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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update.
so, nups is kind of abnormal.
waiting for next update, how to handle nupur, ca she 's so nave...n dnt knw anything in the world.
update soon.
thanks for the pm. 

Posted: 12 years ago
Hi dear 
I am so happy That I guess right 
But dear dont take tension this Story is totally Your's
I just Guessed and it was coincident that I was right Ok
Wasa really it was a great story and  a lovely part
I am dying to read more about Mayur
thanks for pm 
cont soon

Posted: 12 years ago
really awesome update dear.
plzzz cont soon 😃
Posted: 12 years ago
awesum update dear!!!
wow... such a big mystery behind Nup's condition!
poor her.. she ws caged in 4 17 yrs!
i hope takes care of her... n teach her how 2 live lyf!!!
luvd it!
continue soon!
thnx 4 d pm!🤗
Posted: 12 years ago

Dil ibadat kar raha hai
Dhadkanen meri sun
Tujhko main kar loon haasil
Lagi hai yahi dhun
Zindagi ki shaakh se lun
Kuch haseen pal main chun
Tujhko main kar loon haasil
Lagi hai yahi dhun

Oh seyo leyo sama leyo
Seyo leyo aa…
Oh seyo leyo sama leyo
Seyo leyo aa…

Dil ibadat kar raha hai
Dhadkanen meri sun
Tujhko main kar loon haasil
Lagi hai yahi dhun
Zindagi ki shaakh se lun
Kuch haseen pal main chun
Tujhko main kar loon haasil
Lagi hai yahi dhun

Jo bhi jitne pal jeeyun
Unhe tere sang jeeyun
Jo bhi kal ho ab mera
Usse tere sang jeeyun
Jo bhi saansein main bharoon
Unhe tere sang bahroon
Chaahe jo ho raasta
Usse tere sang chaloon

Dil ibadat kar raha hai
Dhadkanen meri sun
Tujhko main kar loon haasil
Lagi hai yahi dhun

Mujhko de tu mit jaane
Ab khud se de mil jaane
Kyun hai yeh itna faasla
Lamhe yeh phir na aane
Inko tu na de jaane
Tu mujhpe khud ko de luta

Tujhe tujhse tod loon
Kahin khud se jod loon
Mere jismojaan pe aa
Teri khushboo odh loon
Jo bhi saansein main bharoon
Unhe tere sang bharoon
Chaahe jo ho raasta
Use tere sang chaloon

Dil ibadat kar raha hai
Dhadkanen meri sun
Tujhko main kar loon haasil
Lagi hai yahi dhun

Baahon mein de bas jaane
Seene mein de chup jaane
Tujh bhin main jaaoon toh kahaan
Tujhse hai mujhko paane
Yaadon ke woh nazraane
Ik jinpe hak ho bas mera

Teri yaadein mein rahoon
Tere khwaabon mein jagoon
Mujhe dhoonde jab koi
Teri aankhon mein miloon
Jo bhi saansein main bharoon
Unhe tere sang bharoon
Chaahe jo ho raasta
Usse tere sang chaloon

Dil ibadat kar raha hai
Dhadkanen meri sun
Tujhko main kar loon haasil
Lagi hai yahi dhun

Posted: 12 years ago

A very nice story, your previous chapter left me with only confusion... but as the story now did unfold, its really different and very speical... & I must say a unique concept... One confusion is still there thoug, how did she manage to call Mayank, where did she find his phone... But I'm looking forward to the next chapter, her life outside the cage...Wonderful story, please continue soon... 😊

 
-Laiba
Posted: 12 years ago
OMGGG...!!!!!!
Superbbb update...
finally mistery revealed...
Poor Nupur...was in so much pain...
i hope mayank gives her all happiness in life wich she deserves...
Truly Superbbb update...
do cont soon & thnx 4 the PM...🤗
Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update...
but here is a request plz next time avoid yellow color...it's really difficult to read that part which was yellow
Posted: 12 years ago

very very nice update...
ye update.. padh k mujhe realize hua.. ki life.. mein parents... ki presence hona.. kit. important.. hota.. ha...


we even cannot think our life.. withoout.. them..
 i had realized that..its our parents and our surroundings.. only...who taught us.. how to. live..
humare parents.. hume...
chalna...padhna..likhna...ache bure ka fark..karna...
and here..nupur didnt move out from a single.. room... after so many.. years...😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕
really.. through this.. i really.. got to know the importance of life...made me realize that we should.. feel lucky that...
we are able.. live this life..😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
with our near and dear one's...
everday.. we should thank god for giving us this life...
for.. providing...all.. the basic facilities.. wich one.. really.. does need..
we.. should tyhank our.. parents.. that they taught us.. how.. live in this world...
really hats.. off to you..yara.. you are just too... good..
tooo.. good...
mindblowing...
seeing nupur's condition had literally raught tears
 in my eyes...😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
how one can live.. in a single.. room.. for so many years.. even without.. meting with.. someone..😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔
i am really.. happy.. that...
mayank cae into her life..
i must say...
she is a princess...a princess of a fairy tale...
really...
very very .. beautiful...yet very conserved and reserved...
and i had also.. realized one thing.. that how.. mean one.. can.. be just for the sake of money...
really very bad...😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡
Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
con soon

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