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FF-Meri Nanhi Dulhan-thread 4 (Page 111)

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 2:55pm | IP Logged
wowww loved it
loved that geet realised that maan loves her only n nt a maid

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CrazzyBusy IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 3:14pm | IP Logged
awesoem update dear
loved it...
update soon

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 6:43pm | IP Logged
awesome update...when is the nxt update..waiting...plzzz update fast..

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 7:25pm | IP Logged
It's nighttime already...update kithe?

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 9:31pm | IP Logged
please update soon...
cant wait to nightmare to get over...
& waiting for maaneet to be together...

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 11:07pm | IP Logged
Part 54 - cracked me up.. Geet showing curves to Prem and Vicky... if Maan saw it - he would have shown them star in the daytime...

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 11:09pm | IP Logged

                                      Chapter 55

Geet dragged herself  towards maan's room'her legs were giving up  '
her heart is wrenching  with a thought of maan marring someone else..
 I learn to love by seeing him'I learnt to live when I got into relation with him''''what I am without maan?'nothing'tears were non stop flowing
down her cheeks''..

She entered room and saw him standing near window looking out..'

So U are looking  bride for me'''.?he said without giving her a look'
maan she moan 'and  covers her mouth with her hand controlling her sobs'.he turned to her''..kya hua mishti..?
Isn't that U is here for'? his eyes were filled with pain''..
After all, for U family comes first'.and u can go to any extend for keeping them happy'''...
Aren't U the part of my family'she said with hiccups.
he smirk' part just a part'.and U know what jaan ? U mean world to me'''.
she closes her eyes with guilt

I am so in love with U that can't see anyone else. Then U,...'can't think about anyone rather then U... No one matters to me more the U. '
she fell on her knees
crying' I am sorry,'I am not worth of U'though I tried but couldn't  reach  the level of your love and I am hating  myself for that' ..par main kya karu'this family is my weakness''. I can't bear .seeing them. Broken and ripped ''I was just trying to bind them together 'and give them all the happiness I can'
.and in that process I again hurt' U. .Made U suffer for my one glimpse'though I felt you craving for me 'still stayed indifferent and heartless to you.
.bahut bure hu main bahut bure''.
her each sob is stabbing maan's  heart.

He went close and picked her up,
carryied her to bed'''
Making her sits he sat facing her''..
She is still weeping''..

He slowly picked her veil'she closed her eyes in guilt, unable to meet in gaze'
his heart skipped many beats'''..
uff geet tumhare yeh khubsurati, yeh masoomiyat toh mere jaan lelege''..
she turned and fell on bed hiding her face in pillow and crying more'''
he smiled and laid on her'
  U don't need to feel guilty jaan'
 love is not a debt which need to be paid off equally'
 I love U 'it don't mean I expect something for U'
he laid beside and pulled her in his embrace'.facing him'
he wipes her tears'and caresses her back, calming her''
U knows something Geet. .after getting married when I brought U in this house. I never knew U will love my family this much'
even I cant love the extend U do'.
your heart is not selfish like mine its so pure and divine'..I am proud to be owner of that golden heart''..
she smiled with tears and hugged him tight'.I love U''
he closes his eyes absorbing the most pleasurable movement in him'' U too jaan'
jaan are U not angry on me'as I didn't came to get U back'?
not getting her response he raised her head, holding her chin''
and found her sleeping serenely''
he smiled seeing her  not changed a bit, still  same, very  innocent and childish.' pulling her more closer'he drowsed off  ''

Geet woke and found maan getting ready for office''.
she remembered the last night issue of priya'?
Seeing her lost in thoughts, maan raised his eyebrow'asking what?
she smiles nervously and rushed to him helping him wear his vest '
he pulled her closer kya hai jaan?
aap ne priya ke bare main kya soncha hai'?
kisi aur ke bare main sonchne ki fursat kese hai'
he said moving towards her lips''
she keep her hand on his lips stopping him'.
I mean how are U going to stop this priya matter'?

maan frees her and moved to mirror combing his hairs''..
why will I stop'?
yeh raita tumne phehlaya hai'tumhe saaf karo'''
she gulped main?and  hugged him from back trying to melt him'
aap sambhal lo na'
he turned to her taking her into his embrace'
jaan I am yours, U need to claim me. Posses me'.show your right on me'
Geet---how I am going to do that'
fine, if U can't then move I will go and end this priya matter now'

she blocks his way''if U do in this way,It will hurt dadi 'why don't U understand dadiji is still not well'.it may effect his health too'

what the hell U want to do then ? Maan said bit rudely'.
she caress his chest'calming him' just don't be rude to dada dadi and keep postponing this issue till dadaji recovers''..
maan hugged her 'jaan do what ever U want but don't involve me in all this'''.
she pushes him fine, if U don't want then don't help me' I have my dearest friends to help me '
maan 'thanks for reminding me'I have to first deal with those two rascals'

Geet gets worried for them...covering her face' she ran out to alert prem and vicky
dadi and jaya was in garden 'she took a relif breathe and  undid her veil'looking for vicky and prem'''
they  were sitting on dinning table, waiting for breakfast'.
vicky'mishti ji '.why have U  made  an  effort to come out'we would have send your breakfast too  in .from morning dadi and maa was asking  where is mishti '?
What should we suppose to answer? Romancing with their son?
sorry naa '.she said with a cute face'.
Sorry no sorry' U better give us what ever salary you get'.
for handling your messed situations 'vicky said with a smile but his smile vanished seeing maan   who is approaching them  with a serious look'

 They tries to escape, when maan gestured them to sit back on their seats'
they sat exchanging nervous looks''..
maan'so Vicky do U really think U can fool  me'.
vicky---no bhai' never'
maan---then why U were trying ?
vicky---cause in childhood U taught me try and try until U succeed''.
maan raised his eyebrow'ok
and prem--who is misti to U this time'.
prem'I think cousin sister,..
maan---U think?
prem---stammers 'I mean sister'
maan---ok 'first boy friend, then fake fianc and now sister'.great'U are a complete package of relations''isn't it'
' 'we were just helping geet'Vicky said in a low tone '

maan--U guys are too much. Always ready to help her in her mischief's'right'

prem'murmurs, after everything when U can't stop yourself from loving her'then how can u expect us, not supporting our friend..
Hearing it'Maan couldn't stop from smiling''.
 prem and vicky teased him more '.thought out the breakfast'

after that,
giving a quick peek on geet's forehead maan left to his office''..
while prem left for his medical practise'''.
Hi guys, here is part 55
hope U all like it ..
sorry for mistakes ..
and please comment



Edited by fairyland_1234 - 30 May 2011 at 3:25pm

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