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Posted: 01 November 2011 at 7:39pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by aashizin

it was once again amazing updates hon Clapi loved each and every parts , loved samrat and bhushan family's part it was adorable the way samrat was impressing them but most touchy part was gunjan and tinku's it was seriously amazing  tinku's  maturity and immense love for gunjan and for his family and gunjan's love and care for him simply amazing , loved samrat's respect and love and care for gunjan and her family it will be tough for him to convince his family specially his father but love will find the way enjoyed reading sajan's scene so blissful do update soon and thanks for pm 


Thank you so much Aashi for this reply.Smile. Samrat is really Smart... He knows,what he wantsWink. Gunjan-Tinku bonding is the 1 imp. factor of this FF...They share a very strong bonding. Thanks a lot for liking that sceneEmbarrassed. Samrat doesn't know about BHUSHAN family but,he impressed with their simplicity too.We'll be try to update soon.

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Posted: 02 November 2011 at 8:27pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by gunurlove

Hello Joseph and S3...i know im again late...but mai kya kartii...Ouch...it was quite long update na..so i took 3 days to complete it...LOL..but plzzz bear with me...as always...Wink
bdw Happy Diwali to all of you...Embarrassed
okk...Whole update was Veryyy Nice...,Embarrassed..Mind blowing..Embarrassed...And Fantastic..Embarrassed
Each n Every Scene was As usual Superb...(yaar me har comment me yahi likhti hun..kya karoon ab or kch hota nai na kehne ko...LOL)..
ok..start...Bhushan's drawing room scene was Awesome...The way Samrat was impressing GD n GM and the same way Tinku was being irritate n making bore bore faces...i loved it very much..n i was enjoying to reading all those parts...LOLBig smile
Tinku's thought abt Samy's bussiness or Job..was so funny...specially "hotel se to brij bhaiya ne nikaal dia hoga..Bhukaad apne hotel ka hi sara khana kha jata hoga.."LOL
Gunjan and Tinku all scenes were written so beautifully...they are sharing really an Extra ordinary sibling's love...i admired them alot...u portrayed the bond of one litlle caring,loving and protective brother..(though naughty...but hez completely understand by GunjanEmbarrassed)..and his  most loving caring, Darling "DI"...Very Very WEll...both bro-sis are too much possessive and protective towards each other...they both understand each other so well...that they cant hide anything from each other...the scene when Tinku came to Gunjan to telling set the table...and then their room scene..this Scene was Sooo Perfect...i truly love ur writing skills...every dialogue is just prfect and reflect the whole intense n painful situation very well.Clap
 till now we dont know what the problem is actually ..but jo b he...plzzz reveal soon na...itni long update me mujhe lga koi to point mile ga..but noooOuch
Dinning table scene was also Too Gud...fabulouse it was...with Samrat i was also v-happy when gunjan sat next to him..in this whole scene the best part was...
when Intelliegent Tinku's brilliant mind had gussed abt Samrat's intentions 2wrds his 'Di"..that he wants to higher Gunjan as a Master chef for his hotel...this was too much ...LOL
i sooo loved these thoughts...somewhere i was 100% expecting this result..when Samrat spoke abt "Cook" 2-3 times..and then hotel's master chef..etc etc...i thought k tinku yahi soche ga ab...n woi hua..Wink
Guys i think now its enough na...now u have put so much mystery in this FF...ab to gradually bta doo..kya problem he..whats happening and what happend in the past...
that Sam's coughing and Gunjan's patting scene was veryyy cute...Embarrassed
then that Mango custard scene was so natural..even im totally like Tinku...i love Mango custard..and fruit trifal...and never want to share it wid any guest...but my family is also a totally like Tinku's Family...they easily keep it infront of anyone..Unhappy
therefore i could completely understand Tinku's condition in this scene...but the point is...Update was totally based on reality and very close to natural things which are generally happens in any home...Clap
Sajan's exclusive scene was Awesome...thanksfully Gunjan escorted him...This whole scene was very nicely written..ahhh Samrat again hurt her..but finally mana b lia jaldi...all the pics u used in all scenes were veryy nice..and very helpful to make the situation very clear to imagine...Embarrassed..aww so sweet samrat didn't go to his frnds ..as She didn't allow him to go..
Gunjan Tinku room scene was veryyy Touchy...emotional and too much beautiful...i loved it veryyy much...you guys were out standing in written this particular scene...Tinku is sooo sweet...thats y she loves him very much..bcoz only she can understand him very very well..
bdw mujhe is update me pta lga Tinku's real name is Tarun and hez 10 years old...Smile
but mujhe ek baat nai samajh ai...jb Sammy ne window se sb kch dekha to unko rote hue kyu nai dekha...that window scene was also very Cute..Samrat has succeeded to win GM and GD hearts..now hope he would mange to convince her own parents too...Tongue
overall Guys Awesome part...Clap
thanks for the pm..
continue soon the next part.

Thanks Rija for this sweet feedback..SmileEmbarrassedSmile.Wishing You happy Diwali too RijaSmile. Yaa,little-bit late reply but,you compensate every thing so sweetlySmile. Thanks for manage so much time for writing this reply .Thank God...ki,ab tak appreciating words ki hi shortage hai...warna toh...LOL LOL LOL [I hope aapke paas tute hue 'Joote-chappal' n honLOL]
 
Thanks for liking Gunjan-Tinku bonding n their parts... They are really sweet for each other...Smile They know the cruel reality but,wants to stay happy with their family. Sorry for disappointment about 'Problem disclose' thingEmbarrassed. We'll be try to disclose that 'problem',very soon... woh hide karna hamare liye bhi tough hai because,hide karne ke liye dio portion par extra work karna padta hai...
 
Dinning Table scene was little bit tough for us... because,we never faced this type of situation.LOLEmbarrassedYour thoughts is matching with Tinku... OMG !!Shocked 1 more Denger kid ShockedLOL LOL
sorry,just kidding.Smile Actually,His lines reflects his innosense too.
 
I agree with you about mystery things... It is related to DELHi... ARNAV's family problem is different from GUNJAN's family problem.but,before the story shifting to DELHi... BHUSHAN family ki problem disclose ho jaayegi.Confused Its really painful for them...Cry
 
OMG !! 1 more similarity...with Tinku...ShockedWink You also like 'Mango custard' n so possessive too. Just like me...Hugn this things always happens with me too.AngryUnhappy And I always think..."Inhein pata kaise chal jaata hai ki,aaj meri favorite dish or desert bane hain...Unhappy???"
 
Its a fictional story Rija...but,we want to portray all things in very simple n natural way... woh characters or sequence over of the Top nahin lagne chahiye... their convo, their emotions, their thoughts should be normal n common.
 
We are really glad that,you liked SaJan scene...Smile It was small scene but,enough to show their different personality n respect for each other.Embarrassed Samrat life style is totally different from her. He understand Gunjan... He is happy to seeing her concern for him. and some time some small-small things or incidents hi heart touchy ho sakte hain...Embarrassed
 
Gunjan-Tinku part is 1 of the main strength of this story. This sibling 'Love' is very pure...totally unconditional. He is kid..wants to protect his 'Di' ... happiness in his family... whatever, he knows this is not possible after some time...
 
Tinku's real name toh CS or  ' Tinku-Samrat' introduction scene mein bhi write kiya hai...Confused may be you didn't notice that time Stern Smile.and Age bhi Part-9 mein disclose kiya tha. Samrat was lost in his thoughts... Usne rote hue nahin dekha... He only saw their hug... and  Gunjan room is in-fron of his window but,it has a distence... aur Night bhi toh thi... aansoo nahin dekh paya hoga...EmbarrassedLOL He is not 'Chashmish' naa...EmbarrassedLOL
 
Yaa...We'll be continue very soon... Next turn is MBYPH turn... uske baad isse hi karenge.EmbarrassedThanks again for this wonderful treat Rija...Smile
 
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Posted: 06 November 2011 at 7:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Joseph_A

Originally posted by Mitaly..

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OMG u write soo well Clap
its longLOL
took me forewer to read :P
Thanx :)))))StarStar


Thank You so much Mitaly for your compliment.Smile Yaa,Its 'Little' longEmbarrassed Sorry...Embarrassed
No need sorry Joshep Big smileu know it me lazy thats why it tok me longer :p
yaa:)))   u did wrote long also Tongueno problem Big smile
welcome :)))

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Posted: 06 November 2011 at 11:24am | IP Logged
Tym To Update This One Soonish :) Embarrassed

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Posted: 06 November 2011 at 6:41pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ..-Sanzz-..

Tym To Update This One Soonish :) Embarrassed


Thanks Sanzz for reminder...Embarrassed We'll be update very soon.Smile

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Posted: 09 November 2011 at 3:50am | IP Logged
hey guys plz update...missing this ff

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Posted: 11 November 2011 at 4:28pm | IP Logged
Awhh, We Will Get Update Soon Hopefully :) Embarrassed Hug & Then Mushkil Bada Yeh Pyaar Hain <33 My Fav Oneee Day Dreaming

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Posted: 12 November 2011 at 12:49am | IP Logged
FINALLY I EDITED MY COMMENT... Thank God I cud do it b4 d next part jumped in LOL check it on page no.98

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