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A SaJan OS: Apology (Page 2)

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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 11:42am | IP Logged
Dear Kankshita,
 
No one can say it is your first SAJAN ONESHOT...
You sent me to SaJan dreamland and I was drooling over your OS..
Each line made it more powerful and intersting to read..
That is the biggest achievement of a writer, personally I know as I write too! But my works are zero in front of yours...
 
Awesome OS!
You potrayed the emotions very well!
I seriously hoped that this was shown in the serial too! :)x
It was lovely!!
Gunjan's character had the simplicity and charm in her..
Just like in the serial =D
You passed with flying marks in an attempt to make an OneShot!! It was truly superb!
Do write more and more and please PM me! =)
I really liked the line~

"Sheena stood like a wall of glass between us, again. A wall I could see through, I could exactly see what the other side could offer me. I could consider shoving the barrier out of my way and conquer, but maybe I was not the right substance for that, and I was back to that feeling."
 
This one was actually the truth during that track..
You brought back the old MJHT days with a new yet similar essence!!
The concept of One-Sided Love was protrayed beautifully and the play dialogues where just marvellous...
Each and every dialogue rose hopes in Gunjan's heart and mind but she struggled to believe it! That is so like GUNJAN =)
Please do write more..
But write now, words of appreciation fail to come in my mind! =D
I am still lost in that beautiful trance...
 
Continue Writing,
Love from Nivriti

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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 3:21am | IP Logged
Okay, so  I'm  not  going  to  reserve  instead  comment  right  now.
 
Candy (I  still  get  to  call  you  that  don't  I? Considering  we  hardly  talk  these  days) Hug
I'm  actually  surprised  with  the  fact  you  wrote   on  SG  though  its  not  like  you 've  never  written  on  them.
I  do  not  have  any  words  to  describe  how  I'm  feeling  after  reading  this  beautiful  peace  of  work. Your  OS  has  really  made  my  breath  poor  and  speech  unable. I  could  totally  feel  the  pain  Gunjan  felt. I  really  liked  the  connection  between  Gunjan  and  Janvi.  It's  as  if  her (Gunjan's)  feelings   penetrated  through  me. Sheena  has  always  been  a  wall  between  the  two. You  clearly  showed  Gunjan's  pain,
 
Yours ,
 
Adya! 

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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 4:52am | IP Logged
such an awesome os kankshita...it ws really very beautifull..u presented everything so well...gunjan's emotions were portrayed really very well...
great job...
do write more
ambika

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Posted: 02 June 2011 at 8:29am | IP Logged

Hey dear
this is one of the os which i found truly different meaningful beautiful n really u expressed the scene so well
regarding the grammatical or any other mistake i really found no faults n gunjans feeling regarding each and every scene and regarding each and every dialog was really the one to appreciate

this os really blew off my mind out of my head .i cnt even stop praising ur so dedicated n hard work

really i cn say after hell many days found a perfect os

n being a mayur fan n writing sajan os is really a lottt to appreciate

it was so awesom beautiful presentation of tht play tht i cnt even stop praising u
bt really u did a fab job
hats off to u darling

love
surabhi!!

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Posted: 02 June 2011 at 7:48pm | IP Logged
tht was sooo niceee

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