...Aur PYAAR Ho Gaya ![1] {New Link available} - Page 21

Originally posted by: cool_tuli

sorry m a bit late this time...
but now i have to res it... I'll comment soon
 
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SaJan meet was amazinggg... 😆 😆 😆 it was sooo cuteee... haayeee bechara SAM...
I loved d way he was thinkin about Gun to marry her...
Ishita n Gunjan convo was superbb... they were sooo sweet with each other...
M afraid wat will happen when d guests arrive n SAm cum to noe d actual situation taht its not gun abt whum his family has thot about... 😳 but jo hota hai acche k liye hota hai!!! 😃

Sam is really a baby with his family... M also afraid that he shud not b in a situation where he has to pay for his bachpana or innocence. He is a lovely guy n i don wanna c him into any kinda tension!! 😳 😳 😳
Gun's bro is a sweetheart... I wanna him as my bro also... TINKU shonu... 😆 😉

Okay for u now Joe... this was an adorable n soo realistic!!!
I loved d way u expressed all d talks with soo ease. U said that u had difficulty with female convo part... but i guess that was d most cutest conversation of this update!!! 😃
Yaa ofcourse Sajan part was any day better than anything else but that convo was also amazing!!!
Keep it up buddy... I really have fun to read ur updates...
Keep writing dear 🤗

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Thanks Tuli for your sweetest  feed-back😳 😳 . I really wanted to write SaJan first meet scene , different from MBYPH n little-bit unique too.😳 Thanks for like it.😊 (Towels always works😆). Actually this story concept is little-bit serious so,I want to show some light moment also here. SAMRAT is really sweet person his parents choice is different from him...But,He respect their choice n decision.

TINKU is my sweet heart also because,this character is totally inspired by my cousin bro.😆He is too much naughty.And,really yaar writing of Girls/Women convo is very difficult because, Guys aisi convo nahin karte.😆 Thanks again for liking whole parts of this Update.😳

Originally posted by: Joseph_A

Thanks Tuli for your sweetest  feed-back😳 😳 . I really wanted to write SaJan first meet scene , different from MBYPH n little-bit unique too.😳 Thanks for like it.😊 (Towels always works😆). Actually this story concept is little-bit serious so,I want to show some light moment also here. SAMRAT is really sweet person his parents choice is different from him...But,He respect their choice n decision.

TINKU is my sweet heart also because,this character is totally inspired by my cousin bro.😆He is too much naughty.And,really yaar writing of Girls/Women convo is very difficult because, Guys aisi convo nahin karte.😆 Thanks again for liking whole parts of this Update.😳

ohh... m waitin for d serious part to cum up... coz that will b sumthing dat will make this ff a bit hatke... 😉
Awww u hav a bro lyk TINKU how cutee... 😳 I wish even i had one... 😳  Obv he'll b naughty... this is his time na... he has to b so... 😆
N yaa i noe guys don talk like that but girls convos r really easy okay... uu hav to jus leave ur brains aside n talk wateva cums to ur mind 😆 😆 😆 😉

Originally posted by: Kritianya

2 gud yaar
its realy a nice part
update soon
kritika

Thanks Kritka for your sweet comment.😳I'll definitely Update soon...😊

OMG...Joseph ...loved it to the core 👏🤣🤣...amazing ...wonderful ...u wrote so superbly that i m really short of words ...each n every scene was mindblowing ...SM convo with Ishita n Gun was fantastic n Samrat's dad will not agree for Gun ...😔NO YAAR  don't do ths...n Sajan frst meet 🤣☺️😍👏👍🏼loved it ...cont soon Bhai n thnx for the Pm

i m thinking how to start 😆first of all extremely sorry for so so late reply i was out of town and i m having lots of pending pms don't know when i will finish 😒😆 i read both 2 parts i took plenty of time to read both parts i m seriously happy with proceeding story in second part of this story showing gunjan n samrat's povs for marriage for their life in third part loved gunjan's bonding with sam's family and got to know reason why she can't be sam's wife most prob one hint for future story sajan's first meeting was 😲😆 ok now sam misunderstood her as his would be wife now it will be interesting to read how this story will take new step ahead with this two opposite ppl's life , do continue soon and thanks for pm it was seriously awesome part 👍🏼 i m extremely happy with this progress of this story 😳

i just love it sam was thinking tht gunjan was tht girl who is came to see him and gunjan  was a wrong girl samrat she is not tht girl who is your bride sam it other girl not gunjan poor sammm i feeling bad for him