FF:Precious Forever #2 Complete| NEW SURPRISE P.69 - Page 17

aparna velayudhan

@aparna4karanika

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Posted: 12 years ago

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parm... wat shd i tel??😛
althogh arjun left dm i found d moment of truth a cute one...
fynally d kids came to knw abt deir dad ! n just loved deir reaction..
geet s much moe mature dan aru..gd !😉
i wanna c d kids-dad scene... n of course d family scene tooo...
abe ye danish kahan se aayya??idiot !! he dnt knw our arjun !!😆
also arjuhi's eternal love hmm...😳
anyways loved arjun entry..he s angry its oky !
hs senorita n his kids r wth him na..dey cd litwnn his mood...
n i hope he will 4gv his love , arohi...😊

btw hws ur exams paarm?? w8ing fr ur update ...😃
😃 Edited by aparna4karanika - 12 years ago

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myviewprem

@myviewprem

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Posted: 12 years ago

very nice pls continue hope arjun forgives her

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Anshita

@..anshita..

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Posted: 12 years ago

wow parm two updates yayy...😃😃
awesome updates...👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️
arjun is back n hope he'll forgive arohi..😳
haye waiting fr dat scene...happy family"arjun,arohi,geet n aru..."😍😍😍
aww geet n aru r so happy after knowing that arjun is their father...aww plz parm i cn't wait more plz make dem happy family soon...😍😳
n why arohi already assumed dat arjun nvr forgive her???😲😲common aro he luv u n he'll forgive u..😳
umm i think its "koi mil gaya"😛
nw waiting fr 11th june...waiting..
a new ff wow...😃
hope ur exams r going well...
take care..🤗

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MorallyGrey

@WildestDreams

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: brainychild92
what do you mean no room for forgiveness! yeh arohi bhi.. tu kya ajmeeri baba hai.. sab ka future par leti hai.. AANKHON SE! lol

it was a suprise to see two updates.. enjoyed that and cant wait to read the new one.. but i realllyyy can't wait for the next part... that should be LONG and INTENSE! especially after the mix up arohi did!

ya i remember being a kid.. making decisions were so much easier and it was all black and white.. bhare hoke saare colors nazar aa jate hain:( lol

cant wiat for more!!! thanks for the pm:D

🤣🤣🤣🤣Haha,...you made me laugh so loudly🤣Oh god..I had to reply you now🤣Thanks for lilking it buddy..means a ton for me. The next chapter would be long for sure...how long don't know😆but it'll be long⭐️.

take care

love

Parm

btw what is your name?😳

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tanu111a

@tanu111a

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Posted: 12 years ago

luved the update.u know parm the emotions u brings in ur writing is ur uniqueness n it make ur ff the most spl one. n now abt the next part as u said there is no room of forgiveness in arjun eyes. i guess arjun is not able to forgive her for hurting herself in such an extent. he should questioned her what was the need of going through so much pain?its true arjun led a very dull life without arohi but its also true arohi life was also the same even much more dull. the pain through which she had to go when her children used to feel the need of their dad can giv anyone the most painful feeling of world.at this point i guess arjun should feel the pain of his arohi n his children.it will b selfless luv frm his side.fingers crossed.

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saira

@sezo

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Posted: 12 years ago

both parts amazing. what else is there to say that no one else has, so i would just like to say amazing/awsome/super/fabulous/fantastic. and many more good one but not coming into my head right now. hope you update sooner than the date you stated.

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Veli

@ThugAngel

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Posted: 12 years ago

Yea me Happy happy happy!!! both parts amazing, I always enjoy your writing.

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brainychild92

@brainychild92

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ItalianPrincess

🤣Haha,...you made me laugh so loudly🤣Oh god..I had to reply you now🤣Thanks for lilking it buddy..means a ton for me. The next chapter would be long for sure...how long don't know😆but it'll be long⭐️.

take care

love

Parm

btw what is your name?😳

lol... i don't give out my name on public forums..sry

just call me anything ..brainy or something... cant wait for more:D:D

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