Originally posted by: gunurlove
Hello Joseph and S3...i know im again late...but mai kya kartii......it was quite long update na..so i took 3 days to complete it...😆..but plzzz bear with me...as always...😉
bdw Happy Diwali to all of you...😳
okk...Whole update was Veryyy Nice...,😳..Mind blowing..😳...And Fantastic..😳
Each n Every Scene was As usual Superb...(yaar me har comment me yahi likhti hun..kya karoon ab or kch hota nai na kehne ko...😆)..
ok..start...Bhushan's drawing room scene was Awesome...The way Samrat was impressing GD n GM and the same way Tinku was being irritate n making bore bore faces...i loved it very much..n i was enjoying to reading all those parts...😆😃
Tinku's thought abt Samy's bussiness or Job..was so funny...specially "hotel se to brij bhaiya ne nikaal dia hoga..Bhukaad apne hotel ka hi sara khana kha jata hoga.."😆
Gunjan and Tinku all scenes were written so beautifully...they are sharing really an Extra ordinary sibling's love...i admired them alot...u portrayed the bond of one litlle caring,loving and protective brother..(though naughty...but hez completely understand by Gunjan😳)..and his most loving caring, Darling "DI"...Very Very WEll...both bro-sis are too much possessive and protective towards each other...they both understand each other so well...that they cant hide anything from each other...the scene when Tinku came to Gunjan to telling set the table...and then their room scene..this Scene was Sooo Perfect...i truly love ur writing skills...every dialogue is just prfect and reflect the whole intense n painful situation very well.👏
till now we dont know what the problem is actually ..but jo b he...plzzz reveal soon na...itni long update me mujhe lga koi to point mile ga..but nooo
Dinning table scene was also Too Gud...fabulouse it was...with Samrat i was also v-happy when gunjan sat next to him..in this whole scene the best part was...
when Intelliegent Tinku's brilliant mind had gussed abt Samrat's intentions 2wrds his 'Di"..that he wants to higher Gunjan as a Master chef for his hotel...this was too much ...😆
i sooo loved these thoughts...somewhere i was 100% expecting this result..when Samrat spoke abt "Cook" 2-3 times..and then hotel's master chef..etc etc...i thought k tinku yahi soche ga ab...n woi hua..😉
Guys i think now its enough na...now u have put so much mystery in this FF...ab to gradually bta doo..kya problem he..whats happening and what happend in the past...
that Sam's coughing and Gunjan's patting scene was veryyy cute...😳
then that Mango custard scene was so natural..even im totally like Tinku...i love Mango custard..and fruit trifal...and never want to share it wid any guest...but my family is also a totally like Tinku's Family...they easily keep it infront of anyone..😔
therefore i could completely understand Tinku's condition in this scene...but the point is...Update was totally based on reality and very close to natural things which are generally happens in any home...👏
Sajan's exclusive scene was Awesome...thanksfully Gunjan escorted him...This whole scene was very nicely written..ahhh Samrat again hurt her..but finally mana b lia jaldi...all the pics u used in all scenes were veryy nice..and very helpful to make the situation very clear to imagine...😳..aww so sweet samrat didn't go to his frnds ..as She didn't allow him to go..
Gunjan Tinku room scene was veryyy Touchy...emotional and too much beautiful...i loved it veryyy much...you guys were out standing in written this particular scene...Tinku is sooo sweet...thats y she loves him very much..bcoz only she can understand him very very well..
bdw mujhe is update me pta lga Tinku's real name is Tarun and hez 10 years old...😊
but mujhe ek baat nai samajh ai...jb Sammy ne window se sb kch dekha to unko rote hue kyu nai dekha...that window scene was also very Cute..Samrat has succeeded to win GM and GD hearts..now hope he would mange to convince her own parents too...😛
overall Guys Awesome part...👏
thanks for the pm..
continue soon the next part.
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