A Bird In The Cage note on page 1 - Page 54

Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by DhanakZ


O My god that was so cute
19 gifts on19th Birthday 
That was really so Sweet 
yar Mayank is The best Hubby
thanks For pm 
cont soon
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by tukun2009


amazing update👏.mayur,benia,sajan,shilpa were so cute😳
Posted: 12 years ago
i read this part but mera reply post nahi hoya hoga :P 
i loved this part like any oder part :)
it's beautiful :) n the 19 gifts 
u done it so well :) 
n precap is even more good
w8 till she doesn't understand the meaning of love :) 
it is awesome :D
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by ginny09


i read this part but mera reply post nahi hoya hoga :P 
i loved this part like any oder part :)
it's beautiful :) n the 19 gifts 
u done it so well :) 
n precap is even more good
w8 till she doesn't understand the meaning of love :) 
it is awesome :D


Posted: 12 years ago
A Big Thanks To All My Silent Readers
 


Posted: 12 years ago
I am sorry guys but i cant make this story a suspense thriller its a normal story if i am boring you a big sorry and from now mayur story starts.
Here is next part hope you like it
Posted: 12 years ago
part 12
 
In the evening mayank takes her on a date he decides to say her what he feels for her

Nupur wore a red colour saree she was looking damn gorgeous

Mayank was busy staring at her

N-kya hua

M-kuch nahin chalo

A table is booked for them on the beach side

(both reach there)

He gives red roses to her

Music is played he sits on his knees shows his hand asks her for dance

She looks at him in confusion he sighs her to give her hand

She gives her hand he brings her closer puts hand on her waist and starts dancing.

He has a smile on his face and she is busy looking at the sparks in his eyes

She just kept head on his chest and was lost in the moment. She felt that she has got something he felt like this is the right time to propose her

He sat on his knees

He kissed her hand she was feeling something different

M-i love you nupur

N-(as usual in her innocent look)matlab

M-duniya ki tum pehli ladki sorry insaan hogi jo I love you bolne par matlab pooch rahi hain normally jab koi kisiko propose karta hain toh woh either accept or reject karta hain tumhari tarah matlab nahin poochta

(she is looking at him with same innocence)

M-main bhi kitna bhulakkad hun tumhein propose kar raha hun acha teek hain jab tak tum khud iska matlab nahin samjogi tab tak tumhein har pal propose karoonga

(she doesn't know what to say)

M-ab aise kya dekh rahi ho kuch khana kha lenge

(both sit and have dinner )

At night she was sleeping he was looking at her

M-bas bahut ho gaya ab humein hamari relationship ko aage badhana hoga aur kitne din wait karoon yeh soch kar ki tum khud hi hamari relationship ko samjogi tumhein ab mere pyar ko samajna hi hoga main ab aur wait nahin kar sakta

Next day morning she gets up looks at him and smiles

M-i love you

(her smile turns to a question mark)

N-mayank I love you ka matlab kya hain bolo na

M-nahin bolunga tum khud jaanlo

(he goes inside washroom leaving confused nupur behind)

(she goes to gunjan expecting she might know the answer)

G-nupur tum yehaan itni subah subah kya hua

N-gunjan I love you ka matlab kya hain

G-mayank ne kahaan kya

N-tumhein kaise pata

G-uske alawa aur koi tumse yeh words nahin keh sakta

N-par kyun

G-i love you sirf ek ko hi kehte hain har kisiko nahin

N-iska matlab kya hain

G-jisne kahaan usise poocho

N-nahin bata raha mujhe khud iska matlab jaanne ke liye kahaan hain

G-toh khud jaano na

N-kaise please batao na (she was almost to cry)

G-ab rona mat shuru karo bolungi I love you usko kehte hain jisse hum pyar karte hain

N-pyar matlab

G-pyar ek aisa ehsaas hain jo hum kisike liye mehsoos karte hain jab pyar hota hain aisa lagta hain ki hamari dil ki choti choti baatein usise jaake kahoon , saara waqt usike saath rehne ka mann karta hain, neend nahin aata hain usike ke khayal aate hain, bhuk nahin lagta hain,agar woh hamaare paas nahin hain toh rona aajaata hain, jab woh humse rooth jaata hain toh use manane ke liye kuch bhi karne ka mann karta uske saath waqt kaise guzarta hain pata hi nahin chalta uske bina ek pal bhi kaatna mushkil ho jaata hain

D-gunjan tu kabse pyar ke bare main itna kuch jaan gayi

G-woh di book main pada tha wohi bata rahi hun kuch samaj main aaya

(nupur nods her head saying no)

Gunjan beats nupur's forehead

G-budhu tujhe samjaana impossible hain (to herself)jise samajna hain woh nahin samajrahi aur jise nahin samajna chahiye woh samajgayi

Later Nupur goes to her room

Mayank looks at her confused face

M-hi sweetheart kahaan thi ab tak

(she doesn't reply) (he catches her wrist brings her closer to him holds her from waist)

M-kya hua kahaan gayi thi

N-gunjan se milne gayi

M-kyun

N-i love you ka matlab poochne

M-(he smiles)phir kya hua

N-pata nahin kya keh rahi thi kuch samaj nahin aaraha tha mayank please bolo na

M-tik hain bolta hun

(Finger on her forehead )I  (finger on her nose)love (finger on her lips) you

N-matlab

(he gets her more closer moves his face near to her she can feel his breath slowly in her ears)

M-khud jaanlo main nahin bolunga

N-par

(he presses her cheeks with his hand )

M-abhi mujhe office ke liye der ho rahi hain aane ke baad discuss karenge tab tak mere bare main hi sochna I love you once again(he kisses her cheek)

(she stays in same confusion)

In the evening she didn't even watch movies from morning thinking about this

He comes and sits beside her

M-hi jaan kis duniya main kho gayi ho

(she doesn't reply he kisses her cheek she looks at him)

M-kya soch rahi ho

N-i love you

M-i love you too

N-matlab kya hain

M-socho jawaab apne aap mil jayega main fresh hoke aata hun

(he goes to get fresh)

M-beach pe chale

N-mann nahin hain

M-kyun nahin hain

N-mujhe I love you ka matlab jaanna hain

M-chalo batata hun

N-sachi

M-haan

Later he takes her out to beach

Both are sitting in sand

N-mayank ab bolo na I love you ka matlab kya hain

M-wohi jo tum mere liye mehsoos karti ho

N-kya

M-tum mere liye kya mehsoos karti ho tumhein hi pata hoga mujhe kaise pata hoga

N-par mayank

M-ek minute yeh aawaaz kahi suna hua lagta hain

N-samrat aur gunjan ki awaaz hain

M-kya baat hain Mrs .Sharma itni aasaani se aawaaz pehchan liya tumhara naam guiness book main aana chahiye chalo unhe jaake dekhte hain

N-par I love you

M-(gives a slight hug)i love you too sweetheart

 

sam and gunjan on date

Samrat catches gunjans hand and kisses it

S-I love you sweetheart

(gunjan feels shy )

S-tum sharmaate hue aur bhi beautiful lagti ho

G-thanks

S-thanks nahin kuch aur kaho

G-kya

S-wohi jo maine tumse kahaan hain I love you

G-i love you

S-i love you too

N-yeh dono bhi I love you keh rahe hain

(mayank closes nupur's mouth)

M-chup (he takes the video using his cell)

M-Mere pyare bhai aur meri sweet si dost sorry would be saali ab dekho main kya karta hun

(Nupur looks at him in confusion)

(he asks her wat happened with his eyes she points to his hand on her mouth)

M-kholunga agar tum apna muh band rakhogi

(she nods her head saying yes)

(he takes nupur from there)

N-hum unse milne kyun nahin gaye

M-nahin jaa sakte

N-par kyun tumne mujhe chup rehne ke liye kyun kahaan

M-i love you ka matlab jaan liya

(she nods saying no)

M-pehle matlab jaanlo uske baad apna muh kholna tab tak chup bilkul chup

N-lekin

M-kahana chup icecream khaogi

(she nods saying no)

M-tumhein chup rehne ke liye kahaan icecream khane ke liye nahin rokha

(he goes and gets icecream for both )

They reach home

Shilpa-tum dono bahut jaldi aagaye pata nahin samrat aur gunjan kahaan hain

N-beach main

Shilpa-kya

(mayank looks at nupur in anger she becomes silent)

M-mom iska kehne ka yeh matlab hain ki beech main gaadi ruk gayi hogi

Shilpa-shayad

M-hum fresh ho kar aate hain chale nupur

(she follows him)

(after getting into the room he closes te door)

N-tumne door kyun lock kiya mujhe maaroge

M-tumhein nahin khud ko maarunga maine tumhein apna muh band rakhne ke liye kahaan tha na kya zaroorat thi mom ke saamne apna muh kholne ki

N-par maine sach hi kaha tha

M-tumne jooth nahin kahaan par hamesha sach nahin keh sakte promise karon humne beach main jo dekha hain uske bare main kisise nahin kahogi

N-par kyun

M-pehle promise

N-promise

M-that's like my nupur

N-i love you

M-(he slightly pats her face)i love you too jaan

N-lekin matlab

M-aise question nahin poochte ab jaldi se fresh ho jao

At the dinner samrat and gunjan were sitting beside each other

Mayank comes there with nupur, nupur sits beside him silently without opening her mouth

M-tum dono ek saath baite ho (nupur looks at him)

M-(slowly in her ears)sweet heart chup chap khana kao yeh sab tumhare samaj ke baahar hain

(she doesn't say anything silently has her dinner)

M-toh bolo sam aaj east or west ek saath kaise baite hain tum dono ki tabiyet toh teek hain

S-woh actually yehi place bacha tha isiliye ek saath baitna pada

M-oh so sad waise tum dono ab tak te kahaan

Gunjan coughs badly to that question

Sam gives her water in tension

S-ab teek hain

G-haan

M-kitna pyar bara hain dono main, main koi sapna dekh raha hun ya sach main tum dono aise ho waise tumne bataya nahin tum dono the kahaan

S-office

G-friend

M-office mein the ya friend ke ghar gaye the ya phir beach main the

(nupur looks at mayank he points her to have her dinner)

G-beach

M-tum shock kyun ho rahi ho mera matlab tha ki kahin beech main atak gaye

(just then sanjay comes there)

Sanjay- mayank tumhein ahmedabad jaana hain na kab jaarahe ho

M-dad kal subah nikal raha hun

Nupur looks at him

M-kya hua

N-tum kahin jaa rahe ho

M-haan kal Ahmedabad jaana hain do din main aajaonga

(she becomes dull)

M-kya hua chehra kyun utar gaya

N-mujhe bhi tumhare saath jaana hain

M-tik hain dono saath main chalenge

Shilpa-mayu tu nupur ko kaise sambhalega

M-don't worry mom I will manage

(sam thinks of teasing mayank)

S-so sweet bhai bhabhi ne kahaan aur aap jat se maan gaye ise kehte hain sacha pyar waise maine suna hain ki aapne bhabi ko propose kiya

N-propose

(mayank stares at her she keeps quiet)

S-just made for each other

M-maine toh apne wife ko hi propose kiya aaj kal ke zamaane main jaane dushman ek dusre ko propose kar rahe hain

D-dushman ek dusre ko propose karte hain its impossible

M-dia tu bahut peeche hain aisa hota hain kyun gunjan

(gunjan is embarrased)

G-mujhe kya pata

M-tujhe kaise nahin pata tu toh sabse jyada iske bare main jaanti hain

G-main kaise jaanongi

M-tu filmein bahut dekti hain na teri filmo main yehi hota hain na right nupur

(she doesn't know what to say yes or no just looks at him)

B-par bhai reality main aise nahin hota

M-kyun nahin hota filmein logo ko dekhkar hi banayi gayi hain na hota hain kyun sam tujhe toh iske bare main jyada pata hoga

S-mujhe kaise pata hoga

M-tujhe nahin pata hoga toh aur kise hoga

Shilpa-mayank tu kabse baatein jyada kar raha hain aur khana kam kaa raha hain pehle dinner kar uske baad baatein

S-right mom pehle aap dinner kijiye uske baad baat karenge

(he has his dinner sajan meet on terrace)

G-samrat tumne mujhe yehaan kyun bulaya

S-Bhai ki wajah se tumhein nahin lagta unhe hum par shak ho gaya hain

G-mujhe bhi yehi lagta hain pata nahin kaise kaise questions pooch raha tha aur waise bhi tum kya uske taang keechne ki koshish kar rahe the

S-mujhe lagaa agar main waise questions poochoonga toh bhai topic ko badal denge mujhe kya pata tha ki woh ulta vaar karenge

G-mayank tumhara bhai hain tum use nahin woh tumhein darayega

S-haan agar mom beech main nahin aati toh aaj toh meri band bajti

G-ab hum kya karenge

S-kuch sochna padega

(both are thinking sam suddenly catches her wrist and bring her closer)

G-sam tum yeh kya kar rahe ho kisine dekh liya toh problem hogi

S-koi problem nahin hogi hum unhein sach boldenge

G-par sam

S-haan gunjan

(he kisses her cheek)

(nupur was packing mayank brings her closer)

M-tum mere saath kyun aana chahti ho

N-mujhe tumhare saath rehna acha lagta hain

M-agar main main tumhein chod kar jaata toh kya karogi

(her dull face gave him the answer)

M-samaj gaya ab ro kar dikhane ki zaroorat nahin hain main jaanta hun ki tum mujhse pyar karti ho par pata nahin tum is baat ko kab samjogi main intezaar karoonga tab tak I love you(he kisses her forehead)

N-par

M-packing ho gaya

N-nahin ho raha

M-gunjan ko bulao

(she nods yes)

M-acha tik hain bulata hun lekin ek condition tum apna muh nahin khologi

(she nods saying yes)

M-that's nice(he kisses her cheek)

(he goes to gunjan's room)

M-dia gunjan kahaan hain

D-pata nahin kahaan chali gayi

M-acha teek hain main doond loonga

G-samrat leave me mujhe kaam hain please

(she frees herself and leaves smiling suddenly sees mayank near the stairs and her smile vanishes)

(he sighs her what she was doing up)

G-woh main aise hi gayi thi tumhein kuch kaam ta kya

M-haan tha par I think tum busy ho main mom ki help leloonga

G-no I am free bolo kya kaam hain

M-nupur ko tumhari help chahiye

G-acha chalo

(sam sees mayank with gunjan and hides but he doesn't know mayank has seen him)

S-pata nahin bhai kyun mere lovestory ke peeche padhe hain

(gunjan goes to help nupur )

G-yeh dress rakhoon ya woh dress

(she doesn't reply)

G-tum chup kyun ho main tumhi se pooch rahi hoon

(mayank was sitting on the bed having icecream)

M-nupur kuch nahin bolegi

G-par kyun nahin bolegi

M-usne mere liye maun vrat rakha hain

G-par usne dinner table par baat kit hi na

M-haan vrat mere liye rakha hain toh mujhse baat kar sakti hain

G-yeh kaisa vrat hain aur nupur kab se yeh sab follow kar rahi hain

M-woh nahin kar rahi hain maine hi usse kahaan hain aisa karne ke liye taaki meri life main koi problem na ho

G-tum traditions main kabse interest le rahe ho

M-main tumhare jitna fast nahin hoon isiliye traditions follow kar raha hun

G-mayank

M-acha woh sab chodo jaldi packing karo mujhe bahut neend aarahi hain

G-you are right tumse baat karne se aasaan packing hain nupur kauunsi waali rakhoon

M-kuch bhi rakhlo meri wife par har dress bahut acha lagta hain

G-yeh baat toh manna padega

(both smile)

Edited by --unknown-- - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
very sweet part...and not boring at all
continue soon
Posted: 12 years ago
superb update...
cont soon.. & thanks a lot for pm..😊

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