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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: jiya_angel

nice CS n title

continue soon

thanks dear
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OK guys thanks a lot for your comments and support .
many want to know about nupur but if i reveal that nothing will be left
It is a story of imagination such stories might not be present in real life
For me it is interesting but if you feel bored later dont scold me
If any one wants pm please inform me by the way ill pm to those people whom ill pm regularly
I will surely give the explanation for my title in future updats to make you clear here is the first part
 
Edited by mjhtmayursajan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
part1
 
 
Shilpa and sanjay at breakfast table

 

They are hearing some sounds of breaking things

Sanjay-lagta hain dono ne subah subah shuru kiya

Shilpa-shuru karne ke liye khatam hona chahiye par inka toh chalta rehta hain

M-goodmorning mom (hugs her)goodmorning dad(hugs him)yeh aawaz kaise

Shilpa-aur kiski

M-gunjan ko rokna padega warna aaj samrat gaya

Sanjay-uski baad main pehle tu meri baat sun teri aur dia ki engagement ka date fix hua hain next month main

M-jaise aapki marzi dad

Sanjay-tujhe is shaadi se koi problem nahin hain na main tujh par jabardasti nahin karna chahta

M-aapne jo bhi socha hoga hamari balai ke liye hi socha hoga so no problem main jaake gunjan ko dekhta hun

(he goes into sams room)

G-samrat tumne apne saare limits cross kar diye sharam nahin har roz ek ladki ke peeche gumte hue

S-sam ladkiyon ke peeche nahin ladkiyan sam ke peeche paagal hain

G-tum k2h2 ka dialogue mat bolo tumhein suit nahi karta

S-tumhein films ke alawa kuch nahin dikhta kya tumhare film waalo ne meri dialogue copy kiya hain

G-meri chodo main sirf filmo ke peeche paagal hoon par tum har ladki maama maami ka naam mitti main mila rahe ho

S-jab unhe koi problem nahin toh tumhein kyun itni problem hain

G-woh tumhein kuch kehna nahin chahte iska matlab yeh nahin tum unke achai ka faida utao dubara mujhe kisi bhi ladki ke saath date pe gaye pata chalana main tumhein

S-kya karlogi jab dekho dumki dete rehti ho kuch nahin karti

G-tumhein toh

(mayank enters)

M-gunjan use chod do aur mere saath chalo

G-nahin mayank main ise nahin chodungi

M-tu meri har baat maanti hain na mere liye mere saath chalo

G-tumhein nahin pata isne kya kiya ek ladki ke saath date pe jaane ke liye important meeting skip kiya

M-woh toh uski aadat hain main usse baad main baat karunga ab tum mere saath chalo humein office ke liye late ho raha hain

G-par

M-please

G- teek hain tumhare liye chal rahi hoon par sam yeh mera aakri warning hain

S-main tumhare dumkiyo se nahin darta

G-tumhein

M-gunjan chalo mere saath

(he takes her with him)

Mayank and gunjans relationship is like a brother and sister. She knows about mayank more than anyone in house. She always listens to his words he is her best friend, daily she goes to office with him only .

In the car

M-tujhe subah subah use ladne ki kya zaroorat hain

G-mera bas chalta toh use maar daalti par maama maami ko putr shokh nahin dena chahti isiliye chod diya

M-tu bhi na Jhansi ki rani hain pata nahin tere Mr.Right ka kya hoga

G-mayank(angrily)

M-sorry

G- waise tum use kuch kyun nahin kehte

M-jo sudrega use kuch kehke faida hain jo nahin sudrega use kehke koi faida nahin waise bhi hamari gunjan madam hain na use sudarne ke liye

(they reach office)

M-main aaj thoda busy hoon sham main miloonga

G-nahin lunch main warna tum lunch skip karoge

M-acha baba lunch main tujhse jyada mera khayal mom bhi nahin rakhti

 

(in the evening gunjan comes to mayanks cabin)

M-tu yehaan

G-tum mere saath abhi isi waqt chalo

M-kahaan

G-chup chap chalo

M-ok madam aapka hukum sar aankho par

(she takes him to cafetaria)

M-tu mujhe yehaan kyun lekar aayi

G-tumse zaroori baat karni hain

M-kya baat

G-kya yeh sach hain sagai ki date fix hui hain

M-haan isme choukne waali kya baat hain

G-maine kahaana tum di se shaadi nahin karoge tumhare liye toh princess aayegi

M-kahaan se aayegi teri princess

G-kahin se bhi par tumhare liye di nahin koi princess hi teek hain

M-gunjan tu apni filmi baatein chod aisa kuch nahin hota

G-kyun nahin hoga aise hi hoga

M-kaise hoga

G-idea 100 rupees note de

M-lekin kyun

G-de rahe ho ya nahin

M-acha le

(she writes his name and number on it)

M-yeh tu kya kar rahi hain

G-is number ko dekh kar jo ladki tujhe call karegi wohi teri princess hain

M-tu paagal ho gayi hain

G-nahin main serious hoon

M-agar koi ladki call nahin ki toh

G-di se shaadi karna

M-agar call karne waali ladki mujhe pasand nahin aayi toh

G-koi problem nahin hain tab bhi tum di se shaadhi karna

M-par gunjan

G-please mujhe ek baar try karne do

M-agar mana karoonga toh bhi tu nahin maanegi isiliye tik hain

Lets see what happens will her idea work or not

 

Samrat has not yet come home

G-phir se date pe gaya hoga maine tumse kahaan tha na usse baat karne ke liye par tum meri baat nahin sunte

M-use aane toh do tere saamne hi baat karoonga

G-pucca

M-pucca meri maa

(she comes to know samrat came home)

G-samrat tum kahaan the

S-tumse matlab main tumhein kyun bataon

G-dekha kaise baat kar raha hain

M-samrat ladkiyon se aise baat nahin karte

S-yeh ladki bhai aapko chashmein ki zaroorat hain aur waise bhi aapke pyare gunjan ko ladko se baat karna bhi nahin aata

M-tu use kuch nahin kahega waise use chod main pooch raha hun kahaan tha ab tak

S-bhai main busy tha

G-kiske saath

M-gunjan chup ain baat kar raha hun na samrat tumhein kitni baar kahaan hain tum apne college ke harkat ab chod doge par tum hoki hamari kisi bhi baat ka value hi nahin

S-bhai woh

M-(in anger)bas samrat bahut ho gaya aaj ke baad tumne office ka kaam chod kar kisi bhi ladki ke saath bahar gaye agar yeh baat mujhe pata chala na mujhse bura koi nahin hoga this is your final warning ab apne room main jao

(gunjan is very happy)

S-tumhein toh main baad main dekhloonga

M-sam

S-sorry ja raha hun

M-ab khush

(she hugs him)

G-bahut khush

M-paagal(catches her nose)waise tujhe uske girlfriends se problem hain aur mere liye girlfriend doondna chahti hain

G-mujhe tumhare liye girlfriend nahin ek achi princess chahiye

M-tu phir se shuru mat kar(joins his hands in front of her)

Days go on Gunjan and mayank both have forgot about the note

heres first part if you like press like button i will continue soon
thanks once again
 
Edited by --unknown-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome updt..luvd it..cnt. soon
thnx fr the pm
ambika
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow Nice start and very interesting
Gunjan and mayanks frship just too good...
loved them so much...
Now waiting for nups entry
beautiful part -
do cont it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
likeee ! 
i loved the part ! 
plzzz cont soon :) 
update a full page part soon plzzz .
jaldi se mayur meet bhi karado , i mean nupur call to mayank :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
great but when will my nupur come
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Posted: 12 years ago
where is nupur...i hope jaldi a jaye...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update😊Edited by kins103 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb start...waiting for his princess to call...cont soon...thnx for pm...!!!