A Bird In The Cage note on page 1 - Page 9

Originally posted by: chandu-mayu

I love it

Originally posted by: love.mayurarti

nice starting 

cont soon

Originally posted by: SajanRox

It is awesome! Lovely Concept and CS! =) Add me in your PM list <3

Originally posted by: kirti123

wow gr8 imagination'

the note thing was quiet new 

wating to read the next part do continue soon'

thanks for the pm😊

ohk nw i gt it...ya i too found tht a lil different coz in our culture too relatives can marry each other..thnx fr changing...

Originally posted by: ambikamuskaan

ohk nw i gt it...ya i too found tht a lil different coz in our culture too relatives can marry each other..thnx fr changing...

can or cant by the way girls are bhushans boys are sharmas

part 2

 

Suddenly his cell rings he is busy in some work

M-hello

Girl-hello mayank

M-gunjan main busy hoon tumse baad main baat karoonga

Girl-gunjan kaun

M-gunjan joke acha hain baad main baat karoonga

Girl- joke matlab

M-gunjan main phone rakh raha hun bye

(he cuts the phone)

(in the night)

All five were having group discussion

S-sirf ek week bacha hain engagement main toh happy

D-sam stop it pehle hi tension main hain

B-agar nahin karna hain toh mana kar sakte hona

M-tu jaa ke keh dena hamari taraf se mana karne ke liye reason ki zaroorat chahiye na

G-maine kahaan tha isiliye ladki doondne ke liye par tum ho ki maante nahin ho

M-ladki se yaad aaya tu dopehar ko phone karke kya naatak kar rahi thi

G-maine call kiya kab maine koi call nahin kiya

M-phir dia tumne

D-main bhi nahin

M-phir kisne call kiya hoga

G-tumhari girlfriend hogi

S-bhai ki girlfriend dimaag toh teek hain

G-right mayank ki kyun hogi tumhari hogi mayank tumhare jitna kameena nahin hain

S-tumne mujhe kameena kahaan

B-shant ho jao tum dono aur bhai bolo kaun hain woh ladki

D-haan mayank bolona main bach jaongi

M-guys stop it mujhe sach main nahin pata ki woh ladki kaun hain

G-shayad princess hogi

M-gunjan chup ek minute tune us din mera naam aur number note pe likha tha na kahin koi sach main us note ko dekhkar mujhe call toh nahin kiya

D-are you both serious tumne apna phone number aur naam note pe likha dimaag toh teek hain

M-maine nahin gunjan madam ne

S-mujhe pata tha aise faltu ideas ise hi aate hain

B-woh ladki isse bhi paagal hain jisne number dekh kar call kiya

S-actually mujhe interesting lag rahi hain

G-tumhein har koi interesting lagti hain ladki milna paap hain

D-sam is right mayank tum ek baar use return call karo

M-tumhara dimaag toh teek hain anjaan ladki ko kaise call karoon

G-jis tarah usne tumhein call kiya

M-tum bhi

B-main bhi try karo na bhai

M-ab tum sab log keh rahe ho toh karoonga par agar usne lift nahin kiya toh phir nahin karoonga

G-acha teek hain

(He calls her she doesn't lift the phone all are very excited but mayank shows his thumbs down)

M-usne aise hi call kiya hoga chod do

G-shut yeh bhi gayi

M-hogi toh jaayegi na ab small part ke liye gussa mat karo next part will be a big part dont worry

 

part3  

Edited by --unknown-- - 12 years ago

thanks for your comments in mayank, benji ,sam,dia , gunjan relation if you have any doubt do inform ok i change there relation to gunjans dad and sanjay are very close friends .their story will be given clearly later. coming to this update it is very small dontscold me next you will get a big update any more doubts feel free to ask

Originally posted by: jiya_angel

nice update👏

awesome updt dear
thanks for the pm