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FF-Meri Nanhi Dulhan-thread 4 (Page 45)

muskaan... Goldie
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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 8:51pm | IP Logged
Hate DADI...
poor Geet...& Maan...

please update next part...

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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 8:53pm | IP Logged
omg...yeh kya ho raha hain...
hamhare maaneet ko alag kar diya...
uss dadi ki tohAngry...
how can she ask for child from a kid...
how cud she do this...and on top of that this kasam...
oh god i am so tensed now...
how he is going to get his jaan back...

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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 8:55pm | IP Logged
dada and dadi both are so mean...they want waris from 12 year old kid...shame on them AngryAngryAngry

dadi should realise what her so called daugther did ...
maan why did u promise to not go for geetCryCryCryCryCry

1 year leap??hopefully please make them meet...

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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 8:56pm | IP Logged
kya update hai yaar...full of pain...CryCryCry.i just hate dadiAngryAngryAngry...

Edited by bubblygal - 18 May 2011 at 8:56pm

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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 8:59pm | IP Logged
dadi &dadaji grrr
geet &maan CryCryCry
awesome update

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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 9:06pm | IP Logged
somebody post me links of 47 , 48 ,49 .50 etc if updated ..please
at least tell me page number

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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 9:14pm | IP Logged
Me waitinggg sooo eagerlyyy

updateee soonnn

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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 9:25pm | IP Logged
                                    Chapter 50

Year passed 'geet is now 18 yrs and maan  23 yrs old
.. dadaji was still ill'not fully recovered''.
 vicky stopped talking to dada dadi ' completely ''
everyone seems to forgot smiling .as.geet was the soul of KM'everything without her seems to be  meaning less and lifeless '.
Specially maan who turned, very rude, arrogant, and angry young man''..
He kept himself immersed in work''always on tours and didn't returned home from months'''.

Hoshiyarpur
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. Geet too changed 'she stopped smiling, eating, sleeping only thing she do is wait for maan sitting on terrace from morning to night'.
 handa family took geet out for  picnic'.to cheer her''..
All were busy in talking enjoying '.taking advantage Geet covered her face with dupatta and ran to near ph booth'''.
she called maan but it was switch off'''
she called Vicky'.Vicky'?
Hearing her after a year 'Vicky couldn't hold his tears'
Gudiya'kaise hai tu?kaha hai tu?
geet too cried.. mujhe yaha se leja Vicky'.mujhe yeh log waha aane nahi der rahe'.ph bhi nahi karne dete'mujhe unke paas jana hai''Vicky?
They cried for few min'''.
vicky---Sun gudiya roh mat''..bhai  paris gaye hai 'business tour par'.

She cried more''..
vicky---kaha na 'stop crying 'main aur prem'aarahe hai'.

Ghar par kisi ko mat bolna''..once we reach there'we will make a plan to get U here'..ok now stop crying''
she wipes her tears'bye''

Next day prem and Vicky reached hoshiyarpur'''.
they stayed in lodge 'and met geet secretly'''.
vicky---sun gudiya. .Your cousin sister study in shimla right, then Convince your parents'that U too wants to go shimla for completing  graduation ...and U will be staying in same hostel of rajji..
 once they agree to it and drop u in shimla, we will take U from there'''
Geet---what if they call rajji'?
vicky---.dont worry we will talk to rajji, hopefully she will support us'''.
she hugged Vicky thanking him and left for proceeding their plan''
everything happened as they planned'''.

They took geet from shimla to delhi'.
prem's house''..
prem'what's next, how can we take her to KM
geet'hide me and take with U'
vicky--'yeah good idea hides yourself in my pocket and I will take U there '?

Geet'makes a puppy face. I don't mean that'
vicky---then what do U mean?
she covers her face with her dupatta'like this?
prem'good idea' we can take her as  care taker of dadaji'as he is not well''.
Geet'kya dadaji is ill,and U guys didn't told me'''
they tells her everything happened on her last birthday''..
Geet'theek kiya unhone'.
vicky'kya?
geet'nahi toh dadaji ko kuch ho jata toh?
vicky'what ever'I don't want  U to do be a caretaker'after all U are our princess''..
Geet'uff oh vicky, what caretaker do'takes care, and being a daughter in law, its my duty to take care of dadaji'''
vicky--No, they spoiled your life and U want to take care of them'''?
geet--Please vicky . This is only way I can reach home and win dada dadi's hearts'.
vicky--why U want to do all this'.just stay here till bhai arrive, then elope with him'.
geet---nahi vicky I want both my love and  my family'
vicky--I don't think bhai will allow U to work as maid''.
geet'that's why, I need to hide myself  from him also, till everything gets fine''
vicky chuckle'he is maan singh khurana 'don't underestimate him'
I don't think, U can hide from him?
don't forget I am mrs maan singh khurana''.its only me who can handle him'..she said proudly''
prem'no doubt on that''All the best'..
vicky'take one week rest then U can start'
geet'nahi nahi I want to go today itself,  as tomorrow is my birthday. And I want to be with my family''..

ok boss'''.get ready lets go KM
geet got ready wearing  plain yellow lahanga choli. With zari border'she tied  her hairs in one long plat, and  wore bangles and  payal'.
prem and vicky scanned her'.wow geet U are looking too beautiful even in this villagers dress''..her back and  waist is very much exposed as her choli is small in size'and tied with dori's'.
vicky  covers her back and waist with her dupatta,'. keep it in this way'now perfect..
prem---but what about voice..?
geet---- don't worry ..She held one corner of her dupatta in her teethes''
like this my voice will sound different'
prem and vicky---good going ..sweety''..All the best, lets go'''

Khurana mansion

prem vicky and Geet entered''
geet covered her face with a long veil,
dadi and jaya was sitting in hall'''.
jaya 'yeh kaun hai?
prem'aunty yeh mere dur ki reshte daar,hai, gaun se aaye hai kaam ki talash main''
geet came and touches both dadi's and jaya's feet'..taking blessing''
jaya'its fine beta, but why are U wearing this ghungat'..
prem'woh hamare gaon main pratha hai,kunware ladkiyan apna chehra nahi dekhate'..
dadi'impressed'aache sanskar hai,'hamare yaha kam par rakh lo'..
vicky'haa dadaji  ke care taker ka kaam kar lena'..theek hai'..
geet jumped excitingly''
prem and vicky closed eyes 'yeh marvayege'''.
dadi ---kya hua'uchal kyun rahe ho?'
Geet'ji khushi ke mare,itne badi haveli main kaam mil gaya''
dadi'tumhare umar kya hai'.?
prem'20 saal..
jaya--theek hai'.jaoo servant quarters main room lelo'.
geet was about to go. When vicky pulled her dupatta, revealing her back'
seeing her extreme beauty, jaya stopped geet'
suno beta. what's your name'
mishti  Geet said and shied'.
toh mishti tum servant quarter main nahi yaha mansion main rahoge''.
vicky winks at prem''
jaya'vicky ise kamra dekha do''..
vicky 'took her to apposite room of maan'.besides geet's own room''.
prem brought her luggage'..
Trio jumped on bed'' enjoying their first victory''
wow "mishti" '.yeh naam kaise sujha'?''
Geet---woh  mujhe pyar se mishti bulate hai'''
vicky---kya,are yaar bhai ko shaq ho gaya toh''.
Geet---tum log sambhal lena'.mujhe kuch aur sujha nahi toh maine mishti bol diya''..
vicky--theek hai'.chal hum jate hai byeee'..
Night--
-geet tip toed and got out of her room 'she was entering maan's room when Vicky stopped her''hello mishi ji 'where are U going'?
Geet'mujhe unke kamre main sona hai'..plz'
vicky'rolled his eyes..theek hai'subha sab ke jaagne se pehle, tumhare room main chali jana'
she pulled Vicky cheeks 'U are too cute.. Vicky
vicky---ab jaa koi dekh lega''.
she went to maan's room, her eyes filled up remembering  him and ..their close movements'..her confession of love was still  as it is on mirror'.. .taking his photo she fell on bed talking to him'aap kaha ho'?dekheye main aagaye,'.ab toh aajaoo'she kissed  and . Slept hugging his photo'''.

1 pm
Maan arrived'KM..walking elegantly in his  usual style'.On Entering his room'he felt peace after a long time'her aroma is soothing his aching heart'. lights were off and room was complete dark'  still he didn't opens lights''as  he don't want to come out of  the feelings  he is experiencing now .. ''
Taking off his shirt 'maan laid besides geet'and..

Whispers "happy birthday jaan"'''

(precap---naughty  maan)


Hi friends, here is part 50''
hope U all like it'..
Sorry for mistakes '.
 and please comment'..







 





Edited by fairyland_1234 - 18 May 2011 at 9:28pm

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