Originally posted by ekta_monaya
YAY! YAY! Me 1st to comment...*VICTORY SMILE*...yes yes yes i commented 1st on ur 1st update...🥳
m so happy...i got 1 more FF to spy on other than MBYPH...🤣...thnk u Joseph...u cant imagine how
much i was missing ur writings...😳 & u have simply made my day...😃 CONGRATULATIONS on the 1st update
of ur FF... & i always want to be the 1st one to comment on ur FF...😳... MBYPH & ...APHG ROCKSSS...!!!!!...👏 👏 👏
Ok now cuming to the update...wat to say Mr.Perfectionist...u truly are a PERFECTIONIST...👏 ⭐️ 👏 ⭐️ 👏 ⭐️ 👏 ⭐️ 👏 ⭐️ m so much much much in LOVE with this FF...❤️ ❤️ ❤️
maine to bas concept & 1st update padha..."...AUR PYAAR HO GAYA" mujhe iss FF se...😍...i think m gonna
love it more than MBYPH...seriously awesummm, superbbb, mind-blowinggg,
fantasticcc & totally roccckkkiiinnnggg update...
i just loveee it sooo much Joseph...ur seriously back with a BANG dude... 😎
Wonderful FF...just Perfecttt...i can say that from its start only...really Gr88888888...u knw
ever since i've seen the name & the FF my heart is repeatedly singing MERI SAASON ME BASA H...its from
a movie starring Aishwarya Rai & Bobby Deol & i guess it was Ash's 1st movie & its name was "...AUR PYAAR HO GAYA"...😳
& since the day u tld me abt this title of ur new FF, since that day & till today, this song is repeatedly playing in my mind...
do hear it...its really superb & 1 of my favs...😳
now cuming to GD & GM scene...awww...they r so cute & adorable...loved thier convo...❤️
just perfect doting parents...loved thier convo so so so much...awww...GD cares for her so much for
his daughter like all fathers...really loved his concern... & OMG!! his dhamki...so sweet...😳 😃
really awesum & fantastic scene...loved it...👏 👏 👏
now cuming to Gunjan-Tinku scene & Gunjan's introduction...awww...Adorable siblings...OMG!! Tinku is sooo cute<3...😳
& wow!! Gunjan is vry much diffrent here...Bubbly & Chirpy...like me...😳...awww...m loving this new
gunjan...shez won my heart in the 1st updte itself...Sooo cuttteee<333333...❤️
Poor Girl...misses Delhi...& is getting married to AARAV...ummm, intresting...m really vry keen to knw abt
this Mr.Aarav...his character is quite misterious & i wud love to see the developments in them...lets see
how FANTASTICALLY u handle them Mr.Khadoos...😳((old habits die hard...🤣 🤣))
& now cuming to Samrat-Brij scene & Samrat's introduction...hmmm...quite mature talking between
two brothers & m happy that u maintained the REALISTIC assence...i mean its OBVIOUS in Brother's to
talk abt this matters... & m so happy that u showed & potrayed it well...witout any OBNOXIOUSNESS...😳
Well-done Joseph...u really deserve applauses for this scene...👏
👏 👏
i was actually a bit shocked readng this scene & Samrat's views on PHYSICAL RELATIONSHIPS... NIDHI...?! Ermmm...Ahem Ahem...😆 & m happy that
u've not shown him as a typical, goody-to-shows hero but a man whu has certain FLAWS in him...a few negetive traits
& a MAN whu is NOT PERFECT...dats wat a character is...👏 & i really loved the BOND between Samrat & Brij...😳 & Brij being the Responsible, elder brother that he is showing correct path to samrat & making him realize what Relationship, Marriage & Commitment is...😳...m sure Samrat will undrstnd...😳
i wud really love to see thier BOND develop more Stronger in ur FF...
& m also happy to knw that he respects his parents & thier views
& perceptions so much...i wonder whus the gal his parents have chosen for him...😳obviously NOT Gunjan coz her marriage is already
fixed to AARAV...🤢 then whu is it...???!!! YAMINI...!!!!!!!🤢 OMG...!!!!!!! No No No No Never...hope so not...*FINGERS CROSSED*...🤔
Really Superb, amazing, marvellous & my fav scene of the update...HATS OFF yaar...👏 👏 👏
& OMG!! the BEST & the Most Hillarious part was the "DHANNO" & "DHOOM" sequense...OMG!! I was seriously ROFLing like HELL...it was stupendous...🤣 🤣
OMG!! Samrat as GABBAR...LOL...Tinku is so damn funny...😆loved him... & Gunjan...?!😆 & they ran away...!! OMG!! M sure OUR GABBAR will kill them if he
finds out...🤣 Poor Gunjan is hurt too... hope the CUT is not deep & hope the LECTURE is not Long...😆 ((i knw wat it i to bear a lecture as i get 1 almost evryday...🤣 😆 😳))
God this Gunjan is too too too much like me & dats y m loving her so much...
eagerly w8ing 4 OFFICIAL SaJan meet...😍
The update was just mind-blowinggg, Superbbb, Roccckkkiiinnnggg, Fantasticcc...
i loved it to the CORE...really wonderful...👏 👏 👏...thoda goof-ups the bt they wer vry minor & ignorable to chalta h...do not worry bout it & keep doing the
out-standing job that u r doing... & ya 1 more thing...does this FF too have a 1st LOOK SCENE...????...😕 If yes, then OMG!! OMG!! M waiting eagerly 4 it...😲 😲
plzzz post it soon so that i have 1 more thng to PONDER on wen the BLACK MONDAY cums & the suspense reveals...
Insomniac banne ke liye kuch to hona chaiye n...LOL...😆...Really Superbbb update...loved it...!! & VM of Sanaya-Barun is fab too...😳
m eagerly waiting 4 IPKKND to start soon...cum soon 6th june...m w8ing...& thnk u so much for sharing the wonderful VM with us Joseph...🤗
Ah! Finally i unressed before u posting the next part...hope ur satisfied with it... & plzzz dont kill me for unressing so late, coz i knw m vry late but was
being lazy...u knw AADAT SE MAJBUR...🤣 🤣...m not the 1 to be blamed for this... & yeah AMBIKA ka Thoda-Thoda Asar ho raha h mujhpe bhi...😆 😳
& wat do u mean by "MAINE KAB KAHA SAJAN ARRIANGE MARRIAGE"...???!!!😡 😡
Joseph plzzz tell me wats goin on in ur DEVILISH mind...😡coz i really knw u well by now...batao kya chakkar h????!!!!😡 😡
i hope tumhare iss FF me SaJan safe h...& agar nai h na to i'll eriously KILL U...!! 😡 & i MEAN IT...!!😡 so save urself from dying & me from going in prison...😡 😆
apni jaan pyaari ho to meri dhamki yaad rakhna & ye kya JEEJU ki dhamki laga rakhi h huh???? My JEEJU Loves me a lot & he will nver shout at me...😳
evn if his chotta bhai Mr.Khadoos tells him to...to jisko complaint krna h karo coz mai nai darti kisi se...🤣 🤣
& tumhe hame BADNAAM krne ki zarurat nai h...i already knew that it wont be
"SIMPLE" coz U & SIMPLE...not at all a combintion so...& MBYPH ne tumhe already bohot BADNAAM kr dia h...🤣 🤣 ab aur kitna hoge...???!!!😆 😆 & sorry yaar
but yaha bhi tumhe mere Lambe & Boring comments Jhelne honge...🤣 & OMG!! Ye waala to kuch zyaada him lamba ho gya h...sorry yaar...wont repeat again...😳
promise...at least i will try NOT to...((its impossible yaar...😭))...hope u dont mind & if u do then plzzz tell me...hope My RELATIVE is co-operative
otherwise i'll complain to JEEJU abt his younger Bro...😆 🤣 😳
...ab FF start kia h to BHUGTO...i cant help it...🤣 🤣 hope u dont mind... & wen r u updating????...😳
its been long yaar...plzzz update soon...m w8ing desperately 4 it...Kuch seekho S3 se...kitna fatafat update krte h vo...in fact mere comment krne se bhi
pehle...aaj kal waha 1st comment to kya, only comment krna bhi MUSHKIL ho gya h coz of thier speed... 🤣 🤣kuch seekho unse plzzz & plzzz update soon... 😳
m w8ing desperately 4 it...😳
& do rply to this comment of mine...bohot mehnat se likha h isiliye...😳 & agar nai kia na to direct JEEJU se COMPLAINT kr dungi...🤣 🤣
CONTINUE SOON
UPDATE ASAP
THNX 4 THE PM & DNT 4GET 2 PM ME...((yaha pe bhi jhelo meri TYPICAL lines...😆 🤣))
W8ing eagerly 4 nxt update...do cont soon...😳
Luv,
Ekta...🤗
Phheewww Finally...Unreserved
toh kiya...😆 Warna I thought,Tum bhi Ambi Mam se toh class nahin le rahi...??🤣 Long
but,very sweet Comment.😳.But,I think...ab
tumne MBYPH par comment dena stop kiya hua hai...Thank God! main usse write
nahin kar raha warna,toh Fight ho jaati..😡 🤣 and,Direct
Bhabhi se complain karta...😉 😳. But,Its
OK...Chill Yaar!S3 mind nahin karte...😳 Jis din mind kiya...PM stop...🤣.
About,Title...Yaa,I saw
and hear..."...Aur PYAAR Ho Gaya" movie n song...Its really sweet... and,this
title is true logical for this story...and Its concept...😳.'...APHG' is
not only a name...,this is a feeling...A statement, after marriage...a journey
of.. Strangers to lovers.😳
Now,Update parts...GD-GM
is typical parents..who cares so much of their child... TINKU is lovable...he
is a kid but,very smart kid... just like ,common Delhi Kids...(Woh. kisi ki bhi
'Bolti bandh' kar sakte hain...🤣)
Yaa,here...GUNJAN is
totally different from MBYPH. She is bubbly...Chirpy...but,she knows the value
of Family (Tumhaara pata nahin..'Bhabhi' se poochna hoga😳🤣) and this is
ARNAV...not AARAV🤣.Wait,for his
introduction...😳abhi time hai...😳I am working
again on his character...😉I want to portrey him as powerful
character... not,as a side filler. (Yaar,meri story mein side characters nahin
hote...sabhi ki own story and POV hota hai...😳) Gunjan's
parents ne usse Gunjan ke liye select kiya hai toh,bande mein kuchh toh baat
honi chahiye naa...😉Thanks for compliment Miss 'TL'🤣 🤣 🤣.
Samrat-Brij bonding
portrayed..a relationship between two bro..who just likes Friends.Sam respects
his bro opinion n POV.and I really want to show a general common convo. between
2 friends... this type of convo. is very natural thing. Definitely,SAMRAT is not
a God,here...he is very general human being...he is sensible...knows the value
of Family...but,he has some demerits also and he can't deny it...so,Its
means...he is honest too.He isn't 'Perfect'...but,he is mature enough to
understand these things...totally opposite from MBYPH's character😳
'Dhanno-Gabbar' part is
very short... but,strange...almost sabhi ne usse appreciate kiya hai..😳.I'll continue this seq. in my next Update too...😳. and "..thoda goof-ups the bt they wer vry minor &
ignorable to chalta hai.." No Yaar! No 'chalta'
hai...' please,point-out my mistakes...next time improvement mein help
milegi...warna again,mistakes repeat hogi.
Yes ! It has 1st look scene...but,I postponed the idea of posting that scene,for some time.because,I can't reveled the suspense ,now..abhi woh scene post kiya toh...phir,Updates read karne mein zyada mazza nahin aayega.😳 But,after 2-3 parts...I'll post.
Thanks TL jii...for unreserved...🤣. and about
SaJan Marriage...😳 First read karo...phir,decide karna...They are safe or
not...??😳. Tumhaare Jiju
mere Bro hain...and maine bataya unhen, tumhara 'Wild' intention...He is very
scared...🤣 🤣 🤣 I told him...don't worry bro..Bhabhi hain naa...woh handle kar
lengi..'TL' case hai...samajh jaayegi...🤣 Now,he is
Fine...because,he understands your situation.🤣
So,True yaar!
after,MBYPH...jise bhi simple story kehta hoon...koi,believe hi nahin
karta...toh socha...'Simple Love Story' Idea cancel...apni reputation ko hi
carry karna chahiye...and,I really love to read your long Comment...repeat bhi
karogi toh chalega...😳Don't worry !!🤣. Please,kisi se
complain mat karo...Main cheating karoonga naa...😳🤣.
I'll post very soon...S3
se to competition kar hi nahin sakta...😉they are very fast...and,Main bhi toh
initially,kitna fast tha...but,jab se Tum jaise relative mile hain...😡 😆😆lazy ho
gaya...🤣 .Lagta hi nahin ki tum Bhabhi ki sibling ho...Kahaan woh..kahaan
tum...😆 🤣🤣 zaroor,kahin exchange ho gayi hogi🤣.
Anyway.Thanks again for
this sweet reply...Ab toh long reply bhi de di...😳phir dhamki kyun de rahi
ho...??😡😳 I'll continue very soon.😳
Joseph...❤️
Edited by Joseph_A - 12 years ago
