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oh haan mani tum log mujhay pri bula saktay ho

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yeppe!!!!!!!!! update...🤗 Edited by Roshni_M - 12 years ago

Sooo beautiful !!

for lovely update 🤗

feel bad for khanak but it is understood from khandelwals and from khanak side too that it take time to adjust in new environment  and new person 😔

i  knew that he will definitely for his date  😉 ,,but i like the part when just she started crying 😭 he came their and take her in his embraced , nice to feel their love,  though they are fiction still they make us feel like real and all this is definitely due to ur way of writing and giving every detail so beautifully

i want that side table watch , u described it so beautifully that i imagined it in my mind and i too want it for my side table

really , i don't know u can write such hot still not so bold and descent  about their 11 pm date

and burthal insist  of eating , take her to pool side hawa khilane 😆 😆

next update soon  of both 😉 😉 😆 😆


love u

suchi

hei mani,

i was looking for the update from yesterday..i'm happy finally we got one..

y couldn't shaan tell her where he is going?he simply left showing her everything in actions..

so khanak is left all alone in their room after 5 days and she is wondering how fast things happened and she is married to SK..and she accepted the fact thinking this "She shrugged to herself, 'Whatever !!...sometimes it is okay to go with the flow... it is fine to behave against your usual self...sometimes..." the way u described the blue saree was so nice..i immediately had the thought abt it..and my naughty mind wished shaan to be there..

khanak's inner turmoil was written very well mani..she wondering if everything is alright..and now actualli i thought of kaan pakdofying shaan..will any husband leave his bride like this for so long..as per the timing i calculate he must have left around 3 r 3.30..n there she is all alone in his house where there is ppl not willing to see her as his wife and somehow he persuaded them..wat will the bechari do..that too just afterr 5 days of their marriage..comfort wont come very soon na..poor thing started to worry abt that..

nearly after 3 hrs(7.30) ruchi came there to call her as few of the relatives r leaving..n she was searching for shaan..by 8.30 dadi said her that "Let's go for dinner" and she is worried abt shantanu..by the way dadi said he was here half an hr back..but if so didnt he check is everything is ok with his wife..bad hubby..

daadi saying abt shaan's nature and saying "Tumhaari marzi….." when khanak said "Phir bhi dadi……..main wait karti hu." i really felt bad for khanak in this situation..she needed the comfort of her hubby..just a look of concern was enough..and she badly wished to interact with his family n be one among them..

again khanak's fear like if his family really approved r not..poor girl..

ufff...finally our romeo got time to come..the way u wrote how well he observes her made me forget all the anger i had for him..he showed concern for her..but wat he did was not fair still..and s both have undying love for the other..but i strongly wish that shaan realises her insecurities n puts her in comfort zone with his family..

as the memory of where their relation started he wants her to call him SK n he'll call him K..that was sweet..the unique way..no one else call them by this name..its special for them..shaan feeling irritated that he couldnt take her for the date he planned for her due to the ritual..

but the pool side date was lovely..even though he didnt spend time in it..it was nice..she is happy that she can be herself around him n feeling that this is wat attracted her to him..the final lines were so nice mani..i loved it...wish to see his family members accepting her..as they said they r not evil..so i love to see them interacting first..let her take baby steps first..continue soon mani...

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aww poor Khanak  but how sweet is Shantanu made her feel much better!

Originally posted by: RB81

hei mani,

i was looking for the update from yesterday..i'm happy finally we got one..

y couldn't shaan tell her where he is going?he simply left showing her everything in actions..

so khanak is left all alone in their room after 5 days and she is wondering how fast things happened and she is married to SK..and she accepted the fact thinking this "She shrugged to herself, 'Whatever !!...sometimes it is okay to go with the flow... it is fine to behave against your usual self...sometimes..." the way u described the blue saree was so nice..i immediately had the thought abt it..and my naughty mind wished shaan to be there..

khanak's inner turmoil was written very well mani..she wondering if everything is alright..and now actualli i thought of kaan pakdofying shaan..will any husband leave his bride like this for so long..as per the timing i calculate he must have left around 3 r 3.30..n there she is all alone in his house where there is ppl not willing to see her as his wife and somehow he persuaded them..wat will the bechari do..that too just afterr 5 days of their marriage..comfort wont come very soon na..poor thing started to worry abt that..

nearly after 3 hrs(7.30) ruchi came there to call her as few of the relatives r leaving..n she was searching for shaan..by 8.30 dadi said her that "Let's go for dinner" and she is worried abt shantanu..by the way dadi said he was here half an hr back..but if so didnt he check is everything is ok with his wife..bad hubby..

daadi saying abt shaan's nature and saying "Tumhaari marzi'.." when khanak said "Phir bhi dadi''..main wait karti hu." i really felt bad for khanak in this situation..she needed the comfort of her hubby..just a look of concern was enough..and she badly wished to interact with his family n be one among them..

again khanak's fear like if his family really approved r not..poor girl..

ufff...finally our romeo got time to come..the way u wrote how well he observes her made me forget all the anger i had for him..he showed concern for her..but wat he did was not fair still..and s both have undying love for the other..but i strongly wish that shaan realises her insecurities n puts her in comfort zone with his family..

as the memory of where their relation started he wants her to call him SK n he'll call him K..that was sweet..the unique way..no one else call them by this name..its special for them..shaan feeling irritated that he couldnt take her for the date he planned for her due to the ritual..

but the pool side date was lovely..even though he didnt spend time in it..it was nice..she is happy that she can be herself around him n feeling that this is wat attracted her to him..the final lines were so nice mani..i loved it...wish to see his family members accepting her..as they said they r not evil..so i love to see them interacting first..let her take baby steps first..continue soon mani...

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Thanks for the awesome response Ramani...loved it !!!

SK is not a bad hubby...he told by actions as he was on phone...
later, he did check on her but she was sleeping ...I have written that she dozes off to sleep...

he can't keep checking again and again as there are relatives at home.

he goes for some work only because he wants to be on time at night.

As per dadi and family --- "Usey baahar jaane ke baad kisi baat ka hosh nahi hota...especially time ka...he only knows when he will come"
But this was not the case today...

he did come on time...just for her !!