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Prelude to the Night

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Posted: 15 May 2011 at 5:46pm | IP Logged

they both kept their promises...as they fed their bodies to break the fast...with witnesses to give testimony...but they had yet to break another fast...a fast that kept them hungry...however, one festivity led them to another...but a silly man blocked their path...forsing the song and the beast to take the scenic route instead...when the hills and the vallies proved too much for our song to take...the beast became worried...but just like a dove that finds her home in a tree...our song finds her resting place tucked in the sloap of his neck and close to his chest...the beast taking note of this embrase...offers her a seat in his arms...that would take her to the end of the earth if they had to...when much to their advantage they find a more permanent dwelling...the beast becomes the most gentle of creatures...as he caresses his song...and the air brings a tune...that speaks of two lovers...whose night of love has just begun...as they make their bed in eachothers arms...the light becomes witness to another fast in the breaking...as the song and the beast begin their love making...



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Posted: 15 May 2011 at 5:55pm | IP Logged
omg...so the writer has come out of her resting bed
 
beautifully written Sylv
 
offers her a seat in his arms...that would take her to the end of the earth if they had to...
 
and the air brings a tune...that speaks of two lovers...whose night of love has just begun...as they make their bed in eachothers arms...the light becomes witness to another fast in the breaking...as the song and the beast begin their love making...Day DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming
 
i am still thereBlushingBlushingBlushing

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Posted: 15 May 2011 at 5:58pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Naz_Angel

omg...so the writer has come out of her resting bed
 
beautifully written Sylv
 
offers her a seat in his arms...that would take her to the end of the earth if they had to...
 
and the air brings a tune...that speaks of two lovers...whose night of love has just begun...as they make their bed in eachothers arms...the light becomes witness to another fast in the breaking...as the song and the beast begin their love making...Day DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming
 
i am still thereBlushingBlushingBlushing
i know i had planned to take a longer break...but i was compelled...btw thanks for telling me what the title of that song meant...it put everything in perspectiveLOL

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Posted: 15 May 2011 at 6:00pm | IP Logged
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Originally posted by Naz_Angel

omg...so the writer has come out of her resting bed
 
beautifully written Sylv
 
offers her a seat in his arms...that would take her to the end of the earth if they had to...
 
and the air brings a tune...that speaks of two lovers...whose night of love has just begun...as they make their bed in eachothers arms...the light becomes witness to another fast in the breaking...as the song and the beast begin their love making...Day DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming
 
i am still thereBlushingBlushingBlushing
i know i had planned to take a longer break...but i was compelled...btw thanks for telling me what the title of that song meant...it put everything in perspectiveLOL
anytime Sylv..u keep typing these and I will be translating for uBig smileBig smileBig smileWink

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Posted: 15 May 2011 at 6:24pm | IP Logged

naz...with your translating services...i'm sure i will have  alot more inspiration to writeWink

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Posted: 15 May 2011 at 6:26pm | IP Logged
achhaa...i am always available..lets c how ur inner writer comes outSmile

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Posted: 15 May 2011 at 6:26pm | IP Logged
Oh Syl...that was so romantically poetic...Day Dreaming
'Another fast to break' - Loved that...and...Make their bed in each other's arms'Day Dreaming
You have made their short and sweet journey so beautiful...and it actually was! 
Their love is evident in all their actions...be it even when they are hiding, or running together, or her coming back for him, resting her head in the crook of his neck...every small action speaks of their immense loveDay Dreaming

And I'm begining to think ...not only the love and comfort of 2 people...but 4!WinkDay DreamingLOL

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Posted: 15 May 2011 at 6:28pm | IP Logged
So beautiful! Day Dreaming 
Never thought that the word 'fast' and 'breaking the fast' could be used this way. It's marvelous!

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