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Posted: 29 June 2011 at 2:36pm | IP Logged
What Mayu in accident?
plzz don't kill him
great update dear
waiting eagerly net part

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yeh kya hu gaya mayu aisa mar nai sakta yeh kya kiya tm na i felt like crying like helll plzzz next update mai sb theek kar dah nah plzzz and nxt update jaldi karna cant wait mujha tu raat mai neend he nai ah nah wali jb tak nxt update nai parha lahti plzzz update soon but the dialogues of all gang were awesome and was express beutifull which create real emotion in scene
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Posted: 30 June 2011 at 12:27am | IP Logged
Plz aisa maat ki jiya
abhi abhi tou nupsko apni pyar ki baremain pata chli hai
aur ab apmaynk kisaath aisa karenge tu wo mar jayegi

accha ye bataye kahi ye bhi  maynk ki koi plan tou nehi haina...!!!!!
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One request..
pls let nothing happen to MayankOuch..plzzz
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omg...ShockedBroken Heart
kya se kya ho gaya...Broken HeartCry
y mayu???Cry
ab nupur ka kya hoga???DisapproveCry
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yr this is not fair
mayurCry
but nice upate


Edited by tanisha997 - 30 June 2011 at 6:41am
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I know mera previous update aap sabko bahut bada jatka diya. Kuch log yeh bhi soch rahe hain ki woh mayank nahin hain and you are wrong he is mayank uska chehra sab ko clearly dikh raha hain

First of all a big sorry for my previous update but kya karun majbur hoon . It was necessary for my story here is next part hope you like it

 


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part 18

 N-mayank uto tum mujhe chod ke nahin jaa sakte tumne hamesha mere saath rehne ka promise kiya tha na phir achanak aise kaise chod diya tum apni promise nahin tod sakte mere mom dad ne bhi mujhe akela chod diya ab tumne bhi meri kya galti hain tum sab mujhe chod ka raise kyun jaa rahe ho  main bhi tumhare paas aajaongi

 Nupur falls on him and was crying badly. He was the only support for her with whom she always shares her pain she feels safe in his embrace no one can control her except him he means a lot to her and now he is lying dead she cant bare it and how can he leave her alone he has to come back because only he can wipe her tears she only listens to him.when her tears flow through his heart, his heart started beating as it cant see its love in pain it was just saying not to cry. He slowly moves his hand with great diffficulty and puts his hand on her head

M-Nupur

Listening to that all were surprised Nupur gets up and looks at him

N-tum mujhe chod kar kyun jaa rahe the tumne pehle bhi mujhe chod kar chale gaye maine kuch nahin kahaan mujhe pata tha tum mujhe satane ke liye yeh sab kar rahe the, tumhein pata hain in saat dino main main har pal ro rahi thi kitna mushkil tha mere liye yeh saat din  sirf mujhe pata hain aur ab hamesha ke liye chod ke ja rahe the mere mummy papa bachpan main mujhe akela chod kar hamesha hamesha ke liye dur chale gaye phir bhi main kabhi nahin royi mujhe lagaa aise hi zindagi hain us pinjre ko main apni zindagi samaj kar jee rahi thi mujhe us zindagi ki aadat ho gayi phir tum mere zindagi main aaye mujhe zindagi jeena sikhaya sab ke saath rehna sikhaya mujhe kabhi apne beeten hue kal ki yaad nahin aayi kyunki mere aaj main tum mere saath hamesha rahoge mujhe uski kabhi yaad nahin aane doge par tumne phir se mujhe akela kiya tumne meri zindagi main darr ko hamesha ke liye nikala aaj tumne hi mujhe phir se daraaya tumne hamesha mere saath rehne ka waada kiya aur aaj tumne woh waada thoda mere saath tum aisa kyun kar rahe the meri kya galti hain tum mujhse itne naaraaz the meri galti itni badi thi

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

She kept her face in her palms and was crying. He slowly tries to getup and keeps hands on her shoulder . she just hugs him and cries. He hugs her back.

N- please mayank mujhe kabhi chodke mat jaana tumhare bina main nahin jee sakti

(he puts one hand on her head)

M- I am sorry nupur maine tumhein bahut takleef di main sirf khud ke baare main soch raha tha main tumhara dard samaj nahin paaya maine tumhein bahut akela kar diya main tumhein chod kar chala gaya main bhul gaya tha ki tumhari zindagi sirf mere saath hain maine tumhein bahut rulaya par ab aur nahin I promise aaj ke baad tumhein kabhi akela nahin chodunga tumhare liye maut se bhi lad loonga

He breaks hug catches her face kisses her forehead, her tears both their foreheads meet.

Mayank was wrong he should have not left her alone just to make her love him and today he realised his mistake. He understood that she was nothing without him, for him she is his love but for her he is her life. There love for each other brought tears in everyone's eyes even the doctor and nurse had tears in their eyes they are just incomplete without each other just made for each other.

 

After sometime nupur was sitting beside mayank.

Shilpa-mayu main ghar jaake tere liye lunch bejti hun

M-ok mom

Shilpa-apna khayal rakhna

M-i am fine

Shilpa-tum sab chalo

S-hum sab baad main aayenge

Shilpa-par vrat

G-thodi der main aajayenge mayank khana khane ke baad please

Shilpa-tum logo ko sunne ki aadat nahin hain jaise tumhari marzi

They decide to go home as girls are fasting because of karwachauth and they need to complete their rituals.

D-nupur chale

N-mujhe kahi nahin jaana main yehi rahoongi mayank ke paas

D-par nupur

B-kyun bewajah behas kar rahi ho bhabhi ko yehaan se lejaana impossible hain

 

He cups her face

M-mere liye ghar jao na tumne subah se kuch nahin kaaya

(she nods saying no)

N-mujhe kahin nahin jaana tumhare saath rehna hain

M-acha tik hain yehi raho ab rona shuru mat karo

D-par isne subah se kuch nahin kaaya ab bhi nahin khayegi toh ek aur bed book karna padega

G-hum nupur ka lunch yehaan lekar aayenge waise mayank ke liye bhi lunch lekar aana hain

D-par vrat kaise todegi

G-main abhi aayi

(she calls shilpa and asks her to send their lunch )

G-hello mom mayank ke saath nupur ka bhi lunch bhejna

Shilpa-lekin beta nupur baad main jaa sakti hain na

G-humne kahaa tha par zid par baiti hain agar jyada kahaan toh rona shuru karegi isiliye chup rehna pada

Shilpa-tu sahi keh rahi hain aaj uske pyar ne hi mayank ko waapas laya hain main khana bejti hoon

G-ab vrat thodna hain pa kaise hey bhagwan idea de do bhagwan

(idea strucks in her mind)

There was a small temple in the hospital from there she takes the taali puts some flowers in it , prasad, she also takes diya and the sindoor and there was a small glass in which coconut water was present she takes it

G-thanks bhagwanji aapne meri bahut badi help ki aur sorry ye sab lene ke liye main abhi yeh sab waapas kardoongi

She takes pooja taali and goes there and gives it to nupur

S-tum yeh sab kahaan se layi

G-bhagwan ne meri help ki

S-samaj gaya you are too intelligent

G-i know I am

D-not that much ek cheez ab bhi missing hain

G-ab hum kya karenge

S-ghar se mangvayenge

G-driver already nikal chuka hain

S-phir

B-jyada mat socho udar dekho

Nupur puts teeka to mayank and she uses her netted pallu catches it with one hand and diya with other hand. First she looks at chand then at mayank he makes her drink water . He was unable to catch it she catches it from down

S-bhabhi tumse jyada intelligent

G-woh hain meri hi behen

D-jo bhi ho bahut bada kaam ho gaya

Nurse- aaj main life main pehli baar hospital main karwachauth dekha hain

G-nupur hain hi itni special uske life main har cheez special hain

Driver brings dinner for both gunjan gives it to nupur

N-mera mann nahin hain

M-tum nahin khaogi toh main bhi nahin khaonga mere liye

He feeds her she feeds him in return both were looking cute

M-thanks gunjan tumhari idea ke liye warna madam aaj khana nahin khati ab tum sab jao tum dono ne bhi subah se kuch nahin kaaya

G-par tum akele

M-nupur hain na mere saath

G-tik hain hum chalte hain

Sajan leave together and benia leave together

B-kya baat hain dia aise chup kyun baiti ho

D-I love you

Listening to that he was shocked and surprised

B-achanak kaise kahaan

D-mujhe aaj pyar ka asli matlab samaj aaya main kitni lucky hoon jo mujhe tumhara pyar mila tum mere saath hamesha rahoge na

B-main hamesha tumhare saath rahoonga

She hugs him he hugs her back

D-aisa lag raha hain mujhe mera sab kuch mil gaya I love you benji

B-I love you too

G- aaj main bahut khush hoon atlast dono ek saath hain aaj nupur ke pyar ne hi mayank ko bachaya

S-sacha pyar kuch bhi kar sakta hain aur mera sacha pyar mere saath hain

(he catches her hand and kisses it she catches his hand and keeps head over him)

S-waise tum aaj bahut sundar lag rahi ho

(she looks at him and smiles)

They reach home and complete the rituals

Sam was standing infront of gunjan, benji infront of dia

Gunjan tries to put tikaa he goes back

G-chup chap kade raho warna main jaa rahi hun

S-sorry tik hain no masti

(she put tikaa looks at chand then at him he makes her drink water)

Benji was not irritating dia he calmly allows her to perform rituals

Mayur in hospital

Mayank put hand around nupur shoulder and she kept her head over him

M-nupur tum teek toh ho

N-mujhe kya hua tum mere paas hona main bilkul teek hoon

M-tum mujhse naaraz toh nahin hona

N-main tumse kabhi naaraz nahin ho sakti

M-waise tum aaj bahut pyari lag rahi ho

N-hmm tumse ek baath poochoo

M-haan kaho

N-yeh accident kaise hua

M-tumhare liye roses laa raha tha tabhi hua

(she was crying he feels it)

M-tum ro rahi ho

N-meri wajah se sab kuch hua

M-haan tumhari wajah se hi zinda hun

N-lekin mayank

M-chup tumne vrat kyun rakha

N-mom ne kahaan ki agar main vrat rakhoongi tum aaoge

M-tum sach main paagal ho waise tum toh mujhse naaraz thi na

N-kab

M-ahmedabad se lautne ke baad

N-main naaraz nahin thi

M-phir tum mujhse dur kyun bhag rahi thi

N-jab tum mere paas aate the mujhe bahut ajeeb lagta tha

M-ab ajeeb nahin lagta

N-ab bahut acha lagta hain

M-tumne mujhe miss kiya

N-bahut kiya phir kabhi mujhe chod ke nahin jaoge na

M-kabhi nahin jaonga agar jaana pade toh tumhein apne saath lekar jaonga

N-pucca

M-pucca

(he hugs her more tightly  )
M-ab tum khush ho

N-bahut khush tum mere saath ho mujhe kisi cheez ka darr nahin hain

M-tum mere paas ho mujhe koi fikar nahin hain

(both sleep like that only)

 sorry if you think it was too much mujhe jo acha lagaa maine story waise hi continue kiya i just wanted nupur to confess her feelings so this was necessary 

note:
The accident was already planned I havent done it for any purpose the sole reason behind accident is if I made mayank directly meet nupur he might have never understood her true feelings but her pain made him understand her love nupur is a girl who cant confess her feelings in words because she is not that talented so she might have not said all this.
I didnt change the story for anyone it was as I thought before now starts the main phase of her life . Mayur romance will be very soon
 


Edited by --unknown-- - 27 August 2011 at 2:01am

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