MG FF - Something Called Love - Part 18 : Page 129 - Page 93

awesome!

awesome ... superb ...

part 18
nice part...
i dont like it when Maan is his low self esteem...
cont soon...

Dudette!

oh man he is completely broken...i m scared as the time passes by nd the effect of geets truth that vill hv on maan...on the other side is that chudail 😡 maya...she will for sure manipulate things..oh god...eagerly waiting for the next part...do continue soon...

maddy...
i am sure u r hell bent on killing me with ur updates...
whenever i read ur update...i just get one song in my head...
and that is 'killing me softly'

wow...loved the update to the core...
the convo between maan and geet about vows was fabulous...
the way geet was trying to enliven maan and get back his lost self confidence was simply worth applauding...

the last part of ur update just signals a great passionate dance sequence and i am desperately waiting for it in ur next update
keep writing

love u and ur writing

reva

Originally posted by: Dreamy_Mystique

maddy...
i am sure u r hell bent on killing me with ur updates...
whenever i read ur update...i just get one song in my head...
and that is 'killing me softly'

wow...loved the update to the core...
the convo between maan and geet about vows was fabulous...
the way geet was trying to enliven maan and get back his lost self confidence was simply worth applauding...

the last part of ur update just signals a great passionate dance sequence and i am desperately waiting for it in ur next update
keep writing

love u and ur writing

reva

awesome update
loved it!!!

Originally posted by: maanddy

Reva...More than Passionate ! You just keep dreaming ! Next update will blow your mind ! 😳

Okay...My lips are sealed now ! 😉

devill...
u have heightened my senses and made my imagination run wild...me pouting...

Originally posted by: Dreamy_Mystique

devill...
u have heightened my senses and made my imagination run wild...me pouting...