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FF-Meri Nanhi Dulhan-thread 4 (Page 44)

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                                            Chapter 49



3 weeks passed'maan and vicky were too busy they hardly called home'''geet missing maan badly''..she spends maximum time in maan's room speaking to his photo'.she shied remembering his demand of those 3 words''.she took her lipstick and wrote I love U on mirror'
then kissed besides it living her lip marks''..
its been a week dada dadi arrived''.but dadi never spoke to geet, didn't even touched the food cooked by geet'..
geet tried best, but dadi was very rude to her''.
Morning
geet is in kitchen when her cousin brother brij arrived''''
Geet came and hugged him'.veer ji aap'''.
haa tujhe lene aaya hu'''.
geet par main kaise aa sakte hu'?
jaya and dadi came'.brij greeted them'''.
brij 'jab se rano chachi to geet ke sath hue accident ke bare main pata chala'unki health kharab hai''main geet ko sath le jane aaya hu'.
dadi'aacha he hai lejaoo'.aur wapas mat bhejna'''..
Geet'turned to dadi shocked'.dadi?

brij'kya matlab?

Iske wajah se hamare khandan ke log aaj jail main hai''.
jaya'maa plz yeh aap kya bol rahe ho aap'''..
is sab main geet ka kya dosh hai?'''.
brij---aapne hamare geet ko samajh kya rakha hai''.hum aap ke tarah paise wale na sahi''par hamare liye geet rajkumari si kam nahi'''.
dadi ---toh lejaoo apni rajkumari ko'''
geet 'cried and fell on dadi's feet''.aisa mat bolo dadi''.
yeh mera ghar hai''..mujhe mat nikalo'''.
jaya cried---kyun maa aap kyun aisa kar rahe hai?.
dadi--wajah janna chahte ho toh suno'shadi ko  4 saal hone aaye
,aur is ne aabhi tak hame waris nahi diya''''
geet cried mere paas nahi hai dadi''..hota toh de dete''.
jaya 'maa'geet aabhi sirf 17 sall  ke hai,''
woh bechari toh uska matlab bhi nahi jante'''''
brij---bahut hogaya''humse bahut bade bhool hogaye 'geet ki is ghar main shadi kar ke''.chal geet'.he dragged her'''
Geet---nahi veerji plz '.chodo''''
main kahi nahi jaoonge''''.

prem stopped brij'at door'and freed geet's hand''.
geet hides behind prem'''..
prem---yeh aap log kya kar rahe ho.?
maan ko pata chala toh '.woh tabahi macha dega''..
dadi----tum parai ho,hamare ghar ke mamle se du raho''..

Prem---geet ke bina'maan nahi jee payega  dadi''. '..

dadi---woh hamara  pota hai,.. humse bahot pyar karta hai''wahi karega jo hum chahenege'''.

brij held geet's hand and dragged out 'taking her forcefully with him''.She cried '.maaan,''maaan..

maan got up from sleep screaming Geeet ,he is sweating and panting .heavily''.
Vicky who was sleeping besides him'..got up scared''..
bhai'bhai'kya hua'..?
maan  restlessly said''vicky'.Geet 'geet  mujhe bula rahe hai vicky'
vicky'uff oh,bhai,relax 'its just a dream''..
maan'nahi,'.he took ph and called home'''.
it was ringing continuously'''
prem  is consoling jaya'.when dadi picked ph'''.
maan-----hello geet'..

Dadi---yeh kya maan aap toh hum sab bhool hi gaye,'''
sirf geet yaad hai aapko'..?
maan'dadi kaise hai aap?
Dadi--hum saab theek hai'''.
maan--dadi geet kaise hai''?
dadi---humne kaha na, sab theek hai'''.
maan--kya main geet se baat kar sakta hu''...?
dadi---uff maan,geet geet geet apko aur kuch sujhta hai ya nahi'''.?
maan---aisa nahi hai dadi'''.
dadi---aap kab aarehe''..?
maan--next week'
dadi---toh theek hai tab hi milenge'.bye..
she cuts the call'''and warned jaya and prem'for not informing anything to maan.. till  he returns'''
maan is still worried ''..
kya hua bhai?

maan--dadi ne kaha, geet theek hai ,par mere baat nahi karaye''..
vicky-- common bhai U know well. How narrow minded dadi is''
don't worries now sleep''..

any how we are going next week,'tab mil lena  dil bhar kar aapke geet se..
maan laid on bed but couldn't sleep'
week later
Geet's birthday'..
maan and vicky arrived''.khurana mansion'.
vicky was little amazed, seeing no decoration in kM'.
hamare princess ka birthday hai aur koi arrangements nahi?
maan was so busy in looking for her, didn't bothered about anything''.
his hands were full of gifts'''
and his eyes were hungrily searching her everywhere '''
dada dadi..jaya and prem came '.
Both maan and vicky greeted them'.
jaya  eyes filled up seeing maan;s restlessness''
dadaji sat on sofa tensed'''
'.

vicky---maa gudiya kaha hai'''.
Dadi  --hum ne usko ghar se nikal diya'''.
maan and vicky turned to dadi shocked'''..
all gifts fell on floor from maan's hands'''
mere geet kaha hai maa'?'maan asked with pain'
jaya stood looking down''
Dadi---..aap ne suna nahi'humne kya kaha? Bhool jaye usko'?
woh chali gaye''.
maan ---aisa nahi ho sakta'.woh mujhe chod kar nahi ja sakte'..
jaya---woh nahi jana chahte thi 'tadap rahe thi woh ''.
baar baar tume aawaz de rahe thi..'maan'.
maan  fell on his knees screaming in pain geeet '.
vicky---kyun dadi kyun  aapne aise kyun kiya?
daidi---toh kya karte''4 sal  hone aaye''
usne  aabhi tak hama waris nahi diya'''.
maan turned to dadi splitting fire with his eyes'.
maan---waris?'ek choti bachi se aap apna waris maanga?
usko ushi ke ghar se nikal diya?
dadi---yeh ghar uska nahi''..
maan---toh phir yeh ghar mera bhi nahi''''
all turned to him shocked '''..

Giving one last glare to dadi'maan started to leave'''
when jaya cried '.out'...babuji''.
all turned and saw dadiji  falling on floor holding his heart''..

 prem checking dadaji''he got a heart attack'

they took dadaji  to hospital''''.
After an hour..dr came out of emergency ward ''
maan -- 'dr dadaji kaise hai?
dr-- attack was minor but he seems to be very tensed'''.
any kind of tension ,could be dangerous  for him''.
maan---can we meet him dr'?
dr--yes sure''

All went in''..
dadaji indicates maan to come close''taking off his mask he says'.
maan  hum sab ko chod kar mat jaoo'''.
maan'looking away with tears'..
dadaji breathes heavily''..
maan turned worriedly''dadaji please ...

seeing his serious condition maan agreed..'dadaji main nahi jaunga'..

. dadi 'aise nahi maan'she took maan's hand and kept on dadaji's hand..

Now promise U wont go to geet  for bringing her back promise maan''?
maan closes his eyes trying to hide  his pain  and said'main wada karta hu'.he left room hurriedly''..

Vicky and jaya silently cried''..
maan left for KM'.
he walked to room lifelessly''.
on entering room his eyes fell on mirror'''.
he smiled with tears'.seeing I love U written on mirror'.he went close and slightly caressed it making sure it won't wipe off'. her 3 words gave him new life''..but a meaning less life'..ek baar aajaoo geet'main tumhe kabhi khud se dur nahi jane dunga'''.ek baar aajaoo jaan'''he  moved closer happy birthday shona and kissed her lips marks'''


geet woke with jerk ' 'she touches her lips, as she felt his touch'not finding him 'Tears rolled down her cheeks'aap kaha ho maan ?aaj mera birthday hai aap nahi aaye'..jaldi aayee maan'main intezaar karunge''..jaldi aane''.

maan tried calling geet but brij didn't let him talk to geet'.they didn't even informed geet about maan calls'''..


(precap---year leap)

hi guys here is part 49''
hope U all like it'..
sorry for mistakes '.
 and plz comment'..
next part in few min''






Edited by fairyland_1234 - 26 May 2011 at 2:54pm

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wow awsome one yaar...loved it ...
cruel dadi ..i wanna throw her in the sea !!
continue soon 

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Oh ye kya ho gaya. My maaneet nt 2gether. My heart crying 4 thm. Plz babaji unhe mila do

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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 8:46pm | IP Logged

me sob sob sob

i hate dadi so muchhh
she separate to love birds
waris my foot
maan cant go because dadaji
 his hippocrate too
instead of unite them he stop
maan to go
what heart breaking part
love it
update soonnn
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geet singing for maan
 
 
Rab Ko Yaad Karu
(rab Ko Yaad Karun Ek Fariyaad Karun - 2
Bichhadaa Yaar Milaa De Oy Rabbaa - 2
Meraa Diladaar Milaa De Oy Rabbaa) - 2

Jab Se Huyi Ye Lambi Judaayi - 2
Na Chain Aayaa (na Nind Aayi - 2)
Nazaren Taras Gayin Aankhen Baras Gayin - 2
Mujhe Didaar Karaa De Oy Rabbaa - 2
Bichhadaa Yaar Milaa De Oy Rabbaa

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Aankhon Men Dekun (haathon Se Chhu Lun - 2)
Main Hoo Bechain Badi Apane Bich Khadi - 2
Ye Divaar Mitaa De Oy Rabbaa - 2
Bichhadaa Yaar Milaa De Oy Rabbaa

Usase Bichhadakar Yun Ji Rahaa Hoon - 2
Jaise Zeher Koi Pee Raha Hoon Yun Ji Rahaa Hoon
Saazedil Tut Gayaa Nagamaa Ruth Gayaa - 2
Taar Se Taar Milaa De Oy Rabbaa - 2
Bichhadaa Yaar Milaa De Oy Rabbaa

Karade Kuchh Aisaa Tu Haal Meraa - 2
Aa Jaaye Sunakar (meraa Masihaa - 2)
Us Tak Pahunche Khabar Aa Milanaa Hai Agar - 2
Mujhe Bimaar Banaa De Oy Rabbaa - 2
Bichhadaa Yaar Milaa De Oy Rabbaa
Rab Ko Yaad Karun Ek Fariyaad Karun - 2
Bichhadaa Yaar Milaa De Oy Rabbaa - 2
Meraa Diladaar Milaa De Oy Rabbaa
 

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Edited by sharmake11 - 18 May 2011 at 8:52pm

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