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--unknown-- Goldie

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Posted: 15 May 2011 at 11:09pm | IP Logged


Hi guys till now aapne meri dono oses ko padkar mujhe kaafi inspire kiya yeh do oses thode emotional or love stories hain ab mere dimaag main ek naya os chal raha hain jo in dono se complete different hain . meri is os ki title hain "A Bird In The Cage". Is os ki story apne shayad kabhi suni nahin hogi its not a love story but not a emotional story but kya hain yeh aage pata chalega I hope you never heard such a kind of story

heres the character sketch

Mayank Sharma-Shilpa Sharma aur Sanjay sharma ka bada beta. He is smart , intelligent ,responsible guy who loves his brothers and cousins a lot . Whose marriage is fixed with his cousin dia bhushan,uske dad ki behen ki badi beti

Samrat sharma-youngest brother of mayank sharma, smart ,talented , naughty, sick for girls year main 365 days hote hain iske 365 girlfriends hote hai. He hates Gunjan because she is the only one who punishes him for his works.

Benji Sharma-elder tham sam ,younger than mayank he is decent , intelligent , cool guy . He also flirts with girls but is afraid of parents and elder brother unlike sam who is afraid of none except gunjan

Gunjan bhushan- Dia ki choti behen . She is smart ,well educated lost her parents in small age from then her relatives(sanjay sharma) are taking care of her and her sister. She is naughty loves mayank a lot as a elder brother , Benji is good friend par sam uske saaath 36 ka aakda hain

Dia Bhushan-she is modern, smart ,intelligent loves her cousins and sister a lot. She loves fashion .

All are board of directors in sharma company

Sanjay Sharma-he is a good father and mama. He loves his sons and dia and gunjan equally .He is a happy go lucky father gave five of them full freedom

Shilpa Sharma-she is sweet and good at heart she takes care of gunjan and dia as her own daughters She gave them the full freedom they needed

Nupur- the bird in the cage(secret)

if you like this I will continue
here are my updates


note : i made a small change on nivrithis request actually in some cultures fathers sisters daughter is allowed and may be it is not possible in some other cultures so for her
Gunjan and dia are sanjays relatives daughter not near relative but far relative .Sanjay is taking care of them because her father and mother were very close to them and all her near relatives left them alone if it is ok with this or not please reply



Edited by --unknown-- - 27 August 2011 at 5:00am

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-DreamzGirl- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 15 May 2011 at 11:15pm | IP Logged
nice character sketch sirf nupur ka kuch samagh mein nahi aaya par koi nahi aage aa jaega .

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Faria. IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 15 May 2011 at 11:25pm | IP Logged
Nice CS
do cont it

aur jaldi bata do ye kaisa story hai...
btw i loved ur title...

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Shafy_Kaira_MN IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 15766

Posted: 15 May 2011 at 11:39pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by aancchal

nice character sketch sirf nupur ka kuch samagh mein nahi aaya par koi nahi aage aa jaega .
mujhe bhi nupur cs kuch samajh mein ni aya..
but do update soon...

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..Ambika.. IF-Rockerz

Joined: 05 February 2011
Posts: 5551

Posted: 16 May 2011 at 1:18am | IP Logged
awesome concept..sam hates gunjan?
nice story..plz cont. wid it..wud love to read...
thnx fr the pm

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...Mitali... IF-Dazzler

Joined: 06 January 2011
Posts: 3198

Posted: 16 May 2011 at 1:38am | IP Logged
hey awesome concept
loved the way u write
thnx for the pm

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ginny09 Goldie

Joined: 06 August 2010
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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 1:56am | IP Logged
yesss def cont :) 
it can be interesting 
jo bhi ho but end mein nupur ko plz mayank ke saath happy hi dikhana 
i love happy endings .

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SwaNia_2 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 2:00am | IP Logged
Please do continue. Samrat and Gunjan not getting along well... would love to read .Smile


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