A Bird In The Cage note on page 1 - Page 14

Posted: 12 years ago

Part 3

 
Mayank is busy in office next day she calls him

mayank-hello

Girl-hello mayank

(he stops his work listening to the voice he can recognize the voice she is same girl who called him yesterday)

M-hello tum

(she is silent)

M-tum wohi hona jisne mujhe kal call kiya

Girl-haan

M-tum ho kaun

Girl 'main kyun bolun ki main hoon kaun

M-tumne phir mujhe call kyun kiya

Girl-mujhe phone pe baat karna tha isliye

M-tum bahut intelligent ladki ho

Girl-intelligent matlab

M-ab toh yakeen ho gaya tum rehti kahaan ho

Girl-mujhe nahin pata

M-tum aise nahin bologi agar tumne mujhe sataane ke liye call kiya toh main tum hein baad main dekhloonga ab main busy hoon

Girl-dekhloonga matlab tum mere ghar aaoge tumhein kaise pata ki main kaha rehti hoon

M-tum toh gunjan se bhi char kadam aage ho please mujhe abhi chod do main tumse baad main baat karoonga bye

(he keeps the phone)

 

                

In the evening mayank was continuously thinking about that girl. Even at dinner same thing is going in his mind.

Shilpa -mayu woh curry paas kar

(he is lost in confusion)

Shilpa-mayu , mayu

(gunjan beats him)

M-kya hua (looking at gunjan)

Shilpa-use kuch nahin hua mujhe hua hain kabse bula rahi hun jawaab hi nahin de rahaan

M-aapne bulaya mujhe

G-nahin shahrukh ko bulayi kaha kogaye ho

M-kuch nahin main sone jaa raha hun

Shilpa-par khana

M-mujhe bhuk nahin hain(he leaves)

Sanjay-ise kya hua

Shilpa-mujhe kya pata inhe pata hoga

S-humein nahin pata gunjan ko pata hoga jab dekho bhai ke peeche padi rehti hain

G-tumhein itni jealousy kyun hain

S-jealousy nahin bhai pe taras aa raha hain jo woh tumhein bare karte hain

G-samrat tum

Shilpa-please tum dono shant ho jao aur gunjan tumhein pata kya mayank aise kyun behave kar raha hain

G-mujhe pata nahin aunty

S-jooth bol rahi ho

Sanjay-samrat chup tum gunjan ko kuch nahin kahoge

(he goes to his room and is constantly thinking about the girl)

M-pata nahin kyun use baat karne ka mann kar raha hain par kaise baat karun bahut hoshiyaar ladki hain kya karun (atlast he dials this time she lifts)

Girl-hello

M-hello

Girl-hello mayank

M-tum meri aawaz ko bahut ache se pehchanti ho

Girl-haan isme kaunsi badi baat hain

M-tum ne apne bare main kuch nahin kahaan

Girl-anjaan logo ko apna naam nahin batate

M-tum mujhe jaanti hona

Girl-main tumhein nahin jaanti

M-toh jaanlo mera naam hain mayank Sharma I am an industrialist

Girl-industrialist matlab

M-tum bahut funny ho

Girl 'funny matlab

M-sach main paagal ho(he smiles)

N-main paagal nahin nupur hoon

M-toh tumhara naam nupur hain

N-tumhein kaise pata

M-tumhine kahaan tum acting bahut ache se karti ho tumhein na Oscar bhi kam hain

N-oscar matlab

M-tumhein (he heards gunjans sound)main tumse baad main baat karoonga gunjan aarahi hain(he cuts and smiles)

G-kya baat hain apne aap main muskura rahe ho

M-main kuch soch raha tha

G-princess ke bare main

M-tu please mera sar mat kha mujhe neend aarahi hain goodnight (he goes and sleeps on the bed)

Next day again he waits for her call in afternoon but she doesn't call he feels like something is missing. In the night he calls her

M-hello

N-mayank

M-tumne mujhe dopehar main call kyun nahin kiya main tumhare call ka intezaar kar raha tha

N-main tumhein call kyun karoon(full of innocence in her words)

M-phir pehle kyun kiya aur tum boli bali ladki ki acting band karo

N-acting matlab

M-tumhein yeh word itna pasand hain kya jab dekho har cheez ka matlaab poochti ho(she is silent)acha baba sorry waise tumhein kya karti ho

N-khana kati hoon so jati hoon

M-yeh toh sab karte hain main tumhare profession ke bare main pooch raha hoon

N-profession

M-matlab tumhein isse jyada kuch nahin aata ya bolna nahin chahti waise tum hamesha ghar main hi rehti ho kya

N-haan mujhe koi bahar leke nahin jaata tum mujhe lekar jaoge

M-tum kahaan rehti ho bolo aake lekar jaonga

N-mujhe nahin pata main kahaan rehti hoon

M-phir se tumhein mujhse baat nahin karni toh mat karo itna overacting mat karo

N-overacting matlab

M-is ladki ka main kya karun acha bye main tumse baad main baat karoonga

(he keeps the phone)

M-yeh mujhe paagal kardegi(he beats his head)

(he calls like that only for three days and for his every question he gets same reply but still he feels like talking to her he got addicted to her voice. But no one knows about this even his best friend Gunjan)

In the evening as usual he called her

M-hi

N-mayank

M-tum jab bhi mujhe mayank kehti ho mera naam mujhe aur bhi acha lagta hain

N-tumhara naam acha hain

M-thankgod matlab nahin poocha kyunki mujhe khud nahin pata

N-thankgod

M-oh God tumhari jaise ladki ko aaj tak nahin dekha

N-main yeha hun tum wahaan tum mujhe kaise dekhoge

M-waise kya kar rahi ho

N-phone pe baat kar rahi hun

M-yeh ladki bhi na main tumse milna chahta hun

N-tum mujhse milne aaoge koi mujhse milne nahin aata sirf ramu kaka aate hain

M-tumhare ghar main aur kaun kaun rehta hain

N-pata nahin

M-yeh ladki kabhi seedi tarah se jawaab hi nahin deti

N-tumhare ghar main kaun rehta hain tumhein pata hain

M-main tumhare jitna intelligent nahin hoon mere ghar main meri mom dad hain , mere do bhai hain , gunjan meri choti behen jaise, dia jisse meri sagai hone waaali hain

N-sagaai (the phone is cut)

M-isne sagai ka naam sunte hi phone kyun kaata(he tries again phone is switched off after that he tried  a lot but always he got same answer phone is switched off)

On the engagement day All the arrangements have been made both dia and mayank are in confused state .Shilpa gives the ring to mayank and dia . he catches her hand

Shilpa-soch kya raha hain pehna

M-main nahin kar paa raha hun mere liye dia ko apni wife ki tarah imagine karna bhi mushkil ho raha hain

Sanjay-par yeh sab toh tujhse pooch kar hi kar rahe hain na tab tune mana nahin kiya ab kaise

M-haan dad iske liye I am sorry mujhe lagaa shayad yeh meri shaadi ke liye nervousness hain par main galat tha mere problem yeh hain ki maine dia ko us tarah se kabhi dekha hain aur naahi ab dekh paa raha hun

D-thanks mayank tumne meri problem solve kardi meri bhi yehi problem hain main tumhein apne lifepartner ki tarah imagine nahin kar paa rahi iski wajah kya hain mujhe bhi samaj nahin aarahaan

Sanjay-jab tum dono ko yeh sagai pasand nahin hain hum tumhein force nahin karenge

(the main reason between the breakup is mayank always treated four of them equally for him sam and benji were his brothers ,gunjan also was like sister and how can he imagine dia as his wife when he treated all others as siblings . For dia also benji and sam were like friends but mayank he was elder in family for all others he is like big brother how can dia think to be with him he need someone who is equal to him not a person who follows him. Sanjay was little bit angry at them for their sudden behavior he might understand them when he gets normal)

Mayank left all this and is busy trying for nupur but he always got her phone as switched off. This made him dull he didn't work properly nor had proper food always she had her thoughts only in his mind

His changed behavior created tension in four of them they thought he is upset because sanjay is angry at him .

In the night mayank as usually tries for her but no use he throws the phone in anger on bed

Four of them go to meet him

G-kya hua mayank bahut gusse main ho sab teek toh hain na

D-tum us sagai baat ke liye pareshan ho toh iski chinta chodo hum unhe samjayenge toh samjadenge

B-haan bhai dad ko pata hain ki aap koi bhi galat decision nahin leti

M-tum log please mujhe akela chod do (in frustation)

G-par mayank

M-tum logo se kahaana jao yeha se(he shouts at her tears come from her eyes because he never talked to her like that he was the only one with whom she can talk anything anytime without any hesitation)(she silently goes to her room sam notices her pain he goes to her room)

S-hi paagal kya kar rahi ho

G-tum jao yeha se(in anger)

S-maine socha tumhein treat de do par I think tumhein mood nahin hain tumhara bad luck

G-treat kisliye

S-bhai ne aaj life main pehli baar tumpar gussa kiya na isiliye waise toh hamesha tumhare kehne par mujhpe gussa karte hain lekin aaj I think we should celebrate

G-mayank pareshan tha usi wajah se usne gussa kiya

S-main bhi wohi kehna chahta hun bhai ke baaton ka bura mat mano pata nahin kis pareshaani main aise baat ki unhone jo kuch bhi kahaan sirf tumhein nahin sab ko kahaan isiliye yeh rona band karo tumhein suit nahin karta waise aaj ke din ko history main likhna chahiye

G-kisliye

S-kyunki aaj ke din Jhansi ki rani ke aankho main aasoon aaye ok goodnight

G-thanks

S-thanks kisliye

G-mujhe samjaane ke liye

S-maine tumhare liye nahin bhai ke liye kiya main nahin chahta koi unhein galat samje

G-main apni best friend ko kabhi galat nahin samjoongi

S-phir ro kyun rahi thi

G-main tumhein kyun batao tum jao yeha se goodnight

(he leaves)

Next day all four meet in the cafeteria

S-tumne mujhe yeha kyun bulaya

G-mujhe kaam tha isiiye

S-jaldi bolo mujhe aur kaam hain

G-jaanthi hun kya kaam hain

S-tumhein mere peeche padne ke alawa kuch nahin aata

G-samrat tum

B-tum dono ladai bund karke ye bataoge ki yeh meeting kisliye rakhi gayi aur bhai kahaan hain

G-maine yeh meeting mayank ke liye hi rakhi hain mujhe lagta hain ki mayank bahut pareshan hain aur humein yeh jaanna hain ki woh pareshan kyun hain

S-ek baar jaanne ke liye gayi bhul gayi kya hua phir jaogi kya rone ke liye

D-sam gunjan teek keh rahi hain hum jab bhi problem main hote hain mayank ke paas jaate hain kyunki uske paas hamare har problem ka solution hain aur aaj jab mayank problem main hain we should talk to him

B-par dia bhai se baat kaise karenge unke paas jaaana aag ke paas jaane main koi farak nahin hain

S-ek idea hain

Gunjan goes to mayank regarding some work she doesn't talk anything more than that work all others also behave like that only they don't talk to him any thing more than the work they have

M-tum charo ko ho kya gaya hain itne ajeeb kyun behave kar rahe ho mere saamne tum charo ki bolti hi nahin rukti aur ab achanak sab ke sab mujhse baat karna chod diya

G-hum baat kyun karen jab tumhare life main hamari koi value nahin hain hum tumse baat kyun karen

 S-right gunjan

M-right gunjan tu kabse uski side le raha hain jab dekho use ladta rehta hain

G-jabse tum mere side nahin ho tabse

M-main toh tumhare side main hi hoon

G-toh batao tumhari ajeeb behavior ki wajah kya hain

D-humein yeh jaane ka pura haq hain warna main sochungi ki tumhari pareshaani ki wajah main hun

B-bhai ki pareshaani ki wajah tum hi ho tumhine sab kuch kiya

M-tumse kisne kahaan ki meri pareshaani ki wajah dia hain

B-toh kya hain aapki pareshaani ki wajah

M-tum logon ne aaj mujhe nahin chodne ka plan banaya hain acha teek hain batata hun

(he says what exactly happened)pata nahin use kya hua meri sagai ki baat sunte hi phone khata aur aaj tak uska phone nahin lagraha

G-shayad woh aapko pasand karti hain isiliye aapki shaadhi ki baat sunte hi phone karna aur utana band kiya

S-aise kaise koi pyar karta hain

G-jis tarah tumhare bare main bina jaane ladkiyan tumhare saath date pe aati hain

S-tum mujhe beech main kyun laa rahi ho

G-tum kyun beech main bol rahe ho mayank I think she loves you

M-magar aise kaise ho sakta hain jise mujh par barosa nahin hain woh mujhse pyar kaise karegi waise bhi mujhe lagta hain ki mujhe uske bare main bhul jaaana chahiye

G-tum use bhul nahin paoge tumhein bhulne ke liye bhi ek baar use baat karni hogi waise bhi woh lovestory hi kya jismein twists na ho

S-tum apne filmy lines se tak nahin jaati

G-tum se baad main nipat loongi pehle mayank tumhein ek baar toh try karna hoga tum log kya kehte ho

B-yeh story sunkar hi mera dimaag ki band baj gayi pata nahin bhai ne yeh sab kaise kiya mujhe bhi us ladki ko dekhne ka mann kar raha hain

D-mujhe bhi yehi lag raha hain ki humein use ek baar milna chahiye

S-i am also with you uski agar koi behen ya cousin ho toh mere liye bhi acha hain

G-samrat

S-main tumhari nahin us ladki ki behen ya cousin ke bare main baat kar raha hun

M-lekin hum uske bare main jaanenge kaise

S-aap yeh mujhpar chod dijiye aap bas uska number mujhe dijiye

(he gives him the number)

Next day evening

S-ladki ki details mil gayi

G-kya hain uska naam

M-nupur yeh details nahin kuch aur hain toh bol

S-usne delhi main ek chote se gaon se call kiya

M-matlab chote shehar ki ladki hain isiliye jab dekho meri har baat ka matlab poochti hain par use phone kahaan se mila

B-kya bhai aap bhi aaj ke zamaane main har kisike pass mobile hota hain chahe woh bada ho ya chota

S-toh ab kya

B-aur kya bhai ek chote shehar ki ladki se pyar karega humein is baat ko yehi par chod dena chahiye

S-mujhe aisa nahin lagta humein ladki ka shehar nahin uska dil dekhna chahiye

G-pehli baar tumne akalmandi ki baat ki

M-par hum wahaan jayenge kaise uska address bhi nahin pata uske naam se uska ghar kaise janenge

S-chote se gaon main ladki ko dundna bahut aasaan hain

G-tumhein kaise pata

S-yeh general knowledge hain iske liye dimaag ki zaroorat hain jo tumhare paas nahin hain

G-tumse baat karna bekaar hain

S-tumhein mujhse baat karne ke liye kisi ne force nahin kiya

D-tum dono please mauka dekhte hi shuru ho jaate ho mayank ab hum kya karenge

M-ya toh yeha bait ke us bhul jaana ya phir wahaan jaake dundna

S-loosers bhul jaate hain aur mera bhai looser nahin hain hum wahaan zaroor jayenge

G-tum wahaan jaake kya karoge

S-use doondne main bhai ki help karoonga

G-tab toh main bhi chaloongi

D-main bhi chaloongi (in excitement)

M-ek minute maine ab tak khud ka jaana bhi clear nahin kiya

G-mayank chalo na please

M-acha tik hain

S-this is too much bhai aapko mere baat ka value nahin hain iski har baat maante hain

M-tujhe itni jealousy kyun hain

S-jealousy isse mera itna bura waqt nahin aaya acha tik hain leave it kab jaana hain kaise jaana hain

G-kal hi chale jayenge

D-par uncle aunty se kya kahenge

S-friend ki marriage(benji is seriously thinking)aapko kya hua

B-tum log jao mujhe nahin aana mujhe kuch teek nahin lag raha

S-tik hain tumhari marzi main aapko force nahin karoonga

(they get ready and leave in the morning in their car)

While they are ready to leave benji comes

D-tum nahin aane waale the na

B-bhai ki problem meri problem isiliye main bhi aaraha hun

S-toh der kis baat ki lets go

(the address which sam brought is like a forest there are no houses present in that area)

M-samrat tu kahaan ka address lekar aaya

G-yeh hamesha har kaam aisa hi karta hain

S-sach main mujhe yehi ka address diya tha kahin aas paas ke gaon se toh nahin

D-wahaan koi dikh raha hain use jaake koi pooch kar aao

S-main jaata hun

G-tum rehne do tumhara information kaisa hain already pata chal gaya

D-benji tum jaakar poocho

(he goes and finds out)

B-maine already kahaan tha kuch gadbad hain woh aadmi keh raha hain yeha se 30 km tak koi gaon nahin hain

S-par yeh kaise ho sakta hain

M-ho sakta hain khud ko bahut intelligent samajta hain bevakuf kahika

S-bhai

M-nahin toh kya ek kaam diya tha woh bhi tik se nahin kiya bevajah itna dur lekar aaya

G-tumne teek kahaan yeh kisi kaam ke laayak nahin hain

S-chup kar chamchi

M-use kuch kahaana toh dekh main kya karta hun

G-ab aise kya gur rahe ho chalo(to sam smiling naughtily)

part4  

Edited by --unknown-- - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
res!
*Edited*
 
Hey πŸ€—!
It was an awesome update! πŸ˜
 
I love the new avtar of Gunjan! Always ready to fight!πŸ˜†
And the note caller- fabulous!πŸ‘πŸ‘
It's a complete and mindblowing update...
Please continue As Soon As Possible...😳
 
Love,
Nivriti❀️
Edited by SajanRox - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Great update...Nupur is so innocent...Mayank thinks she is pulling legs but she actually asks the meanings...he soo addicted to her voice...wow gangs r really cool...always ready to help him out...loved this gang alot...Sajan's r cute...please cont soon as curiosity increasing with every update...thnx for pm...!!!
Posted: 12 years ago

great update.finally nupur  mystrey is slowly opening up

Posted: 12 years ago
wonderful update.this story is quite different.eager to know more about nupur.waiting 4 the next update.
Posted: 12 years ago
ohhh wow ! 
damn excited for the next part :) 
plxzzz update soon .
Posted: 12 years ago
awesum update dear!
poor nupur... i guess she's in big trouble!
wow... gang's hunt 4 nupur!
luvd it!
continue soon!
thnx 4 d pm!
Posted: 12 years ago
lovely updt
thanks for the pm
Posted: 12 years ago
interesting update!!
thnx for de pm
Posted: 12 years ago
i'm desperately waiting to know this nupur...

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