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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: jazzerette

First question!! 


Did you write the poem?? 

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You know I keep telling you I am not worried about Maan and Sam much right? Why? 

Coz its not the future that has me worried. I am much more worried about the past that led to the future that is, that led to Geet's apparent heartbreak when she was of such tender frame of mind, that led Maaneet to be distanced.


That's the heart of the story Jazz and that single point entered my mind from where i framed the story.. And yeah Geet may be naive but not stupid.. So yes, she would be strong..πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: --Shika--


That's the heart of the story Jazz and that single point entered my mind from where i framed the story.. And yeah Geet may be naive but not stupid.. So yes, she would be strong..πŸ˜ƒ


I never did say she is stupid. Her naivety is apparent even to a blind. It shines off her. So her agony becomes even more hard to see. It tugs at you and makes you want to hug her real tight. 

She is a beautiful character you created!! Kudos!!


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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update of flashback 
loved the diary part especially the poem 
i want to ask whether to write poems it was fab.
do continue with longer parts n plz more focus on present .
bye
tc
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it ...
esp prem  he seems to be the nut cracker in a box of nuts πŸ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome!!!

Beautifully penned down!!!

Perfect.

loved the update!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
so? is this a gift? or test from above?
whats the answer??
 
and maan never had feelings for her than? or never get to know about her feelings towards him??
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update...in present part maan & sameera in same house...when r u reveling dere relation...in past dairy part is nice...describing of her feelings before & after maan is nice...cont soon...
Posted: 12 years ago
i love the way she wrote her dairy...
i can't wait till they arer both reunited/... :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was sho shweet update
Loved how Geet expresed her feelings
I hop Maan dosent let go his Buddhu nwπŸ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago

hey Shikha,

Lovely update.

Maan is planning not to let geet away but then Why Sameera 😑is there?

Geet's intuition tells her about something bad but may be that's good. 

FB once again was the star. Geet is so gullible & her simplicity is the best thing that attracts someone. She is so innocent that she compares herself with her friends' gifts instead thinking that she has something in her that is adorable. 

Lovely Poem. U wrote that?

I love this Geet, she is so sweet.

Waiting for more😊