Originally posted by cool_tuli
very imp update for me...
but will read later... π
reserveddd as of now π
***edited***π€
kisi ki baaho me soye hue... apna use bana liyaπ π Awesome siggy first of all...
N the update... another stunning write-up... π π π
Arnav's thing is getting a bit clarified but it is a mixed and a long story involving Gunjan's parents also... So I think to reveal the whole thing, it'll take sum time π³ No probs i'll wait... π But Arnav's part was very much matured n I liked the way he apologised to his brother after realising that wateva b d reason he is elder to him n respect means a lot...π this was d best attitude by Arnav! And his thought process was awesome... such an understanding guy and more importantly a loving one. I really adore such people. π³ π I hope he cums to noe d truth soon... (u c if he cums to noe even I'll cum to noe n my poor doubt will b resolved π)
Bhushan House part was a typical Bro-Sis drama... it was cute and d expressions were shown very beautifully π Ohhh haaa n this B part made me arise one more doubt which i think is again related to the previous doubt. Ohhh God such a doubtful ff π π π shud i reveal my doubt to confuse u too?? ok i'll do... my doubt is this... (( Ab kuchh bhi pehle jaisa nahin ho
paayega... Di,aaj phir kitni chup hain... Mom aur Papa bhi... Koi kuchh nahin
keh raha. Phir se DELHI jaane ki news ne sab ko udaas kar diya hai. Sabhi kitne
depress hain... DELHI... humara ghar... (The thought of his home...
and a broad smile engulfed his innocent face... he remembered that small
house... the happy times he shared with his family... but then...)
nahin, ab
toh woh ghar bhi nahin raha... (His smile had vanished and sadness clouded his face...)
Kitna enjoy karte the hum
wahaan... mera school... kitne saare friends... Di ke saath mil kar kitni
shararat ki hai maine wahaan... par,aaj DELHI jaana kisi torture se kam
nahin...I know,wahaan jaate hi 'woh sab' phir se start ho jaayega...
(And just this thought and he shuddered... he hated the
thought of it all. His eyes brimmed with tears...but then, he quickly wiped
them... ) Y so??? wats wrong??? Y is Tinku saying like this?!! Anyways I don need to think much coz i noe wat u'll say. U'll ask me to WAIT AND WATCH π
CAN I KILL THE KHANNAS??? OKAY I'LL ONLY INJURE NAINA KHANNA BUT THIS FATHER AND DAUGHTER, I WANNA KILL THEM!?π‘ π They r simply gonna use Samrat and his family... Gosh sooo cheap! If I was there na... they wud hav had neva even thot of doin so!! π
Now my favourite part of the whole update... SaJan meet... the meet isn over yet coz they hav to deal with Gunjan's dad!! But watever u hav posted in this update was awesomeee π€
Sooo cute, soo loving... it reminded me of the show itself...!! Joe I think u took d punishment a lot seriously... Gosh if u post soo gud things for punishments I wud luv to punish u often π π
Samrat's expression and convincing quality is mind blowing... And Gunjan's innocence is always wonderful...He was soo confident while talkin to Gunjan makin that poor thing confused π³but it was very very very very cuteee and when he was saying that, "TUMNE MUJHE 'US' POSITION ME DEKH LIYA..."π haaayee soo adorable!!π³ *pouts* And TINKU was sooo soo awesome in d last part... loved him soo much... if I eva find him na I'll start cooochi-cooing him soo much...π π π very sweet... btw i think there is a mistake in writing when Amit cums n shouts at Sam and asks him to get down... u had to write GD but u wrote SD... π³ π³
I wanted to say this... but forgot while writing... The pics that u guys have posted is sooo fattang! *hi5* Ekdum apt for all d situations...π π They were like icing-on-d-cake... Superb selection!!!
Tooo good guys... all of u were rocking!!! Waiting for the next update only to see how Gunjan saves Samrat and how he reacts after this... baaki sab toh will go with d flow!! π π€
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Thanks Tuli for your fast
replyπ...long n sweet toh as usual hoti hi hai.π³ Not only ARNAV part...
Actually,whole story concept is very mature... we are going to show some very
common but, bitter truth of our society. ARNAV is very simple,sober guy...out n
out family person.He likes GUNJAN...after confirmation of his family...He adore
her as a to-be wife... We'll reveal something about his family in our next
Update...π³
"Doubtful FF" ...Nice 'Nick Name'.π
No,actually Its very simple story...we are hiding something about BHUSHAN
Family...due to maintain story essence.π³ After secret unfold... story turned to
very serious mode...so,now...read n enjoy...π
We'll be continue SaJan Ladder
scene,in our next part too...π³First we decide that... it'll be post along with
this part...But,Yeh part already kaafi long ho gaya tha...πIsse aur long karna
readers ko torture kerne jaisa ho jaata.π(They are already fade-up with our
long-longest partsπ). Yes,I scare to your punishment.(Because,I am very
'seedha-saada' baccha...N don't want to die soon.π) SAMRAT would be
SAMRAT...What can we do..??π³ Thanks for liking this part.Because,I personally
feel...writing of 'Situational' comedy is very tough then other
things...yaa,emotional scenes too.
TINKU is our favorite too. π We love
to write his parts...(but,his dio. portion is very difficult for usπ). Remember my words...no body can forget his character after this FF ending. And,Thanks
for quoting that mistake...(GD-SD thingπ³) its totally my fault. and I really
can't say that... "Bade-bade Updates mein aisi chhoti-chhoti mistakes ho jaati
hain Senorita(Tuli)..."π[Totally SRK styleπ] Mistake toh mistake hai...I admit,just rectify
it.π³
Thanks for liking posted Pics. n
that siggy (Made by '-Drishti-').πPlease,wait some more time for next
part...Because,I am going somewhere...and,S3 are very busy in MBYPH... toh isse
abhi hold par rakhte hain...π may be,only TEASER part hoga.(posted by
S3π).
Thanks again Tuli for your all
precious feed-backs n encouraging comments for this FF.πIts really a lot to us.
(My 1 another Longest Reply.π)
Keep Smile always,
Joseph.β€οΈ