...Aur PYAAR Ho Gaya ![1] {New Link available} - Page 23

Originally posted by: aashizin

i m thinking how to start 😆first of all extremely sorry for so so late reply i was out of town and i m having lots of pending pms don't know when i will finish 😒😆 i read both 2 parts i took plenty of time to read both parts i m seriously happy with proceeding story in second part of this story showing gunjan n samrat's povs for marriage for their life in third part loved gunjan's bonding with sam's family and got to know reason why she can't be sam's wife most prob one hint for future story sajan's first meeting was 😲😆 ok now sam misunderstood her as his would be wife now it will be interesting to read how this story will take new step ahead with this two opposite ppl's life , do continue soon and thanks for pm it was seriously awesome part 👍🏼 i m extremely happy with this progress of this story 😳

Originally posted by: SHAMSHIR-MJHT

Reserve  😳 !! 

((BTW, Amazing Presentation👏 loved your new Font design 4 Dio. part and Superb Siggy placement ,PRAGYA done a really GR8 job.👏 👏 👏))

Originally posted by: Shafoo

i just love it sam was thinking tht gunjan was tht girl who is came to see him and gunjan  was a wrong girl samrat she is not tht girl who is your bride sam it other girl not gunjan poor sammm i feeling bad for him

Originally posted by: gunurlove

Hey Joseph'.first of all very very very very Sorry for not commenting on the 2^nd Part'.

Initially I was little bit busy n later don't know how did I Forget to comment..n 2ndly u have posted the Update early..so I could not comment ''.

Ok now firstly  start from 2^nd part'.

It was Just Supreb..Fantastic'.Marvellouse Part''totally A1''👏👏

You r the Best writer'.how can u write sooo beautifully'''⭐️

Gunjan and Tinku bond was soo cute and lovely'I love the most Tinku dialogues in this part'..n Tinku is also my most fav Character'.so cute and Dramatic'..

Specially the way he was taking care of her DI was so lovely''.i liked it very very very much'😳😳..n then his dialogues about Scooty n Samrat''this whole scene was written so Perfectly'..most of all his acting with his Mom'😆'..oh God'it was so sweet''..i thoroughly enjoyed the 1^st part bcoz of Tinku'.so sweet and innocent..n naughty tooo'..means so innocently he was blaming to Scooty  n Samrat..that why he had parked the car in the middle of the way'😆'each n every line was just Superb'.👏👍🏼

Then Gunjan and her mom bonding was written very fantastically''.this scene was also very nice''when they both were talking abt marriage n life partner'.very touchy n emotional scene'''really nice'.👏

After then Samrat n his family scene was veryyy wonderfull..his bonding with his mom n bhabhi was so good'..Ishita teasing n everything was very nicely described'just like a perfect family picture'.😛

The overall whole update was Awesome'Superb mind blowing'..⭐️👏

Now 3^rd part

It was a Rocking update'..i simply loved it to the core''.just wonderful'Fabulouse part''👏👏👏

Samrat desperately know abt that girl'with whom his marriage is fixed'.but poor boy..nobody tell him a single word abt her'😉

Ishita n Samrat are the Best example of fav Dever Bhabhi''(Sam is very lucky in this SS haan'as he has a wonderfull mom bhai bhabhi'dad n nephew')

Everyone take care of his likes n dislikes''infact Gunjan's relationship with his family was sooo wonderfull and amazing'😳😳'I really like this bubbly n naughty Gunjan of this SS'..She teased ishita..n loves Samrat's mom just like her own mom''.all this was sooo amazing '..Kitchen scene in Samrat's home was veryyy nice''ahhhaaa feeling so happy to know this that Sam's mom n bhabhi like Gunjan for Samrat..but cant do anything'as they r totally change to one another'..but don't worry..Opposite attracts'we know'..😉

and now''.offcourse '''

The Best scene of this SS was no doubt''.the Sajan first meeting scene.❤️

Oh My  God it was awesome'Out standing scene'''how can u write it sooo sooo beautifully and Perfectly'⭐️👏

Sam was too much lost n her beauty as he did not realise abt his condition n towel'😉😆  😆😆...oh God'..

so Hillariouse scene it was''.n then Gunjan's instant reaction "mene kuch nai dekha..mene kuch nai dekha'." It made me laugh very much yaar'😃😃'.This whole scene was the Soul of this SS..n y not afterall it was Sajan's first meeting'but the situation which used to meet them first time was totally different n Superb'..love to the core this scene'👏...

morever sam was thinking that Gunjan is that girl'n was feeling so much happiness'n also blushed on this thought' awww''.sam ne to apni mom or bhabhi ka kaam khud hi asaan kar dia'..😉😉

But what would be..when he would came to know that Gunjan is not that girl'infact shez the person'who hitted his car'..eagerly waiting for the next part''plzzz update soon the next part'''''..just like this Rocking and Awesome update'..

Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: -Ecstasy-

Awesome!

Originally posted by: ekta_monaya

 Reserved...😭

after reading...

☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

OMGGG...blushing like hell...!!!!

Will edit soon...☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

                                                             *Edited*

Ok again i failed to comment 1st...😭...but no problem coz m 1st on the 24th pg.no...see m so ENTHUSIASTIC to comment 1st...🤣...hope nxt time i succeed in commenting 1st...🤣 & this time i ressed before u updated too...😆 Wah HATS OFF to me...🤣 -Yaa...I feel same thing...🤣 🤣.True ENTHUSIASTIC to comment 1st..🤣

Ok now cuming to this update...it was really EXTRA-SPECIAL for me as i mentioned before...☺️...it was superb, mind-blowing, ultra-cute, terrific & Ultra-januable... & way too much BLUSHABLE...OMG I still cant blive wat i read...☺️...was it really true?! Someone PINCH me plzzz...😳...u knw wat i read this update almost 8 times!! & this "SPECIAL SAJAN MEET SCENE almost 10 times...i still cant blive myself that i read it so many times...this can xplain to you how much ADDICTED i am to your FF...I Love this FF completely...😍 & m hoping for some more ultra januable scenes...😳

Thanks a lot EKTA for your compliment..☺️😳☺️ 8-10  time reading is not small thing..😳.Thank you so much for liking this FF ,to much.😳Yaa,some SaJan scenes are coming.😳.Januable or not...decide,after reading.😳

now cuming to Samrat-SM convo...it was really cute...awww...sam is the adorable son while SM is the caring & sweet mom...totally mother-son convo & way too adorable...superbly written scene...loved it...😳...Thnk god Samrat ke bathroom ka shower kharab ho gya warna "AISI" meeting "KAISE" hoti SaJan ki...🤣...Thnk u so much SM for letting him in Brij's room...🤣

What a thought...☺️.Girls bhi naa...☺️.Poor,SM ko kya pata tha...'Aisa Kuchh' ho jaayega...😳.

& now cuming to ISHITA...awww...shez so sweet...a REAL character actually & not the typical nagging daily-soap bhabhi...instead a loving soul...m loving her character whu knws wat is good for evryone & wat not... & i hope that she suceeds in bringing gunjan in sam's life...*FINGERS CROSSED*... ISHITA n BRIJ is very sweet characters of this story.Yes,she is not playing a typical 'Bhabhi' character...She really feels, GUNJAN is right girl for SAMRAT.

& now Gunjan-GM scene...again a very sweet scene...totally mother-daughter convo... & 1 line was so typical said by gunjan's mother..."SALWAR SUIT tumpar acchi lagti hai, atleast uss JEANS TOP se toh zyada acchi lagti hai..." Its such a TYPICAL dialogue by mothers...🤣...isse padhke meri mom ki yaad aa gyi...always telling me the same thing...🤣...i must say u wrote the girl's convo so well...terrific yaar...simply superbbb...👏 👏 👏 Thanks Ekta...Because,I was so nervous during the writing that part.GUNJAN's question to her Mom about her dress is natural feeling because,woh generally Jeans-Top carry karti hai... toh, 'Salwar Suit' mein bahar jaana...thoda awkward toh lagega...😳.And,Please...Aunty ki baat maan lo...(Just like Gunjan) Kya pata koi SAMRAT jaisa mil jaaye...☺️..ussi 'condition' mein..☺️☺️☺️.(At least,mere 'Bro.' ka peecha toh chutega🤣 🤣 🤣,Jab se tumhaari chat read ki hai...🤣 He scared..😉..'Bhabhi' ko kaha hai..Iss ladki ka kuchh karo... warna,main safe nahin...🤣 🤣 🤣)

& then i loved Gunjan-Ishita-SM convo...m sure jab SaJan ki marriage ho jyegi tab in teeno ki convo's padhne me bohot mazza ayega...LOL...Gunjan is so INTELLIGENT...apni family ke saath PLAYSCHOOL banayegi...🤣...too good Gunjan...i must say vry practical thinking...🤣...loved this convo vry much & then i evn loved ISHITA's thoughts...shez so right...Gunjan ko koi NAA kaise keh sakta h... how true!!😳 -Are you sure...SaJan marriage hogi...??😲😕😲.What a confidence...😉.ISHITA thought is right on that place...but,SM views about SaJan marriage thing is also right so,unhen koi hope nahin hai.

& then cuming to my FAV scene...SaJan 1st meet scene... OMG OMG...i was like...☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ after reading it...it was just...i dont have words yaar...i was blushing like HELL...☺️...Samrat in TOWEL...☺️ & then...☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️...Poor Gunjan!! I really can undrstnd her condition...really a very JANUABLE scene...aisi meeting maine aajtak nai dekhi... & then Samrat assumed her as the would-be-Mrs.Samrat Shergill...?! OMG OMG m gonna fainttt...😲...itni ACCHI galat-fehmi ho gyi isse...🤣...thnk god Samrat is not a DHAKKAN here...in fact he's the SMART one here...🤣...but i wonder wen he'll cum to knw the truth toh bechare ka kya reaction hoga?! W8inggg eagerly for it...lets see if he really chooses that YAMINIII over Gunjan...🤢...i know NEVER...hope so uski assumption sahi ho jye...plzzz joseph plzzz... & iss meeting ke liye spl.thnks to ISHITA bhabhi...really ISHITA ki JAI HO...!!🤣...m just waiting for Gunjan's POV & Sam's teasing with her in the nxt update...i really cant wait nymore...😳 & then samrat's last dialogue...Ermmm...Ahem Ahem...☺️ 🤣...i wonder how u wrote this?! I mean Mr.Khadoos writing SUCH scene is totally UNBELIVABLE...ur suceeding in breaking the image wich u created by MBYPH...Gr8 coz m really loving it...😳 🤣  -Definitely Yaar,I am so desperate to broke my own set image.😳😳
but,story is important then other things. SaJan first meeting scene is important part of this story...woh scene memorable hona chahiye tha because,further story...uski need thi. But,Yes I was nervous... because,This is my first try to write this type of scene..😳and most imp. thing woh scene funny n embarrassing hona chahiye tha...not,vulgar...Definitely SAMRAT is not DHAKKAN here..,he is very smart...sorry,Extra ordinary Smart😳.By the way,My next part is ready(working again on SAM-TINKU part convo.😉)...I'll post very soon.😉

& then i forgot to mention TINKU-GUNJAN scene...it was so so cute...LOL...DD...🤣 but BTW wats MB & MBA??? ...m curious to know...  - I think,DD is suitable  for You 😡🤣 🤣.MB n MBA's full form is very hilarious... woh Part-5 mein reveal karoonga.😳 

& BTW u said that "Delhi waale kisi ki bhi bolti bandh krwa sakte h..." maybe karte honge but Mumbai waalo ki kabhi nahi coz we Mumbaiwaalas r the BEST...Hum kisi ki bhi bolti bandh krwa sakte h...for eg. MoNaya...Mohit is Delhite while Sanaya is Mumbaikar & kabhi dekha h mohit ko sanaya ke saamne zubaan chalate hue?!...nahi naa...🤣 🤣 🤣 so this proves my point...🤣 🤣 🤣...this Tinku is just like my elder-cousin bro, SID...actually mera bro isse bhi aage h...🤣 🤣  -Oh God...!! I can't believe it...You also belongs to DELHI naa...😲 😲 😲.Kitni fast way mein party change ki...😲 😲 😲.By the way,MOHIT n BARUN is exceptional case of 'Delhite'...Ok..😆.waise bhi SANAYA ke saamne maine kisi ko zubaan chalate nahin dekha..🤣 🤣 🤣 . aur,waise bhi jab SANAYA bolti hai...MOHIT only usse dekhta hi rehta hai...(watch,any MoNaya interview😳) kuchh soch hi nahin paata..toh,bolega kaise ?? 🤣 🤣 🤣. TINKU is just like SID...!!😊 Aur,mujhe laga yeh character mer cousin jaisa hai 🤣.TINKU bhi kaafi aage hai...upcoming parts read toh karo...😳.

This update was a complete package for me...BEST update of this FF till date...m in LOVE wit it completely...Superb, fantastic, mind-blowing, marvellous, terrific update...HATS OFF to you Mr.Khadoos...👏 👏 👏 Thanks TL😳 for your all nice words😳.

Ah! Finally i Un-ressed...Sorry for Unreserving so late...actually my Grandpa is not well & so i've cum here wit my lappy & hardly get time to cum onlyn...hope u undrstnd...really sorry yaar...doosra wala unress i'll do aaram se fursat me...Thnk You So much for bearing me & my rply...nxt time btter rply krungi...pakka promise...😳

BTW wen r u updating???...Ab toh maine bhi UNRESS kr dia, ab toh update kr do...😆...m waiting eagerly plzzz update soon...😳 -Don't say sorry for that...😊 I understand yaar for your problem.This is sufficient reply...I loved to read it.😳 I'll be update so soon...thoda dio. par re-work kar raha hoon...Dio. thode toh catchy hone chahiye..😳..and,mainly I want to show, SAM-TINKU scene/convo is little-bit extra special.😉

CONTINUE SOON
UPDATE ASAP
THNX 4 THE PM & DNT 4GET 2 PM ME...

W8ing eagerly 4 nxt update...do cont soon...🤣 🤣-I'll be continue soon...🤣🤣🤣 .Just Relax...😳

Luv,

Ekta...🤗

Originally posted by: SwaNia_2

Res... but overall... as usual awesome updates.😊

  *  Edited  *

Awesome updates. 😊Sorry for the late reply. Read both the parts together, and was a real pleasure reading them. Samrat scenes with his family were lovely, his rapport with his bhabhi was beautifully put across. The devar-bhabhi nok jhok was so well described.👏 I simply loved Gunjan.😊 She is so sweet and her sweetheart little bro... she dotes on him. Not surprising... .older siblings do dote on the younger ones. And younger ones love that attention. Loved Tinku's possessiveness towards his sister... and  Gunjan's naughtiness... too good.👏

But the absolutely awesome part was the SaJan meeting... so well described and written. Hats off to you Joseph... brilliant...👏

Samrat's dad will not accept Gunjan😲. He has no idea what he is rejecting.😆. All in all superb updates. Waiting for the next update. Do update soon.😊