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FF-Meri Nanhi Dulhan-thread 4 (Page 84)

fairyland_1234 Senior Member

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 10:21pm | IP Logged

                                      Chapter 53


All arrangements were done at backyard, according to Geet's taste'pure Punjabi style'
either it be decoration, food, dhol or even bhangra''..
prem vicky and maan wore same type of silk kurta pyjama'with different colors'.prem coffee color, vicky white and maan  wore  black'..
trio looking very attractive and dashing'.
maan's tough looks were adding to his charm'. '
..All girls' eyes were complementing him'but his eyes were searching for one person'..
vicky and prem watching him and his restlessness'
 Soon maan's restlessness was replaced by a  glow on his face'.
they followed his gaze'and found  mishti ' '
maan's throat went dry ..Seeing her'how can someone be so angelic'
Vicky and prem   went close and  compliments her ,''..
geet ---itne costly dress aur jewelry bhejne ki kya zaroorat thi,''?.
vicky and prem exchange looks'par geet yeh sab toh humne nahi bheeja''.
geet'kya? iska matlab'''.unhone'..?
Trio turned and saw maan standing little far from them and seems to be lost in geet's beauty'..
Dadi came to geet'.
mishti tumhare paas itne aache kapde kaha se aaye?

Vicky '(-uff yeh bhai bhi naa marvange hume'..)
geet'dadimaa woh main ''.
vicky---maine diye '
maine soncha ,itne guest honge, toh hamare izzat ka sawal hai naa'
 dadi got convinced ''after all family honor means a lot to her''..
dadi--Aur yeh jewellery''..?
prem ---artificial hai dadi maa''
Dadi'aacha, par lagte bilkul asli hai naa''..
Trio laugh nervously'.
dadi left '.they took a relief breathe''..
But not for long, as they saw maan moving towards geet'..
Geet quickly joined a group of ladies''
while vicky sends few family friends to maan for diverting his attention'.
  maan  talking to them very disinteresting, as if  trying to cut the conversation,'
both maan and geet talking to others but stealing glances of each other '

Ladies were .complimenting mishti's dress and accessories'

they were touching, her praising her'
maan is feeling jealous 'Why are they  touching  her'?

He gave them annoyed look'''
geet quickly remove their hands '.
auntyji main aabhi aate hu'.
Geet left from there''..''.
maan quickly cut off  the conversation '
and moved ahead to find geet, but Vicky stood blocking his way. With his last hope of confusing maan'
have U decided to move on bhai'?
maan'what do U mean?
Vicky'I mean forgetting geet and moving on with some one else, that to with
that  mishti,?The way U were checking her out, any one can guess it'bhai'.
maan'glares  vicky suspiciously'are u involved with her'?.
that  it, Vicky gulped and smiled nervously'.kya bol rahe ho bhai'?'I think prem is  calling me'?.He quickly clears maan's way'..
maan left from there giving Vicky'"I will see U later" look '''
vicky ran to prem---yaar pata nahi maa ne kya kha kar aisa beta paida kiya'hai''.?.
unko confuse karne gaya tha 'khud confuse hokar wapas aaya hu'..
prem'jo bhi khaya ho aunty ne tere waqt kyun nahi khaya ?''..
vicky shows fake anger' then they broke into laughter''

Geet was getting into the mansion, from backyard door when maan blocked her way''''
Geet looks here and there,'then ran upstairs to terrace'
panting heaving'(Baabaji yeh toh peeche hi pard gaye'.

Kab tab bachte rahungi unse''..)
 she noticed her surroundings'''
whole terrace is beautifully   decorated with balloons, flowers, candles and music''and table with two chairs and a heart shape chocolate cake on it''..
Geet excitingly went to cake tasting it with her finger. Then ran through out the terrace, Enjoying   childishly'
''and collide with maan'.
mafi sabji she tried moving away but maan held her wrist''.
she wriggles to free herself..
Suddenly fire works started, geet got scared and hugged maan'
maan caress her head lovingly'''.
daro mat waha dekho ,he turned her showing sky writing'''

she was pleasantly surprised at her view''where he wrote her birthday wish on sky''..
he hugged her from back.. Affectionately Watching it''..
its not only geet and maan but all the guest and family members in backyard were watching surprisingly'''
 .vicky and prem know well U did and for whom'''
even jaya guessed, it is by maan for geet, as its her birthday today''.she got tears 'seeing maan's boundless love and longing  for Geet

On terrace  both maan and geet .sitting  on  flowers decorated swing and enjoying fireworks'forgetting everything Geet sat very comfortably  in maan's arms resting her head on his chest'and he is hugging  her from back.. ,,her dupatta was almost slipped from her head ,revealing her face'''
but both didn't noticed it,'. as they were so lost in the movement'''maan kissed her forehead wishing'" happy birthday jaan" still looking up in sky'
Geet got anxious of the situation'.she is actually enjoying her birthday with maan''she makes a cute face thinking'babaji yeh kya ho raha hai''.

she quickly covers her face and tries to move''.but maan tightens his grip..
kaha ja rahe ho?
yeh aap kya kar rahe ho sabji ?'jane dejeye mujhe'''
chali jana'.jaldi kya hai?
he  slides her dupatta  to front exposing  her neck shoulders and back''.trailing  wet kisses on neck to  shoulders'
geet closes her eyes feeling his touch'his passion was making her weak'
he kisses all over her  back very passionately''..
his hands were playing with her b***** curves''.
geet moan in pleasure''.maan moved towards her ear and  whispers'
maine is jism ko kal raat bhi  mehsoos kiya tha.''who tum thi naa mishti?..
 geet snap open her eyes shocked''..nahi woh aapka khwab tha''.
maan--How can U say that?his hands still roaming on her body.
Geet---Aap ke aankhen band thi?
maan raise his eyebrow---aacha tumhe kaise pata mere aankhen khuli thi ya band..?
maine check kiya tha naa'she bites her tongue''.
maan chuckle at her innocence'''.humm
Geet--mujhe jane dejeye ''.
maan'turns her, facing towards him, and rubbed his lips with her petal  like lips mishti mujhe tumse pyar hogaya hai'with that he captured her lips kissing her  passionately..
Geet eyes widened in shock and disbelief'she pounds his chest '  pushes him away and left place ..angrily
maan laugh lauder''seeing her getting jealous of herself'
Geet ran to vicky and prem. dragged them inside her room'.
vicky'gudiya kisi ne dekh liya hota toh drama yahi end hogaya hota'?
prem'huva kya hai?
she takes out her veil and throws on floor ...
vicky 'huva kya?
mujhe nahi karna yeh natak
vicky--par kyun'.?
Geet---unko kisi aur se pyar hogaya hai'..
She cries childishly'.
both rush to her,'.kiss se?
Geet----Mishti se
they took a relief breathe'
prem---par roh kyun rahe ho?'
mishti toh tum hi hai naa'
Geet---haa par unko toh nahi maloom hai naa''..?
vicky---geet woh maan singh khurana hai''''.he is very clever'..
geet ------unki tareef band karo''..
aare yaar  just think,..agar aisa hota toh woh asmaan par birthday wish  kiske liye tha'?geet ke liye ya mishti keliye''?'
phir problem solved'he is teasing U geet ''.
To make U confess''..
aur mujhe toh lagta hai woh successful hojayega''
Geet---ab main kya karu''?'.
vicky---control mere maa control''apne zabaan band rakhna.
theek hai. ab soo ja'' almost finish hogaye kal dekhte hai..kya karna hai good night ''bye
they left.

Hi friends,here is part 53
hope U all like it
sorry for mistakes
and please commentSmile
will pm tomorrow.Embarrassed




























Edited by fairyland_1234 - 31 May 2011 at 2:44pm

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raj_202 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 10:23pm | IP Logged

very nice

loved geet innocence

Edited by raj_202 - 24 May 2011 at 3:51am

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mrk-1 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 10:26pm | IP Logged
awsome yaar...waiting for the other part 

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fairyland_1234i rok

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 10:34pm | IP Logged
wow.thanks for updating...
its really beautifulll...
geet is jealous of geetWink...
its 2 gud...

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esha143 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 10:38pm | IP Logged
Both parts were really superb...Maan taking care of all her favourites and then making her birthday so beautiful for her...and trying to make her confess that she is indeed his jaan...his Geet...Vicky n Prem trying to divert him but not being successful...Geet avoiding him but then feeling jealous of herself as Maan is liking her as Mishti n not as Geet...also Geet taking care of Dadaji and winning the grace of Daadi...I hope she won't have to do this natak for long...

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 10:41pm | IP Logged
loved the update

haan to batao .. Jaya Maa nay Maan ko kia khaa ker paida kia hai ... aur vicky ke time per woh sab kiyon nahin khaya ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL

loved the way Maan was teasing Geet ...  did the trio really though that Maan wudnt recognize his Jaan ...  Shocked .. 

i guess they still dont know that Geet is way too deeply seeped in to his soul ..   

btw i still maintain my stance of killing dadi Saw 4 style ... Wink .. btw yaar wat wud've been Dhakkan daadi's reaction seeing the fireworks and b'day wish for Geet?  Evil Smile

cant wait to

thanks a ton for the double updates 


Edited by sindu555 - 22 May 2011 at 10:43pm

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MsMovielover IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 10:42pm | IP Logged
loved the updates...
haha maan is so smart..
poor geet she is jealous of herself..
continue soon

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mitzi11 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 10:46pm | IP Logged

thanks for double update
really enjoy
cant wait 4 next part

Edited by sharmake11 - 22 May 2011 at 10:47pm

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