Originally posted by: ..-Sanzz-..This FF Is Right After MBYPH ;) π³
Yaa...We'll be update this after MBYPH.π³ [May be,First week of Jan.,12π³]
Originally posted by: ..-Sanzz-..This FF Is Right After MBYPH ;) π³
Originally posted by: gunurloveHey Joseph and S3'.π
Plzzz don't throw Chappal on me okk..again for being Extremely Late''I have alots of pm to read...plzzz bear with me..
Okk come to the update it was Out Standing and Fabulouse piece of work once again...πππ
Starting with Bhushans home'...Each n Every scene was finely written'.Guys konsi update me ja k koi hint mile gaaa..plzzz reveal soon na..whats the matter is'.i thought may b there is a problem related to Arnav Gunjar marriage...but when Amit and nisha were talking abt Arnav and gunjan-Arnav marriage'.i was sooo confusedd'π...tooo much confused'ππ ye b nai to masla kya he phir'im loosing by control day by day..infact update by update now...plzzz guys now start to remove these confusions'..π³One Question plzzz...what medicines Amit Nisha and Gunjan were talking abt..is that only general , normal medicines..or any seriouse kind of , Gunjan Amit scene was so cute..purely daughter father love..π³...in this update I missed tinku alottt'not a single scene he had...π²
Then Shergill mension scene...OH god..SD is so rude..hez too much...firstly for Samrat...and then for our so sweet Gunjan...Guys why he was behaving like this with Gunjan..Kahin Samrat-Gunjan k barey me doubt to nai ho gya kyaπ'but how..i don't think so...then why he behaved so rudely and weirdly with Gunjan..even SM and Brij didn't like this..I love the line when Finally SM spoke abt her views for Gunjan as a Samrat's wife'..ohhh so sweet'π³π³ she really want this we know..but infront of her hitler husband..its require to much courage na..but thanksfully she uttered those words'.and definitely SDs reaction was totally expected on this statement'.when she compared Yamini with Gunjan'..everyone likes Gunjan for Samrat except his dad..so I was thinking why do all family members cant convince a single person'I know he has stubborn nature but its possible na if all would force him for Gunjan..most of all Samrat don't like Yamini but love Gunjan..and luckily his mom bhai bhabhi all are with him'...so why cant they convince him...ππ³.breakfast scene at shergil's house were very nicely written...πππΌ
SM is so sweet..she is so kind n loving women...love the way she treat Gunjan as a family member...β€οΈ
Ishita and Gunjan scene was too Gud...mind blowing scene it was..i was imagining them as Devrani-Jethani..π..surely they will b the best devrani jethani if Sajan marriage would b possible..they way Gunjan was teasing her their convo and Gunjan took care of her was beautifully written'...Specially tum hi ajao Rohan se khelne..π.and then that God lene wali baat..ππ...so cute scene it was..but in this whole scene I truly loved one touchy and thought provoking line..when Gunjan unnowingly said something seriouse abt life's strategy ...something like " zindagi me sb kch badal jata he..or ...hamare hath me kch nai rehta...hamen yakken hi nai ata k itna sb kch itni jaldi kese badal skta he." ...Aisa hi kch tha..theek se yaad nai'but it was the Best line...after this Ishita's realisation abt Samrat-gunjan relationship..that was so sweet..shez very intelligent how fast she understood everything...thank God..now she would help Samrat surely...π³
Arnav scene was again fantastic but with full of questions and curiosity in mind'.Guys plzz open soon this mystery..
Now come my most fav scene...β€οΈ.the pictures which u used in all this scene..(in Grey frock)...somewhere I was expecting this scene...as like original mjht ones...
Shez trying veryyy hard to wake him up..but hez Samrat afterall...π i loved Rohans dialogues in this matter...i thought u may b write totally like the show...but the way u adopt different things on the same pictures of original one ,but u totally changed the scenes..n situation with ur own creation..it was Out standing work...that I appreciated and admired a lot...really Wonderful...this new style was Perfectly set on those pictures...ππΌ
Enjoyed each n every bit of this scene since starting to end...starting from outside the room and then come closet n closer to his bed...and finally on his bed'icing on the cake was that " Short" scene...from Rohan statement to till the end...Superb scene guys...Awesome work...π
Samrat got one more chance to tease her..this time he used Short as his weapon'.and Gunjan shez incredible'how anyone can b so innocent yaar'kitna easy he usy fool bna lena...exactly said by Samrat...Conditions were mind blowing...and she unwillingly agreed without arguing and annoying on him..so sweet of her.π³
Without even knowing that..her this sweet feature can drive Samrat crazy for her even moreπ³π³π³
Samrat naughty thinking after her leaving were soo cute...too much beautiful when he was imagining gunjan as Mrs samrat shergill n all...π
Fabulouse work...Wonderful update...keep it upππ
Thanks for the pm
Update soon the next part
Originally posted by: Lekshmic7RES!! Sorry Joseph, i hate to RES. I will comment soon
Originally posted by: 1gunjan7Hi My dearest friends Joseph,Soham,Sonia,Swati ...π€...
1stly SORRY Sorrry for so so late comment...I know you all updated on 17th nov and My comment is coming so so late ...π³...Once again I am really SORRY guys...π³...
The update was just too too out-standing, fantabulous, Mind -Blowing,rocking, awesome, amazing and SUPERB...Gr8 work Joseph, Soham, Sonia, Swati...π...Your FF's are getting interesting and excellent with every update..each new update is more rocking and more superb then the last one...I am enjoying reading the updates of FF very very much...in this update also I loved reading and Visualizing each n every scene...fantastic work π..
the starting was very good...U very well described the emotions of GM n GD...each was very sad about what had happened in their past and what they and their children had will go thru in future...each was in deep pain and both were trying 2 hide their pain from the other and both were trying 2 comfort the other and be strong 4 one another and their children.Whats wrong ? whats happened? I feel something very bad happened that has reduced GM n GD 2 tears.....from their conversation I came 2 1 conclusion that whatever happened in their past concerns their children...as when something is wrong with the children and something is about 2 happen 2 them and thinking of their pain and what they will have 2 go thru and face in future...after thinking all this and only their childs pain can make PARENTS cry so much...The way u showed amit(GD and Nisha(GM) pain it was shown in so excellent way that their pain bought tears 2 my eyesπ...u very well showed their deep pain and feelings....AM I right that what tragedy happened concerns Gunjan and Tinku...??Let's see whether I am right or notπππ...Gunjan and her father amit scenes were very sweet...I loved them and their father-daughter conversation...Parents love their children very much and 4 them each child whether its a girl or boy is equal and same they love both equally ...But as a son is the apple of mothers eyes same way daughters are apple of fathers eyes...Fathers love their sweet daughters very much and fulfill their every wish N they can do anything 4 their little girls..and they protect their daughters also from pain...In this GM n Gunjan part also this was excellently shown AMIT concern for Gunjans fast driving and telling her he will bring medicines ...and 1st he had said he won't eat breakfast but when Gunjan said Breakfast khanna hai he couldn't say No 2 her...In this part father-daughter understanding protectiveness and love is excellently shown...Loved this part ...This is the 2nd time topic of Medicines have come up 1st tinku said 2 gunjan medicine le lii di...Now GD asked about medicines...What I am wondering is IS GD talking about general everyday Medicines like Vitamins and BP etc or Is their more 2 this part??πππ...
Shergill break fast scene was also superbly written...every characters feelings emotions and POV was superbly described...SM and SD scene was interesting SD was trying 2 catch SM attention But she was not looking at him As she had enough of his arrogant and stubborn thinking...their conversation showed SM and SD feelings both for many situations...Why is SD always so rude towards samrat...? they have a deep conversation gap ...He doesn't understands his son at all & thinks him good 4 nothing...he doesn't realize samrat is very intelligent n good in his work...SD is still in the same frame of mind of How samrat was in college...he doesn't accept his son has changed 4 good..Samrat has come 4 holidays and for his marriage purpose and SD wanting samrat 2 still wake up very early morning When he is on leave from work was very strange ...Though he loves Samrat but he doesn't understands his views and thinking at all..But SM loves and is somewhat trying 2 understand Samrat now.....though she is still wondering about Samrat-yamini pic but has realized that samrat doesn't like yamini...and she also has realized what type of girl yamini is and she doesnt have any good qualities and her each conversation showed that she wants a sweet girl like Gunjan as her bahu and samrat's wife and she wants samrats happiness and even Brij and ishita n rohan like gunjan and not yamini...BUT SD I was shocked the way he behaved so rudely towards Gunjan...IS THIS The way 2 behave with a guest in ur home ?? Even if u donot like someone u never behave the way SD behaved ....What I was wondering was WHY SD doesn't like Gunjan..why is he so rude towards her??ππ...she is so sweet caring and loving girl so why doesn't he like her??ππ...and Is it because gunjan is from middle class family ??..I saw 1 think in this part that 4 SD this rich and middle class thing matters and even though SD has realized yamini has many bad habits and faults even then he is ready to look away from Yamini's faults and accept her as his bahu she is from rich family and share same standard as him and as for SD his word his everything...and he knows his whole family likes Gunjan more and not yamini and he has realized they will love if Gunjan becomes samrat's wife and their daughter-in-law and he knows Gunjan is a very good girl with awesome qualities which they want in their bahu and yamini lacks good nature & qualities and they both can't be compared. I think that is why SD is rude towards gunjan and doesnt want her 2 come 2 his home and he doesnt want his family 2 get 2 attached 2 gunjan and he thru his rude behavior was making sure every person in his house understands this and that he wont change his decision...THIS is what I think about SD rude behavior why he is behaving this way suddenly now...Lets see whether I m right or not....π.I think SD should change himself and stop this attitude of I AM ALWAYS right.. this stubborn & arrogant nature before samrat and his family rebel against him ..I didnt like SD behavior towards gunjan at all .π‘..his saying He will tell gunjan himself 2 stop coming here These words of SD SHOCKED ME and made me think How can a person behave so rudely towards a person who has never harmed him n his family who is so loving ..how can SD HATE her just 2 get his way in his house???...SDπ‘...SM n BRIJ are very nice ...and I loved it the way SM questioned SD about His rude nature towards Gunjan and why he is doing this...and I think if Brij hadnot handled the situation then arguement would have happened...interesting part...This part made SD nature more clear and showed how stubborn and arrogant he can be and also cleared the whole family views about different things and yamini...Nicely shown n written part...ππΌ....
I just loved this part ...ISHITA and Gunjan part was superb...their love care and feelings 4 each other was excellently shown in this part ...their each conversation showed how much they both respect ,love & care for each other...their deep friendship and understanding was superbly described and shown in the whole part....I loved the way gunjan teased Ishita about Baby thing and took care of her gave her medicine and told her I will take care of everything and u rest 4 a while and then Ishita teased Gunjan about that she will tell brij that Gunjan teased her about Baby part and Gunjan so sweet n innocent didn't realize she was being teased and got scared and I loved the part when Ishita called Gunjan her little sister π so sweet ..It showed How much deeply she loves Gunjan ...and ishita thoughts when Gunjan said samrat is nice Ishita immediately realized something has happened 2 change Gunjan's opinion showed how much she understands gunjan...π and when she realized that Samrat likes Gunjan and may want her 2 be his wife...the way ishita got excited showed she loves this idea very much and she also doesn't like yamini like her M-I-L and Brij ...and 3 of them r of same opinion infact I will say 4 of them including Samrat think same and want Gunjan as shergill bahu...π...I loved Ishita's excitement...ππΌ...her thoughts that she will help samrat but she will wait till samrat tells her himself about his feelings and her thoughts about making everyone agree He M-I-L and brij were awesome...I just loved the whole part very very very very muchππΌ...I wish kash Ishita-gunjan part thoda aur hotaπ...EXCELLENTLY part π ...
Now SAJAN PARTππ...wow!! kya awesome part thaa yaar...mazza aa gaya...whole situation visualize karkey...My memories of MJHT and sajan and samrat sleeping in shorts and Gunjan woke him up these memories were refreshed...π...Pictures choosen suited the part fully ...nice picππΌ...Loved the whole part very very much guys......π...Gunjan hesitation 2 enter the room and calling samrat from outside and rohan teasing Gunjan about samrat sleeping habits and when gunjan entered the room and her calling samrat ..1st Samratjiπ...wow!! samratjiπ...I felt as if she was calling her husband ..Suniyee ji but here samrat ji π...and when she called him MR SHERGILπ...MAN I felt as if 60 saal ke old person ko she was callingπ...She is so sweet she couldn't decide what 2 call samratπ...and her tripping on bed wow!! and Samrat thinking he was having dreamπ and calling her chashmish Gunjan getting angry WOW!! so sweet..π...and when samrat woke up Man his acting πππ...Samrat bhi GUNJAN Ko tease karney ka koi moka nahi chodataππ...ππ...I was roffling so hard ....π€£...his words what u doing here ..kya hum ladkoan ki izzat nahi hoti kya ..Kahin subha subha asa wasa kuch ho jata uske sath His these words πand when he said to her I hope tumney kuch wrong benefit nahi liya hia OMG!! SAMRAT SO NAUGHTYπππ€£...and when he teased her about his sleeping habits shorts think π³...Just Like Rohan teased her and POOR Gunjan she is so innocent she believed samrats each n every word..she didnt realize even 4 1 moment he was teasing her... π...and when he pretended 2 call his mom n bhabhi...OMG!!π...What an excellent infact super duper awesome Sajan part π...Loved it immensely .....SUPERB PART And My most favorite...and awesomely written part...ππΌ...U know the way SAMRAT and Rohan teased gunjan about Same shorts thing.π³....I thought 1 thing BOTH Chacha-bhatija are the same...π..π...Rohan full on has gone on his chacha and also agrees with his chacha's every word...I remembered this SONG 1 line---" KYUN Bhai chacha haan bhatija"...π...and I donot remember But I think chacha-bhatija was a movie also...ππ...Awesome part..π.
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Now ARNAV part ...OMG!! was shocking...the man who always was shown 2 love Gunjan so so much that he was even willing 2 do anything and confront his family about why they not answering his questions about her Now when his friend emailed something 2 him His attitiude changed ππ...what was in that email and what did his friend tell about Gunjan that changed arnav thinking and made him say this how could she do this ...and he even deleted her pic from his lappy...π²ππ...and he was suddenly supporting his family and decided not 2 do anything against their wish they have suffered enough and now he has decided 2 go 2 delhi ...ππ these thoughts of Arnav and his actions confused me and is making me ask again What happened 2 years back that changed everything and which is giving everyone pain..and why did ARNAV say yeh nahi ho sakta woh asa kasey kar sakti hai......???????? whats the meaning of these words??π...and why does Arnav family donot like Gunjan anymore?? what happened...ππ...I think something BIG happened...BUT WHAT???...π...
Awesome and Outstanding update Joseph,Soham,Sonia,Swati...Very well written...BAHUT BAHAUT MAZZA AAYA WHOLE update and each and every part scene and dialogue READ and Visualize KARKEY...Excellent work My friendsπ...and Once again Sorry 4 my late comment...π³...
Thanks 4 Pm and do update soon ..very curious 2 know what will happen next...π...
Now MBYPH's turn ...I will read part-35 soon and reply soon also S3J...
Love your good friend
Gunjanππ...
Originally posted by: ..Ektaa..Amazing Update Mr.Khadoos...!!β€οΈ
Do I need to comment More?! π€ π€£ π€£ π€£*EDITED*Haaayyyeee...!!!!!! Maaarrrdddaaalllaaa Muje...!! π€ͺ π€ͺ π€ͺGosh, This was so βΊοΈ βΊοΈ βΊοΈ βΊοΈ βΊοΈ βΊοΈ βΊοΈ βΊοΈ βΊοΈ βΊοΈ βΊοΈ βΊοΈ βΊοΈ βΊοΈ βΊοΈ βΊοΈ βΊοΈ βΊοΈ βΊοΈ βΊοΈKilling ME Guys...!!!!π€ͺ π€ͺ π€ͺ& the SG Convo was so Romantic, Cute & Hillarious...!!! Awww...!!!!πM Sure It was ur "PRACTICAL EXPERIENCE" wit sum1 hai naa Mr.Khadoos?! π π€£ π€£& Awww... He called her CHASHMISH π² π³... Finally Wish Fulfilled in this FF... Thnk u so much...!!π€Will be back to EDIT more...!! If I can π³ π€£ π€£P.S- Completely Agree wit Sanzz...!! Want MBYPH Update Soonish...!!"Sadda Haq Atthe Rakh" π€£ π€£Luv,Ekta...π€*More Edited* π€£Ufff !!!!! Yea Me here to EDIT... "The Final Edit" huh Iske baad no more Editing... M Tired !! The Update was Mind-Blowing, Fabulous, Fantastic Guys !! Seriously... U People r the Best !! I have to Invent my own words for ur Taareef now π€ I Will Try to according to ur High Calibre π >Thanks a lot TL Mam... for your half un-reserved portionsπ³π π . Tired...?? Where...?? Chatting mein...π€£π€£ .Thanks a lot for your sweet complimentsπ³πOk now cuming towards the Update, M really in a Shock to see Bhushan's Condition... Its so Vulnerable... Watever the Reason is but it must be really Heart wrenching for them... I can make dat out & I guess I know the Reason, Thoda Thoda but wont say !! Ur Fav Lines- Wait & Watch !! π π Well-Written Convo between GD & GM... It showed thier Pain π₯Ί Thier Hopes r High on Arnav but I guess they'll be Crashed down by him soon >Thanks for shut your mouthπ€£ .I know,It is very difficult for you...after you are a girl naa.π€£ Ok...Sorry..just kidding...Gunjan's family is trying to pretend happy... But,same time they know that,It is not possible for long time...But,they can't do anything...πYes, their hopes are high on ARNAV ...because,still they are unaware with current developments in DELHI.
Cumin to Gunjan-GD Convo, It was a Short & Sweet... A complete Father-Daughter Convo π³ Haha... Loved the Way she tried to Hide the "Scooter Incident" so innocently π³ π Awww...Shes so Cute !! & Her Concern for her Dad was chhhooo Chweet !! π³ Daughters Rock !! π π€£ > Yes...She is favorite of her Dad...as usual...just like other Daughters...π³ Totally...'Papa ki PARI hoon main...' typeπ [Now Cumin to the Next Part, Samrat toh baba is Samrat !! π€£ & "SHAHZADE SALIM?!?!" π² π² OMG !! Good One GD π€£ He is "Shehenshah Akbar" den & Gunjan the Poor, Innocent "Anarkali" OMG OMG π€£ π€£ My Imagination has to Stop now... Cant Stop Laughing & Imagining !! π€£ π€£ > Hey ! Really nice observation... Maine yeh toh think hi nahin kiya tha...π But,don't worry... here,ARNAV is also in Line...π³
Hmm, Rohan Loves to see his Chachu in Trouble :P & Brij is the Sweet Brother !! Loving his Character & Loved wen he Defended Samrat π³ But Yea the Shocking Part was SD & Gunjan's Equation π M Confused now... I mean Gunjan is So sweet & Innocent but wat is it wit SD?! Y Does he Dislike her?! Wat Problem with sucha sweet Girl?! Its So Strange... EvryOne Likes her in the House & Samrat has fully planned to make her "Ghar Ki Bahu" den?! I Wonder how will he React wen he cums to know abt his Dad's Disliking for Gunjan... Hmmm... Interesting !! π I Know U People wont Answer these Questions & Say "Wait & Watch" π³ so i wont say k Plzzz Batao π But Still Thoda Hint... Plzzz !! *PUPPY FACE* π³ >SD knows somewhere that,Gunjan is better then Yamini... secondly,He understand his family choice also...so,don't want to take a risk. Yamini is his dearest friend daughter...and she belongs to a high Class family too. Upcoming SD-SAMRAT scene/convo will be clear all confusion,very soon...π³
Anyways Gunjan had to be in the Pooja as shez soon goin to be a Family Member of Shergills π Awww... I Loved SM for saying dat she always wanted a Bahu like Gunjan :D Hope SD Realizes dat Gunjan is Real Gem & Perfect rather than YAMINI !! π€’ I'll Hate SD if he creates an Obstacle π³ > 'Pooja' sequence is very important part... [N yaa...little bit 'Cute' tooπ³] Now...SAMRAT is in full action mood...poor Gunjan... π³ She is surprised to see his behavior...π²...specially in 'Beakfast' part of Next update...π& & Now Ishita-Gunjan Part,Will Be Back To EDIT !! Gtg... Arrrggghhh :X > Ab tak nahin kiya toh ab kya karogi...π€£.π€£ [Waise,this time Next PM waali line bhi write nahin ki... π€£]
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