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FF-Meri Nanhi Dulhan-thread 4 (Page 99)

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                                      Chapter 54

Morning:
After a spending a restless night geet got ready  early morning  '..His confession last night made her insecure of herself' it was not a joke'there was dept in his each word.. Babaji why I am feeling he meant what he said. ?'.and he is falling for mishti'?'.
,   covering  her face she  ran to maan's room'. and found him sleeping'.she stood beside him looking him with plenty of questions in her eyes'..he stirred, she got conscious, and  turned to leave when maan pulled her on bed' making her lay with him on top''..

Geet'yeh aap kya kar rahe ho sabji'''
maan'pyar sweetheart'..
sweetheart  dekha babaji,, she makes a puppy face.
he moves closer'
she keeps her hand on his chest distancing him.. kis riste se .?
maan----misti pyar riste se nahi,''.Insan se hota hai'?
par apne toh mera chehra bhi nahi dekha'?
so what,?ladke sirf chehre se pyar nahi karte ,he said caressing her curves and figure, passionately'''do U have any idea, how beautiful U are''.?
it irritated her more''.
..aap to shayad kisi aur se pyar karte ho naa '?she said with all her hopes to listen yes''.
kiss se?maan  asked innocently'.
geet----yaad kejeye?
maan---kitne sawal karte ho mishti'?'kaha na ..
  main sirf tumse pyar karta hu'''..
with that he got up and left to bathroom'''..
Geet too got up and left room
she stood in kitchen, chopping vegetables angrily''.
prem and Vicky came to her'.
hello mishtiji bechare vegetables  par kiska gussa nikal rahe ho'?
Vicky took carrot and sat on shelf eating'
geet saw here and there
prem'don't worry aunty aur dadi  kuch discussion main busy hai'.''
geet ' theek hai'ab ek baat bataoo?
prem tumhe heer main kya aacha lagta hai?
prem---yeh kaisa sawaal hai?
geet---mijhe jawab chaheye
humm'let me think'uski  awaaz aache hai

Aur vicky tujhe ---
Vicky -- heer main..mujhe humm?
prem glare him'woh prachi  Main pooch rahe hai''?..
vicky---yaad nahi aara bahut din hue nasdik se dekhe hue
geet ---shows her knife,'tum bolte ho ya nahi?

bol raha hu mere maa'woh.kafi hot hai..

Geet---kya matlab?
he smiles mischievously'''.
both Vicky and prem laughed '''..
it angered her more'''

Stupid sare ladke ek jaise hote hai'''
kissi to dil se pyar nahi'''
prem ---chill yaar hum mazak kar rahe the'''
huve kya?
unhone kaha unko mujhse pyar hai'
matlab?
matab mere chehre se nahi,..dil se bhi nahi'?
prem---are yaar, kyun confuse kar rahe ho''..
maan ko tum se pyar hai bhi aur nahi bhi?
bolna kya chahre ho geet?
She points at her b***** curves 'unko  yeh sab se pyar hai..

prem and Vicky looks at each other shocked'''
vicky---- yaar bhai bhi naa''.he know how to irritate U'..
Dear believe me, he is just teasing U''.aisa kuch nahi hai?
Geet---matlab mere yeh sab aacha nahi''..?

prem and Vicky turns dark pink with embarrassment 
prem looks up yeh ladki toh din main bhi tare dikha rahe hai'.
while Vicky covers his face with hands''''.and answers'nahi actually aache hai ''..
Geet---tum log toh dekh bhi nahi rahe toh kaise pata''?
prem are yaar kaha phas gaye'? Geet tumhara figure analysis hum phir kabhi karenge'
now lets talk about maan'ok
she agrees with a puppy face '

 

 

 

Maan ----- mishti breakfast lana'.
Geet---dekha aa gaye'.
just go and act normal'..he will try to make U jealous just don't get effected'.they pushes her with a tray of breakfast'..
jaya and dadi sitting on  sofa talking something serious facing their back to maan who sat on dinning table ''
geet went and serves him breakfast''..
she was about to move away when he held her hand and pulled her to him''
geet --yeh aap kya kar rahe ho'?dadi dekh lenge''
maan--they are not facing us'just stay calm'..
geet--kya chahye aapko'..?
maan--butter''
she took slice of bread,and was buttering it when maan took butter with his finger and filled her belly with it'''
geet jaw fell open''..
maan pulls her more closer and lick butter from her belly,'.his  hands were under her pallu stroking her waist''.geet  bites her lower lip when he sucks her belly seductively '..her pallu slipped from her mouth as she moans maan
hearing his name from her real voice he stopped at once'
 looking at her with smirk''
seeing him smirking she understood what she did, she quickly took back her pallu in mouth and frees her self from his grip'''
maan was looking at her lovingly'butter was delicious'
geet fumed with anger 'thinking he is romancing with maid.
they heard a door bell'''
Geet went and opened it'.and was shocked '.
brij entered'shouting oyeee
maan got up from his seat thinking who is this'.?
Hearing brij voice vicky and prem came running from kitchen'
Brij stepped in''..
and geet stepping backward fully terrified'.
brij 'kaha hai mere bahen?
maan turned to vicky---vicky yeh brij hai geet ka bhai'.
maan saw geet, who was shivering with fear'..
he came and stood in front of brij'
protectively hiding geet behind him''..
brij maine poocha mere bahen kaha hai'"?
prem and vicky rushed to brij'---Geet yaha nahi hai..?
maan'ho tab bhi main tujhe, ya kisi ko bhi Geet ko yaha se lejane nahi deta'
his protection his words every thing cleared Geet's doubts'.
she got tears thinking 'He always knew I am  his geet'.
and I doubted his love'she  felt herself very low in front of his love'
her thoughts broke with brij's voice''''.
brij---oyee samjha de apne bade bhai ko'..mere raste main na aaye'
warna wahi haal karunga jo ek saal pehle tum dono ka kiya tha '
jab geet ko dhoodte hue hoshiyarpur aaye the'..
gundoo se handiya  tudiye thi 'yaad hai naa'''
geet turned to vicky and prem shocked'
while maan  punch brij hard making him fall on floor'.
mere bhaiyon par haath uthane ki himmat kaise ki tune'?.


maan kicked his stomach and picked him up  punching him  strongly'
prem and Vicky held maan 'bhai aap kya kar rahe ho'?
yeh mat bhuleye yeh geet ka bhai hai'''.
maan chodo mujhe main iski jaan lelunga'''
prem'brij ji  humne kaha naa geet yaha nahi hai'.
ab aap yaha se jaayeye'..
Giving maan angry glare brij left ''''..
maan turned to geet ..

geet stood looking down unable to face him'.
Dadi called her'.mishti yaha aana'
Geet went to them and saw jaya was crying'pata nahi mere bachi kaha chali gaye'''.
dadi'aacha he hua,ab bhool jaaoo us ladki ko'
maan angrily stepped towards dadi, when Vicky held him stopping him'
please bhai '''
dadi ---mishti mere paas  aana
Geet went close, ji dadi'.
dadi---yeh photo kaise hai'?
she shows a modern girl photo'iska naam priya hai'
Geet---par dadi yeh aap mujhe kyun dekha rahe ho?
Dadi----kyunki tum  bade shubh ho'jo kaam hath main lete ho usse pura karte ho'.
geet---par dadi mujhe karna kya hai'.?
dadi----yeh tasveer maan ko dekha kar,  usko shadi ke liye tayar karna hai'.
geet was shocked''.and so was prem and Vicky who stood at her back'..
Geet turns to maan'.
maan was looking her with lots of pain in his eyes.'her silence was killing him '.how can she be so calm'..why is she not telling truth''
tears were rolling down her cheeks but no one noticed, due to her veil''
gathering herself she answered 'ji dadi maa'...
maan glares her furiously  and left to his room'''..


(precap--maneetHeart together)

Hi friends here is part  54..
hope U all like it...
sorry for mistakes...
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Edited by fairyland_1234 - 25 May 2011 at 1:14am

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happy to be second at meri nanhi dulhan...

dadi ko teerth yatra par bhej do...
 
brij is right at one end he is really worried for his sister...
 
 
jaya is missing her sweet angle...
 
waiting for next part...Big smile
 
 


Edited by maansee - 24 May 2011 at 11:15pm

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nice update...precap sounds very romantic

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Superb part, thanx 4 update

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wat is dadi's problem, this priya girl should come and bash dadi!

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