This content was originally posted by: 1gunjan7
Hey joseph 1stly SORRY Buddy for late reply...๐ญ...Actually 2 days back I read Ur FF update and commented also & was about 2 post my comment and by mistake presedsed backspace button on my lappy and Whole commented disappeared๐ญ๐ญ...Sorry Buddy ...
As for Ur update OMG!! joseph Wow!! What an update๐๐...Simply Magnificent and Out-standing ...Ur update is so good that I want 2 read it again n again...Its a perfect update from a perfectionist thats you joseph ...U r a brilliant writer Joseph...infact you joseph & S3 are the best writers of IF .๐๐ผ...U write everything with perfection ...Ur each update each part of story is Brilliant..U take care of each and every detail ...U rock ...๐๐ผ...This update is so excellent that I loved reading and imagining a lottt๐...infact u thru your this update described each and every character nature so properly that I could visualize each characters expression in each scene...I felt as If this whole update was On-air infront of me...and I am watching a show On Tv...Out-standing, fabulous , stupendous and totally rocking work Joseph...๐๐ผ...each and every scene was fabulous..each dialogue was Superb...I loved the whole update a lottt...each scene is my favorite...but Gabbar and dhanno part and Sajan entry is my most favorite part...Awesome and Amazing work joseph ..well done๐...
GM & GD scene was excellent..This was the kind of scene and conversation which happens in every household among parents...parents worry 4 their children safety and moms worry when her daughter grows up and her age is marriageable that how will she cope and then mom's decision 2 advice her daughter so that she is well settled and happy in life......In every household A father loves his children very much N wants them happy n safe ...especially a father loves his daughter the most in every household... she is always apple of his eyes ...he always wants 2 give his daughter everything and keep her safe and happy in life and even when his daughter grows up For A father His daughter is and always will be his little girl...who he always wants 2 protect...And GD is exactly this kind of dad...He as a dad loves his children a lott..but He loves gunjan the most she is apple of his eyes ...his worry shown by you joseph is kind of worry which every father in life goes thru ...Excellent scene..๐๐ผ...And GM is a typical mother who loves her each child and worries 4 her daughter as she has grown up N wants 2 teach her everything and advice her so that her daughter remains happy in life..Brilliant scene...๐๐ผ...every parents in real life is exactly as you showed in you FF...good work ๐...
Sajan entry was Just Magnificent ...๐๐ผLoved it a lottt...Samrat-Brij scene was fabulous ..their bonding was superb..loved it...๐...Samrat n brij are brothers n best friend both...Brij is a nice,smart, level headed ,friendly and sweet n mature person he is a kind of person n brother which u will find in each household n life who is sometimes friend and elder bro both 2 his younger brother ..Brij loves his family a lott and wants whats best for his family and brother Samrat..sometimes he is best friend to Sam who jokes and teases his bro ...sometimes elder brother who scolds , advices, guides his little brother in right direction when he is wrong.he gives his view then then leaves the decision upto his brother samrat then again becomes friend 2 him...Brij is a sweet and mature person...Loved this character๐๐ผ....even samrat is a typical brother who loves his whole family n brother very much and wants whats best 4 his family...he has a broader outlook n view of life but he is not stubborn infact he knows whats right n wrong in life and he is in favor of love n arranged marriage both ...he is searching 4 right partner in life and he knows what he wants in life...as he could not find right partner himself so has trusted his family and let them choose for him....he also respects his brother ..for him his elder bro is friend n guide both....thats why he jokes with him also but also respects his view of life and listens 2 his opinions ...infact samrat knows marriage is for keeps and adjustment has 2 be done n love n arranged marriage both...he is ready 4 marriage ...He knows value of marriage and respect the institution of marriage....Samrat is a broad minded and traditional guy both...awesome character and excellently described๐...Loved Samrat-BRIJ bonding very much๐๐ผ...
Gunjan and tinku are also typical brother-sister pair which u will see in every day life...their bonding and love 4 each other is amazing..they love n protect each other....thru these scenes I feel that Gunjan is a Modern, COOl, Bindas, sweet yet little naughty girl..who loves speed n fast life of metro city ..she doesn't like if people are slow in life she wants everyone to do their job at proper time ..she hates slowness ...she is impatient also but she is sweet n cute also who wouldn't hurt anyone ..She is modern but knows family values and respects them also.she loves her family very much ..their family bond is Amazing...her words to tinku said when tinku was worried about their dad reaction if they go home late..her Words MAIN HOON NA proves she knows how 2 handle her dad ..she has her dad rapped around her little finger....๐ and she loves her dad very much...Excellent character Gunjan๐๐..even TINKU is amazing he is a typical child ..who is sweet n cute ..and tries 2 show he is grown up when he is just a child.he tries 2 act wise beyond his age...every child in life is exactly like Tinku...loved this character TINKU very very much...SUPERB N sweet character๐๐ผ๐...His talks are amazing also...accident scenes are mostly serious but this was the most Hilarious scene..when Tinku called Scooty DHANNO๐๐ an Samrat GABBAR๐๐..I just couldnt control my laughter ๐๐ I was DRINKING RUAWAAZA THAT Time joseph so U can understand when I read n imagined this scene meri situation kya hogi..Ek taraf drinking Ruawazza or dusri taraf hansi nahi ruk rahi ๐๐.......WHAT a scene๐๐ผ..Brilliantly written๐...superb comedy scene..๐๐..Bahut mazza aaya...enjoyed it a lottt...good work joseph๐...I hope gunjan is not seriously hurt...
Gunjan n Tinku have run away from accident spot but Gabbar ๐๐oops i mean Samrat has noted the scooty no ..now what will happen?? will samrat chatch gunjan n tinku?? and if he catched them what will happen? really want 2 know this joseph So dear plss update soonnn...Plsss...
Once again Awesome and SUPER MAGNIFICENT and Fantabulous update joseph...Well done...๐...u r doing a Brilliant job and I trust u joseph that u will do full justice 2 the story n all characters...Infact i know u will do a rocking job..under ur hands this FF will become magnificent...Do update soonnn and thanks 4 pm...
love Gunjan๐๐...
Thanks a lot GUNJAN, for this longest Review.๐And
don't say sorry to me...actually,I am feeling bad for you...because,I know that
type of mistake is so irritating.Thanks a ton for write this sweet Comment
again.๐ But,really...I am feeling so embarrass๐ณ because,I know...I am not Best
Yaar...Here,many writers are so talanted n dedicated...I am just a
begginner...and,comparison with S3...is very big thing for me...I can't
deserve it.I am glad...You enjoyed this
Part...
You are right about GM-GD part...they are a very simple common
persons...They care a lot to their childrens...especially,GUNJAN... and BRIJ is
very sensible person...He loves a lot to his brother but,not support to his all
wrong things...He is loving and caring too...SAM-BRIJ bonding is very
important part of this story... SAMRAT is also very Nice person...but,he has
some demarits...and he knows about
it.
GUNJAN-TINKU...is very cute example of a sister boding with her
little sweet bro. Definitely,they both are little naughty...so,Best partner of
their all 'Crimes'๐๐
GUNJAN is modern ...but,same time she is very family person...Family is her
priority...and TINKU...actually the character of Tinku is inspired of my 10
yrs. old cousin.He is too much naughty...aur uski baatein...OMG..! I always
think...Yeh bachha hai ...Yaa main bachha hoon... Really,Today's kids are too
much smart.๐
and,about DHANNO-GABBAR part...๐.yaa.It was hilarious scene,no
doubt.๐ I'll continue this scene in my next update too...Thanks again
GUNJAN,for this sweet reply...๐.
Joseph.โค๏ธ
*This Font name is -PRISTINA.but,this is not available on I-F๐ณ
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