Fan Fictions

...Aur PYAAR Ho Gaya ![1] {New Link available} - Page 24

Joseph_A thumbnail
Anniversary 13 Thumbnail Group Promotion 7 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 12 years ago
                     ...Aur PYAAR Ho Gaya !   

PART-4   (2/2)


Siggy Banner made by :
Pragya
[pragya_luvsajan]


[B]
 
 
SAMRAT went to near GUNJAN... GUNJAN was trying to avoid his presence n showing busy herself in cooking works...SAMRAT was feeling little strange... (( What is this...? Yeh mujhe ignore kyun kar rahi hai...? Kya isse mujh se koi baat nahin karni...? Kahin yeh woh room waale incident ki wajah se toh ab tak embarrass feel nahin kar rahi (smiled) Come On ! Aisa bhi kuchh nahin hua tha... I think,yeh kuchh zyada hi shy nature ki hai... Dude..! Mujhe hi First step lena hoga...warna...hum aise hi reh jaayenge...))
 
SAMRAT smiled softly... n said in loving tone...
 
S - Hi... !
 
G - Hi...  (said with fake smile)
 
S - I think , Ab hamein Formal introduction kar leni chahiye...
 
G - Mujhe pata hai... Mujhe Bhabhi ne sab bata diya hai...aapka naam SAMRAT hai aur... aap...
 
S - (cuts) WoW ! GR8...I am impressed... (said excitedly)  but,mujhe tumhaare baare mein toh kuchh pata hi nahin...in fact, Name bhi nahin... What is your name...? (asked more sweetly... n came little more close to her...) Just then, sound of Micro-Wave's Timer Buzzer , out...
 
G - (step forward) 1 sec. shayad , Chicken ready ho gaya hai... n went to Micro-Wave side
 
S - (( Iss whistle ko bhi abhi bajna tha... Lagta hai hamari Story mein kaafi saare 'Haddi' aur 'Chicken ki taang' hain... (irritating completly) ... Par,Koi baat nahin... Hum kaam karte hue bhi toh baatein kar sakte hain...))  went to near GUNJAN...n said sweetly , "Waise,I want to say thanks to you..."
 
G - (strangely)Kyun...? (( Ab Maine aisa bhi kya kar diya...? Uff kitne 'Chipku' type hain... Jahaan bhi jaa rahi hoon... peeche-peeche hi aa ja rahe hain...! ))
 
S - (smiled) Woh,tumne room waali baat bahar kisi ko nahin batai...iss liye... aur, specially Bhabhi ko warna,woh hum donon ko hamesha tease karti rehti... (blushed)
 
GUNJAN said nothing..only gave a fake smile (( What is his problem...? Kya main paagal hoon jo woh baat Bhabhi ko bataoongi...? Kya yeh mujhe duffer samajh rahe hain... Yaa khud ko over smart...?? ))
 
S - Arre ! Tum chup kyun ho...? Tumhen kuchh bhi nahin poochna...?? Ok... Its your choice but,main koi chance nahin le sakta... Mujhe toh pehle hi sab kuchh clear karna hai... baad mein problem nahin honi chahiye... (said in little attitude tone)
 
G - (( I am sure... Inhen kuchh na kuchh mental problem hai... warna, aisi ajab baatein kyun kar rahe hain...? Main kyun kuchh poochoongi... ? Aur baad mein problem...?? Kaisi Problem...?? wait... kahin yeh Cooking or 'Chicken-Pop' ke baare mein toh baat nahin kar rahe...? Definitely, Ussi ke baare mein keh rahe honge...Inhen kya lagta hai,Mujhe cooking nahin aati...?))  smiled n said in little confident tone... "Don't worry ! Baad mein bhi koi problem nahin hogi... Main hoon naa... Main sambhal loongi... Mujhe sab pata hai... Aapko disappointment nahin hogi..."
 
SAMRAT smiled so badly after hearing this... (( Oh God ! I can't beleive it... Yeh,toh abhi se mujhe assure kar rahi hai... Don't worry ! Problem toh main bhi nahin hone doonga... Main itna fool nahin jo,hamare beech kisi tarah ki Problem ko aane ka chance doon... Itni sweet voice aur smile ke baad toh koi Duffer hi tumhen upset karne ki soch sakta hai... Main toh sirf 1 hi cheez soch sakta hoon... [smiled naughtily] ))
 
G - Bhabhi ko zyada der nahin ho gayi...?? wait, main abhi unhen dekh kar aati hoon...Shayad,unhen meri zaroorat ho... 

 GUNJAN was about to move from her place... just then, SAMRAT hold her hand softly... He felt a silky n soft skin touch in his hand... GUNJAN was shocked to seeing his this activity... He just realized...what did he...? remove his hand quickly... Both was feeling little awkward... SAMRAT wanted to broke this awkwardness... came little-bit close to her... n said in very soft tone...
" Yahaan tumhaari zyada zaroorat hai... Woh main... Main kehna chahta tha ki,Bhabhi aa jaayengi... Don't worry... par,tum chali gayi toh... toh main akele yeh Kitchen ka kaam handle nahin kar paaoonga... (He was covering ) 
 
GUNJAN said nothing...nodded in positive...but,she was feeling a very strange feeling this time... SAMRAT smiled again... He liked her face expression of her mixed feelings... came close again to GUNJAN n asked  very sweetly... " Waise , ab tak tumne apna naam mujhe nahin bataya...? Kya main tumhaara naam jaan sakta hoon..." smiled n waiting for her answer...
 
GUNJAN was about to say something... Just then a harsh,sweet kiddish voice came from door side...
 
" GUNJAN... Miss GUNJAN BHUSHAN...!! Kya kuchh aur bhi poochna hai aapko...?? "
 
SAMRAT n GUNJAN turned to door side... n saw... TINKU was there... TINKU also saw SAMRAT... n recognized him quickly... (( OMG !!  GABBAR ...aur woh bhi yahaan...?? iss ka matlab...oh God...! Kahin isse pata toh nahin chal gaya ki,humne hi... ?? Oh toh hi, yeh Di ko pareshaan kar raha hai... Don't worry Di...! Ab main aa gaya hoon...Aap bas dekhti jaao... Ab yeh khud kitna pareshaan hoga... iski himmat kaise hui meri Di ko pareshaan karne ki...? Isse toh sabak seekhana hi hoga...waise bhi mujhe isse hisaab barabar karna hai...issi ki Car ki wajah se meri 'Di' ke leg mein injury hui thi...))
 
SAMRAT was stood on his place... n looking to TINKU with a very strange look... GUNJAN said to TINKU... in general tone... "Arre ! Tum kab aaye...? Main tumhaara hi wait kar rahi thi... Achha kiya jo yahaan aaye...main abhi...
 
T - Di...woh aap chalo yahaan se... Mom ko kuchh kaam hai aapse ...Woh apko bula rahi hain... (Looked at SAMRAT side,rudely)
 
SAMRAT was little shocked... (( Di ?? Oh,means yeh mera hone wala 'Saala' hai...? How sweet...par,Yeh kab aaya...maine isse toh ab tak nahin dekha tha... Oh, koi baat nahin... pehle inse hi 'Dosti' kar leni chahiye ... aage jaakar kaafi help milegi...woh kehte hain naa... "Saari Khudaai ek taraf...Joru ka Bhai ek taraf" (smiled) He is sweet...Friendship mein zyada problem nahin hogi... SAMRAT ka charm hi aisa hai... I love kids...par,yeh mujhe kuchh jaana-pehchana sa face lag raha hai...jaise...jaise isse maine pehle bhi kahin dekha hai...par kahaan...??  )) 
 
SAMRAT went to near TINKU...said in sweet tone... " Hi Little CHAMP...!! My name is SAMRAT (forward his hand for shake hand) aur aap ka naam...??
 
T - (( CHAMP...!! Dekhta ja Bachhu... Yeh CHAMP tumhaari kaisi 'Champi'  karta hai... SAMRAT ho yaa VIRAAT... TINKU se koi bach nahin sakta... Tumne Meri Di ko pareshaan karne ki koshish ki hai... Punishment toh banta hai Boss.))  He forward his hand gently...n made a shakehand with fake smiling face.
 
S - Arre ! Kya hua...? Kya soch rahe ho... Apna naam nahin bataya aapne...?
 
T - (little harsh tone) TARUN... TARUN BHUSHAN... I hope,Aapko yeh name yaad rahega (said in full of attitude) Waise bhi mujhe koi jaldi bhool nahin paata...
 
GUNJAN glared to him... she was understanding,what is the meaning of TINKU's line... But, SAMRAT (( WoW ! Impressive... Dude Yeh hui naa koi baat... Itni impressive personality toh sirf SAMRAT ke 'saale' ki hi ho sakti hai...I loved it.))
 
G -(said quickly)Arre ! Tum ...tum abhi jaao... Mom se kehna main abhi aati hoon...
 
S - Haan... Tumhaari 'Di' abhi kaam kar rahi hain naa... kaam khatam hote hi aa jaayengi...par kahaan...? I mean kya tum paas mein hi rehte ho...?
 
T - Look... Mr. SAMRAT...first meri 'Di' koi kaam waali 'Bai' nahin hai... woh yahaan kaam nahin kar rahi sirf, Aunty ki Help kar rahi hain... so,mind your language...
 
SAMRAT was totally shocked... what a answer...?? ((Yeh kis tone mein baatein kar raha hai...?? Kya isse pata bhi hai ki,main kaun hoon...?? I mean, Kya yeh jaanta hai ki Main iski 'Di' se shaadi karne  waala hoon...??...Iska hone waala 'JIJU' hoon...?? I don't think so,... Warna,yeh aise thode hi naa baat karta,... waise,I understand...Bachhon ko yeh sab batana thoda difficult hota hai...))
 
GUNJAN said to TINKU in little-bit strict tone "TINKU...!! Yeh kya badtamizi hai... Kya tumhen nahin lagta,tumhen sorry kehna chahiye...?? Woh tum se bade hain..."
 
SAMRAT was extremely happy after seeing GUNJAN's sudden reaction... (( How sweet ! I loved it... Tum abhi se hi mere against kuchh bad nahin sun sakti... so,cute... Koi baat nahin... abhi chhota sa bachha hi toh hai..usse hamare rishte ke baare mein nahin pata...so, aise react kar raha hai... Agar tum usse mere liye daant sakti ho toh main bhi usse tumhaare liye pyaar kar sakta hoon...))
 
T - Ok...Sorry Di... ! Par,Aap chalo naa yahaan se... Maine kaha naa,Mom aapko bula rahi hain...
 
G - Main aati hoon... par, Sorry tumhen mujhse nahin unse kehna chahiye jinse tumne abhi badtamizi se baat ki hai.   SAMRAT was still smiling...
 
TINKU saw his smile...n thought in his Devil mind (( Kaafi laugh karne ka dil kar raha hai GABBAR SINGH ko... Mujhe Di se daant sunwa kar kitna khush ho raha hai... MOGAMBO kahin ka... Abhi iski happiness ki hawa nikalta hoon...Wait n Watch Bachhu ! Abhi tumne mujhe jaana hi kahaan hai...))
 
TINKU came close to GUNJAN... n slowly asked in her ears... "Di ! Yeh kaun hain...? I mean, Yeh ROHAN ke kya lagte hain...?? "   SAMRAT saw this... He was trying to hear their convo... but, their conversation volume was very low...  GUNJAN said in very low tone... 'Uncle !' 
 
 TINKU smiled evily...went to near SAMRAT... n said in litle dramatic way... " Sorry 'Uncle' ! Mujhe aapse iss tarah baat nahin karni chahiye thi... Extremely Sorry !"
 
S - (smiled n bent, gently) Oh ! Its Ok... Maine toh...
 
T - ( Cuts n turned to GUNJAN side) Di...You are right... 'Uncle' really sweet hain... Dekha kitni easily maan gaye... Well , tumhen hamesha 'Bade Papa' ki yaad aati thi naa... in fact, hum discuss karte the naa ki,Yahaan hamara koi Uncle nahin... now,No problem...ab tum bhi inhen 'Uncle' keh sakti ho... Yeh itne sweet hain ki, bura nahin maanenge... turned to SAMRAT side... n said innocently, "Kya hum donon aap ko Uncle keh sakte hain...? I don't think ki,aap bura maanenge..."
 
SAMRAT was totaly speechless...no, Actually Shocked... he couldn't expect this attack from TINKU side... GUNJAN...!! woh bhi... Uncle...?? No...never... He composed himself...n said to TINKU...in his sweet tone (Obviously Fake... Aap sab aur kya expect kar sakte ho...?)   " Bura maan ne ka toh sawaal hi nahin hai...par, Aapki Di mujhe Uncle kahe...kya yeh thik lagega...I mean...kya main Itna bada...
 
T - ( again cuts) Yaa...You are absolutely right...Main bhi yehi soch raha tha... Yeh 'Uncle' tag aap par suit nahin karta... 'Di' par toh aur bhi nahin...
 
S - Oh, so sweet... (smiled) ((Not Bad... yeh itna bhi naughty nahin bas thoda sa...I mean little...bas zara sa shararti...)) TINKU  next  line broke his thought ,completly...
 
T - 'Di'... Kya aapko nahin lagta... Inn par 'Bhaiyaa' kuchh zyada suit karega... Waise bhi toh aap 'BRIJ Uncle' ko 'Bhaiyaa' kehti ho... toh,Unke Bhai bhi toh aapke 'Bhaiyaa' hue naa... aur phir Yeh itne bade toh hain hi ki,inhen 'Bhaiyaa' kaha ja sake... Think,agar Itna handsome aur Good looking Banda hamara 'Bhai' ban jaaye toh sab par kitna achha impression padega... said in very exiciting n pinching tone.
 
SAMRAT was totally shattered... This was Un-expected 'GOOGLY' from TINKU side... He was about to say something...just then...
 
T - Arre ! Aap kuchh bol  kyun nahin rahe...I know,Aap emotional ho rahe hain... (Teased) Siblings bonding hoti hi aisi hai... but,promise to me...aap next 'Raksha-Bandhan' par Yahaan zaroor aayenge... Aap nahin aaye toh Di hum donon ko Rakhi kaise baandhegi...?? Par,agar aap naa aa sake toh koi baat nahin...Apna address de dena...  Di aapko aapki 'Raakhi' post kar degi...Phir,toh aap ko koi Problem nahin hai naa...' SAMRAT Bhaiyaa..." ??
 
SAMRAT lost his temper... (( This is enough... How dare he to called me 'Bhaiyaa'...?? 'Uncle' , 'Bhaiyaa' keh sakta hai... , Saala 'JIJU' nahin keh sakta...?? Isse toh main dekh loonga... He is really dangerous kid... agar isse chup nahin karaya toh,Yeh toh hamara Rishta hi badal dega... Mujhe laga tha ,Yeh meri Help karega...par,yeh 'saala' toh mujhe helpless karne mein laga hua hai... Abhi class leta hoon isski...)) 
 
SAMRAT came close to TINKU n said angrily"Hey Don't call me 'Bhaiyaa-Waiyaa'...Ok...!! Main kisi ka 'Bhaiyaa-Waiyaa nahin hoon... looked at GUNJAN side...she was smiling...said to her angrily "Aur tumhaara toh bilkul bhi nahin... toh khabardaar jo kabhi mujhe 'Raakhi-Waakhi' dene ka socha bhi toh... " turned to TINKU side again n said angrily
"aur,Tum...tum mujhe sirf SAM kahoge... No 'Uncle' No 'Bhaiyaa'...  n tuned... He was about to go... just then... TINKU said...  " Ok... SAM ... nice name... sounds good... " (in teasing tone)
 
S - Yaa...Its better for you...
 
G - Arre ! Please,aap iski baatoon ka bura mat maaniye yeh toh...
 
T - (cuts) Don't worry Di... 'Member of MBA' itni chhoti si baat ka bura nahin maanenge... am I right MB...??
 
S - (turned n asked angrily) MB...?? Member of MBA...?? what is the meaning of these word...??
 
T - Oh...! Woh aap nahin samjhoge...Bachhon ki baatein hain...Bade logon ki samajh mein nahin aayengi... waise,shayad aap jaa rahe the... Have a nice day...Bye...!!
 
SAMRAT said nothing n left from the kitchen...with very anger way... GUNJAN glared to TINKU n said in unhappy tone...  "TINKU ! what is this...? Tumne aisa kyun kiya... ? Unhen kitna bura laga ...
 
T - (said normally) Don't worry Di ! Maine jo kiya thik kiya...woh yeh deserve karta tha... Dekha nahin, usne 'Bhaiyaa' kehne par kitna over react kiya... Its means,uske mind mein kuchh aur hi chal raha tha...
 
S - Well,aisa bhi toh ho sakta hai...woh kisi stranger se kisi tarah ka 'Rishta' nahin rakhna chahte hon... waise bhi hum unhen jaante kahaan hain...
 
T - Aur,Jaanne ki zaroorat bhi nahin... do you know Di... came more close to GUNJAN... n said in very low tone... "Di,Yeh wohi GABBAR hai jiski subah humne Head Light todi thi...' (said innocently)
 
G - KYA...?? Oh... means woh Gaadi BRIJ Bhaiyaa ki thi...??  Oh God ! Yeh maine thik nahin kiya... Kya sochenge woh jab unhen pata chalega...
 
T - Don't worry Di... Uss accident ka sirf 1 eye-witness tha...Yeh GABBAR... aur,yeh ab tak humein recognize nahin kar paaya...Its means isse mera face yaad nahin... aur,waise bhi maine isse itna irritate kar diya hai ki,Yeh dobara mera face dekhna hi nahin chahega... Ab yeh jab bhi mujhe dekhega...isse sirf abhi waali coversation hi yaad rahegi... Accident toh yaad bhi nahin rahega... Maine uska mind fully divert kar diya hai... (said proudly)
 
G - Phir bhi TINKU... mujhse galti toh hui hai...
 
T - Nahin Di ,Aapse kabhi koi galti nahin ho sakti... aur agar humse galti hui hai,toh woh bhi uss galti ke zimmedar hain... woh Car ko Road ke side mein bhi toh park kar sakte the naa... Anyway,ab jaldi chalo...warna woh GABBAR dobara aakar hamein pareshaan karega...
 
G - Ok...Main bas yeh 'Pudding' bana loon ,phir chalte hain... waise Mom ne kyun bulaya hai...
 
T - Mom ne nahin bulaya tha... woh toh main aapko uss GABBAR se bachane ke liye jhooth bol raha tha... (said innocently) ok, aap Yeh 'Pudding' bana lo...jab tak main yahin wait karta hoon...
 
GUNJAN smiled softly... came close to TINKU n hugged him lovingly... n kissed to his forhead... She knew... He is the sweetest little kid...sorry,little Bro of the world.
                                      
                                                                                            [>>>>>>>]

 
---------------------------------------------------------------------------
Hi Guys !!
             First I want to say,Thank You so much for your all sweet n encouraging Comment for Last Update.😳Finally,Part-4 is completed.I don't want to take Your so much time for my Updates... so,this time I edited next 2 parts[C n D]. I'll post it very soon...😳 I tried my Best 😳Guys,Sorry for any disappointment.😳 please, bear my silly mistakes. Thanks guys for your wonderful support.

In Next Update :~ [17th Jun.11]
* End of Misunderstanding. 
* ARNAV's entry
 

Joseph❀️.

Till then...Bye...!! n Yes,Don't forget to Enjoy this Lovely Song...😳 😍
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KSsSM2IR2LY&feature=player_detailpage[/YOUTUBE]
Edited by Joseph_A - 12 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

1149

Views

115477

Users

78

Likes

3647

Frequent Posters

agreatperhaps thumbnail
Anniversary 14 Thumbnail Group Promotion 5 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
Res =)) I will read and edit...πŸ˜‰

*Edited*

Okay, so it is me first this time!πŸ₯³
Sorry Ekta!🀣

Joseph Bhai, what can I say!πŸ˜• 

But still a big hug for this big update!πŸ€—

Such mind-blowing, sumptuous parts you post that the English Dictionary may be short of words but your appreciations won't stop! Wow! Flawlessly written!πŸ‘ 

I loved the bonding you showed between Rohan and Samrat.πŸ˜† I also loved the way Sam tried to get his work done through Rohan!!πŸ˜† "You need to be extra-smart to get PS3"

Samrat still thinks Gunjan is the girl for him, wish that could happen soon!😳 So, obviously his attempts to be with Gunjan alone in the kitchen were tooo good!πŸ‘ 

Where do you get such ideas from?πŸ˜• My mind stops whenever I write updates and you are like fabulous!..😳

The Tinku part was so cute, he is such a doll! [Okay he is a boy but anyways!]πŸ˜†
I loved his possessiveness for his elder sister. And the Rakhi tying part🀣! I am still ROFLing on that!🀣

Samrat aka Gabar's anger is on his nose. He scolded Tinku so loudly for calling him "Uncle" and "Bhaiya"

I liked the way you showed Gunjan's POVπŸ‘. She thinks he is so shameless. Well, he was trying to be though!πŸ˜†

I am so damn addicted to your FF! Please do continue soon, I wait for it to be updated!!!

Kay, now coming back to this particular update!😳

Well, the presentation style is awesome. You are my IDOL on I-F! What updates you make...
I am so in love with each and every update of yours.

Well, this part was mostly based on Sam's POV! Aww... He is such a sweetheart!
The part where Gunjan said she will take care of the things and SM should rest. Was so GunjanIsh. And Sam was eavesdropping. 

And when Gunjan was worried about Rohan and asked Ishita to go and see for him, Sam thought it was for him.🀣

God! He will be shocked when he gets to know the truth!πŸ˜†

I can still imagine him shamelessly flirting with Gunjan. Just like the serial...

You may have changed the characters, but you have wonderfully kept the SaJan essence intact. You surely know how to play with words and frame Not-So Filmy yet attracting sentences. You seriously are my idol on I-F.

Thank you so much for the Pm! Please Continue Soon..
I tried my best to make a looonnnggg Comment, sorry if I could not!

By the way, I need your help!
Please help me out with my update tooo.. I am totally confused!!

Love,
Nivriti
Edited by SajanRox - 12 years ago
SwaNia_2 thumbnail
Anniversary 13 Thumbnail Group Promotion 5 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
Too Good, Joseph... absolutely amazing.  πŸ‘  πŸ‘ Tinku is so adorable.  He cares so much for his sis. The relation of bro-sis is indeed very special. And you have written so well about this special bond.πŸ‘  πŸ‘. Samrat will never change... and good enough, we love Samrat just the way he is.πŸ˜‰. The chahcha- bhatija part was lovely too. But whatever little of SaJan part you gave us in this update was absolutely superb... the best. Gunji's thoughts and her reaction... I am short of words to appreciate. Do update soon.😊
Glowing_Star thumbnail
Anniversary 13 Thumbnail Group Promotion 3 Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
awesome, fab, amazing...
waiting for the next part when everything gets solved...
& arnav's entry... wow.
cont soon...😊

preety88 thumbnail
Anniversary 16 Thumbnail Group Promotion 5 Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update...cant wait to see what samrats reaction will be when he finds out gunjan isnt his to be wife...tinku and samrats convo was funny...cont soon
MoNayaHolicPrag thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
PHew atalst you updated! 
kitna tarapay hum sab ko!lolz!
well really awesome awesome update

man u have no clue ke sam ke thoughts phadke meri kya halat ho rahi thi
i swear mera icha kare toh main yeh misunderstandings kabhi clear na hone doon
awesome sajan scene! it was really nice to see it
the way sam pataos rohan! 
fab scene! 
and tinku sam scene was gr8! funny it was1 aaah he is such a shaitan baacha!!! 

well all in alll gr8 gr8 gr8 update ! 
sorry for replying late ! my holidays over exams coming so i am like a bit busy! 

and now i am waiting for arnavs entry and more sajan scenes! 
i still have so many questions in my head! 
gr8 going
and i am waiting for 17th!! aaha! :)
Edited by pragya_luvsajan - 12 years ago
aashizin thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
hey joseph once again superb update i loved this part seriously very wonderful πŸ‘πŸ‘specially the way u described samrat's eagerness his excitement to have  convo with gunjan , and tinku's naughtiness and his care for gunjan superb πŸ˜³i can say if samrat is sher tinku is shava sher πŸ˜†πŸ˜†samrat misunderstood gunjan as his would be wife and otherside gunjan is shocked with his reaction no doubt she is not aware with this things what he is thinking for her and thats why for any girl it has to be same reaction the way gunjan did, but no doubt with this update and misunderstanding gunjan made her entry in his heart , no doubt when this misunderstanding will be cleared gunjan will always there in his heart the way he is totally impressed with  her beauty ,simplicity her caring and loving nature ,no doubt gunjan always makes all ppl to fall for her with her simplicity and wonderful nature and this time samrat 's heart is also felt same no it will be interesting to read how will samrat will after knowing truth no doubt it  will be like heart break for him as he is liking her now , abt gunjan how she will feel when she will meet arnav and what will happen in this story kuch bhi kaho samrat and tinku can make good pair as jiju sala ek dusare par bhari πŸ€£
SandCastle. thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
Reserved...😭 πŸ˜­
I'll Kill u Mr.Khadoos...😑 πŸ˜‘
Just Wait & Watch my Rply...
hmphhh...😑 πŸ˜‘

BTW i β€οΈ the song...😳
Oo-Ah...
Take the world & Paint it RED...
Oo-Ah...
Paint it RED...
& also 'SENORITA'...

Will edit soon...🀣
gnaneswari thumbnail
Anniversary 13 Thumbnail Group Promotion 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update. Loved it. Loved each and every scene. And sajan pov was very nice. I loved the scene where sam is talking about their life and gunjan said about the food! It was so hilarious! I'm loving this misunderstanding of samrat. But, by this gunjan is thinking wrong about sam. And the most special part of the update... Sam-tinku convo... Omg!! It was so hilarious! I hadn't stoped laughing till now! I just loved that scene very much. Samrat and uncle!! How can anyone even imagine that! And samrat bhai to gunjan!! This is the next to impossible! I just loved samrat's reaction. U wrote very nicely that i can vusualise it. I can imagine the samrat's adorable and shocking expressions. This so januable. And why r u cutting the part c, d of next update? I just love to read long updates. So, please give long updates. And don't even think that it will waste our time. I really love to read ur ffs. U wrote so nicely that makes us fall in for ur ffs. How can u think that we won't like to read the long updates?! Please don't think like that. Precap is intresting. Arnav's entry! I'm waiting to know about his charector. Hope he will not be a negative charector. But, i trust u that u'll give justice to every charector and the story. Waiting for next update eagerly. Do cont soon. Thanks for pm
cool_tuli thumbnail
Anniversary 14 Thumbnail Group Promotion 5 Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
reserved... I'll edit this soon...

^^^^^'edited'^^^^^

 πŸ€£ 🀣 🀣 🀣
Samrat n Gunjan's thinkings...πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† it was sooo hilarious... especially that part where Sam says that baadme koi prob nai honi chahiye n all.. n gunjan replies that koi prob nai hogi thinkin he is talkin abt d chicken...
OMGGG this is d best update till now... Awesomeee bro... πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
The writing is sooo gud...
n plsss don mind i think u made TINKU a bit over the top... I mean he is jus a kid n i think u cud hav kept his character like a sweet, normal kid... like u did with ROHAN!! M sorry if u felt bad but this was jus a suggestion or rather advice from a friend... Otherwise u noe wat happens... the mindset abt Gunjan changes that she has such a Badtamiz brother...😳
If possible sumwer do show sum gud attitude from Tinku that will add to the love of the ff...
Apart from all these things I loved Samrat's character... his way of handling kids... his try for expressing his love for Gun... n Gunjan was as usual very sweet, bubbly...
But what i didn like in this post was d precap... awww... this misunderstanding wil b cleared... matlab YAMINI will enter???? 😲 I don hav any prob with Arnav... bcoz it won't hit Sam directly but Yamz cumin in right now... will give a boommm to Sam's heart n brain...
May b his attitude towards Gun will change πŸ˜• awww i don want that to happen...
But m sure u hav sum gud things to write ahead... so lookin forward to it...
All d best...dude..! n  again... SUPERBBB UPDATE 🀣 🀣

Edited by cool_tuli - 12 years ago