A Bird In The Cage note on page 1 - Page 69

Posted: 12 years ago
guys i have noticed something nupur ki realisation ko dekhkar replies badh gaye ab main jaan gayi aap sab ko nupur ki realisation main kitna intrest hain i will try my level best to make it beautiful anyways thanks for all your comments
Posted: 12 years ago

this is for all silent readers who have pressed like button and who are reading my os

Posted: 12 years ago
next part plz iss baar aur jaldi update kardo :P
w8 nahi ho raha  hai :)
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by ginny09


next part plz iss baar aur jaldi update kardo :P
w8 nahi ho raha  hai :)
Posted: 12 years ago
here is next part hope it wont bore you
Posted: 12 years ago

part 15

Mayank starts neglecting nupur he doesn't talk to her properly he is full day busy with his office work.

Daily he used to call her to ask her whether she had her lunch but nowadays he is not calling her

In the evening also he is busy on his laptop.

She was feeling very much alone when she was alone also she never had so much pain but now she is surrounded with so many people who talk to her 24 hours still she feels alone his silence was killing her. She feels like hugging him and crying pour her heart out but she is afraid why is she afraid he is the same old mayank with whom she shared every thing in her heart than why is she unable tp talk to him right now why is she getiing such a different feeling. When he touches her she starts shivering, when he comes near her she feels like hugging him, when he doesn't talk to her she feels lonely, his care towards her makes her happy , his angerness makes her die

 

Shilpa sees benia in coffee shop. She sees benji catching dia's hand and kissing it

Shilpa-yeh dono yeha kya kar rahe hain aur yeh sab kuch kya hain kuch na kuch karna padega warna dono haath main nahin rahenge

 

In the night after benia reach home whole gang is present there

Shilpa-benji acha hua tum agyae mujhe tumse baat karni thi

B-kahiye mom

Shilpa-maine tumhare liye ek ladki dekhi hain meri friend ki beti bahut sundar hain

B-itne jaldi shadhi

Shilpa-tu koi chota bacha nahin hain itni jaldi kehne ke liye

S-haan bhai good idea aapko shaadi karni chahiye

M-kyun apni route clear karne ke liye

S- maine aisa kab kahaan main toh bhai ke balai ke liye hi keh rahi hoon

M-kitna fikar hain bhai ki

Shilpa-tum dono ladna band karo aur benji kab dekne jaa raha hain ladki dekhne

B-mom main yeh shaadhi nahin kar sakta

Shilpa-kyun nahin kar sakta

B-nahin kar sakta

Shilpa-wohi toh main pooch rahi hoon kyun nahin

B-woh woh

Shilpa-chupake koi faida nahin hain saaf saaf bol

B-jab aap jaanthi hain toh poochti kyun hain

Shilpa-mujhe confirmation chahiye

M-aap dono yeh kya baatein kar rahe hain

Shilpa-mujhse  kyun poochta hain benji se pooch

M-bol benji kya baat hain

B-bhaiya actually main main

Shilpa-dia se pyar karta hun

M-that's great tune pehle kyun nahin kahaan aur mom aapko kaise pata

Shilpa-pata chal jaata hain

M-waise mom aapki friend ki ladki ka kya kyuna hum  uski shaadhi sam se karade

S-bahi aap mujhe kyun beech main laarahe hain

M-teri hi balai ke liye tujhe toh shaadhi ki bahut jaldi hain na isiliye benji ko encourage kar raha tha

S-mera woh matlab nahin tha

M-toh kya matlab tha

S-bhai please mujhe apne haal pe chod dijiye

M-nahin chodunga jab tak tu sach nahin bolega tab tak nahin chodunga

Shilpa-kaisa sach

M-yehi ki yeh sheena se pyar karta hain

G-yeh sheena kaun hain

M-sam ki girlfriend tujhe nahin pata tujhe toh sam ki har girlfriend ka pata hain

G-kya sam mayank sach keh raha hain

S-gunjan bhai mazak kar raha hain

M-main kyun mazak karoonga dekho main serious hoon main has thodi raha hun

S-bhai aap mujhe aise kyun fasaa rahain hain

G-sam naatak bahut ho gaya aaj tumhein nahin chodungi

S-gunjan meri baat toh suno

(looking at sajan mayank sits beside nupur who was watching him in confusion)

M-tom and jerry ghar main dekhne ka alag hi mazaa hain

(she was having pop corn in her hand)

(he looks at her continuously looking at him)

M-tum aise kya dekh rahi ho oh pop corn dena chahhti ho thanks

(she is still lost in him)

M-ab kya hua pura leloon

(he takes it)

M-kya hua kuch chahiye kya

(he moves hand in front of her )

M-tumhari tabiyet toh teek hain

(he was about to put hand on her head takes back remembering previous incidents she doesnt like it)

(both are lost in each other)

Shilpa was shouting which makes him get back to his senses

Gunjan was catching sams neck

Shilpa-gunjan chod use

G-nahin chodungi

S-tumhari kasam tumhare alawa meri life main koi nahin hain

Benia and shilpa-kya

M-haan mom yeh dono ek dusre ko pasand kart hain

Shilpa-tujhe kaise pata

M-pata chal jaata hain

Shilpa-jo bhi ho aaj main bahut khush hoon aakhir yeh dono isi ghar main rahenge inhein shaadhi karke baahar nahin bejna padega

(dia and gunjan hug shilpa)

Engagement date was fixed  and marriage was after 6 months

S-lekin mom tab possible nahin hain

Shilpa-par kyun kya problem hain

S-mujhe next week project kaam pe baahar jaana hain pura hafta busy hoon

Shilpa- par sam

M-main chala jaonga ab koi problem hain kya

Shilpa-tere bina sagai

M-ladka ladki ka hona zaroori hain main rahoon ya na rahoon koi difference nahin rahega

S-lekin bhai

M-itna over action mat kar sagai hain shaadhi thodi hain

Shilpa-acha teek hain par tu nupur ko apne saath nahin lejayega

M-aap kahenge tobhi nahin lejaonga mujhe koi kaam nahin hain kya jab dekho ise apne saath lekar ghumoon(looking at her who was busy looking at him)

 

She wanted to go with him but his words hurt her a lot tears flow from her eyes unknowingly

He was packing his bag she was looking at him he was acting as if he has not seen her seeing him.

N-mayank mujhe tumse

M-haan tumhein mujhse jaldi kaho mere pass time nahin hain mujhe late ho raha hain

N-mayank tum mujhe akele chod kar kyun jaa rahe ho

M-tum koi choti bachi nahin ho jo main hamesha tumhein apne saath lekar ghumoon

N-tum mujhse naaraz ho

M-main tumse kyun naaraz rahoonga

N-main jaanti hun tum mujhse naaraz ho isiliye tum mujhse baat nahin kar rahe tum mujhe baahar jaane ke liye pooch bhi nahin rahe

M-pooch ke kya faida jab mujhe jawab pata hain aur waise bhi daily tumhein lekar ghumne ke liye mujhe koi kaam nahin hain kya

N-mayank I am sorry please mujhe apne saath le chalo

M-nahin lejaonga tum yehi rahogi

N-par kyun

M-kyun ka kya matlab office ka kaam hain ghoomne ke liye nahin jaa raha hun aur waise bhi ghar main sagai hain isiliye nahin le jaa sakta

N-lekin

M-mujhe kaam hain main tumse lautne ke baad phursat se baat karoonga

mayank wantedly goes out leaving her alone she was crying badly

N-mujhe tumhare saath jaana hain please mujhe akela chod ke mat jao tum mujhse tik se baat bhi nahin kar rahe ho tum aisa kyun kar rahe ho. Mujhe tumhein pakad ke rone ka mann kar raha hain bahut akeli mehsoos kar rahi hoon

He was standing at the door listening everything

M-main jo bhi kar rahaan hoon tumhein paane ke liye kar raha hun main bhi tumse dur nahin jaana chahta par main jaanta hun yeh doori hi tumhein mere paas layegi main tumhein aise dard main nahin dekh sakta par kya karoon main majbur hun maine pichle kuch dino se tumhari aankho main woh pyar dekha hain jo main hamesha dekhna chahta tha bas tum samaj nahin paa rahi ho yeh duriya tumhein apne pyar ka ehsaas dilayegi jab main waapas aaonga tum bhaag kar mere paas aaogi aur mujhse apne dil ki baat kahogi jise sunne ke liye main kab se bekaraar hun. I love you nupur I need your love I am nothing without you.

 part16

Edited by --unknown-- - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
i am here even before you PMed...
now running to read the update...😛
Posted: 12 years ago
really nice update...
totally enjoyed it...
mayank and shilpa aunty were too sweet!!!...
continue soon...
Posted: 12 years ago
loved it i can understand mayur's condition

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