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Posted: 26 October 2011 at 8:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Archismita

Niceee!!!!!!!


Thanks !!!!Smile

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Posted: 26 October 2011 at 8:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by --Neelanjana--

**Nice update dear!!! Tongue**


Thanks NeelanjanaSmile.

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Posted: 26 October 2011 at 1:16pm | IP Logged
Hello Joseph and S3...i know im again late...but mai kya kartii...Ouch...it was quite long update na..so i took 3 days to complete it...LOL..but plzzz bear with me...as always...Wink
bdw Happy Diwali to all of you...Embarrassed
okk...Whole update was Veryyy Nice...,Embarrassed..Mind blowing..Embarrassed...And Fantastic..Embarrassed
Each n Every Scene was As usual Superb...(yaar me har comment me yahi likhti hun..kya karoon ab or kch hota nai na kehne ko...LOL)..
ok..start...Bhushan's drawing room scene was Awesome...The way Samrat was impressing GD n GM and the same way Tinku was being irritate n making bore bore faces...i loved it very much..n i was enjoying to reading all those parts...LOLBig smile
Tinku's thought abt Samy's bussiness or Job..was so funny...specially "hotel se to brij bhaiya ne nikaal dia hoga..Bhukaad apne hotel ka hi sara khana kha jata hoga.."LOL
Gunjan and Tinku all scenes were written so beautifully...they are sharing really an Extra ordinary sibling's love...i admired them alot...u portrayed the bond of one litlle caring,loving and protective brother..(though naughty...but hez completely understand by GunjanEmbarrassed)..and his  most loving caring, Darling "DI"...Very Very WEll...both bro-sis are too much possessive and protective towards each other...they both understand each other so well...that they cant hide anything from each other...the scene when Tinku came to Gunjan to telling set the table...and then their room scene..this Scene was Sooo Perfect...i truly love ur writing skills...every dialogue is just prfect and reflect the whole intense n painful situation very well.ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap
 till now we dont know what the problem is actually ..but jo b he...plzzz reveal soon na...itni long update me mujhe lga koi to point mile ga..but noooOuch
Dinning table scene was also Too Gud...fabulouse it was...with Samrat i was also v-happy when gunjan sat next to him..in this whole scene the best part was...
when Intelliegent Tinku's brilliant mind had gussed abt Samrat's intentions 2wrds his 'Di"..that he wants to higher Gunjan as a Master chef for his hotel...this was too much ...LOL
i sooo loved these thoughts...somewhere i was 100% expecting this result..when Samrat spoke abt "Cook" 2-3 times..and then hotel's master chef..etc etc...i thought k tinku yahi soche ga ab...n woi hua..Wink
Guys i think now its enough na...now u have put so much mystery in this FF...ab to gradually bta doo..kya problem he..whats happening and what happend in the past...
that Sam's coughing and Gunjan's patting scene was veryyy cute...Embarrassed
then that Mango custard scene was so natural..even im totally like Tinku...i love Mango custard..and fruit trifal...and never want to share it wid any guest...but my family is also a totally like Tinku's Family...they easily keep it infront of anyone..Unhappy
therefore i could completely understand Tinku's condition in this scene...but the point is...Update was totally based on reality and very close to natural things which are generally happens in any home...Clap
Sajan's exclusive scene was Awesome...thanksfully Gunjan escorted him...This whole scene was very nicely written..ahhh Samrat again hurt her..but finally mana b lia jaldi...all the pics u used in all scenes were veryy nice..and very helpful to make the situation very clear to imagine...Embarrassed..aww so sweet samrat didn't go to his frnds ..as She didn't allow him to go..
Gunjan Tinku room scene was veryyy Touchy...emotional and too much beautiful...i loved it veryyy much...you guys were out standing in written this particular scene...Tinku is sooo sweet...thats y she loves him very much..bcoz only she can understand him very very well..
bdw mujhe is update me pta lga Tinku's real name is Tarun and hez 10 years old...Smile
but mujhe ek baat nai samajh ai...jb Sammy ne window se sb kch dekha to unko rote hue kyu nai dekha...that window scene was also very Cute..Samrat has succeeded to win GM and GD hearts..now hope he would mange to convince her own parents too...Tongue
overall Guys Awesome part...ClapClapClapClap
thanks for the pm..
continue soon the next part.


Edited by gunurlove - 27 October 2011 at 1:00am

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Posted: 27 October 2011 at 5:11am | IP Logged
Fabb updateee!! :)

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Posted: 27 October 2011 at 5:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ekta_monaya

Just Look Whu Is here to Comment...!!Cool ROFL ROFL
Kya yaar, I wanted to Comment 1st but yaha toh BOHOT saare Logon ne BHANJI maar Di..!! ROFL ROFL My Bad Luck & Exams...!!LOL [[Shocked Shocked Shocked I am really surprised...ShockedShocked TL...?? woh bhi old Form mein...ShockedLOL?? Mujhe accept karne mein hi 1 week lag gaye ROFLLOL.Yaa...'Bhanji' toh maariEmbarrassed But,I think...You are really special for this FF...see,Your Reply is the First reply of 101th page...Lucky1Wink Wink Wink]]

Ekta
Ka intezaar toh 11 FF's [Ya Shayad zyaada Stern Smile] Ke writer's kr rae h par Ekta se COMMENT krwaana Mushkil hi Nai Naamumkin h...Cool ROFL ROFL- SRK Fever bohot HIGH h mujpeDay Dreaming [[ OMG !! Itti badi 'Khushfahni'...??
ROFL Saare writers 'Black Listed' kar dengeROFL.Koi writer SALMAN type hua toh phir,toh khair nahin...ROFL ]]

& it wont be down at least until RA.ONE & DON 2 so Plzz Bear Wit Me...Embarrassed ROFL ROFL & Yaar, MBYPH & APHG Always do this to me... FORCING MY LAZY FINGERS TO TYPE & COMMENT...Stern Smile Really Cant help this ADDICTION...!!!!LOL  [[Oh GR8 compliment...Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed I am speechless...Embarrassed]]
Wat a Superb, Mind-Blowing, Fantastic Update...!!Clap Though I dont like to PRAISE u Mr.Khadoos Stern Smile ROFL  but Writing ke Mamle me U & S3 r the BEST & ders No Doubt bout it...!!Embarrassed [[Thanks TLAngryEmbarrassed lekin,Yahaan toh SAMRAT sweet hai...phir bhi main 'Khadoos'...??Angry Wait...lagta hai,ARNAV-GUNJAN pairing planning karni padegi...ConfusedLOL]]

Now cuming to the Update, Omg! Samrat?!Shocked Kya kahu mai iske baare me?!Embarrassed He has the Charm to impress anyone... Handsome, Charming, Adorable, Cute, Talented, Loving, Caring, Impressive, Respectful... & I Go On & On & On & On & On...Day Dreaming ROFL I love him to Bits & evryone knws that...Blushing [[Yaa...we know that...what a
Besharm' fan , you are...
ROFL.ROFL.ROFL.Tumhaara toh 'Ghar' aana band karwana hoga...Big threat for my BroAngryAngry. I don't know,Bhabhi kuchh kehti kyun nahin...Confused Confused]]

Ok, Now cuming out of my SamHit Dreamland Stern Smile GD & GM have becum completely FLAT on him...LOL & I had heard Miss.Goody-Two-Shoes but  Mr.Goody-Two-Shows?!?!?! Nverrr...ROFL ROFL Mast tha...LOL [[This New word invent by TiNKU,He is the 'Copy-write holder' of that word..EmbarrassedLOL.so,don't use this word to any whereEmbarrassed]]  & Poor Tinku... Kitni Koshish ki usne to Bhagaofy Samrat but...LOL He's really vry sweet & Innocent... & OMG! 'CHINDI CHOR'?!?!Shocked This 1 cracked me up...!! ROFL Suits u Mr.Khadoos...ROFL No Actually u r "MANDIR K BAAHAR CHAPPAL CHURAANE WAALA CHOR" naa?! Yea Exactly...ROFL ROFL I did see u running dat day wit Lots of Chappals outside SiddhiVinayak Temple in Dadar...ROFL Vry Bad...!! Aise PAVITRA STHAAN par aise KARYA nahi karte...ROFL ROFL Jus Kidding...!!Embarrassed LOL {{Hey !! Please check your specks glass No. Shocked Shocked Shocked.Nahin hai toh check karao...LOL Warna aage aur zyada problem hogi...LOL LOL I am a Catholic Yaar...EmbarrassedI never visit 'Siddhi Vinayak'LOL LOL LOL.  'Church' mein shoes,chappals,Sandels sab kuchh allowed haiLOL...koi utarta hi nahin toh chori kya karoonga...??EmbarrassedLOL Apni habbit mujh par mat force karoAngry
ROFL ROFL .I heard 'Mandir' CCTV Camera ne tumhaari Pics capture ki hui hai...woh 'SANSANIShocked' mein show kiya tha...ROFLROFL ROFL.

Khabardar,Hoshiyaar,Sawdhaan ho jaaiye iss sidhi saadi dikne wali ladki se... Yehi hai woh Khatarnak ladki jo Chupke se aap ke bhi chappal, Shoes gayab kar sakti hai... Achhi tarah se pehchaan lijiye isse...Jahaan bhi dekhiye... Hamein fauran..iss No. par inform karein...
ROFL ROFL ROFL.

Samrat Stole the Show in this Update... Tinku ke 1-1 teer ka Jawaab diyaa h usne...ROFL ROFL & Wow!! Marketing Head in Multi-National Company, 2 BHK Flat (Yeah it is 2 BHK & not 2 BKH LOL) Vry Impressive...!!Approve Samrat toh Full-On Buttering me lag gya h...Wink & Matar Paneer?!Shocked OMG! My Fav...!!Shocked Embarrassed & Pics u Ppl Select for Each-Scene...I mean they r like Perfect... Like the Gunjan-Kid's Pic... It Looks like they r actually Gunjan & Tinku... & the Pic wer the Food gets chocked in Samrat's Neck... A Perfection Point Again...Embarrassed Truly Perfectionists U Guys...!! Hats OFF...!!ClapEmbarrassed & I love this Pic...!!Embarrassed The MasterChef Joke was HILLARIOUS...!! OMG Tinku..!! I cant Stop ROFLing...!! ROFL ROFL [[Thanks for liking this partEmbarrassed n Pics. and I admit that BHK/BKH fault...It was  typing mistake..n I use 'MS-word' for write so,Save word ki wajah se back to back enter hota gaya... Next time,will be carefulEmbarrassed]]

BTW Evn i've won the MasterChef Title of my College...Cool Embarrassed [[Haaiillaaa Shocked Shocked Shocked ,Itta bada 'Sach!!'Shocked
ROFL ROFLROFL. Puri HAZMOLA ki bottle kha li Wink,phir bhi digest nahin huaEmbarrassedLOL ROFL ROFLOk...tab toh maine bhi kabhi 'Mr.MUMBAI' Tag win kiya hoga ROFL ROFL Bas abhi year yaad nahin aa raha...ROFL ROFL.]]



Thier Expressions r sooo Cuttteee...!!Embarrassed The Family Moments wer just perfect...!!Embarrassed

& Now the SG Scene...Haaayyyeee, It was Beyond Adorable...!!Day Dreaming Samrat ke Thots wer sooo cuttteee... Breeze flowing, Star-Studded Sky, Jaisa Filmo me Hota Hai, Ho raha h Hubahu...!! ROFL ROFL It was like FairyTale...!!Day Dreaming 
& Samrat Flirting Wit Gunjan... Typical Samratish Ishtyle...Embarrassed Loved It...!!Heart & awww...Gunjan felt bad wen sam said about Tinku...Dats so sweet...!! Accha hua Sam ne maafi maang li... Meri Sis ko koi kuch bole toh mai toh Daant tod du...LOL
But Sam said Sorry & That was really Sweet...!! Hope Sam bhi Jaldi LITTLE MASTER se Frndshp krle coz isse Dushmani, Panga ho jayega...LOL & Gunjan's Concern for him was sooo Sweet...!! Haaayyyeee...!!Blushing It was sooo Cute & Adorable... Gr8 Job guys...!!Cool{{Thanks...Embarrassed SG scenes are our favorite too.Gunjan is so possesive for her Bro...achha hua jo maafi maang li...warna...Embarrassed.Waise she is not arrogent like youLOL...tabhi toh woh Gunjan hai..Embarrassed Ekta nahin...LOL Jab kisi 'Daant todne waala'[waliLOL] character introduce karenge...usse EKTA hi name denge...LOL LOLPakka promiseEmbarrassed.LOL}}.

& now the 3rd Part...!! M really Curious bout Gunjan & Tinku... Aisa kya h uss letter me?! Ok, i hav a story cooking up in my mind but m not sure if its right... Is Tinku suffering frm some Life-Threatening Disease?!Shocked If Yes, den OMG! Ye kya kiya Guys?! Y???Cry Hopefully Its wrong wat m thinking but m just havng an Intution...Confused Well only Time will tell... Tinku is SO Adorable... Cnt bear to see him in such state...Ouch
& Plzzz Dont say WAIT & WATCH this tym...Stern Smile Rehem karo Mujpe...ROFL ROFL Tinku is really vry Mature & Brave... & Propose?!Shocked wen he said dat Evn i was lyk OMG! Kya Bol ra h...ShockedLOL It was Hillarious...ROFL & & This Line-


T - (innocently) Toh aap kaun sa proposal samajh rahi thin...??Anyway,Aap dekhna...Jab 1 din woh aapko propose karenge... aap uss waqt mujhe hi yaad karogi...

I Really Think it has a vry deep meaning... Only Time & Updates will tell...Embarrassed Loved the Bro-Sis Convo...Embarrassed It was Mind-Blowingly Written Guys with pure Emotions... Truly Spendid...Embarrassed  [[ The character of TiNKU is very important part of this 'Love Triangle Story' He is not the lead but,not less the lead... His character is equally important, just like Main 3 characters. This time can't be disclose anything of that 'Mysterious' part. May be You are right...or wrong...??Confused only time will tell Confused. ]]

& Now the last Scene, It was Damn Cuttteee...!!Embarrassed Awww...Sam is ready to change himself for Gunjan, That is just so sweet...!!Embarrassed He's Really Adorable...Blushing
& I Loved these Lines...Cracked Me Up...!! ROFL


Mom se baat karoon kya..?? Lekin.direct unse jaakar kya kahoonga...?? Yeh ki, Mom mujhe GUNJAN se hi shaadi karni hai...aap kisi tarah uss se meri shaadi kara do !! What rubbish...?? No way.!! Its sounding very cheap n down market... Dude tujh mein koi sharm-warm hai yaa nahin...?? Main apni shaadi ki baat khud apne munh se kaise kar sakta hoon...??  No...No...Mom toh GUNJAN ko hi galat samjh lengi... Kuchh aur sochna padega...

@RED- How Desperate?!Shocked ROFL It really sounds JUST TOO MIDDLE-CLASS [Maya Sarabhai Style LOL]
& Wah! Kya Baat h... ISHITA BHABHI truly ROCKS...!!Cool ROFL Go Ahead samrat we all r wit U...!!Approve ROFL

& This Para was just so Serene & Beautiful... my Fav in the Update...Day Dreaming

He looked at the window, from where he could see GUNJAN... she still had her eyes shut... then he saw her move and shut off the bed side lamp.  A bit disappointed that now he could not see her, he got of the window sill and walked towards his bed. He lay down on the bed and closed his eyes once again and as expected... there she was. He turned over and pulled a pillow close to him and hugging it tightly, he went off to his dreamworld... a world in which GUNJAN was irreplaceable...  
 
Its Truly Mesmerising...!!Embarrassed Amazing Work Guys...!!Tongue

The Update was PERFECT...!! Each Scene, Dialogue, Characters Evrythng was Marvellous...!! Hats OFF to u 4...!! & Iss baar I Commented on MBYPH & APHG both toh bolna mat Ekta doesn't Comment...Stern Smile & woh bhi I gave Long Comments Both the Time...!! So yaad rakhna...Embarrassed LOL Aaj toh actually M super-happy coz of the news of Mohit's Return... The Best News ever...!!Big smile I just cant wait anymore now... Hope he Confirms it Soon... It wud be an advance B'day Gift... Embarrassed *FINGERS CROSSED* Tongue
Thanks a lot for this sweet reply...Embarrassed SAMRAT will be SAMRATEmbarrassed . I am really glad that you liked whole Part n that particular Dio n narrative para tooEmbarrassed. And about MOHiT's return News...I knew itSmile but,conform nahin tha..Embarrassed.By the way mujhe jo News pata hai... woh isse 10 time more BIG haiEmbarrassed so my happiness is Bigger then you.Smile Smile

& Plzzz Guys Dont Say Sorry for Long Updates coz WE really Love them...Embarrassed So Plzzz... & I want a Long Rply to this LONG comment...Stern Smile & Plzzz Update MBYPH ASAP...!! M 876433468898543346787 Times Excited for it...!! So Plzzz...Embarrassed MBYPH Part to Update ho gaya naa...Shocked Itti kya excitement ki ab tak Usse read hi nahin kiya...ShockedROFL.Waise rest Red part ko separately answer karoonga...wait..AngryLOL.

Continue Soon,
Update ASAP,
Thnx 4 the PM & Dnt Forget To PM Me...!!Embarrassed

Luv,
Ekta...Hug


Edited by Joseph_A - 28 October 2011 at 5:09am

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Posted: 27 October 2011 at 5:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Mitaly..

JoshepClapStarStar
OMG u write soo well Clap
its longLOL
took me forewer to read :P
Thanx :)))))StarStar


Thank You so much Mitaly for your compliment.Smile Yaa,Its 'Little' longEmbarrassed Sorry...Embarrassed

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Posted: 28 October 2011 at 5:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ..-Sanzz-..

Heyyy, Me Here To Comment ! Hug Really Loved The Part . Samrat Impressing Gunjan's Parents Was SOOO Obvious :) He Is Afterall Samrat Naa Embarrassed Every Heart's Dream <3 ! Lollzzz LOL Possessive Tinku , I Love The Bonding Of Gunjan & Tinku . Gunjan Made Round Round Chapaatis For The First Tym Naa ?! : O ROFL Tinku Is Mature But At The Same Tym SOOO Innocent . The Way He Said About Proposal & Gunjan Thought The Other Proposal ;) Day Dreaming AWWW, & She Became Very Angry At Samrat When He Said Something Bad About Tinku . He Has To Impress Tinku First Embarrassed Curious To Know About Plan B . Do Continue Soonish Hug


Thank you SanzzSmile for manage some times for this Precious ReplyEmbarrassed. Samrat is very clear about his decision...Embarrassedso,cant lose any chance to impress Gunjan's parents...Winkpoor guy...!Cry He didn't know anything about Gunjan n Arnav thing.

Yaa,she made 'Round' chapatis fr the first time...Smile luckily for Samrat.Wink Tinku is really possesive for her 'Di' , Gunjan can't tolerate any single word against on him...Ouch They share a really cute n emotinal bonding.Smile We'll be try to continue soon...Embarrassed
 
Joseph.Heart.

By the way,Really nice Avi
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Posted: 28 October 2011 at 5:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sukklover

...Smile

 

 
 
 
     4 pm me dear..Big smile
 
 
 
 
 
 
...Thumbs Up 4
 
 
 
ur those  
 
 
 
 
 &
 updates...ClapClap..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
this  updates really...
 
 
 
me ...  StarStar
 
 
 
 
 
lots of ...Hug
 
lov,Heart
Tama
 
 
P.S.: plz donn't copy paste my comments...me only make it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as me saw many of my comments r copied me'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but don't coppied it whole as my post...Angry
 
 P.S.S.: Plz guys also comment on my stuff...me tried to post comment in everyones...but my most of buddies didn't comment...if u not liked tell also...plz guys...ShockedOuchConfusedme also want encougement & appreciation dears...
 
Note:
guys...me sad...me PM ed almost 500 but comment only...17-18..increased 30 now...ConfusedOuch
me said u guys ealier if u don't like plz tell me...but it really hurts a lot...me try to reply each of u...many serials me don't watch but me read ur ff's ...checking out ur updated stuff's...n try to make a sweet comment which u guys liked...but u never check my any stuff...me really busy wid my studies...but also don't want to hurt my frndz...i try to comment ecah of u woh Pmed me...but only few of u ans my Pms...if don't want me to bother u...plz tell me...me never pm u...4 my any update...
but i updated 4 whom woh waited...me know just few..but me updated for them surely...but that surely me said..that me really hurt abut u guys...Cryme uncontorled sob.sob..Cry 


Thanks Tama for this sweet Comment n all cute stuffs..Smile. but,I am still waiting for your PM about your creations...Embarrassed Please send your Updates PM to meEmbarrassed

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