Joseph dear SORRY Buddy for such a late reply and for not commenting on PART-3...Actually Kya karoon I have many pending FF left 2 read and pheley time nahi tha NOW I have become too too Lazy...I can't understand which 2 read 1st n which later..So I keep on thinking this only..But from Now I will give comments on time...
SORRY 4 Late reply...
Buddy After reading both parts 3 and 4th I will say this OMG!! WOW!! what a Rocking and fully Mindblowing ,Dasoon and SUPER DUPER Fantabulous update ..very well written...each n everything from Scenes, Dialogues, style of presentation and Siggys Made by Pragya...every part of update 3 & 4 was stupendous...Man Wow!! what an excellent and fantastic work...well done👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏...U r a very good writer...👍🏼...Love Ur FF a lottt...Awesome update...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏..
PART-3 update comment...
Part 3 update was very well written...each n every part was described in a perfect way n manner👍🏼...It was an interesting update...Samrat n SM scenes were rocking...👏...When a Son or daughter stay n work outside their home town and when they come home 4 vacations at that time they are the apple of parents n everyone eyes and their needs and desires are kept in mind by MOTHERS while making food etc ...and U showed this very well...and younger son /daughters is always apple of everyones eyes or family...and this was shown in case of samrat who is younger and stay in mumbai and is the apple of his mother eyes and his desires are fullfilled n kept in mind when he comes home...SM making food while thinking sam in mind and even ishita fulfilling her devar wish showed how much sam is loved by each person in family....SM n samrat conversation was interesting ...And sam curiousness to meet the girl whom his parents has choosen was interesting...😊 and Sam Mom n ishita keeping him in suspense n not telling was also awesome scene...👏👏👏👏👏👏...Even Sam bhabhi scenes were interesting ...U showed perfectly rapport and friendship between Devar and bhabhi..devar bhabhi relation is such only in which there is friendship, care, respect and sweet Nok-Jhok and teasing each other...but with respect ...U showed this Kind of relation between ISHITA & Samrat...For Ishita samrat is like a brother who she cares 4 , n loves very much...she loves teasing him like a bhabhi but if samrat is wrong then she can also pull his ears n scold him..Even Samrat loves n cares 4 her bhabhi and loves teasing her and like a young brother gets his every wish fulfilled from her bhabhi who is like a sister 2 him and respects her a lott also....very well described devar bhabhi relation ...Loved their cute teasing, NOK-Jhok a lott.....👍🏼... even SM n ISHITA coversation was interesting... it showed that both care n love each other very much and both love Samrat...
Gunjan n tinku scenes were interesting also...Tinku OMG !! he is so naughty😆...1st he called Rohan MB and then MBA😲😉😆...man he is very naughty ...😆...But woh thoda spoiled bhi hai and I know by Gunjan😉...She loves spoiling tinku but also scold him when he is wrong and doing badtamizzi...and I loved this fact that when he talked and called ishita MB KI MOM the way gunjan scolded him was good ...Tinku acts so mature but after all he is a young boy ...U showed this very well thru gunjan n tinku conversation after ishita phone call...Tinku Loves his sister very much and is very possessive about her and gets jealous also when some one calls his Sister Di or gets very close to gunjan or if Gunjan pays more attention 2 that person. and gets angry also...u showed this very well thru this Gunjan-TINKu scene ...nice scene n interesting conversation between brother-sister...👏👏👏..
Ishita-Sm-Gunjan scenes were also interesting... it showed the love and sweet rapport they all share.....the phone conversation and later on talk between ISHITA n Gunjan clearly n excellently showed that both share an excellent relation and are good friends also and ishita loves n cares 4 gunjan n trust her also and like friends sweet friendly teasing happen between them a lottt...loved this sweet talk n teasing between them and liked ishita wish that kash gunjan samrat ki wife baney...😊...I hope so too Joseph😉...
Even SM n Gunjan conversation and talk showed that Sm also loves gunjan a lottt and cares 4 her and knows how naughty Gunjan is ...and the way they called gunjan 2 help them showed how much they trust gunjan n think of her as family ...loves this GIRLS TALK n teasing BETWEEN SM-Gunjan -ISHITA very very much...👏👏👏👏👏👏...Very nicely written girls talk n scene👍🏼......
OMG !! Samrat father will not agree 2 Gunjan-Samrat marriage...😲...😔😭..Gunjan is such a nice girl.Dont do this Joseph...and SM-ISHITA conversation n guess that Gunjan will never be samrats choice was wrong..This whole conversation showed that thought both SM n ISHITA love samrat n care 4 him still they donot know samrats choice and thoughts very well..well it may be bec till now the type of girls who are seen with samrat are very modern ...so they think gunjan is not sam choice..but how shocked both will be if they come to know Samrat fell in love with Gunjan at 1st sight...😊..I can imagine their shocked expressions...😉...
WOW!! joseph CHICKEN FRY POP and chocolate pudding WOW!! My mouth is watering already...itnii awesome dishes👍🏼...yaar joseph aab mein kya karoon MUJH BHI KHAANA HAI BOTH DISHES😉...pls share with me also...next which dish will be made JOSEPH😉...YUMMY DISHES😊...
And HEY BUDDY NICE NAMES DD😆 but what does MB and MBA mean??? I know MBA masters in business administration toh nahi hoga😉😆...Plss do tell MBA matlab n MB also...I know name meaning funny hoga😆...
SAJAN 1st meet scene was ☺️😳🤣😆😍...😳...Yaa Sajan 1st meet scene was embarrassing but NOT CHEAP NOT VULGAR at all...u showed this scene in an Apt and proper way ..there was not cheapness in it at all...it was funny and embarrassing both.😆😳☺️...
Samrats thoughts after seeing gunjan for 1st time was also interesting ...it showed samrat likes Gunjan and has fallen in love with her...and U r a master at showing Misunderstanding..👏👏man what a misunderstanding..👏👏...Samrat things Gunjan is Would be MRS SAMRAT SHERGILL ...Wow!! I hope this misunderstanding comes true...😍...
On the whole I loved part -3 very much...each part was excellently written ..good work joseph...
PART-4 let me read second part of part 4 ie B PART as I have read part A but B part is left so after reading will reply ..wasey part 4 whose A part I have read is very very interesting and rocking. even b part which i have read little bit is awesome n funny n excellent ..WILL REPLY in detail about part-4 soon ...👍🏼👏👏...
Do send me link whenever u update your FF joseph buddy...
SORRY again 4 late reply...
AWESOME STORY👏👏👏👏👏👏👏...
Love Gunjan😊😊...
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