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Hey guys just finished reading part 9 i think that was ur latest update and am caught up now 😆
anyways completly loved the part as always😳 it was very well written i especially love all the dilouges of this ff. The filmy dilouges are really entertaining especially between samrat and his to be salla 😆 I especially enjoy the gabar dilouges. i also like the serious part of the story like the convo that took between sams parents. I think the story between samrats family and yamini family will be an intresting story. And arnavs part was ver intresting as well. I am eager to read how this story developes and how sajan actully become friends snd what are the secrets behind gunjans family 😃 keep on writting as wonderful as u guys do really love ur writting👏 do update soon and thak you for the pm😊

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Thank you so much Tanzeel for your sweet feed-back😳. Yaa part-9 was our last update.Thanks for appriciating the Dio. part of this FF😳... Samrat-Tinku's part creates some funny moments... their conversation reflects their Love n Hate relationship.

Actually,this is very serious kind of story... that funny sequences is only for characters n story establishments... after some times... no any fun here. Yes,Arnav part is very interesting... he is very nice n honest guy...but, current situation creates a major problem in his life... second side... Gunjan..she knows the problem of her family but,she can't do anything for it... Samrat don't know anything about her past... these 3 different characters will be create A very interesting 'Love Triangle'... that is the main plot of this story. We'll be update next part,tomorrow.😳

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...Aur PYAAR Ho Gaya !

PART 10 : (1/3)

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BHUSHAN HOUSE

As SAMRAT walked away behind their Mom, GUNJAN looked at TINKU and signaled him to join the them in the 'Living Room'. TINKU wanted to stay back and ask his Di why she was siding SAMRAT. But, if there was anyone he could not disobey, It was his sister. So he just nodded and walked away. GUNJAN also went to the kitchen to follow her mother's orders. As the rest of the family seated themselves in the sitting area, TINKU was glaring at SAMRAT. SAMRAT simply ignored him and continued talking to AMIT [GD] and NISHA [GM]. These two were impressed by SAMRAT. Inspite of belonging to a very rich and influential family of MUSSOORIE, SAMRAT had not an iota of pride. He was so down to earth and humble, they thought as he spoke to them.

On the other hand, TINKU was getting irritated. He yawned...making a loud sound as he did, which forced the other three to look at him in surprise as they got distracted by the sound. TINKU saw his Dad glare at him... He looked down, uttered an almost unheard 'SORRY'...

SAMRAT smirked at him as his parents shook their head in disapproval. Slowly he looked up... the three were busy in their talk. He was itching to take a shot at SAMRAT... who was trying to act like Mr.GOODY TWO SHOES... but ,he knew he would have to be careful... else his Mom and Dad would get angry and give him a earful which would upset his Di... and that he did not want...

But, he could not let SAMRAT off so easily too... so he continued his antics, which he knew would distract SAMRAT... sometimes patting his knees...and at other times, cupping his chin in his palms, resting his elbow on his knee and giving a bored look to SAMRAT. All this was distracting SAMRAT but, what was disturbing him the most was that TINKU was not speaking much... He knew...sometime soon this little 'Packet' would explode, catching him off guard completely. So, he had to be on his guard as long as this TINGU-MINGU was around. Mr. BHUSHAN realized that it was getting late for Dinner. He looked at his wife and said...

GD - Arre...NiSHA !! Kitchen mein jaakar dekho toh...aur kitni der hai...?? Inhein der bhi toh ho rahi hogi...

GM - Ji...Main abhi dekhti hoon... Nodding, she was about to stand up when she was stopped by the sweet tone of SAMRAT as he said...

S - Oh Please Aunty...!! Aap bewajah takleef kar rahi hain...I am okey...mujhe koi jaldi nahin hai... aur abhi toh itni raat bhi nahin hui... MUMBAI mein toh kabhi-kabhi ghar aate hue iss se bhi kahin zyada der ho jaati hai... He leaned back, his right leg crossed over his left, resting his elbow on the arm of the chair, he said in a very casual tone... Aur,phir mujhe kaun sa bahoot door jaana hai... Bas boundry wall hi toh paar karni hai... (He said without thinking... )

GD - Matlab...?? Main samjha nahin...?? (He asked as NISHA Jii also looked at him questioningly... )

S - Wo...woh...mera matlab tha ki,hamara ghar aapke compound ke thik bagal mein hi toh hai... toh ho gayi naa sirf 1 wall ko cross karne bhar ki doori... (He stammered as he tried to cover up his mistake...)

GM - Woh toh hai bete... par,phir bhi...main Dinner serve karwati hoon...

She was about to walk away when her son stopped her. He spoke in an unusually soft tone...a tone that SAMRAT had never heard him speak in. " Aap rehne do Mom... Main 'Di' ko kehta hoon... woh bas abhi Table set kar dengi.."

GD - Haan NISHA...rehne do...TINKU jaakar GUNJAN se keh dega... (said in general way...)

GM - Achha... !! phir thik hai... sat beside AMIT... and looked at SAMRAT side... asked a very simple question with... very soft but curious tone... " Waise bete...! Aap MUMBAI mein kya karte ho...?? Aap sab ka toh khud khud itna bada Hotel Business hai...? "

TINKU stood where he was... now he would get a chance to taunt SAMRAT... He was waiting impatiently for SAMRAT to answer. His hands crossed across his chest, he raised his eyebrows as he looked at SAMRAT... a smirk on his face... (( What a silly question...?? Yeh 'Chindi Chor' apna 'Real' profession kyun batane laga...?? Abhi-abhi toh kaha isne ...ghar aate hue kaafi raat ho jaati hai... zaroor wahaan bhi raat mein 'chori' ka kaam hi karta hoga... Wall cross karna... window par chadhna... yeh toh isske roz ka kaam hoga... 'Hotel Business' se toh isse BRIJ Bhaiyya ne nikal diya hoga... 'Bhukkad' kahin ka...!! Apne Hotel ka hi saara khana kha jaata hoga... )) Wiping the smirk off his face, he asked in an innocent way, as he sat down again... Good question Mom...!! (turned to SAMRAT's side) Aap aisa kaun sa kam karte hain...ki, Aapko der raat tak ghar se bahar rehna hota hai...?? ".

SAMRAT was expecting TINKU to talk... he knew...he just knew...this TINGU-MINGU would speak in between. He smiled at TINKU and then slowly moving his gaze from TINKU's face, he looked at AMIT n NISHA as he replied... " I work as a 'Marketing Head' in a Multi national company... Hamare clients foreign Countries mein bhi hain so, some time 'Video Confrencing' ke trough unhein deal karte hue late ho jaata hai. "

This simple reply by SAMRAT did its intended job, as AMIT & NISHA were completely smitten by SAMRAT. TINKU scowled... He hated this... He could not believe SAMRAT was actually succeeding in impressing his Parents. He blew out the air in his mouth after puffing his cheeks up and said in a bored tone... " Mom... main 'Di' ko dekhta hoon...Yahaan (looked at SAMRAT) bore hone se achha hai...jaakar 'Di' ko table set karne mein kuchh help kar doon." n ran to kitchen side...

Before, NISHA could say anything to him, he had disappeared from there. Embarrassed at her son's behavior, she turned to look at SAMRAT and said apologetically... "Sorry Bete !! Woh thoda zyada hi shararti ho gaya hai iss liye..."

S - (cuts softly) Its Okey Aunty...I know him..main subah bhi uss se mil chuka hoon... He is naughty but,very cute kid...By the way... Woh GUNJAN ki toh har baat maanta hai... toh phir GUNJAN hi usse kuchh kyun nahin kehti...? He asked in very curious tone...

NISHA Jii was not able to answer this question. She looked flustered as she looked at her husband, hoping he would answer this question. He signaled her to keep quite and let him do the talking.He looked at SAMRAT who, was waiting for an answer... just then AMIT spoke up... but on another topic... "Arre Bete...woh sab jaane do...waise inn baatoon mein toh main tumse yeh poochna hi bhool gaya ki..tum abhi yahaan rahoge naa...??"

SAMRAT realized that the BHUSHAN's did not want to answer that question, so he too let it be at that and answered..."Ji Uncle... abhi yahin hoon..actually kaafi time se Mom-Dad se nahin mil paaya tha iss liye... iss baar iss baar 15 Days ki leave le kar aaya hoon...

He was careful not to divulge the real reason for his presence in MUSSOORIE...

And the casual chat continued as they waited for Dinner to be served. SAMRAT was not leaving a chnace to impress the BHUSHAN's with his sweet talk.

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[B]

Meanwhile GUNJAN

GUNJAN finally turned the Gas off as she covered the utensil in which she had cooked MUTER-PANEER... and she turned around to leave the kitchen and tell the others to come at the Dinning table. She was surprised to see TINKU walking towards her... He looked at her, a small frown creasing his forehead and he looked away angrily. He walked haughtily towards the two seater situated on the other side of the Dinning table and sat on it...

GUNJAN wondered what was wrong... ?? Why was TINKU's mood so foul ?? She walked towards him and looked at him. He turned his face away. GUNJAN smiled and slowly looked at him, gently biting her lip as she tried to turn his face towards her. But, TINKU jerked his head, refusing to look at her. She sat next to him and kept her hands on her knee as she glanced at TINKU and smiled. TINKU looked the other side. GUNJAN gently kept her hand on his shoulder as she asked him lovingly... " Hey , Partner !! Wassup...?? Kya hua...? Iss tarah se munh phula kar kyun baithe ho...?? Mom yaa Papa ne kuchh kaha kya..? "

T - (Without looking at her and in a tone reflecting his upset mood...) Main aapse naraz hoon...iss liye abhi aapse baat nahin kar raha... Aap jaaiye... Bahar sab aapka hi wait kar rahe hain... (n made very upset face)

GUNJAN smiled as she heard her brother speak. She held him by his shoulders and gently turning him to face her, she said... her voice sounding scared... fake scared...

G - Arre Baap Re...!! Itna gussa...?? Lekin maine kiya kya hai...??

T - Kyun...Aap ne uss GABBAR SINGH ko kyun bachaya...?? Main aaj usse sabak sikha deta... Ussi ki Gadi ki wajah se aapko chot lagi... n I am sure... usne ghar par bhi aapko kuchh toh kaha tha... tabhi wahaan aap itni disturb thin...

G - (smiled...but said in serious way) Hey..wait...wait...Waise , its not fair naa... This is cheating... Tum yeh cheating kaise kar sakte ho...?

T - (surprisingly) Cheating...?? Maine kab cheating ki...??

G - Aur nahin toh kya...?? Naraaz toh mujhe tumse hona chahiye tha... ulta,tum hi mujhse naraaz ho...? Yeh kya baat hui...?? yeh toh cheating hi hui naa... (asked in same kiddish tone)

T - (strangely,with very innocent way) Aap mujhse kyun naraaz hongi Di...? Maine toh kuchh bhi nahin kiya...? Ab toh main aapki saari baat bhi maanta hoon... Kuchh hide bhi nahin karta... said with a pause.

G - (lovingly) Haan... maante ho... lekin,aaj toh nahin maani naa...?

T - Kaun si baat Di...?? Main toh hamesha aapki bat maanta hoon...

G - Kyun...? Tumne aaj subah mujhse promise nahin kiya tha ki,tum unse...I mean Mr.SHERGILL se baat nahin karoge... unhein koi jawaab bhi nahin doge... phir tumne unse baat kyun ki...? nahin actually 'Badtamizi'... tum unse 'Badtamizi' kar rahe the... Kyun...?? Maine tumhein mana kiya tha naa... woh kya sochte honge hamare baare mein...?? (said in serious way)

T - Sorry Di...!! He held his ears innocently... Really Sorry Di...!! Ab kabhi nahin karoonga... Par,aap mujhse naraaz mat hona Di... (He clutched her hands tightly as he promised his di... his eyes brimmed with tears and in a choked voice he said...) Aap kahogi toh main unse Sorry bhi keh doonga...

GUNJAN freed her hands from his grip as she cupped his face and one hand still holding his face, with the other hand, she wiped his tears... and then she hugged him tightly. She did not like to see tears in those innocent eyes... only happiness... that is what she always wanted to see. Wiping her own moist eyes, she broke the hug and said in a loving tone... " Arre Baba ! Main toh yun hi keh rahi thi... Main kabhi tumse naraaz ho sakti hoon kya...?? So,Please don't cry...warna main bhi rona start kar doongi..." (said in little fake threatening tone)

TINKU wiped his tears with the back of his hands ... and said in very soft tone... " Okey !...ab nahin roonga... Aap bhi mat rona..Aapki aankhon mein aansoo achhe nahin lagte Di... Aap rote hue bilkul achhi nahin lagti..."

GUNJAN smile softly, listening to her brother and that smile made TINKU grin... then looking at her naughtily, he said... "Yeh sab uss GABBAR SINGH ki wajah se hua naa..."

GUNJAN stopped smiling as she heard him speak. She tilted her head a bit to the side as she looked sternly... TINKU looked downwards... GUNJAN smiled and gently lifted his face...holding his chin in her thumb and index finger... and she kissed him on his forehead. She said in a loving tone... " No !! Aisa nahin hai... Hamein kisi ko jaane bina usse bura nahin kehna chahiye...main unhein bacha rahi thi kyunki,unhein save karna hamare liye zaroori tha... iss liye..."

T - (strangely) Matlab...? Unhone aapko threaten kiya...?? Aap mujhe batao Di... I swear main unhein nahin chhodunga...

G - (In an ordering tone) No...Tum unhein kuchh nahin kahoge... Agar iss baar kuchh kaha toh main sach mein naraaz ho jaaoongi... (looked at the wall clock ) Abhi already kaafi der ho rahi hai... Room mein baatein karenge...lekin,unke jaane ke baad...Okey...??

Though not happy with the way things were going, TINKU nodded in positive. GUNJAN smiled and hugged him... kissed on his cheek lovingly... He was happy...

Suddenly, TINKU freed himself and hitting his forehead with his hand, he almost screamed... " Oh GOD Di... I forgot completly..."

G - Kya...??

T - Wo...Woh Di !! Actually,inn sab batoon ki wajah se jo kehne aaya tha..woh toh bhool hi gaya...!!

G - Kya...?? Kaun si baat...??

T - Woh Di...!! Mom ne aapko Dinner table set karne ko kaha tha...Uss 'Bhukhhad' ko kaafi bhook lagi hogi...

Pata nahin ab tak toh usne Mom-Papa ke saamne kitne saare scenes perform kar diye honge... Papa ne kaha...shayad 'Bhukhhad' ko der ho rahi hai...toh... said in very innocent serious look...

GUNJAN looked at him angrily...

T - Ok...Okey...Sorry...! Uss SAMRAT ko der ho rahi hai. Ab toh thik hai...?? (asked innocently)

G - No... its not good...Tum unka naam nahin loge... He is older than you... toh iss tarah se toh bilkul bhi nahin...??

T - Sorry Di...phir,aap hi batao naa main unhein kya kahoon...? Mera "Bhaiyaa' kehna bhi toh,unhein pasand nahin...

G - Filhaal abhi toh tumhein unse koi baat hi nahin karni hai...baad ki baad mein sochenge... Abhi toh chal kar Table set kar lete hain...

T - Okey...chalo phir..main aapki table set karne mein help kar deta hoon... Ab toh mujhe bhi kaafi zoroon ki bhookh lag rahi hai...(made a puppy face) Iski wajah se mere 'Mango Custard' Bechare...woh bhi mera intezaar hi karte reh gaye honge...

GUNJAN smiled and patted him on his back. Both stood up and linking their arms, they walked towards the kitchen... TINKU came out with the plates, followed by GUNJAN who was carrying the bowls and spoons. Slowly the table was set. The brother-sister duo kept all the casseroles containing food on the Dinning table and then, GUNJAN asked TINKU to call the others at the table. She went back in to get the Casserole containing Roti's, which she had managed to make, inspite of her mother asking her not to.

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...Aur PYAAR Ho Gaya !

PART 10 : (2/3)

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Dinning Hall

The BHUSHAN's and SAMRAT came at the Dinning table, while TINKU rushed back to the kitchen. As AMIT took his seat at the table,NISHA Jii took her seat to her husband's left... the normal seating arrangement at the BHUSHAN's. Normally GUNJAN would sit on the right of AMIT, but today AMIT asked SAMRAT to sit there. SAMRAT took his seat and smiled at the BHUSHAN's.

TINKU came out with the dish bowls just then, when he saw SAMRAT take his sister's seat. He was seething with anger seeing this. He was about to say something when he felt his sister's loving touch. She stood behind him, her hand on his shoulder...the touch telling him to keep quite and not say anything. He looked at her and saw her smiling at him. Shaking his head in disapproval, He walked towards the table and took his seat next to his mother.

GUNJAN kept the Roti's casserole on the table and started serving everyone Dinner. She served the MUTER-PANEER to everyone, then the salad and then steaming hot roti's. She then took her seat next to SAMRAT, sending SAMRAT on cloud nine. TINKU scowled at him while SAMRAT smiled at him. SAMRAT took the first bite of MUTER-PANEER ...

S - WoW Aunty...!! Its so delicious...so...Yummy... ! I have never tasted such tasty food ever... Yeh 'Matar-Paneer' bahot hi khaas hai... totally out of the world... Actually I like 'Matar -Paneer'... lekin aaj ke baad toh yeh meri favorite hai...

As NISHA took the first bite of the delicious food cooked by her daughter, she heard SAMRAT appreciate her daughter's cooking... unknowingly. She looked at GUNJAN lovingly and smiled at her. GUNJAN returned the smile and looked down at her plate again. NISHA looked at SAMRAT and said...

GM - Thanks bete..Par yeh 'Matar-Paneer' maine nahin banaye... Yeh toh GUNJAN ne banaye hain... usse cooking kaafi pasand hai... (said proudly)

SAMRAT turned to look at GUNJAN... a light pink shade had coloured her milky white cheeks as her eyes were laced with shyness... she looked so angelic then... her smile completing her drop dead gorgeous look sending SAMRAT to seventh heaven then.quickly composing himself, he said...as he looked at NISHA Jii...

S - I know Aunty... She has outstanding cooking talent... I told you naa... Inhone subah hamare ghar par kaafi delicious items banaye the... Lekin,Point is...Isne bhi toh aap se hi sikha hoga naa... toh real credit toh aapko milna chahiye... Aapki wajah se hi toh woh aaj itni achhi cook hai...

TINKU coughed loudly as he heard SAMRAT speak. He looked angrily at SAMRAT. All others were looking at TINKU. NISHA Jii quickly handed him a glass of water, which he gulped down quickly.

He looked at GUNJAN, who looked worried as she saw him cough. TINKU looked at SAMRAT, who was staring at him... he thought... (( What the Hell...?? Again meri Di ko 'Cook' kaha...?? Iss 'Bhukhhad' ki problem kya hai...?? Yeh hamesha sirf cooking related topic hi kyun nikalta hai...?? Aur Mom ki itni buttering...?? I am sure ab toh again Mom ka ''Cholesterol" badh jaayega... 'Di' ki wajah se chup hoon...warna...Iss ki toh...aaj Band baja deta ))

As TINKU's cough had subsided by now, everyone else continued eating. SAMRAT ate another bite as he continued talking..."You know what Aunty...?? I am 100% sure that... GUNJAN jaisa food toh hamare Hotel ka koi chef bhi nahin bana sakta... looked at GUNJAN... You are really Outstanding..."

GUNJAN slowly looked at him and smiling at him , only said... "Thanks..."

SAMRAT smiled at her. He could keep looking at her all day long, but right now his priority was to impress her parents, and he was doing pretty well at that...

TINKU looked at SAMRAT, his mouth wide open... He could not believe what he was hearing. This is what this man wanted?? Ridiculous... and Mom and Dad could not see through this... this person... disgusting... ((OMG !! Now,I understand his weird intention ...I know...what is his Planning...?? Main bhi confuse tha ki, aakhir yeh chahta kya hai...?? par,ab nahin... Yeh ho na ho Meri 'Di' ko apne hotel ka 'Master Chef' banana chahta hai... issi liye subah se Di ka cooking test le raha hai...pehle apne ghar bula kar Lunch ke items try kiye aur ab Hamare ghar aakar Dinner ke items try kar raha hai... 'Losers' kahin ka...

Iski toh main...!! Meri 'Di' koi cook-wook nahin banegi... Yeh jaanta kya hai meri Di ke bare mein...?? She is a topper of her College... MBA ki brilliant student hain woh... yeh 'Chindi chor' toh copy kar ke paas hua hoga... Meri 'Di' toh iski bhi class le sakti hain... Woh toh... unhone study chhod di toh... feeling a pain in his small heart...and suddenly felt that his eyes were teary... immediately wiped it... Lekin...I know,1 din woh apni study zaroor continue karengi... Aur woh wahaan bhi dobara se Top par hongi... Kya hua jo uss waqt...)) Thankfully his Dad decided to speak up, breaking his chain of thoughts...

GD - Haan bete... lekin NISHA...tumne aaj 1 cheez notice kii...?? Kya aaj kuchh missing nahin hai..??

GM - Kaun si cheez...??

GD - Arre aaj pehli baar hamari Princess ne puri round figure waali rotiyaan banai hain... Pehle toh hamein India ke saare STATE ke maps yahin table par hi mil jaate the... Ab toh hum unhein roz miss karenge...

NISHA Jii kept her hand on her mouth as she chuckled on hearing her husband speak. AMIT guffawed and SAMRAT could not contain his laughter too. GUNJAN looked at her Dad in disbelief... TINKU was doing what he did best...looking angrily at SAMRAT... GUNJAN spoke in an upset tone...

G - Mom...Papa...Its not fair... Maine itni mehnat se Rotiyaan banani sikhi aur aap sab...

T - (with upset tone) Haan Mom... Di ne kitni mehnat ki...toh aap log unn par hans kyun rahe hain...?

GD - Achha Baba sorry...!! Nahin hansenge aapki 'Di' par... Ab toh khush... ?? In fact...ab koi kuchh nahin kahega... Unn ATLAS Rootiyoon ke baare mein... controlling his laughter, he looked at SAMRAT and NISHA Jii and winked at both... sending them in peals of laughter again...

TINKU looked at GUNJAN. She looked embarassed as she looked away. TINKU spoke up a bit seriously..."Forget it Di... Yeh sab kisi ka side effect hai.." (Clenching his teeth as he looked at SAMRAT and spoke, his fist clenched, ready to punch SAMRAT, If only his Di would permit. But he knew that would never happen. So he simply looked at his Di as he reassuringly, shut his eyes and nodded in a "NO', indicating "Don't bother about them'" ... and continued eating his food.)

In between bites, casual talk continued. The BHUSHAN's were asking SAMRAT about his stay in MUMBAI, when the topic turned to residences in Metro's... the availability and prices.

GD - I know bete...Metro Cities mein 1 Apartment woh bhi kisi achhe Area aur location par mil pana kitna tough hai... Tumhein bhi toh problem hui hogi naa...??

SAMRAT knew, this was another chance to impress the BHUSHAN's. He smiled softly as he thought... (( Chal SAM...shuru ho jaa...This is perfect chance to impress him... Mujhe batana hoga ki, GUNJAN ke liye unhein mujhe se better choice nahin mil sakti... Mujhe apni saari achivements batani hongi..)) said in very serious way...

S - No,Uncle... Mujhe problem nahin hui Because,mujhe office ki taraf se hi Apartment allot hua tha...lekin kuchh dinon ke baad jab mujhe promotion mili...toh maine khud ka hi ek 2BHK Apartment buy kar liya... Abhi filhall toh main wahin rehta hoon...

GD - Oh Great...!! Kaafi short period mein tumne kaafi kuchh achive kar liya hai... MUMBAI jaisi expensive city mein itni jaldi khud ka 2BHK flat le lena...kisi Big achivement jaisa hi hai... (said in happy tone)

S - Thanks Uncle... (proudly) waise ,Now I am searching another big Apartment... Jo Office se aur bhi zyada kareeb ho...

GM - Lekin Bete... Bada Apartment kyun...?? 1 sirf tumhaare liye toh 2BHK ka Apartment enough hai...?

S - (smiled softly) Yes Aunty...Its really enough for me...But,I want ki..after marriage... (looked at GUNJAN side) Kisi bade se Apartment mein shift karoon... taki koi problem na ho... GUNJAN looked at him...feeling strange with his weird face expressions...

GM - Oh...!! Yaa...yeh bhi sahi hai... Waise kab hai tumhaari marriage... ??

As NISHA asked this very casual and obvious question, SAMRAT was, for once caught off guard. He started coughing as he got nervous, startling GUNJAN.

She quickly stood up and filled SAMRAT's glass with water, handing it over to him. As he was gulping water like it meant life, he felt GUNJAN patting him gently on his back. Inspite of his nervousness, he could not but cherish that touch, which had a lot of care in it. Keeping the glass on the table, he looked at her. She was looking concerned. Before she could say anything, SAMRAT sheepishly smiled at her and said...

S - Thanks...!!

G - Aap thik toh hain...?? (asked in very caring tone)

S - (with smiling face) Yaa...I am fine...woh bas waise hi kabhi-kabhi... sorry...

GM - Koi baat nahin bete...ho jaata hai... [said to GUNJAN] GUNJAN ... Unhein desert toh serve karo..uss se aaram milega...

G - Ji...Mom..!! Main abhi laayi ...

She got up and walked towards the kitchen, to return shortly with the dessert bowl...TINKU's eyes widened with glee as he saw his favorite Mango custard... GUNJAN took her seat and served the custard in the dessert bowls that TINKU had kept on the table earlier.

She handed over the bowl to SAMRAT who accepted it, saying THANKS... as he put a spoonful of custard in his mouth, he shut his eyes as he took in the taste and opening his eyes, with a smile, he said... "Its really-really Yummy...!! I loved it... Kya main aur le sakta hoon...? " asked very softly...

G - Oh...Kyun nahin... n served more custuard on his bowl...

S - (turned to AMIT side) Do you know Uncle... After today's Dinner... I think ,ab mujhe kahin aur ka khana toh bilkul bhi achha nahin lagega... Main yeh taste kabhi bhool nahin sakta...

GM - Arre toh kya problem hai... tum jab tak yahaan ho...kabhi bhi aa jana... Iss ghar ko bhi tum apna ghar maan sakte ho... SUDHA Jii ne kaafi help ki hai hamari,jab hum yahaan naye - naye aaye the...

S - (with smiling face) Thanks Aunty... for your invitiation... ab aap dekhna... Main kabhi bhi chala aaoonga... GUNJAN se toh dosti ho gayi... (smiled to saw her) ab bas 1 hamare little Master se Dosti karna reh gaya hai...woh bhi jald hi ho jaayegi... said in fake smiling face...TINKU smiled back with same fake way... He was lost in his thought... (( I knew it... Yeh mere 'Custard' try kar aise hi goody-goody comment pass kar sabko impress kar dega... 'Dosti' my foot...!! woh toh 'Di' ne rok diya hai warna.. toh aaj iski...!! Mom bhi naa... kya zaroorat thi isse roz invite karne ki...?? Ab toh har roz iss Dinning Table par iski shakl ke saath-saath ,iske long-long filmy dialogue sun ne padenge... Aaj hi 'Di' ko keh doonga...ki,kabhi iske 'proposal' ko accept na kare... Jaaye kisi dusre bade Chef ko approach kare... Isse kis angle se meri 'Di' cook lagti hai...?? ))

But, SAMRAT had succeeded in his mission. AMIT n NISHA were absolutely impressed by SAMRAT and his humble behavior. SAMRAT on the other hand, could feel the warmth of a close knit family. He looked at people seated at the table... each looking so happy and enjoying this family time. They were so like his family, enjoying small moments of happiness. He then looked at TINKU, who was busy eating his favorite desert and smiled. This young lad was not all that bad, just a bit possessive about his Di...

SAMRAT looked at GUNJAN, who sat next to him and looked lovingly at TINKU. The best part of this Dinner was that GUNJAN was so close to him, he could smell her sweet scent, hear her soft, rhythmic breathing and see her smile... Hear her sweet voice from so close... If , this is what people say is bliss, then he could not agree more. He was right...GUNJAN was the one... after today, there was no denying it.

After a delicious Dinner , SAMRAT decided now it was time to leave. He said to Mr BHUSHAN... "Uncle... I think ab mujhe chalna chahiye... Kaafi der ho chuki hai...aur mujhe kahin aur bhi jaana hai... so, abhi jaana hoga..."

This statement made TINKU hyper again... (( OH GOD !! Yeh abhi bhi think hi kar raha hai...?? Ab kya Raat bhar yahin...hamare saath hi rukne ka plan bana kar aaya tha kya...?? Ab toh Dinner bhi kha chuka... Ab aur kya khayega...?? Please...Please...Dad...ab isse mat rokna... Kaafi paka chuka hai...thodi der aur raha toh main toh pagal ho jaaoonga...))

GD - (said softly) Okey Bete...! Wakai kaafi raat ho gayi hai...iss liye tumhein aur zyada der rok bhi nahin sakta...lekin jaane se pehle promise karna hoga ki,tum aate rahoge...Hamein really tum se milkar kaafi achha laga...

S - Oh sure Uncle... Yeh bhi koi kehne ki baat hai...Aunty already mujhe invite kar chuki hain... ab toh jab dil karega...chala aaoonga...at least jab tak yahaan hoon..(said happily...after a short Pause) ...lekin,abhi toh mujhe chalna hoga...

GD - Thik hai... phir milte hain... (He looked at GUNJAN...) "Bete inhein bahar tak chhod kar toh aao..."

S - (Quickly) No Uncle...!! Its okey...main chala jaaoonga... Don't wory...

GD - I know bete...lekin yeh toh 1 custom hai...jo kehta hai ki, hamein khud se apne guest ko bahar tak chhodne jaana chahiye...

G - Yes... Its not a big thing...

S - Okey...toh phir chalo...(said with smiling face)

He moved aside to let GUNJAN lead the way. She smiled at him and walked past him. SAMRAT also followed her when he stopped. TINKU frowned when he saw SAMRAT stop. But ,SAMRAT had by then walked up to Mr .and Mrs. BHUSHAN and he bent down to touch their feet... looking slyly at an open mouth TINKU, He smirked and winked at him. He then waved him bye and walked away, behind GUNJAN. He was happy... PLAN 'A' a complete success...

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SAMRAT & GUNJAN reached the porch of the house. The clear sky was dotted with innumerable stars... the full moon gleaming down at them... the cool breeze caressing them as they walked... GUNJAN stopped to look at sky. She loved to see the sky dotted with stars... SAMRAT looked at her...she looked so angelic. The slight breeze losing itself in her brown tresses, touching her 'Dupatta' unabashedly...

He was really jealous of the breeze that could take the liberty of being so close to her, touch her gently... He saw her eyes gleaming as she looked at the stars, and that gorgeous smile on her lips... The simple attire sealing off the simple yet beautiful and elegant look that she managed to carry off with amazing ease. SAMRAT could have stood there all night long looking at her, but he composed himself as he spoke softly... breaking the silence...

S - Thanks...

G - (looked at him strangely) Kis baat ke liye...??

S - Woh tumne abhi jhooth keh kar mujhe Uncle se bachaya... aur phir iss dinner treat ke liye..

G - (smiled) Papa se bachana toh majboori thi... aapne koi option hi nahin choda tha... SAMRAT smiled too... Aur jahaan tak baat Dinner treat ki hai..toh,Dinner ke liye aapko Papa ne invite kiya tha...iss liye yeh thanks aapko unhein karna chahiye...

S - Haan...lekin woh dinner toh tumne hi banaya tha naa... iss liye, tumhein thanks kaha...Uncle-Aunty bahot achhe hain... You both are very lucky...

G - (cuts quickly with little sad but serious tone) ...Itni jaldi kisi ka luck decide nahin karte... Lekin..haan Main aur TARUN lucky hain kyunki,hamein Mom-Papa jaise parents mile... smiled but something was missing there...quickly she changed the topic... ..Aur waise bhi woh 1 simple Dinner tha...uss mein kuchh bhi special nahin tha...

S - Lekin,mere liye toh wahaan sab kuchh special hi tha... He walked to be a bit closer to her... she looked at him and moved two steps back... fiddling with her dupatta as she looked downwards... SAMRAT smiled as he spoke, in his gentle tone... "Don't worry... bas main ja hi raha tha..."

He walked to the main gate, opened it and walked towards his bike, that was parked out. GUNJAN looked at the bike, then at SAMRAT as she asked...

G - Main Gate toh andar se lock tha...toh aap aaye kaise...?? SAMRAT sat on his bike n said in very relax way...

S - Arre ! Main Gate se aata toh,sab ko pata nahin chal jaata kya...? Uncle Hall mein hi baithe the...Tumhaare Hall se Yahaan ka view toh easily maloom hota hai...aur waise bhi main toh sirf tumse milne aaya tha... Ab mujhe kahaan pata tha ki,tum aaj hi apne parants se milwa dogi... Check his look in side mirror of bike.. "I hope ki,aaj main inn kapdon mein zyada bura nahin lag raha hoon... warna kitna bura impression padta" He spoke casually... as he looked slyly at GUNJAN and was amused by what he saw...

GUNJAN looked at him, her mouth open, her eyes widened with surprise as she said... "WHAT...?? WHAT are you saying...??" The shock in her voice and the expression on her face made SAMRAT smile... he shook his head and then looked at her, saying...

S - Don't worry...! Just kidding...Relax...!! (said with smiling face)

G - Oh...! Main woh...

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S - Wo...woh ... actually socha tha ki, sirf tumse milkar subah jo kuchh hua uske liye tumse Sorry kahoonga.. aur bina kisi ko kuchh bataye chup-chap chala jaaoonga... Lekin...Lekin tumhaare uss 'Shaitaan' Bhai ne mere saare Plan ki hawa nikal di... (His tone sounded upset... and though it was fake, GUNJAN failed to pick it up. she got upset when she heard SAMRAT speak ill about her brother...)

G - (angrily) Xcuse me...!! Maine aapsa thode achhe se baat kya kar li... iska matlab yeh nahin ki aap mere bhai ko kuchh bhi kahenge... Usne kuchh wrong nahin kiya... 1 stranger ko iss tarah apne ghar par dekhkar koi bhi waise hi react karega... jaisa ki usne kiya... Aur,mujhe samajh nahin aata ki,Aap hamesha uske peeche kyun pade rehte hain..?? (asked in a very upset tone)

S - Main uske peeche pada rehta hoon...?? Hey ! are you Okey...?? Xcuse me...!! Woh mere peeche pada rehta hai... Aaj toh usne mujhe jail bhejne ka pura intezaam kar liya tha... woh toh mere 'Karm' acche the jo upar waale na bacha liya... aur tum...?? Tum har waqt ussi ki side kyun leti ho...??

G - Kyunki,I know him...He is my Brother... Agar aapko uss se problem hai yaa aap usse pasand nahin karte toh hum sab se door rahiye... Maine aapko subah bhi kaha tha.. aur abhi phir kehti hoon... koi bhi mere bhai ke against kuchh bhi kahe... yeh main kabhi tolerate nahin karoongi...

S - Arre...lekin main toh...

G - (cuts angrily) Let me finish first... !! Woh thoda naughty ho sakta hai lekin usne kabhi apni shararton se kisi ko harm nahin kiya... aur aap yeh mat bhooliye ki, Aap hamare ghar aaye the... Woh aapke ghar nahin gaya... toh woh aapke peeche nahin... Aap uske peeche pade hain...

GUNJAN was angry as she blurted all the words... without a pause. SAMRAT realised she was angry with him and he could not let this meeting that had been so wonderful till now end on a sour note. Just as she had turned and was about to leave, SAMRAT quickly got off the bike and stood in front of her, holding his ears, and making a puppy face, he said...

S - Sorry... !! GUNJAN looked at him, surprised... she could not understand the meaning of all this...SAMRAT's over friendly behavior... but SAMRAT continued... "Extremely Sorry !! Dekho ab toh kaan bhi pakad liye... and Promise... ab kabhi usske against kuchh nahin kahoonga... Ab toh maaf kar do...??

GUNJAN looked down... She did not know how to react to all this. SAMRAT was so humble...His apology was so humble... His behavior was downright cute... She had to calm down, SAMRAT gave her no chance. She looked at him and smiled as she said... in her soft and gentle tone... "Its Okey... !! Aap ko maafi maangne ki zaroorat nahin... after a little Pause... Okey...I am Sorry... Shayad maine aapse kuchh zyada hi rudely baat ki... I know...shayad TINKU ne apko aaj kuchh zyada hi pareshaan kiya...Uski taraf se main maafi maangti hoon... and I promise...main puri koshish karoongi ki,agli baar woh aapse door rahe...

S - (with smiling face) Its Okey...tumhein bhi Sorry kehne ki zaroorat nahin... Actually,some time main bhi over-react kar deta hoon... Nothing serious...

G - No...but,I am serious... Aapko dobara uss se koi problem na ho... Main iska khyal rakhooongi...

S - Ok ... Good actually...toh..now,tell me kal kab aaoogi...?? (asked instantly)

G - Kahaan...??

S - Ghar par aur kahan...?? Waise tum kaho toh hum kahin bahar bhi mil sakte hain... (said naughitly with a flirting style)

G - WHAT...?? (shockingly)

SAMRAT stifled a chuckle as he saw her face expressions. He spoke in a normal tone... "Arre...! Itna shock hone ki zaroorat nahin hai... tumhein abhi bataya toh tha... Kal 'Pooja' mein Mom ne tum sab ko invite kiya hai... Infact, Maine toh Uncle se permission bhi le li...

G - Haan...lekin...wo...

S - Koi Lekin-wekin... Koi par-war nahin... aur tumhein toh subah se aana hoga... Mom ki help karne ko... Kyunki,agar tum nahin aayi toh main samjhoonga ki,tumne mujhe dil se maaf nahin kiya...

G - Ok...aa jaaoongi... she said this after a short pause,with smiling face

SAMRAT reciprocated her smile... and was about to start his bike, when he stopped and looked at GUNJAN... she asked...her tone reflecting her confusion...

G - Ek baat poochoon...??

S - Off Course...In-fact agar 1 se zyada poochogi toh aur zyada achha lagega. (said with smiling face)

G - No...woh... actually... Aap Bike se aaye...? I mean aapka ghar toh bilkul bagal mein hi hai phir...??

S - (with smiling face) Haan..kyunki,Mujhe abhi kahin aur bhi jaana hai...woh kya hai naa ki, kaafi time ke baad MUSSOORIE aaya hoon...toh kuchh old friends hain... unhin se milne...

G - (Cuts quickly) Oh...!! Lekin ab toh kaafi raat ho chuki hai... Aap unse kal subah bhi toh mil sakte hain... Kya itni raat mein jaana zaroori hai...?? (Though her tone was soft, the concern was evident...)

SAMRAT grinned... He loved to see her concern for him... Had it been someone other than GUNJAN who had said this, he would have lost his temper. But, he was loving this concern from GUNJAN... in his style... bending closer towards GUNJAN, he asked her... "Toh nahin jaaoon...??"

GUNJAN looked away, flustered... she too felt something different...quickly composing herself, she said... " Sorry...wo..woh mera matlab woh nahin tha... Maine..toh..bas yun hi kaha..woh raat kaafi ho gayi hai...iss liye...aur kuchh nahin... Main aapko rok nahin rahi..."

S - (said with smiling face) I know...maine kahaan kuchh kaha...Maine toh sirf poocha... Waise tum itna ghabra kyun rahi ho...?? I know ki,tum nahin chahti ki main itni raat mein kahin bahar jaaoon...Its ok...

G - Nahin...wo...woh...Main toh bas waise hi...

S - (with smiling face) Don't worry...Nahin jaaoonga... Now...You can go... Raat kaafi ho gayi hai... main chala jaaonga...N believe me...Ghar hi jaaoonga.. (said in very concerned tone with smiling face)

G - (smiled) Ok...Bye...Good Night...

S - Good Night...

GUNJAN smiled as she turned around to go back in the house. SAMRAT kept looking at her as she walked away. He was happy today. He looked at the sky, and asked his dude to ensure that he was successful... She had to be in his life...his life would be a beautiful journey with GUNJAN as his life partner... a journey to cherish. He looked at her as she entered her house and turned around to shut the door. SAMRAT started his bike and drove off...

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PART 10 : (3/3)

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BHUSHAN HOUSE

GUNJAN shut the door and turned around. She saw her Dad sitting in his favorite rocking chair... watching his news based show. So engrossed was he in the show, that he did not realize his princess silently walk up to him and hug him tightly. As he felt his daughter's arms lovingly round his neck, he smiled, reducing the volume of television and holding her arm as he looked up at her, He raised his eyebrows, as If asking her "What "...

GUNJAN simply nodded a NO and gently placed a loving kiss on his forehead as she moved her arms away from her Dad's neck and turned to walk towards the kitchen. AMIT's eyes glistened with tears as he saw her walk away. It would not be long before she would be gone forever... and how was he to survive each day without her... coming home from work and not seeing her welcoming smile as she got him a glass of water, which tasted sweet like honey??? He wiped his tears as she disappeared from his view. He knew he would have to be strong... for his family. Sighing, he increased the volume little more and tried to forget everything...

GUNJAN entered the kitchen to see her Mom cleaning up the utensils. She stood next to her mother, who looked at her as she felt her presence and smiled at GUNJAN. She returned the warm smile and started helping her mother clean up the kitchen. Mother-daughter spent some exclusive time together...talking, joking...God alone knew when and whether this time would again be gifted to them. They wanted to make the most of each moment they had.

After the kitchen was cleaned up, mother-daughter left the kitchen. Wishing her Mom 'GOOD NIGHT' and almost shouting the same to her father, GUNJAN went to her room. TINKU sat the study table writing something.

GUNJAN smiled as she saw him bent over the book, engrossed in writing. He did not notice his Di had entered the room and she had opened the cupboard to take her night suit. As she shut the door and turned around, she was surprised to see TINKU still engrossed in his writing. GUNJAN walked up to him and caressed his hair. Startled TINKU looked up at his sister, quickly shutting the note book... he stammered...

T - 'Di' aap kab aayin...??

G - Bas abhi... Tum shayad kuchh write karne mein busy the.... (said casually)

T - (Worriedly...) Haan...Wo...Woh... Bas waise hi...kuchh answers yaad kiye the... Usse hi write kar revise kar raha tha... Sachhi mein...Aap... aap khud se dekh lo... (He halfheartedly shoved the book towards her...)

GUNJAN pushed the book back towards him and said in her sweet and caring voice... Its Okey Baba...!! Main kahaan kuchh keh rahi hoon...? Tum iss tarah ghabra kyun rahe ho...?

T - Main... main... kahan ghabra raha hoon...! Aap toh jaanti hain mujhe... TINKU se log ghabrate hain...TINKU kabhi nahin ghabrata.. (Very proudly, TINKU said...with full of attitude ...glad that the topic would now change...)

But, GUNJAN was after all his older sister. She cupped his face in her hands and said... " You Ok Naa...?? "

T - Yaa... Di...!! I am fine...Aap...aap jaldi se apne night suit change kar lo naa... phir, hum aaram se baatein karenge...

G - (Leaving his face and folding her hands, she said...) WHAT...?? Aaj tumhein hua kya hai..? Mujhse batein karni hain...? Woh bhi iss waqt...?? Abhi toh tumhara favorite Cartoon show aata hai...??

T - Haan par ab woh boring ho chuka hai... iss liye... after a liitle pause Di..! kya aaj main yahin so jaaoon...??

G - (lovingly) Toh iss mein poochne waali kaun si baat hai...? Maine tumhein kabhi mana kiya hai kya...?? Nahin naa...? toh phir...? Tum yahaan so sakte ho... Main abhi change kar aati hoon...

Smiling at him, she turned away and walked towards the bathroom, so she could change to her night Suit. No sooner had the bathroom door closed, than TINKU quickly picked up the special note book and kept it in the drawer, and ran towards the bed. Jumping in, he made himself comfortable, waiting for his Di. Some minutes later, GUNJAN came out and sat on the bed, lost in her own thoughts... TINKU looked at her and gently, he prodded her... "Di...! Ab aap batao naa...Aapne SAM... (GUNJAN glared) Sorry...!! Mr.SHERGILL ko kyun save kiya...? Unki Car ki wajah se hi toh hamari DHANNO ki yeh condition ho gayi... aur aapko chot bhi lagi... phir aapne kyun...?"

GUNJAN smiled as she lifted her legs from the ground and settled comfortably next to TINKU. She put her arm round his shoulder and said in a serious tone... "Main unhein save kar raahi thi kyunki,unhein yeh pata hai ki unki Car ko hamari SCOOTY ne hi dent kiya hai... aur woh yeh baat Papa ko na bata den... Issi liye main unhein Papa se bacha rahi thi..."

T - (Shockingly as he moved away from GUNJAN and kneeling in front of her) WHAT...?? GABBAR SINGH ko sab pata hai...? Oh God !! Ab kya hoga Di...?? Agar meri wajah se naraz hokar,Unhone Papa ko sab kuchh bata diya toh...? Phir toh hamara ghar se akele bahar jaana bilkul hi band ho jaayega... Mom bhi permission nahin dengi... aur ab toh waise bhi DELHI jaane ke baad toh sab kuchh... He stopped talking as he squatted on the bed, thinking about something.

This did not go unnoticed by GUNJAN... his eyes were reflecting his sadness... and much as she wanted to avoid this situation, it did spread its fangs... ending up hurting her lil bro... she composed herself and moving herself closer to him, she held his hands in her palms and kissed them as she said in a fake reassuring tone... holding his hands close to her bosom... "Arre...! Tum fikr kyun kar rahe ho...? Main hoon Naa... maine unse request ki hai... Unhone Promise kiya hai ki,woh kisi ko kuchh nahin kahenge... aur jahaan tak baat DELHI shift hone ki hai toh...don't worry... be positive n think positive...tum dekhna...1 din sab kuchh thik ho jaayega... kyunki,achhe logon ke saath kabhi bura nahin hota... toh phir hamare saath kyun hoga...? (n smiled softly)

Though GUNJAN was saying these reassuring words, her beautiful, expressive eyes were not endorsing these sentiments. And there was no way that TINKU could not read what her eyes were saying... he endorsed what her eyes said...

TINKU knew they were right... this time nothing was going to be alright... his Di was wrong... though he was just a kid, he knew time had come... GUNJAN was tensed... and TINKU knew this. So he had to change the topic to relax his sister... he removed his tiny hands from her grip, which had tightened... and keeping his head on her lap, he said... " Uff Di... Aap bhi naa kabhi-kabhi bilkul Hindi daily soap ki heroine ki tarah emotional ho jaati ho... Aapne khud abhi kaha na...sab kuchh thik ho jaayega...toh hum wait karte hain naa... uss din ka jab sab kuchh pehle jaisa ho jaayega... Socho...phir main kitnon ki Band bajaaoonga..." (said with smiling face)

GUNJAN smiled as she heard TINKU speak. She let him settle and then she ran her fingers through his hair... patting him with her other hand. He continued... "Waise bhi woh GABBAR already aaj kaafi saare scenes perform kar chuka hai... I can't tell you... Maa-Papa ke saamne aise-aise dialogue delivery de raha tha ...jaise kisi Saas-Bahu show ka dialogue writer ho...

GUNJAN knew what her bro was up to. She gently patted his cheek as she smiled and said... " Haan...lekin ab tumhein unse kuchh nahin kehna hai..aur na hi unhein pareshaan karna hai...Okey...??

T - (said innocently) Don't worry Di...! Ab kuchh nahin kahoonga...lekin,aap kuchh bhi kaho I don't trust him...

G - (curious way) Matlab...??

T - (Getting up from her lap and sitting to face her, he said) Simple Di... Hamari SCOOTY se unki car ko nuksaan hua hai... Iss baat ki wajah se woh hamein blackmail bhi toh kar sakte hain...?? Hum unhein iska chance nahin denge... Agar Hum unke loss ko compansate kar dete hain... phir toh woh Papa ko kuchh nahin kahenge naa...??

G - Hummm ! Yeh toh hai...Okey... Main kal dekhti hoon... SCOOTY repairing ke baad kitne paise bachte hain... kyunki,hum Bank se bhi toh paise nahin nikal sakte...Papa poochenge toh kya batayenge...??

T - Haan...phir toh wohi problem ho jaayegi... think something... n said thereafter ...Di maine apne Piggy bank mein apni 'Pocket Money' jama ki hai...uss mein kaafi paise honge...wohi de denge... I hope uss se,unka loss compansate ho jaayega...

G - (looked at him,lovingly...) Uski koi zaroorat nahin padegi...I'll manage... Waise,I think...woh itne bure insaan nahin hain... woh Papa ko kuchh nahin kahenge...

T - I hope so...warna toh...uss GABBAR ki toh main...

G - Nahin... yeh sahi nahin hai... Agar hum unse dosti nahin kar sakte..toh phir hamein unse dushmani karne ki bhi koi zaroorat nahin... Yahaan se jaane ke baad toh shayad hum kabhi unse mil bhi naa paayein... lekin,yeh yaadein toh hamesha unke saath hongi... Hamein logon ko achhi yaadein deni chahiye... naa ki buri... toh jab tak hum saath hain... humein koshish karni chahiye ki,hamari wajah se unhein koi takleef na ho...

T - I understand Di... Ab nahin karoonga. But,I dont want to any friendship with him... he is so much Irritating... aur woh jis tarah se closness badhane ki koshish karte hain... I can't tolerate it... Its so so irritating...and I think... He wants to 'Propose' to you... (said very normally)

G - (shockingly) WHAT...? WHAT are you saying...? (in very serious tone) Unhone tumse kuchh kaha kya..??

T - (in normal tone) No...exact toh nahin...lekin,mujhe aisa laga...

G - Kyun...?? Tumhein aisa kyun laga...?

T - Arre... Aapne notice nahin kiya...? Woh baar-baar aapko...Great chef prove karna chahte the...n he called you "Cook" !! What Rubbish...!! you are not a cook... Aap kabhi unka proposal accept mat karna...woh kitna bhi request kare phir bhi nahin... (said in very innocent ordering tone)

G - (confusingly) Tum kya keh rahe ho...? meri kuchh samajh nahi aa raha... Proposal...? Cook...? Great Chef...?? Yeh sab mein mujh se kya link hai...??

T - Uff Oh ! Di..!! Aap toh kuchh samajh hi nahin paati... (innoocent irritating tone)

G - (smiling as she made a sad face...) Kya karoon...? Tumhaari tarah intelligent jo nahin hoon...

T - Yaa...woh toh hai... I am the only 1 (said proudly) Okey...now I will explain to you... Do you know what Di...I think,unhein apne Hotel ke liye 1 naye chef ki zaroorat hogi... ISHITA Bhabhi ne aapki cooking ki taarif kar di hogi...issi liye woh aapka aaj subah se cooking test le rahe hain... Aur aap dekhna woh bahot jald aapko apna Hotel join karne ka proposal denge... (He said very confidently... as if he was damn sure...this is what was going to happen... )

GUNJAN could not control her laughter as she heard TINKU speak... she was just short of rolling on the bed with laughter... TINKU looked at her...he could not understand the humor in his talk. He asked her, as innocently as he had spoken earlier... "Di !! Aap iss tarah hans kyun rahi hain...?? Main sach keh raha hoon...woh aisa hi karenge...aap dekhna..."

G - (with smiling face) Oh God ! Tum iss proposal ki baat kar rahe the...?? again started laughing You are too much...

T - (innocently) Toh aap kaun sa proposal samajh rahi thin...?? Anyway,Aap dekhna...Jab 1 din woh aapko propose karenge... aap uss waqt mujhe hi yaad karogi...

G - (with smiling face) Achha Baba...! Jab karenge tab dekha jaayega...lekin,abhi toh unhein akela chhod do... n now tell me... Kya hua hai...?? Aisa kya hai, jo tum mujhse itni der se hide karne ki koshish kar rahe ho...??

She looked at him as she asked him this... and she got the expected reaction from him... just as she had anticipated, he turned to look away. He could not look at his Di, she would understand his problem... if only they could stay together forever...he and his Di. GUNJAN moved his face to look at his eyes... he lowered his gaze...n said in soft tone... "Kuchh ...kuchh bhi toh nahin... Aap bhi naa... everything is fine Di...wo...woh...mujhe neend aa rahi hai ...Main ab apne bed par jaata hoon.."

He gently moved her hands away from his face, as he made a move to get off the bed. But GUNJAN held him by his arm, stopping him,and holding his shoulders, moved him to face her. She read his eyes, as he still tried to avert her gaze... but GUNJAN cupped his face in her hands, forcing him to look at her. She asked him, lovingly... "Tell me...what happened...?? I know... kuch hai jo tum mujhe batana nahin chahte... jiski wajah se tum iss tarah se behave kar rahe ho...??

T - Aap...aap kya keh rahi ho Di...? Mujhe toh kuchh samajh hi nahin aa raha... kuchh bhi toh nahin hai... phir,main aapse kyun kuchh hide karoonga...?? Main toh aisa hi hoon... iss mein naya kya hai...?? Mujhe sachi neend aa rahi hai... Jaldi nahin soya... toh phir kal 'Hill Point' jaane ke liye subah nahin utth paaoonga... (He put his tiny palms on his sister's soft and delicate that were cupping his face, feeling her warm and loving touch...he hated hidding anything from his sis,but he wanted to avoid this topic...)

G - No...this is not true... Tum apni Di se nahin bataoge...?? Mera TINKU aisa nahin tha... Jab tumne aaj Mr.SHERGILL ko continuously irritate karne ki koshish ki...Mujhe ussi waqt doubt ho gaya tha... Mere mana karne ke baad bhi tumne unse baat ki...Yeh kuchh un-usual jaisa tha... kyunki,main jaanti hoon... tum kabhi mujhse kiya promise nahin todte... phir aaj kyun...??

Mere mana karne ke baad bhi tumne Papa ko bulaya... Kyunki tum iss tarah puri family ko involved kar kisi khaas topic se hum sab ko distract karna chahte the... I want to know that,Woh kaun si baat hai...??

Tumne Mr.SHERGILL se badtamizi ki...kyunki,tum chahte the ki,sabhi tumse naraaz hon aur sab kuchh bhool kar sirf tumhaari badtamiziyon ko hi discuss karein... Aur shayad Papa ne tumhein uss wajah se daanta bhi hota...agar Mr.SHERGILL ne tumhein nahin bachaya hota toh...

As GUNJAN was speaking, she kept her gaze continuously on TINKU, not blinking even once. But TINKU was trying to avoid any eye contact with his sister... GUNJAN moved her hands from his face and held his shoulders as she spoke again...

Main yeh sab tumhein Dinner ke pehle bhi keh sakti thi... lekin maine tumhein sirf Unke saamne chup rehne ko kaha...kyunki,main nahin chahti thi ki, hamari kisi baat yaa hamari body language se unhein kisi tarah ka doubt ho... tum mujhse kuchh nahin chipa sakte... Please, batao mujhe... Aisa kya hua hai...?? Jiski wajah se tumhein mujhse jhooth kehna pad raha hai...

TINKU said nothing and moved his gaze downwards. GUNJAN sighed as she left his shoulders and pulled him in a warm hug. As she broke the hug, she saw tears on her lil bro's cheeks. She wiped those tears with her fingers... and in a choked voice, as her eyes too threatened to cry, she asked him again... "Mujhe nahin batana chahte kyunki, mujhe takleef hogi...? Lekin tumhara iss tarah chup rehna...aur yeh aansoo mujhe uss se bhi zyada takleef de rahe hain..."

It was now that her eyes did what they had been threatening to do and her tears rolled down her cheeks. This shattered an already upset TINKU. If there was one thing he hated to see, it was his Di crying... He cuddled up to her, sobbing... and in between sobs, in a choked voice he said... "I am Sorry Di...!! Please mujhe maaf kar do...Main bahot bura hoon Di... bahot bura... Maine aapko rula diya Di... Maine aapki baat nahin maani... Mr.SHERGILL se badtamizi ki... Aapse kiya gaya promise bhi tod diya... Main sach mein bahot bura hoon Di..." He cried as GUNJAN held him tightly in her arms.

After some time, GUNJAN wiped her tears and gently pushed TINKU away from her. She wiped his tears and again held him in her arms as she said... "Who told you that you are bad...?? No...Its not true... You are angel... tumne kuchh bura nahin kiya... Main jaanti hoon tum aisa kyun karte ho...Lekin mujhe batao...aaj aisa kya hai jise tum hide kar rahe the... She wiped his tears again... TINKU had snuggled close to her...she held him tightly as he spoke, his voice still choked, as he had not stopped crying yet...

T - Main batana chahta tha Di...lekin nahin bata sakta tha...kyunki,main jaanta hoon... aap woh jaanne ke baad udas ho jaayengi...

G - Woh toh main ab bhi hoon... 1 stranger mere Angel ko galat samajh rahe hain... kya yeh mere liye khush hone ki baat hai...?? Tumhare nahin batane se sach nahin badlega... iss liye jaanna chahti hoon...ki...

T - (TINKU moved himself away from her and cut her off... before getting off the bed, he said...) Wait... !! Aapko kuchh dikhana hai... Uske baad aap khud samajh jaaogi...

He ran towards the study table and opened the drawer, taking out an official letter. He stood there, facing his back towards her as he touched the letter and wiped his tears... he turned around and ran back towards his di. He stood next to her as he handed her that letter. She looked at him with curiosity as she took the letter...

T - Aap yeh read karo... Yeh letter mujhe abhi thodi der pehle... Papa ki window ke bahar mila... Jab main woh ladder check karne ke liye bahar aaya... aur, Papa ke room ki window ke samne se guzar raha tha...yeh letter Papa ne ussi waqt bahar phenka tha... Andhere ki wajah se woh mujhe dekh nahin paaye... Papa ro rahe the Di... shayad issi letter ki wajah se woh aaj itne disturbed hain... Mom bhi yeh baat jaanti hain...

Mr.SHERGILL bahot achhe hain Di... Whatever I don't like him...but,It does not mean that I hate him... Main unhein hurt nahin karna chahta tha... Unhein irritate bhi nahin karna chahta tha... Lekin agar maine yeh sab nahin kiya hota toh Mom...aur Papa... issi letter ke baare mein sochte rehte...

Di...! Unhein pata hai ki,ab DELHi jaane ke baad bhi kuchh thik nahin hoga... lekin,woh sach maanna nahin chahte... issliye shayad zyada upset hain... lekin, Mr.SHERGILL ke aane ki wajah se woh sab kuchh bhool gaye... unki wajah se woh smile kar rahe the... hans rahe the... iss liye maine aaj woh sab kuchh kiya jo mujhe shayad nahin karna chahiye tha... Sorry Di...!! Kya aap mujhe maaf kar dogi...?? (He looked at her hopefully... he knew she would say YES, but he wanted to hear his di say that... )

GUNJAN moved her hand over his head and then over his cheeks... only nodding a YES... she then held him close to her... letting his tears flow. Whatever the contents of the letter, she knew that they were her nightmare come true words which had shattered this 10 year old child making him behave like a grown up.

She hated the cruel twist of fate that had snatched away TINKU's childhood from him. She wiped her tears as she broke the hug and saw TINKU's wet face, his tear streaked face making her feel even more bad. She wiped his face with her palms and patted her lap, asking him to keep his head on her lap and sleep. He obeyed her. Clambering on the bed, he kept his head on her lap and held her knee tightly as he shut his eyes.

GUNJAN read the letter and she realised that now there was no hope... everything was as good as over. She shut her eyes, forcing the drops of water in her eyes to trail down her cheeks. But before they could leave her cheeks to fall on her brother's face and disturb him, she quickly wiped her tears off. She moved her hand over TINKU's head... and then over his shoulder and his back.

She was so proud of her younger sibling...who had matured and would do anything to ensure that his family kept their smile and laughter till the very end. TINKU was sleeping peacefully... she did not move his head and kept patting him gently, resting her head against the head rest of the bed and shutting her eyes...

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SAMRAT reached home, whistling as he entered the house, surprising his family that was sitting in the living room after dinner for some family time. They were surprised to see him home so early, he was supposed to meet his friends, so there was no way he could be home this early. All his mother did was raise her eyebrows as she looked at him and SAMRAT smiled at her. Then he yawned, indicating that he felt sleepy and wishing everyone GOOD NIGHT, he walked up to his room, skipping a step as he climbed the stairs. He reached his room and flung his keys and cell on the table as he flopped on the bed...

((Thank God ki,main yahaan bilkul sahi waqt par aa gaya...warna,kabhi GUNJAN se mil nahin pata...Aaj 1 din mein kitna kuchh ho gaya... Aaj finally,meri search complete ho gayi... She is the 1 jise,main apni life mein chata tha...woh bilkul waisi hai...jaisi ladki maine khud ke liye imagine ki thi...Family oriented... Traditional... simple.. but Modern too... (He shut his eyes and before his eyes flashed GUNJAN... with her bewitching smile, her twinkling eyes... and his face sported the widest smile ever. ...)

He opened his eyes slowly and got up from the bed, walking towards the window. He could see GUNJAN's room from here... thank god ROHAN had mentioned this. Now he would be close to GUNJAN even when he was away from her... He saw the brother sister duo in the room talking. Then he saw her hug TINKU... he smiled as he saw GUNJAN caring so much for her brother...

No doubt woh mujhse bilkul alag hai... kaafi alag... thodi adjustments toh karni hogi... lekin,mujhe yakeen hai woh bhi mujhe samjhegi... thoda difficult toh hai but,Its ok... I'll manage... B'coz,I know meri life-style mein kuchh toh problem hai... jo main samajh nahin pa raha... lekin,agar woh mere saath hogi toh,mujhe khud ko change karne mein asani hogi... kyunki,main jaanta hoon...mujh mein jo changes aayenge...woh right hi honge... She is so Perfect...

Aaj jis tarah usne mujhe apni family ke samne protect kiya...It was so Nice... Woh feelings bilkul alag thi... woh feelings jo maine kabhi mehsoos hi nahin ki thi... kitna apnapan sa tha uske words meim... Jaise ki hum ek-dusre ko kaafi pehle se jaante hon...

aur phir,jis tarah usne mujhe bahar jaane se roka... Haaaiii... I loved it... I really can't believe ki,main sirf uske keh dene bhar se ruk gaya... jab ki, Late Night Parties...Night Long-Drive...Night Disco-Pubs mein jaana mujhe kitna pasand hai... lekin,aaj jis tarah usne mere liye apna concern show kiya...how can I ignore her..?? usse meri parwah hai... Kya yeh mere liye Bonus jaisa nahin...?? She is really sweet girl... just like,her family... kitna achhe aur simple log hain woh...Koi jhooth nahin... simple living style...simple thoughts... I hope ki woh mujh se impress hon...

He smiled as he remembered the meal, and her touch...as she patted him gently on his back when he coughed. With her around, everything was so serene... so beautiful... he turned around and opened his cupboard to take out his night suit. He changed and came back at the window to see TINKU fast asleep, his head on her lap as she was patting him. He sat on the window, looking at her as she rested her head on the head rest of the bed...

Ab mujhe yeh toh pata hai ki,agar Mom-Dad mera rishte unke paas bhejte hain..toh woh mana nahin karenge... lekin GUNJAN...?? Nahin...woh bhi mana nahin karegi... Mujhe itna toh confidence hai... Haan woh 'Shaitaan' Tingu-Mingu zaroor thodi problem karega but,who cares...? 1 kid ki opinion par koi Marriage jaisa important decision cancel karta hai kya...? Toh uski toh koi tension hi nahin...

No...Confidence thik hai but,Over Confidence ?? No way...I can't take a risk... Main uss 'Tingu-Mingu' ko for granted nahin le sakta... 1 woh hi hai jo mujhe tension de sakta hai... She loves him too much... kahin uss 'Shaitaan' ne GUNJAN ko mere against 'convince' kar diya toh...?? After all he is very very smart n dangerous kid... No way...Mujhe kuchh toh sochna hoga... Koi aisa solution... jis se uss TiNKU ka vote bhi mujhe hi mile... (This thought got him tensed, he looked at the sky and then looked towards the window... )

Lekin sabse badi problem toh meri Family mein hai...uska kya karoon...?? Unhein kaise bataoon ki main kya chahta hoon...?? Dad toh apni zidd itni asani se nahin chodenge... woh toh mujhe uss YAMiNi ke saath hi 7 phere lagwaane par tule hue hain... Unka decision change karna, petrol se aag bujhane jaisa kaam hai... Impossible...!! Yeh problem kaise solve hogi...??

Mom se baat karoon kya..?? Lekin.direct unse jaakar kya kahoonga...?? Yeh ki, Mom mujhe GUNJAN se hi shaadi karni hai...aap kisi tarah uss se meri shaadi kara do !! What rubbish...?? No way.!! Its sounding very cheap n down market... Dude tujh mein koi sharm-warm hai yaa nahin...?? Main apni shaadi ki baat khud apne munh se kaise kar sakta hoon...?? No...No...Mom toh GUNJAN ko hi galat samjh lengi... Kuchh aur sochna padega...

Aisa koi toh ho,jo is matter mein meri help kare...Lekin,kaun...?? He was thinking hard... and then suddenly, the right name clicked..."ISHiTA Bhabhi...!!' What an Idea ...too Good Dude... She is the right person... Woh Mom ke bhi kaafi close hain Dad bhi unhein kaafi maante hain... Bro ki toh koi tension hi nahin...woh toh saath denge hi denge...GUNJAN unki favourite bhi toh hai... Agar Bhabhi ne Mom ko raazi kar liye toh yeh 3 milkar easily Dad ko pata lenge... Result...?? Woh toh set hai...GUNJAN 'IN' n YAMiNi 'OUT' !! in our Family Picture... Just,'Picture Perfect'.

Toh ab kal PLAN 'B' start karna hoga... 'POOJA' aur uss mein GUNJAN ki involvement... Good !! Yeh brilliant chance hoga...meri family ko uski qualities dikhane ke liye...I hope usse 'Pooja' ke saare customs aate hona...warna,toh sara plan hi fail ho jaayega... But,I know...usse sab aata hoga... tab hi to Mom ne usse bulaya hai... Aakhir koi itni achhi ladki ko kyun apni bahu banana nahin chahega...?? Bas...unhein iss baat ka ehsaas karane ki der hai...))

He looked at the window, from where he could see GUNJAN... she still had her eyes shut... then he saw her move and shut off the bed side lamp. A bit disappointed that now he could not see her, he got of the window sill and walked towards his bed. He lay down on the bed and closed his eyes once again and as expected... there she was. He turned over and pulled a pillow close to him and hugging it tightly, he went off to his dreamworld... a world in which GUNJAN was irreplaceable...

[To Be Continued...]

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Reserved! I will read the part and try to edit my comment soon! Can't commit.. Sorry for not reading it earlier! Will do so now..

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Hi Joseph Soham Sonia Swati,😊

Finally Here is my Feedback ...I had reserved on 18th night when you had not even updated and I was the 2nd one to reserve and thought will read it the next day when you update and will comment also...and Now finally here is my feedback and woh bhi sabsey last mein...😭😳😳...SORRY 4 Late comment...Sorry 😳...

APHG Latest update was simply fabulous and totally out-standing...👍🏼...Was very well written...each part was fantastic...every scene gelled with the other superbly and beautifully ...Every dialogue was Excellent...I enjoyed reading and Imagining each scene and every part very much...Each scene was so excellently written that while reading I felt as If i was watching the show On TV..I was imagining each scene in my mind while reading...and I was really enjoying reading and imagining the whole update very very much ...SUPERB,EXCELLENT,MIND-Blowing,Fantabulous and Totally rocking Update ...AWESOME work Joseph, Soham, Swati, Sonia..👏...Loved it a lottt👍🏼...
Bhushan home scene was simply Wow!!👏...Samrat trying 2 impress Gunjans parents Or I should say jis tarhan Samrat Gunjan ke parents ko Impress or Pataney ki koshish kar raha tha Was simply Wow!! Awesome.👏👏👏👏..Mazza aa gaya read karkey.....U wrote this part excellently ...each scene was perfect...👏👏👏👏👏...even i was impressed with Samrat😉😊...Samrat-Amit-nisha scene was superbly described...each scene proved samrat was successful in impressing Gunjan's parents ...their each thought and action proved they liked samrat very much...😊...

Samrat -Tinku scenes were just awesome..👍🏼..they both know each other so well...samrat knew Tinku is sitting quietly 4 a reason and will try 2 catch him off guard soon and will try 2 get him into trouble and That he did 😆...when Samrat said he comes home late The way he asked aap Kya kartey hain ki aapko ghar sey night mein bahar rehna padta hai 😆...and His thoughts about Samrat's profession CHINDI CHOR ...Chor hoga Bukad apne hotel ka khaana ka jata hoga BRIJ BHAIYA ne NIKAL DITA HOGA OMG!! OMG!! 😆😆😆😆😆...MAN Tinku is so Naughty...😆.when I read this part I started laughing😆😆🤣...and Samrat was also ready 4 this ...the way he answered impressed me also ...Nicelly written scenes👏👏👏.. I enjoyed these scene very much😊😊👏👏👏👏...it showed clearly Tinku doesnt like Samrat and is irritated when Samrat is around and also showed Tinkus maturity and protectiveness towards his parents and Gunjan His whole family...and also showed that even though Tinku is mature 4 his age But He still a KID and a very sweet Kid 😊... Awesome part👏👏👏👏...and Tinku also knew what samrat was doing he knew Samrat was trying 2 impress his parents...😉...and They way he tried 2 distract Samrat by yawning loudly sometimes ...😆😆Sometimes patting his knees 😆sometime cuping his palm sometimes doing something else ..😆😆All these scene and actions of Tinku were simply WOW!!👏👏👏👏...It was superbly described👏👏...It was written so excellently and described so properly That It was easy 2 imagine these scene...I could Visualize in my mind How Tinku must be acting in this situation😆😆😆😆...I enjoyed reading it very very much 👍🏼and Timkus thoughts that He didnt want 2 upset his DI and parents Were very sweet thoughts👍🏼....It showed Tinkus love and respect and protectiveness 4 his family especially Gunjan...Loved it a lottt...Tinku is a very nice kid Though he is mature 4 his age...But love his maturity also...But He is still a kid ...and WHAT I am curious 2 find out is what made Tinku so mature so fast???😕😕...AND this part when NISHA said Tinku zyaada he shaitan ho gaya hai ..she said it generally just 2 apologize 4 tinkus naughty behavior But When Samrat asked WHY doesnt Gunjan doesnt scold him etc....GD n GM avoided answering this QUESTION and looked flustered...this showed 2 things 1st any parent wouldnt like 2 discuss their KIDS BEHAVIOR and why he is not scolded with anyone and that also with a person they have just met.it showed GD and GM protectiveness towards their Kids ...ANY PARENT will avoid answering such a question You showed this very well BUT GD n GM Looked also looked Flustered This showed as if they didn't want 2 answer this qs at all...and the way Nisha looked at AMIt showed There was a reason 4 their Not answering BUT WHAT reason??😕😕...I am confused also Why did they avoided this qs .??😕😕...But I wish Samrat was in the KITCHEN with Gunjan and tinku then he would never have asked this question as then he would have seen that Gunjan always scold TINKU when he behaves too badly or was very naughty...she always tells him about his wrong behavior and tries to inculcate in him good habits...Gunjan -TINKU scene was perfect and very sweet and very emotional . u wrote this scene beautifully...When Tinku was angry with Gunjan ..this part was so sweet ..I could imagine how tinku must be acting and how gunjan must be calming him and trying 2 make hime smile ..MAN What a sweet scene ..TINKUs anger was very sweet...😊...I had a smile while reading this sweet scene and U wrote and described this scene awesomely Joseph Soham Sonia Swati....👏👏👏👏👏... when Gunjan scolded Tinku and was angry with her this part was also cute ...and emotional also As when Gunjan said 2 TINKU mein tumsey Naraz hoon The way U showed TINKU getting emotional and Had tears in his eyes and gunjans eyes were also Moist seeing Tinku cry and his innocent talks ...This part TINKUS tears and gunjans moist eyes made me emotional also😭...WOW!! WHAT a superbly written scene 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏...What a beautifull strong bond Gunjan-Tinku share😍👍🏼😊😊...Loved this BOND... this also showed TINKU may be mature 4 his age But when he is alone with Gunjan his elder sister He is a KID and a very sweet kid...Loved Their talk also TINKU calling Samrat GABBAR 😆 and Saying May ussey nahi chodunga Band baja doonga 😆...Man So sweet 😆...and i just loved it when TINKU said DI aap rotey huey aachi nahi lagti WOW!! SO SWEET He is really very cute 😊....I just Like the character Tinku very much 👍🏼...whole Gunjan-tinku part was rocking and fabulously written 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏and The Picture u choose 4 TINKU ..Or I should say The actor u choose 4 Tinkus role was excellent choice 👍🏼...each photograph is this whole update Is awesome and gelled fully with the scene...Nice choice infact Awesome choice 👏👏👏👏👏...

Dining room scene was superb 👍🏼...I could Imagine How angry Tinku must be when Samrat sat in Gunjan's chair...U know It really happens when a stranger or guest sits in Ur chair where u sit always and which is considered Ur chair U may not get angry But Ur Bro-sis get angry ...U showed this excellently...MUTTER-PANEER WOW !! yummy...I think joseph U like PANEER very much😉 ...EVEN I LOVE eating home made PANEER especiallY PANEER BURJI MUTTER PANEER and SHAHI paneer 😳...My mouth is watering ...😳...Wow!! Gunjan sat next 2 samrat 😃😍...Loved Samrats praise of Dishes cooked by Gunjan ...Loved the way u showed a mothers happiness and feeling proud when her daughter or children are praised...Every mom or Every parent feels proud when a guest or anyone praises their children and appreciates their talents...Awesome scene👏👏..Gunjan feeling shy at samrats praise was also beautifully shown👍🏼...loved it ...TINKUs reaction were superb😆...the way he coughed OMG!😆 and when samrat said GUNjan is a good cook the way he reacted 😆...and Calling Samrat BUKHAD😆 and WHEN he thought the reason samrat was saying all this because he wants 2 give Gunjan a JOB as COOK is his HOTEL ...OMG!! at this thought I was laughing😆😆...SO SWEET TINKU😊...This shows that may be mature But he is still a Kid ...he has not guessed till now why samrat is doing all this trying 2 impress Gunjan and Her parents BUT I feel he will soon guess the reason ...I wonder how will he react then and what will he do?😉...😊...and This all showed Tinkus deep love 4 his Sister Gunjan...😊...Loved it ...But what has me confused during his thoughts TINKU was thinking about Gunjan leaving studies and USS WAQT she left it ...I AM curious 2 know What was Tinku thinking about ..Kya HUS THA USS waqt???😕😕😕😕...GD n GM teasing of Gunjan making round rotis was very sweet teasing ...loved it ....👏👏👏👏...ROUND roti making is really a struggle ...MERYE sath Ulta hai I can make round rotis easily But Jab ROTI GAS par sektey hain Then I donot understand Kitani sekoon and phir PAPAD ban jati hai ROTI😆😳😳...awesome dining room scene .and when Amit GD said When is your marriage😆 and the way u showed samrat reacting excellent...👏👏👏👏Mazza aa gaya totally. and when custard was a brought Tinku reaction about custard and dosti was wow!! 👏...and when samrat was about 2 leave and he touched GD GM feet and then winked at tinki 😊was awesome ....Samrat neh full on impress kar diya GD -GM ko ...😊...really enjoying reading whole update....👍🏼...

Sajan talk was interesting ...the way u showed samrat watching Gunjan when she was watching stars and thinking lovely thoughts was very superb scene ...👍🏼...and Samrat calling TINKU SHAITAN and Gunjans reaction and anger and possessiveness 4 Her bro Tinku was superbly shown...👍🏼Any Girl/Boy who loves their Sister/Brother deeply will react same way if someone says bad words 4 their sibling...But when Samrat n Gunjan both said SORRY and said they Over-reacted I also agree with this ...BUt atleast Samrat understood that Tinku is naughty but good person and possessive 4 his sister and loves her very much and Gunjan also feels same 4 tinku... the way samrat apologized was sweet scene 👍🏼 and samrat agreeing not 2 go 2 his friend place just when gunjan asked him not 2 was wow!! 1 bari mein hi maan gaya😉 ...Whole part was awesome👏👏 👏...But when samrat thanked gunjan and complimented her that she is Lucky she has awesome parents at that Gunjan's reaction confused me anyone would have said THANK you and smiled but Gunjan was serious and said THIS---->G - (cuts quickly with little sad but serious tone) ...Itni jaldi kisi ka luck decide nahin karte... Lekin..haan Main aur TARUN lucky hain kyunki,hamein Mom-Papa jaise parents mile... smiled but something was missing there.....I am confused WHY DID she react this way???? What had happened that Gunjan reacted this way about being LUCKY and said these words????😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕...and Tinku gunjan talk and reaction in the room also confused me why were they Both SAD? Why were they not happy going 2 delhi ?? what was going 2 change??Kya Bura honey wala hai Bhushan family ke sath??😕😕😕😕😕😕 and GD reaction also said the same ..when Gunjan hugged him and kissed him on forhead was a sweet scene...But when she left at that time GD thoughts How will he live when his daughter leaves forever WHAT does this mean??😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕...IS He talking about WHEN she marries and leaves or something else??😕😕...WHAT going on in Bhushan home and life??😕😕😕😕..I feel Kuch bahut Bad and sad is about 2 happen which will change everyones lives😕😕😕😕...Gunjan tinku talk was interesting and WHEN TINKU said 2 Gunjan not 2 accept Samrats proposal I also thought Like gunjan ki TINKU may be a has guessed why samrat came 2 their Home and What was he doing But When He said Proposal 4 chef post and Gunjan shouldnt accept I also like ur character Gunjan started laughing.😆😆😆😆...But What a marvellous scene ....👏👏👏👏...BUT TINKU is RIGHT samrat will propose 2 gunjan😉....I loved these WORDS U WROTE JOSEPH SOHAM SONIA SWATI and ur character Gunjan said it That WE SHOULD GIVE PEOPLE GOOD MEMORIES AND NOT BAD and we shouldnt hurt people ...LOVELY AND BEAUTIFULL WORDS👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏...Gunjan immediately knew Tinku was hiding something from her and knew inspite 4 her telling him not 2 talk this way and misbehave with Samrat he still did and Knew there had 2 be a reason 4 this ...and when TINKU told the reason and whole talk between Bro-Sister was so emotional and their tears made me emotional also😭...What a scene ..very excellently written and described the beautifull sibling bond and each sharing the pain and deep love and understanding between bro-sis...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏...I really wondering what was in THAT LETTER???? which made everyone cry in the Bhushan family ???😕😕😕😕KYA KATAM honey wala hai???😕😕😕😕...whats happenning???😕😕😕😕...But I will say this TINKU is really very sweet he did all this irritating samrat etc Just 2 distract his whole family and make them smile ...TOTALLY Sweet KID TINKU 👍🏼...SAMRATS thoughts in his home were interesting and proved That he liked Gunjan's family very much and loved gunjan a lott and even willing 2 change 4 her ...He wants Gunjan in his life But is It possible??? What will he do 2 make his father changr his mind about YAMINI...?? Will sajan unite ??? Will ISHITA Help samrat ? whats gonna happen Next ??😕😕😕😕😕...What going in Bhushan Home??😕😕 I am really curious 2 know whats going On ...

PLEASE Update Soon Guys AND ONCE AGAIN SORRY 4 very late comment...

DO UPDATE SOON JOSEPH SOHAM SONIA SWATI...and AWESOMEand fully ROCKING Update ..loved it very very very very very very very much and Congrats 4 crossing 100 pages...👍🏼.TOTALLY AMAZING AND OUTSTANDING FF APHG👍🏼...APHG AND MBYPH ARE THE BESTEST FF IN IF...MOST ROCKING FF's 👍🏼...and JOSEPH SOHAM SWATI SONIA Are the most Rocking and MIND Blowing and GR8 writers ...👍🏼...U 4 ROCK 👍🏼...U r the best👍🏼...

THANKS 4 Pm🤗...DO UPDATE SOONNN and I will read MBYPH latest update and will try 2 comment soonnn...

Love ur good friend
Gunjan😊😊... ... .

Edited by 1gunjan7 - 12 years ago

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res will try and read soon guys

i still have to catch up with MBYPH first !:p

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