come On GUNJAN ! Woh bachhe hain toh chhoti-moti fight toh karenge hi... Hum bhi toh kabhi bachhe the... Humne bhi ki hai... Tum...


G -
(quickly said in her soft tone) I understand...par,aap samajh nahin rahe... Main...
 
S - Main sab samajh raha hoon... Tum meri kal kahi hui baat se naraz ho...But,believe me...woh ek instant reaction tha... I didn't want to hurt you... aur maine uske liye tumse Sorry bhi kaha...agar tum chahti ho ki,main 1 baar aur Sorry kahoon toh..main woh bhi keh sakta hoon... par, Please! Usse iss tarah rokne ki zaroorat nahin... (said in very concerned way)


GUNJAN looked at him... he was so persistent...there was no way she could refuse... she smiled as she nodded a yes and then looking at TINKU said... " OK...Tum ROHAN ke saath khelne ke liye ja sakte ho... Main bas thodi der mein aa jaaoongi... "

caressing ROHAN's cheeks, she said... 
" Ab aap donon jaao... Hum abhi aate hain... Par...Terrace par bilkul nahin... Jo bhi khelna ho...neeche Hall mein yaa phir apne room mein...Aur...Haan ! Aunty yaa Bhabhi ko bilkul pareshaan nahin karna...aur naa hi 'Pooja' ke kisi saman ko haath lagana... "  
 
R - Ok... Di... Don't worry...Terrace par nahin jaayenge... n kissed  her cheeks  softly...TINKU too...n they both ran to house side..so happily... GUNJAN was looking at their side...so lovingly... just then SAMRAT voice came... "Ab chalein...?? Yaa 1 aur kiss ka wait kar rahi ho... ?? "


G -
(strangely) Ji... main... woh...
 
S - (in full teasing tone) Chalo Car mein baitho... Yahaan koi aur toh hai nahin... Agar kiss hi chahiye...toh mujh se hi kaam chalana hoga...and I really don't mind...

GUNJAN
looked at SAMRAT... she was damn sure that he was joking. GUNJAN smiled softly... She took his line as a joke...so,didn't react... both sat on car...n left-out from there..for...SAMARAT's 1st 'un-official' Date.


   
  [To Be Continued in next THREAD...๐Ÿ˜ณ]




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Edited by Joseph_A - 12 years ago
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Will be waiting for the next parts eagerly๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: MoNayaLover96

Will be waiting for the next parts eagerly๐Ÿ˜ณ



Little wait ! working on Presentation.๐Ÿ˜‰ will be Post so soon...๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Just Updated Part-A,B,C n D...๐Ÿ˜Š  Part-E, F n G will be post tomorrow morning.๐Ÿ˜ณ[PM after full Update posting๐Ÿ˜ณ]
Edited by Joseph_A - 12 years ago
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Waiting For The Whole Part To Be Updated : D ๐Ÿค—
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Originally posted by: ..-Sanzz-..

Waiting For The Whole Part To Be Updated : D ๐Ÿค—



Just Updated whole parts...๐Ÿ˜ณnow,waiting for your feed-back... ๐Ÿ˜† [Just like,MBYPH...๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜†]
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi
the ups are good
the convo between tinku and samrat is really funny and interesting
lafanga wow
plz cont soon with more and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
loved tinku and samrat convo๐Ÿ˜†โค๏ธ
samrat lafanga ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
thanks for pm๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesomeee update...
loved it a lottt...
written very well..
do cont soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Gonna Comment On MBYPH First, God Knows When :| ๐Ÿ˜†