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Posted: 12 years ago
it was once again amazing updates hon πŸ‘i loved each and every parts , loved samrat and bhushan family's part it was adorable the way samrat was impressing them but most touchy part was gunjan and tinku's it was seriously amazing  tinku's  maturity and immense love for gunjan and for his family and gunjan's love and care for him simply amazing , loved samrat's respect and love and care for gunjan and her family it will be tough for him to convince his family specially his father but love will find the way enjoyed reading sajan's scene so blissful do update soon and thanks for pm 
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: PrincessBushi

wow .. lovely parts .. 

loved all of them .. 
they r super fab!
great work S3 ..
loved those new new fonts which u're using .. 😊



Thanks Bushra for your sweet comment😊. New Font is part of Presentation,thanks for appreciating this effort😳.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: arzzo

πŸ₯³πŸ₯³congratulation on completing 100 pages πŸ‘ 



Thanks Arzzo😊 Its possible,only because,of Readers Love N Support...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: Archismita

Niceee!!!!!!!



Thanks !!!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: --Neelanjana--

**Nice update dear!!! πŸ˜›**



Thanks Neelanjana😊.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hello Joseph and S3...i know im again late...but mai kya kartii......it was quite long update na..so i took 3 days to complete it...πŸ˜†..but plzzz bear with me...as always...πŸ˜‰
bdw Happy Diwali to all of you...😳
okk...Whole update was Veryyy Nice...,😳..Mind blowing..😳...And Fantastic..😳
Each n Every Scene was As usual Superb...(yaar me har comment me yahi likhti hun..kya karoon ab or kch hota nai na kehne ko...πŸ˜†)..
ok..start...Bhushan's drawing room scene was Awesome...The way Samrat was impressing GD n GM and the same way Tinku was being irritate n making bore bore faces...i loved it very much..n i was enjoying to reading all those parts...πŸ˜†πŸ˜ƒ
Tinku's thought abt Samy's bussiness or Job..was so funny...specially "hotel se to brij bhaiya ne nikaal dia hoga..Bhukaad apne hotel ka hi sara khana kha jata hoga.."πŸ˜†
Gunjan and Tinku all scenes were written so beautifully...they are sharing really an Extra ordinary sibling's love...i admired them alot...u portrayed the bond of one litlle caring,loving and protective brother..(though naughty...but hez completely understand by Gunjan😳)..and his  most loving caring, Darling "DI"...Very Very WEll...both bro-sis are too much possessive and protective towards each other...they both understand each other so well...that they cant hide anything from each other...the scene when Tinku came to Gunjan to telling set the table...and then their room scene..this Scene was Sooo Perfect...i truly love ur writing skills...every dialogue is just prfect and reflect the whole intense n painful situation very well.πŸ‘ClapClapClapClapClapClapClap
 till now we dont know what the problem is actually ..but jo b he...plzzz reveal soon na...itni long update me mujhe lga koi to point mile ga..but nooo
Dinning table scene was also Too Gud...fabulouse it was...with Samrat i was also v-happy when gunjan sat next to him..in this whole scene the best part was...
when Intelliegent Tinku's brilliant mind had gussed abt Samrat's intentions 2wrds his 'Di"..that he wants to higher Gunjan as a Master chef for his hotel...this was too much ...πŸ˜†
i sooo loved these thoughts...somewhere i was 100% expecting this result..when Samrat spoke abt "Cook" 2-3 times..and then hotel's master chef..etc etc...i thought k tinku yahi soche ga ab...n woi hua..πŸ˜‰
Guys i think now its enough na...now u have put so much mystery in this FF...ab to gradually bta doo..kya problem he..whats happening and what happend in the past...
that Sam's coughing and Gunjan's patting scene was veryyy cute...😳
then that Mango custard scene was so natural..even im totally like Tinku...i love Mango custard..and fruit trifal...and never want to share it wid any guest...but my family is also a totally like Tinku's Family...they easily keep it infront of anyone..πŸ˜”
therefore i could completely understand Tinku's condition in this scene...but the point is...Update was totally based on reality and very close to natural things which are generally happens in any home...Clap
Sajan's exclusive scene was Awesome...thanksfully Gunjan escorted him...This whole scene was very nicely written..ahhh Samrat again hurt her..but finally mana b lia jaldi...all the pics u used in all scenes were veryy nice..and very helpful to make the situation very clear to imagine...😳..aww so sweet samrat didn't go to his frnds ..as She didn't allow him to go..
Gunjan Tinku room scene was veryyy Touchy...emotional and too much beautiful...i loved it veryyy much...you guys were out standing in written this particular scene...Tinku is sooo sweet...thats y she loves him very much..bcoz only she can understand him very very well..
bdw mujhe is update me pta lga Tinku's real name is Tarun and hez 10 years old...😊
but mujhe ek baat nai samajh ai...jb Sammy ne window se sb kch dekha to unko rote hue kyu nai dekha...that window scene was also very Cute..Samrat has succeeded to win GM and GD hearts..now hope he would mange to convince her own parents too...πŸ˜›
overall Guys Awesome part...ClapClapClapClap
thanks for the pm..
continue soon the next part.
Edited by gunurlove - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: ekta_monaya

Just Look Whu Is here to Comment...!!😎 πŸ€£ 🀣

Kya yaar, I wanted to Comment 1st but yaha toh BOHOT saare Logon ne BHANJI maar Di..!! 🀣 🀣 My Bad Luck & Exams...!!πŸ˜† [[😲 😲 😲 I am really surprised...😲😲 TL...?? woh bhi old Form mein...πŸ˜²πŸ˜†?? Mujhe accept karne mein hi 1 week lag gaye πŸ€£πŸ˜†.Yaa...'Bhanji' toh maari😳 But,I think...You are really special for this FF...see,Your Reply is the First reply of 101th page...Lucky1πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰]]

Ekta
Ka intezaar toh 11 FF's [Ya Shayad zyaada 😳] Ke writer's kr rae h par Ekta se COMMENT krwaana Mushkil hi Nai Naamumkin h...😎 πŸ€£ 🀣- SRK Fever bohot HIGH h mujpe😍 [[ OMG !! Itti badi 'Khushfahni'...??
🀣 Saare writers 'Black Listed' kar denge🀣.Koi writer SALMAN type hua toh phir,toh khair nahin...🀣 ]]

& it wont be down at least until RA.ONE & DON 2 so Plzz Bear Wit Me...😳 πŸ€£ 🀣 & Yaar, MBYPH & APHG Always do this to me... FORCING MY LAZY FINGERS TO TYPE & COMMENT...😳 Really Cant help this ADDICTION...!!!!πŸ˜†  [[Oh GR8 compliment...😳 😳 😳 I am speechless...😳]]
Wat a Superb, Mind-Blowing, Fantastic Update...!!πŸ‘ Though I dont like to PRAISE u Mr.Khadoos 😳 🀣  but Writing ke Mamle me U & S3 r the BEST & ders No Doubt bout it...!!😳 [[Thanks TL😑😳 lekin,Yahaan toh SAMRAT sweet hai...phir bhi main 'Khadoos'...??😑 Wait...lagta hai,ARNAV-GUNJAN pairing planning karni padegi...πŸ˜•πŸ˜†]]

Now cuming to the Update, Omg! Samrat?!😲 Kya kahu mai iske baare me?!😳 He has the Charm to impress anyone... Handsome, Charming, Adorable, Cute, Talented, Loving, Caring, Impressive, Respectful... & I Go On & On & On & On & On...😍 πŸ€£ I love him to Bits & evryone knws that...☺️ [[Yaa...we know that...what a
Besharm' fan , you are...
🀣.🀣.🀣.Tumhaara toh 'Ghar' aana band karwana hoga...Big threat for my Bro😑😑. I don't know,Bhabhi kuchh kehti kyun nahin...πŸ˜• πŸ˜•]]

Ok, Now cuming out of my SamHit Dreamland 😳 GD & GM have becum completely FLAT on him...πŸ˜† & I had heard Miss.Goody-Two-Shoes but  Mr.Goody-Two-Shows?!?!?! Nverrr...🀣 🀣 Mast tha...πŸ˜† [[This New word invent by TiNKU,He is the 'Copy-write holder' of that word..πŸ˜³πŸ˜†.so,don't use this word to any where😳]]  & Poor Tinku... Kitni Koshish ki usne to Bhagaofy Samrat but...πŸ˜† He's really vry sweet & Innocent... & OMG! 'CHINDI CHOR'?!?!😲 This 1 cracked me up...!! 🀣 Suits u Mr.Khadoos...🀣 No Actually u r "MANDIR K BAAHAR CHAPPAL CHURAANE WAALA CHOR" naa?! Yea Exactly...🀣 🀣 I did see u running dat day wit Lots of Chappals outside SiddhiVinayak Temple in Dadar...🀣 Vry Bad...!! Aise PAVITRA STHAAN par aise KARYA nahi karte...🀣 🀣 Jus Kidding...!!😳 πŸ˜† {{Hey !! Please check your specks glass No. 😲 😲 😲.Nahin hai toh check karao...πŸ˜† Warna aage aur zyada problem hogi...πŸ˜† πŸ˜† I am a Catholic Yaar...😳I never visit 'Siddhi Vinayak'πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†.  'Church' mein shoes,chappals,Sandels sab kuchh allowed haiπŸ˜†...koi utarta hi nahin toh chori kya karoonga...??πŸ˜³πŸ˜† Apni habbit mujh par mat force karo😑
🀣 🀣 .I heard 'Mandir' CCTV Camera ne tumhaari Pics capture ki hui hai...woh 'SANSANI😲' mein show kiya tha...🀣🀣 πŸ€£.

Khabardar,Hoshiyaar,Sawdhaan ho jaaiye iss sidhi saadi dikne wali ladki se... Yehi hai woh Khatarnak ladki jo Chupke se aap ke bhi chappal, Shoes gayab kar sakti hai... Achhi tarah se pehchaan lijiye isse...Jahaan bhi dekhiye... Hamein fauran..iss No. par inform karein...
🀣 🀣 🀣.

Samrat Stole the Show in this Update... Tinku ke 1-1 teer ka Jawaab diyaa h usne...🀣 🀣 & Wow!! Marketing Head in Multi-National Company, 2 BHK Flat (Yeah it is 2 BHK & not 2 BKH πŸ˜†) Vry Impressive...!! Samrat toh Full-On Buttering me lag gya h...πŸ˜‰ & Matar Paneer?!😲 OMG! My Fav...!!😲 πŸ˜³ & Pics u Ppl Select for Each-Scene...I mean they r like Perfect... Like the Gunjan-Kid's Pic... It Looks like they r actually Gunjan & Tinku... & the Pic wer the Food gets chocked in Samrat's Neck... A Perfection Point Again...😳 Truly Perfectionists U Guys...!! Hats OFF...!!πŸ‘πŸ˜³ & I love this Pic...!!😳 The MasterChef Joke was HILLARIOUS...!! OMG Tinku..!! I cant Stop ROFLing...!! 🀣 🀣 [[Thanks for liking this part😳 n Pics. and I admit that BHK/BKH fault...It was  typing mistake..n I use 'MS-word' for write so,Save word ki wajah se back to back enter hota gaya... Next time,will be careful😳]]

BTW Evn i've won the MasterChef Title of my College...😎 πŸ˜³ [[Haaiillaaa 😲 😲 😲 ,Itta bada 'Sach!!'😲
🀣 🀣🀣. Puri HAZMOLA ki bottle kha li πŸ˜‰,phir bhi digest nahin huaπŸ˜³πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣Ok...tab toh maine bhi kabhi 'Mr.MUMBAI' Tag win kiya hoga 🀣 🀣 Bas abhi year yaad nahin aa raha...🀣 🀣.]]



Thier Expressions r sooo Cuttteee...!!😳 The Family Moments wer just perfect...!!😳

& Now the SG Scene...Haaayyyeee, It was Beyond Adorable...!!😍 Samrat ke Thots wer sooo cuttteee... Breeze flowing, Star-Studded Sky, Jaisa Filmo me Hota Hai, Ho raha h Hubahu...!! 🀣 🀣 It was like FairyTale...!!😍 
& Samrat Flirting Wit Gunjan... Typical Samratish Ishtyle...😳 Loved It...!!❀️ & awww...Gunjan felt bad wen sam said about Tinku...Dats so sweet...!! Accha hua Sam ne maafi maang li... Meri Sis ko koi kuch bole toh mai toh Daant tod du...πŸ˜†
But Sam said Sorry & That was really Sweet...!! Hope Sam bhi Jaldi LITTLE MASTER se Frndshp krle coz isse Dushmani, Panga ho jayega...πŸ˜† & Gunjan's Concern for him was sooo Sweet...!! Haaayyyeee...!!☺️ It was sooo Cute & Adorable... Gr8 Job guys...!!😎{{Thanks...😳 SG scenes are our favorite too.Gunjan is so possesive for her Bro...achha hua jo maafi maang li...warna...😳.Waise she is not arrogent like youπŸ˜†...tabhi toh woh Gunjan hai..😳 Ekta nahin...πŸ˜† Jab kisi 'Daant todne waala'[waliπŸ˜†] character introduce karenge...usse EKTA hi name denge...πŸ˜† πŸ˜†Pakka promise😳.πŸ˜†}}.

& now the 3rd Part...!! M really Curious bout Gunjan & Tinku... Aisa kya h uss letter me?! Ok, i hav a story cooking up in my mind but m not sure if its right... Is Tinku suffering frm some Life-Threatening Disease?!😲 If Yes, den OMG! Ye kya kiya Guys?! Y???😭 Hopefully Its wrong wat m thinking but m just havng an Intution...πŸ˜• Well only Time will tell... Tinku is SO Adorable... Cnt bear to see him in such state...
& Plzzz Dont say WAIT & WATCH this tym...😳 Rehem karo Mujpe...🀣 🀣 Tinku is really vry Mature & Brave... & Propose?!😲 wen he said dat Evn i was lyk OMG! Kya Bol ra h...πŸ˜²πŸ˜† It was Hillarious...🀣 & & This Line-


T - (innocently) Toh aap kaun sa proposal samajh rahi thin...??Anyway,Aap dekhna...Jab 1 din woh aapko propose karenge... aap uss waqt mujhe hi yaad karogi...

I Really Think it has a vry deep meaning... Only Time & Updates will tell...😳 Loved the Bro-Sis Convo...😳 It was Mind-Blowingly Written Guys with pure Emotions... Truly Spendid...😳  [[ The character of TiNKU is very important part of this 'Love Triangle Story' He is not the lead but,not less the lead... His character is equally important, just like Main 3 characters. This time can't be disclose anything of that 'Mysterious' part. May be You are right...or wrong...??πŸ˜• only time will tell πŸ˜•. ]]

& Now the last Scene, It was Damn Cuttteee...!!😳 Awww...Sam is ready to change himself for Gunjan, That is just so sweet...!!😳 He's Really Adorable...☺️
& I Loved these Lines...Cracked Me Up...!! 🀣


Mom se baat karoon kya..?? Lekin.direct unse jaakar kya kahoonga...?? Yeh ki, Mom mujhe GUNJAN se hi shaadi karni hai...aap kisi tarah uss se meri shaadi kara do !! What rubbish...?? No way.!! Its sounding very cheap n down market... Dude tujh mein koi sharm-warm hai yaa nahin...?? Main apni shaadi ki baat khud apne munh se kaise kar sakta hoon...??  No...No...Mom toh GUNJAN ko hi galat samjh lengi... Kuchh aur sochna padega...

@RED- How Desperate?!😲 πŸ€£ It really sounds JUST TOO MIDDLE-CLASS [Maya Sarabhai Style πŸ˜†]
& Wah! Kya Baat h... ISHITA BHABHI truly ROCKS...!!😎 πŸ€£ Go Ahead samrat we all r wit U...!! πŸ€£

& This Para was just so Serene & Beautiful... my Fav in the Update...😍

He looked at the window, from where he could see GUNJAN... she still had her eyes shut... then he saw her move and shut off the bed side lamp.  A bit disappointed that now he could not see her, he got of the window sill and walked towards his bed. He lay down on the bed and closed his eyes once again and as expected... there she was. He turned over and pulled a pillow close to him and hugging it tightly, he went off to his dreamworld... a world in which GUNJAN was irreplaceable...  
 
Its Truly Mesmerising...!!😳 Amazing Work Guys...!!πŸ˜›

The Update was PERFECT...!! Each Scene, Dialogue, Characters Evrythng was Marvellous...!! Hats OFF to u 4...!! & Iss baar I Commented on MBYPH & APHG both toh bolna mat Ekta doesn't Comment...😳 & woh bhi I gave Long Comments Both the Time...!! So yaad rakhna...😳 πŸ˜† Aaj toh actually M super-happy coz of the news of Mohit's Return... The Best News ever...!!πŸ˜ƒ I just cant wait anymore now... Hope he Confirms it Soon... It wud be an advance B'day Gift... πŸ˜³ *FINGERS CROSSED* πŸ˜›
Thanks a lot for this sweet reply...😳 SAMRAT will be SAMRAT😳 . I am really glad that you liked whole Part n that particular Dio n narrative para too😳. And about MOHiT's return News...I knew it😊 but,conform nahin tha..😳.By the way mujhe jo News pata hai... woh isse 10 time more BIG hai😳 so my happiness is Bigger then you.😊 😊

& Plzzz Guys Dont Say Sorry for Long Updates coz WE really Love them...😳 So Plzzz... & I want a Long Rply to this LONG comment...😳 & Plzzz Update MBYPH ASAP...!! M 876433468898543346787 Times Excited for it...!! So Plzzz...😳 MBYPH Part to Update ho gaya naa...😲 Itti kya excitement ki ab tak Usse read hi nahin kiya...😲🀣.Waise rest Red part ko separately answer karoonga...wait..πŸ˜‘πŸ˜†.

Continue Soon,
Update ASAP,
Thnx 4 the PM & Dnt Forget To PM Me...!!😳

Luv,
Ekta...πŸ€—

Edited by Joseph_A - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: Mitaly..

JoshepπŸ‘β­οΈβ­οΈ

OMG u write soo well πŸ‘
its longπŸ˜†
took me forewer to read :P
Thanx :)))))⭐️⭐️



Thank You so much Mitaly for your compliment.😊 Yaa,Its 'Little' long😳 Sorry...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: ..-Sanzz-..

Heyyy, Me Here To Comment ! πŸ€— Really Loved The Part . Samrat Impressing Gunjan's Parents Was SOOO Obvious :) He Is Afterall Samrat Naa πŸ˜³ Every Heart's Dream <3 ! Lollzzz πŸ˜† Possessive Tinku , I Love The Bonding Of Gunjan & Tinku . Gunjan Made Round Round Chapaatis For The First Tym Naa ?! : O πŸ€£ Tinku Is Mature But At The Same Tym SOOO Innocent . The Way He Said About Proposal & Gunjan Thought The Other Proposal ;) πŸ˜ AWWW, & She Became Very Angry At Samrat When He Said Something Bad About Tinku . He Has To Impress Tinku First πŸ˜³ Curious To Know About Plan B . Do Continue Soonish πŸ€—



Thank you Sanzz😊 for manage some times for this Precious Reply😳. Samrat is very clear about his decision...😳so,cant lose any chance to impress Gunjan's parents...πŸ˜‰poor guy...!😭 He didn't know anything about Gunjan n Arnav thing.

Yaa,she made 'Round' chapatis fr the first time...😊 luckily for Samrat.πŸ˜‰ Tinku is really possesive for her 'Di' , Gunjan can't tolerate any single word against on him... They share a really cute n emotinal bonding.😊 We'll be try to continue soon...😳
 
Joseph.❀️.

By the way,Really nice Avi
.😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: sukklover

...😊

 

 
 
 
     4 pm me dear..πŸ˜ƒ
 
 
 
 
 
 
...πŸ‘πŸΌ 4
 
 
 
ur those  
 
 
 
 
 &
 updates...πŸ‘πŸ‘..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
this  updates really...
 
 
 
me ...  β­οΈβ­οΈ
 
 
 
 
 
lots of ...πŸ€—
 
lov,❀️
Tama
 
 
P.S.: plz donn't copy paste my comments...me only make it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as me saw many of my comments r copied me'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but don't coppied it whole as my post...😑
 
 P.S.S.: Plz guys also comment on my stuff...me tried to post comment in everyones...but my most of buddies didn't comment...if u not liked tell also...plz guys...πŸ˜²πŸ˜•me also want encougement & appreciation dears...
 
Note:
guys...me sad...me PM ed almost 500 but comment only...17-18..increased 30 now...πŸ˜•
me said u guys ealier if u don't like plz tell me...but it really hurts a lot...me try to reply each of u...many serials me don't watch but me read ur ff's ...checking out ur updated stuff's...n try to make a sweet comment which u guys liked...but u never check my any stuff...me really busy wid my studies...but also don't want to hurt my frndz...i try to comment ecah of u woh Pmed me...but only few of u ans my Pms...if don't want me to bother u...plz tell me...me never pm u...4 my any update...
but i updated 4 whom woh waited...me know just few..but me updated for them surely...but that surely me said..that me really hurt abut u guys...😭me uncontorled sob.sob..😭 



Thanks Tama for this sweet Comment n all cute stuffs..😊. but,I am still waiting for your PM about your creations...😳 Please send your Updates PM to me😳

Joseph❀️.